Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Mercurial
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 9:54am
6th Dec 2024 9:54am
Echoes of Dignity
Be with compassion,
Don’t collude with the unconscious,
To manipulate innocent souls,
To use their bodies for gold.
Your body is precious,
Your house till you no longer breathe,
Beware how you treat it,
Think what’s best for it.
Humans have made you objects,
Objects of gratification,
To spread your bosom and legs,
To deprive your freedom.
Young woman wake up,
From that deep sleep,
Know your power,
You are the pillar of society.
Without you, we would never exist,
We live to serve you, ...
Don’t collude with the unconscious,
To manipulate innocent souls,
To use their bodies for gold.
Your body is precious,
Your house till you no longer breathe,
Beware how you treat it,
Think what’s best for it.
Humans have made you objects,
Objects of gratification,
To spread your bosom and legs,
To deprive your freedom.
Young woman wake up,
From that deep sleep,
Know your power,
You are the pillar of society.
Without you, we would never exist,
We live to serve you, ...
#freedom
#ignorance
#morality #motivational
#morality #motivational
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REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 1:52pm
5th Dec 2024 1:52pm
The "Navigator "
If ever, however I lose my way in need of navigation a GPS to lead me back from going astray!
A guiding light through the fog, even when I'm feeling weak like a digital signal or analog!
Seeking to navigate and create a way back into your heart, a place full of warmth and love which brings us together like a hand ✋ and glove!!
Back where I belong in the comfort of your open and welcoming arm's!
From the beginning all long I just needed you to be there for me my motivator, and inspirator from the beginning 🙏 to the end you've always...
A guiding light through the fog, even when I'm feeling weak like a digital signal or analog!
Seeking to navigate and create a way back into your heart, a place full of warmth and love which brings us together like a hand ✋ and glove!!
Back where I belong in the comfort of your open and welcoming arm's!
From the beginning all long I just needed you to be there for me my motivator, and inspirator from the beginning 🙏 to the end you've always...
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
55 reads
2 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 8:27pm
4th Dec 2024 8:27pm
like a fool in the rain
Inside Roare
like a fool in the rain
The local sounds, the roar of saxophones.
Your body is straining and your mouth is wide open. aaaaa
Who hasn't eaten, doesn't eat.
Who waited, doesn't know.
Who hasn't watched, doesn't eat, who's left alone, doesn't know.
You walk through the raindrops,
only I still don't believe.
You walk through the wall, I don't know yet,
whether love will defeat your strength.
Du du du dum.
Du du du dum.
I'm running.... aaaaaa
I'm running like a madman in the rain, ...
like a fool in the rain
The local sounds, the roar of saxophones.
Your body is straining and your mouth is wide open. aaaaa
Who hasn't eaten, doesn't eat.
Who waited, doesn't know.
Who hasn't watched, doesn't eat, who's left alone, doesn't know.
You walk through the raindrops,
only I still don't believe.
You walk through the wall, I don't know yet,
whether love will defeat your strength.
Du du du dum.
Du du du dum.
I'm running.... aaaaaa
I'm running like a madman in the rain, ...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
72 reads
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Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
Ode to the Drunk Girl, Don't Text That Man
Babe, we’ve talked about this too many times to be sane.
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
#alcohol
#breakup
#friendship
#love
#motivational
157 reads
13 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 1:59pm
3rd Dec 2024 1:59pm
Concordia Discors
Surely there's disorder within each mind
that graces the troublesome human race.
Why, necessarily, would it be kind
when chaos sparks thought all over the place?
The deviltry is in the details
which civilization will not master
when all it cares about are net sales
in the profit margin hereafter.
But chaos and creativity link
in the marbled columns of poetry
where order angels help the devils think
in divine terms of versatility....
prepared to host a devil's every thought
in the glory halls of the polyglot.
that graces the troublesome human race.
Why, necessarily, would it be kind
when chaos sparks thought all over the place?
The deviltry is in the details
which civilization will not master
when all it cares about are net sales
in the profit margin hereafter.
But chaos and creativity link
in the marbled columns of poetry
where order angels help the devils think
in divine terms of versatility....
prepared to host a devil's every thought
in the glory halls of the polyglot.
#LifeAsAWriter
#motivational
#passion
#PowerOfWords
#redemption
150 reads
9 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 6:55am
3rd Dec 2024 6:55am
Somewhere out there
I know somewhere I mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
I mean more than anyone
Because somewhere there's a place out there for everyone
And someday I know we'll all meet that someone
Somewhere you mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
You're worth more than anyone
Someplace you'll find the glow back in you're face
Someday not today all these feelings will go away
Somehow maybe soon maybe now
Somewhere you will mean something to someone and in they're eyes
You'll mean more than anyone
Somewhere somewhere...
