Poems About the Sun by Top Critiquers
#sun
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 9:00pm
8th Apr 2024 9:00pm
I cried
( my picture of the eclipse )
I broke down and I
Cried.
The Sun
Had died
In the sky.
I could not
breath.
As much
As I wanted
To try.
I thought
Death
Had come.
I wanted with him
To fly.
Will the
Moon
Release her grip
Soon
Before she finally dies?
Will the
Light
Return again
Bright
On my tired Eyes?
Will the
World
Ponder this
Wonder or
As...
I broke down and I
Cried.
The Sun
Had died
In the sky.
I could not
breath.
As much
As I wanted
To try.
I thought
Death
Had come.
I wanted with him
To fly.
Will the
Moon
Release her grip
Soon
Before she finally dies?
Will the
Light
Return again
Bright
On my tired Eyes?
Will the
World
Ponder this
Wonder or
As...
#sun
#moon
105 reads
17 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 8:06pm
7th Feb 2024 8:06pm
A Day To Be Alive!
#happiness
#beauty
#inspirational
#sun
#uplifting
69 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
28th Aug 2020 9:19am
28th Aug 2020 9:19am
Flower In The Sun
There is a little flower
just a daisy in the sun
it's almost invisible
it's unseen by anyone
There's grace in how it's swaying
in the soft and gentle breeze
I'd love to pick that daisy
just to take it home with me
It's just a little flower
I found standing tall and proud
I stood in awe, yes wonder
as I heard it speak out loud
'I'm a flower in the sun
but I'm lonesome as I can be
please pick me and take me home
I don't like being alone'
just a daisy in the sun
it's almost invisible
it's unseen by anyone
There's grace in how it's swaying
in the soft and gentle breeze
I'd love to pick that daisy
just to take it home with me
It's just a little flower
I found standing tall and proud
I stood in awe, yes wonder
as I heard it speak out loud
'I'm a flower in the sun
but I'm lonesome as I can be
please pick me and take me home
I don't like being alone'
#flowers
#sun
#nature
464 reads
6 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 11:21am
8th Apr 2024 11:21am
Still-born Tomorrow
Mysterious moon.
Lay up on the sun's hot fire
Still-born tomorrow.
Lay up on the sun's hot fire
Still-born tomorrow.
#sun
#moon
#haiku
84 reads
21 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th Feb 2021 11:55am
24th Feb 2021 11:55am
sunrise
restless morning betray me not
awakened to the day I pray one of beauty
inside my dreams, you saw me
eager to visit, I was awoken
the sun has yet to kiss the morn
I in a sleepy state greeted the wee hours
smiling at me from the clock on the nightstand
I thought surely it was too early
then the beautiful stillness of the day sway me
so I walk into the solemn corridors of the morning
watching in awe as the sun first touches the horizon
the night whispers I love you
two old lovers, she departs to her bed chamber
...
awakened to the day I pray one of beauty
inside my dreams, you saw me
eager to visit, I was awoken
the sun has yet to kiss the morn
I in a sleepy state greeted the wee hours
smiling at me from the clock on the nightstand
I thought surely it was too early
then the beautiful stillness of the day sway me
so I walk into the solemn corridors of the morning
watching in awe as the sun first touches the horizon
the night whispers I love you
two old lovers, she departs to her bed chamber
...
#love
#beauty
#sun #birds
#sun #birds
434 reads
12 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
29th Jan 2023 3:54pm
29th Jan 2023 3:54pm
Whispers through Sunlight
Art
My art
Self
Painter
Modern Art
Contemporary Art
Whispers through Sunlight
My art
Self
Painter
Modern Art
Contemporary Art
Whispers through Sunlight
#beauty
#sun
#TruthOfLife
#art
#philosophical
349 reads
32 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
16th Jul 2023 7:34am
16th Jul 2023 7:34am
THROW THOSE CURTAINS WIDE
Throw those curtains wide,
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
#sun
#spiritual
#dawn
159 reads
4 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
5th Nov 2023 12:53pm
5th Nov 2023 12:53pm
totally eclipsed...
it was a weekend with a dual purpose
to watch sun disappear behind moon
and a chance for me to get away from the mundane
go on an adventure
let my hair down & have a little fun
Willow style...submerged in nature
and I did
exploring monuments & caves
taking in incredible landscapes
Black Hills backdrop to a cerulean sky
it was there I lost the thread of the trip
having a moment most unexpected
witnessing the spirit of man
in breathtaking granite
as the world continued to move around me
I stood in silence ...
to watch sun disappear behind moon
and a chance for me to get away from the mundane
go on an adventure
let my hair down & have a little fun
Willow style...submerged in nature
and I did
exploring monuments & caves
taking in incredible landscapes
Black Hills backdrop to a cerulean sky
it was there I lost the thread of the trip
having a moment most unexpected
witnessing the spirit of man
in breathtaking granite
as the world continued to move around me
I stood in silence ...
#beauty
#sun
#moon #mountains
#moon #mountains
77 reads
9 Comments
wolfatthedoor1966
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 7:17am
16th Apr 2024 7:17am
heat
touch me
all
that you
feel
to be
justified,
to be
fair,
tickle
my exposed
skin,
still knowing
i will not
be able
to return
or give
what
your favor
i received.
all
that you
feel
to be
justified,
to be
fair,
tickle
my exposed
skin,
still knowing
i will not
be able
to return
or give
what
your favor
i received.
#sun
#summer
#nature #evolution
#nature #evolution
51 reads
4 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
21st Dec 2019 4:50pm
21st Dec 2019 4:50pm
Releasing the Light
It is our light not our darkness
that most frightens us.'
We lit the candles of our Spirit—
not under a bushel of ancient secrets
digging as moles in sunken basements;
but, a cavernous gateway to acceptance
Trimmed the wicks of our heart
to observe Love blaze brighter
from this darkest eve of Winter
Allowed flames to alight memory—
fill our dark soul of night
with fresh perspectives in truth
Felt bygone...
that most frightens us.'
We lit the candles of our Spirit—
not under a bushel of ancient secrets
digging as moles in sunken basements;
but, a cavernous gateway to acceptance
Trimmed the wicks of our heart
to observe Love blaze brighter
from this darkest eve of Winter
Allowed flames to alight memory—
fill our dark soul of night
with fresh perspectives in truth
Felt bygone...
#dark
#sun
#winter
#nature
#humankind
1131 reads
39 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 11:59pm
19th Apr 2024 11:59pm
Easterlies
A lone crow perched on a breeze bobbing bough
clutching it like a floatation device
with every bit of its feathered know-how
foundering on high like a sacrifice,
to Eurus, and full afternoon sun,
blasting glory to every dancing tree
in sky blue by the cerulean ton,
and freshest barometric liberty!
Soon enough, the crow abandoned its post
to flotsam away on knackered wings
perhaps seeking a branch, not so utmost,
or to scratch the grass for edible things.
Fare thee well, oh breeze...
clutching it like a floatation device
with every bit of its feathered know-how
foundering on high like a sacrifice,
to Eurus, and full afternoon sun,
blasting glory to every dancing tree
in sky blue by the cerulean ton,
and freshest barometric liberty!
Soon enough, the crow abandoned its post
to flotsam away on knackered wings
perhaps seeking a branch, not so utmost,
or to scratch the grass for edible things.
Fare thee well, oh breeze...
#sky
#spring
#sun
44 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
The Evolution of Creation
So He, the divine being,
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
#earth
#sun
#universe
#stars
#evolution
754 reads
2 Comments
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