Poems About the Sun by Top Critiquers
#sun
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
31st Aug 2022 9:21pm
31st Aug 2022 9:21pm
Torn Flesh
Studied my painting
Top layer of flesh removed
It's pretty sky blue
Broken by jagged orange
The way life is
Positively jarring
Still pleasant a moment later
We sat outside at the cafe
In the passing summer sun
Enough humidity
Half spoken humility
We'll always find our way
The poets say so
I'm healing in your presence
Even with your shades on
Held in your stare
Notations in a notebook
Back at the Chamber
Conditional
Some flesh to repair
Top layer of flesh removed
It's pretty sky blue
Broken by jagged orange
The way life is
Positively jarring
Still pleasant a moment later
We sat outside at the cafe
In the passing summer sun
Enough humidity
Half spoken humility
We'll always find our way
The poets say so
I'm healing in your presence
Even with your shades on
Held in your stare
Notations in a notebook
Back at the Chamber
Conditional
Some flesh to repair
#dark
#relationships
#sun
#pagan
#philosophical
218 reads
23 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
25th May 2022 1:35am
25th May 2022 1:35am
Mm... Meet Me Among The Calling Of The Stars
As he sits to ponder his mind is an open cocoon
An intellect portal to my invitation, trekked the globe, from a begotten land of sand dunes
I bring captivating melodies upon my arrival, the soothing sounds of Heaven’s Bassoon
Reaching through the gateway of time
In reminisce as you made love to me in the Garden of Eden near infinity’s grapevines
Sweeping me up into your strong arms
My back greeting the softness of green moss, comforted by the bed of earth, languish in its warmth
Whispering in your ear the secrets of the stars
In the...
An intellect portal to my invitation, trekked the globe, from a begotten land of sand dunes
I bring captivating melodies upon my arrival, the soothing sounds of Heaven’s Bassoon
Reaching through the gateway of time
In reminisce as you made love to me in the Garden of Eden near infinity’s grapevines
Sweeping me up into your strong arms
My back greeting the softness of green moss, comforted by the bed of earth, languish in its warmth
Whispering in your ear the secrets of the stars
In the...
#sun
#universe
#moon
#mythology
#passion
323 reads
5 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
14th Jan 2023 1:07am
14th Jan 2023 1:07am
Relief
With the sun’s last rays
My heart leaps to the sky
And your endearing praise
Fills me with a sigh…
-
Of relief, of repent
That I’m free from my sin’s rent
Your words, your caress; they heal my soul
And I took back my reins of control
-
With the moon’s reflection
My soul returns to the source
I’m filled with bountiful affection
And I start to cry…
-
In relief, in release
As I’m stitched back piece by piece
To reconnect with my true self
And the dark night of the soul can finally be placed back on the...
My heart leaps to the sky
And your endearing praise
Fills me with a sigh…
-
Of relief, of repent
That I’m free from my sin’s rent
Your words, your caress; they heal my soul
And I took back my reins of control
-
With the moon’s reflection
My soul returns to the source
I’m filled with bountiful affection
And I start to cry…
-
In relief, in release
As I’m stitched back piece by piece
To reconnect with my true self
And the dark night of the soul can finally be placed back on the...
#sun
#moon
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
82 reads
14 Comments
Rianne
Poem Published
21st Dec 2022 2:37pm
21st Dec 2022 2:37pm
To rise and become eternal ethereal sun
I asked for solace
in dark shard tone
An Elder
Alder tree
has cried in red tears
I came here to find
in stead i am given
a bare canvas
we speak through these waning leaves
mazes are drawn in joint painted trauma
a minstrel adorns me with balm
casting similar motives
nitrogen shadow
barer
of root
trunked
breezed
weathered
watered
withered
ways
the deeper I journey
into my heart
the more love ...
in dark shard tone
An Elder
Alder tree
has cried in red tears
I came here to find
in stead i am given
a bare canvas
we speak through these waning leaves
mazes are drawn in joint painted trauma
a minstrel adorns me with balm
casting similar motives
nitrogen shadow
barer
of root
trunked
breezed
weathered
watered
withered
ways
the deeper I journey
into my heart
the more love ...
#hope
#trees
#sun
#winter
#healing
90 reads
8 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
5th Aug 2022 6:25am
5th Aug 2022 6:25am
HITTING THE BEACH
Out to have fun
catching the sun,
our bikinis
on our bodies,
Out on the sands,
up go our hands -
as our 'Thank you'
to sacre Dieu.
catching the sun,
our bikinis
on our bodies,
Out on the sands,
up go our hands -
as our 'Thank you'
to sacre Dieu.
#sun
#beach
#holiday #rhyming
#holiday #rhyming
223 reads
2 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
21st Aug 2021 12:17pm
21st Aug 2021 12:17pm
Shadows
Whispers of champaign -
pain is a sham.
