Poems About the Sun by Top Critiquers
#sun
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2021 11:29pm
3rd Oct 2021 11:29pm
wonderings of a sunset's intent
I adore
these longer nights
walking
close to dusk
where hues have
noticeably changed
pigments of fall maybe
watching the day
give way
as I weave west
directly into
the sun's last throes
thoughts heavy and full
dissolve
along with the day
exquisite colors
brandish to bedazzle
blistering perfection
they turn me into
nature herself
I melt
slowly withering
into apricot skies
scorched amber embers
flare to combust
consuming all ...
these longer nights
walking
close to dusk
where hues have
noticeably changed
pigments of fall maybe
watching the day
give way
as I weave west
directly into
the sun's last throes
thoughts heavy and full
dissolve
along with the day
exquisite colors
brandish to bedazzle
blistering perfection
they turn me into
nature herself
I melt
slowly withering
into apricot skies
scorched amber embers
flare to combust
consuming all ...
#sun
#night
#nature #NoPoo
#nature #NoPoo
146 reads
39 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
21st Aug 2021 12:17pm
21st Aug 2021 12:17pm
Shadows
Whispers of champaign -
pain is a sham.
Light is born in the background,
surfacing like ideas -
for masterpieces.
Scintillating stars
holding hands
in the mind
like the last day on Earth.
Let me dream once more
in the remembrance
of your face -
Held in the hollow
of my soul.
I have upheld myself -
against so many dawns,
falling in feathers -
into ink black velvet,
yearning for purity -
thus, I have become purely
Shadows.
pain is a sham.
Light is born in the background,
surfacing like ideas -
for masterpieces.
Scintillating stars
holding hands
in the mind
like the last day on Earth.
Let me dream once more
in the remembrance
of your face -
Held in the hollow
of my soul.
I have upheld myself -
against so many dawns,
falling in feathers -
into ink black velvet,
yearning for purity -
thus, I have become purely
Shadows.
#sun
#universe
#confessional #WritingPoetry
#confessional #WritingPoetry
51 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
21st Apr 2020 10:56pm
21st Apr 2020 10:56pm
Between 5 and 6pm
I love the early Spring in my apartment
I get beautiful sunlight between 5 and 6pm
Later in the Spring and Summer it gets too hot
Then I'll need the AC
Right now it's perfect
I'm grateful
I get beautiful sunlight between 5 and 6pm
Later in the Spring and Summer it gets too hot
Then I'll need the AC
Right now it's perfect
I'm grateful
#sun
235 reads
21 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
24th Sep 2021 2:31am
24th Sep 2021 2:31am
Cover Me
Visual-The Essence Of Truth Is Always Love
#sun
#moon
#night
#spiritual
#minimalist
75 reads
11 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
The Evolution of Creation
So He, the divine being,
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
#earth
#sun
#universe
#stars
#evolution
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0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th Feb 2021 11:55am
24th Feb 2021 11:55am
sunrise
restless morning betray me not
awakened to the day I pray one of beauty
inside my dreams, you saw me
eager to visit, I was awoken
the sun has yet to kiss the morn
I in a sleepy state greeted the wee hours
smiling at me from the clock on the nightstand
I thought surely it was too early
then the beautiful stillness of the day sway me
so I walk into the solemn corridors of the morning
watching in awe as the sun first touches the horizon
the night whispers I love you
two old lovers, she departs to her bed chamber
...
awakened to the day I pray one of beauty
inside my dreams, you saw me
eager to visit, I was awoken
the sun has yet to kiss the morn
I in a sleepy state greeted the wee hours
smiling at me from the clock on the nightstand
I thought surely it was too early
then the beautiful stillness of the day sway me
so I walk into the solemn corridors of the morning
watching in awe as the sun first touches the horizon
the night whispers I love you
two old lovers, she departs to her bed chamber
...
#love
#beauty
#sun #birds
#sun #birds
127 reads
12 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
17th Mar 2021 6:20am
17th Mar 2021 6:20am
SKINNY DIP FOR TWO (NO 3)
Let's have a skinny-dip for two
in nudist beach sea water blue,
return to Eden's jungle roots
in Adam-and-Eve birthday suits.