Light is born in the background,
surfacing like ideas -
for masterpieces.
Scintillating stars
holding hands
in the mind
like the last day on Earth.
Let me dream once more
in the remembrance
of your face -
Held in the hollow
of my soul.
I have upheld myself -
against so many dawns,
falling in feathers -
into ink black velvet,
yearning for purity -
thus, I have become purely
Shadows.
pain is a sham.
Light is born in the background,
surfacing like ideas -
for masterpieces.
Scintillating stars
holding hands
in the mind
like the last day on Earth.
Let me dream once more
in the remembrance
of your face -
Held in the hollow
of my soul.
I have upheld myself -
against so many dawns,
falling in feathers -
into ink black velvet,
yearning for purity -
thus, I have become purely
Shadows.
#sun
#universe
#confessional #WritingPoetry
#confessional #WritingPoetry
210 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
The Evolution of Creation
So He, the divine being,
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
#earth
#sun
#universe
#stars
#evolution
648 reads
2 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
29th Aug 2022 4:24am
29th Aug 2022 4:24am
Light and the beauty of it's ray's!!
In the darkness of the night,the moonlight illuminates the night skies, along with the stars 🌟, sparkling bright adding an exquisite shine, to such beautiful ray's of light, yet as the night fades away, and the moonlights, overwhelmed by the glory of the sun 🌞 light, which lead the path in our different perceptions , to which we perceive a beautiful day, even when 🤔 it rains, without a cloud in the sky, with reflections of glistening light, which forms liquid sunshine 🌞 , is one of the many ways we admire the light 😀 and the beauty of it's ray's!!! ...
#earth
#sun
#universe
#moon
#stars
185 reads
5 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
7th Jun 2020 9:34pm
7th Jun 2020 9:34pm
the midday sun burns brightest but midnight sun burns longest
Viz
#sun
#universe
#snow
620 reads
1 Comment
Adelphina
Poem Published
13th Feb 2022 10:14pm
13th Feb 2022 10:14pm
Paradise Sunrise
It’ll be here any minute
When I see the light
Going to run towards a
Paradise Sunrise
Got a bag packed
Full of letter seeds
Ready to bloom on the
Fields of my skin
Got my aviator
Ray-Ban glasses on
Sun beam guitar strings
Awakening with a yawn
Nourishing my spring
Of rose petal skin
Sprouting a garden
Creating words to sing
Arranged to set sail
Upon a sun stream trip
Infiltrating the dead of night
So it can feel the life of a
Paradise Sunrise
When I see the light
Going to run towards a
Paradise Sunrise
Got a bag packed
Full of letter seeds
Ready to bloom on the
Fields of my skin
Got my aviator
Ray-Ban glasses on
Sun beam guitar strings
Awakening with a yawn
Nourishing my spring
Of rose petal skin
Sprouting a garden
Creating words to sing
Arranged to set sail
Upon a sun stream trip
Infiltrating the dead of night
So it can feel the life of a
Paradise Sunrise
#flowers
#sun
#morning
349 reads
18 Comments
LunaGreyhawk
Poem Published
7th Apr 2022 4:00pm
7th Apr 2022 4:00pm
Evanescence
Wispy, whispered clouds crawl
lazily across retreating midnight
as if they, from fleeting experience
know nothing will last forever.
Sublime sun’s shine awakens
boldly beneath the sleeping horizon
as if he, from steadfast observation
believes he will be the one to persist.
But the munificent moon just smiles
kindly across the morning divide
as if she, from gathered wisdom
has learned the clouds are right.
lazily across retreating midnight
as if they, from fleeting experience
know nothing will last forever.
Sublime sun’s shine awakens
boldly beneath the sleeping horizon
as if he, from steadfast observation
believes he will be the one to persist.
But the munificent moon just smiles
kindly across the morning divide
as if she, from gathered wisdom
has learned the clouds are right.
#sun
#moon
#sky
#nature
#dawn
26 reads
13 Comments
Em-ily
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2022 8:51pm
23rd Dec 2022 8:51pm
Thoughts upon driving home, on a busy, long road in a car that's in danger of overheating or breaking an axel
If an embarrassing disaster occured, would I want to to be holding “this” thought / emotion / ego within myself at that same time?
Same time as if, if I ran into an friend or known acquaintance (a loved one), would I want to find my self, my eyes, or my countenance clothed in it upon their making sight of me?
How embarrassing!
Same time as if, if I ran into an friend or known acquaintance (a loved one), would I want to find my self, my eyes, or my countenance clothed in it upon their making sight of me?
How embarrassing!
#love
#sun
#beach #water
#beach #water
46 reads
5 Comments
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