Let us run in upon the sand,
pulling each other hand by hand,
We'll splash water on each other,
unashamed of lack of cover
and differences of skin shade.
that will be to the world displayed.
Those hot spots so easily roused
will be by the splashed water doused.
When temperature feels more mild
we'll swim in deeper water wild,
allow the sun to dry us off
when we've...
in nudist beach sea water blue,
return to Eden's jungle roots
in Adam-and-Eve birthday suits.
Let us run in upon the sand,
pulling each other hand by hand,
We'll splash water on each other,
unashamed of lack of cover
and differences of skin shade.
that will be to the world displayed.
Those hot spots so easily roused
will be by the splashed water doused.
When temperature feels more mild
we'll swim in deeper water wild,
allow the sun to dry us off
when we've...
#romantic
#sea
#sun
#beach
#rhyming
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BeginningPoet
Poem Published
12th Oct 2021 5:55pm
12th Oct 2021 5:55pm
silk robe
the early morning
slipped
into her silk robe,
standing there,
waiting,
the sun came out
and saw her,
taking his fingers
he soon began
to play
with the edge
of her robe,
his skilled hands
worked their way
through each thread,
unweaving
her robe,
leaving her bare
she felt no shame,
she stood silent
and proud,
the sun felt
each heartbeat
of her sighs,
the sun drank
her dew, while
warming the ground
she walked upon.
slipped
into her silk robe,
standing there,
waiting,
the sun came out
and saw her,
taking his fingers
he soon began
to play
with the edge
of her robe,
his skilled hands
worked their way
through each thread,
unweaving
her robe,
leaving her bare
she felt no shame,
she stood silent
and proud,
the sun felt
each heartbeat
of her sighs,
the sun drank
her dew, while
warming the ground
she walked upon.
#sun
#sky
#morning #nature
#morning #nature
35 reads
7 Comments
RiAN
Poem Published
16th Jun 2020 7:27pm
16th Jun 2020 7:27pm
Sun
Weaving
waterlillies
where
mantic
dusk
flutters
Mothlike
splintered
light
https://youtu.be/wh7ksLp33KA?list=RDwh7ksLp33KA
waterlillies
where
mantic
dusk
flutters
Mothlike
splintered
light
https://youtu.be/wh7ksLp33KA?list=RDwh7ksLp33KA
#sun
#universe
157 reads
3 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
25th Aug 2019 4:05pm
25th Aug 2019 4:05pm
The Palms
The palm trees pulled me in
as I watched each wave roll out
movement performed with precision
in a new found serenity
on a blanket we lie in the distance
a place only the breeze can find
the sun erupting before us
leaving all troubles behind
kisses of salt grace our palate
along with the rim of our drinks
day moves but we remain patient
a time to recharge and not think
as I watched each wave roll out
movement performed with precision
in a new found serenity
on a blanket we lie in the distance
a place only the breeze can find
the sun erupting before us
leaving all troubles behind
kisses of salt grace our palate
along with the rim of our drinks
day moves but we remain patient
a time to recharge and not think
#sun
#beach
#holiday
301 reads
5 Comments
Keilani
Poem Published
19th Jul 2021 5:22pm
19th Jul 2021 5:22pm
Entrance
Dawn arises
with the opening eye
Crimson gold
setting fire the sky
Commanding the constellations
abscond with their jewels
As the curtain lifts
and darkness withdraws
Enters casual day
in a dazzling array
With steady assurance
procures center stage
In chorus resound
the mourning doves
Ringing their trill
on the great proscenium
Pronouncing the glory
of the dramatic play
The unfolding story
that ne’er does fade
And we the recipients
in return...
with the opening eye
Crimson gold
setting fire the sky
Commanding the constellations
abscond with their jewels
As the curtain lifts
and darkness withdraws
Enters casual day
in a dazzling array
With steady assurance
procures center stage
In chorus resound
the mourning doves
Ringing their trill
on the great proscenium
Pronouncing the glory
of the dramatic play
The unfolding story
that ne’er does fade
And we the recipients
in return...
#sun
#universe
#moon #stars
#moon #stars
59 reads
6 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2021 11:49pm
3rd Sep 2021 11:49pm
a real love story
today,
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
#love
#kindness
#sun
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14 Comments
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