And in they're eyes
I mean more than anyone
Because somewhere there's a place out there for everyone
And someday I know we'll all meet that someone
Somewhere you mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
You're worth more than anyone
Someplace you'll find the glow back in you're face
Someday not today all these feelings will go away
Somehow maybe soon maybe now
Somewhere you will mean something to someone and in they're eyes
You'll mean more than anyone
Somewhere somewhere...
#courage
#motivational
#TimeHeals
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 9:30pm
2nd Dec 2024 9:30pm
The Shapes in Shadows
They hand us molds at birth
boxes carved from iron opinions,
sharp edges pressing into soft skin.
Be this, not that, they say,
their voices a choir of echoes,
ancient as caves and just as cold.
You are not a person,
but a sketch in charcoal,
dark lines smudged by lazy hands.
Your laughter?
Filed under too loud, too shrill, too weak.
Your silence?
A void they fill with their fears.
They say your gender is a blueprint,
your race, a map of limits.
"Walk this way, think this way,
and don't you dare...
boxes carved from iron opinions,
sharp edges pressing into soft skin.
Be this, not that, they say,
their voices a choir of echoes,
ancient as caves and just as cold.
You are not a person,
but a sketch in charcoal,
dark lines smudged by lazy hands.
Your laughter?
Filed under too loud, too shrill, too weak.
Your silence?
A void they fill with their fears.
They say your gender is a blueprint,
your race, a map of limits.
"Walk this way, think this way,
and don't you dare...
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness #motivational
#kindness #motivational
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0 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 9:12pm
2nd Dec 2024 9:12pm
A little star shines
Inside Roare
A little star shines
A spade sank into the daisies.
Only two sturdy trees cast shadows, singing softly.
About the fact that a little star cannot be seen when it disappears from the sky.
Only the glitter remains on the hand.
The one who saw her and stroked her golden hair.
The one who dared to call her by name, led her by the hand.
As the spade sank into the ribs,
His downcast eyes cast a black shadow, no one sings.
Everything that shone quickly went out, it's all gone.
Yet the star shines.
...
A little star shines
A spade sank into the daisies.
Only two sturdy trees cast shadows, singing softly.
About the fact that a little star cannot be seen when it disappears from the sky.
Only the glitter remains on the hand.
The one who saw her and stroked her golden hair.
The one who dared to call her by name, led her by the hand.
As the spade sank into the ribs,
His downcast eyes cast a black shadow, no one sings.
Everything that shone quickly went out, it's all gone.
Yet the star shines.
...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
73 reads
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 11:33am
2nd Dec 2024 11:33am
A poet's Delight
**Poetic Delight***
My delight is right
It is a poetry to write
Something very light
A Dragonfly's flight
A pure wide landscape
A blinding mirror of snow white
What the delight
In a pretty sight
A kite swimming
Within ethereal flight
What a delight,!!!
In the long Summer's night
A quiet dark starred sky
Sleeping in the moonlight
With crickets out of sight
chanting beneath the vines
And when the glooms
Unfurls on a bright dazzling light
The perfect queen a round...
My delight is right
It is a poetry to write
Something very light
A Dragonfly's flight
A pure wide landscape
A blinding mirror of snow white
What the delight
In a pretty sight
A kite swimming
Within ethereal flight
What a delight,!!!
In the long Summer's night
A quiet dark starred sky
Sleeping in the moonlight
With crickets out of sight
chanting beneath the vines
And when the glooms
Unfurls on a bright dazzling light
The perfect queen a round...
#faith
#morality
#motivational
#philosophical
#spiritual
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
Finally My Dream
Once, I had a dream
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
#courage
#motivational
#strength
165 reads
22 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 9:15pm
28th Nov 2024 9:15pm
On my shit
Lather me in grease, so I can get shit popping, like bacon
My skin stays glistening, so I don't have to worry about it drying, like a raisin
While your smoking crystal
I'll be bathing in gold dust
On my queen shit mentality
Where reigning supreme is a must
I move like a skilled assassin
Baby I don't need a pump, I do my gassing
Time to give you this lyrical lashing
Whip you into shape, to help build up your vernacular
I'm cocky, so every word spewed onto this paper, with my ink is spectacular
I am heavenly crafted...
My skin stays glistening, so I don't have to worry about it drying, like a raisin
While your smoking crystal
I'll be bathing in gold dust
On my queen shit mentality
Where reigning supreme is a must
I move like a skilled assassin
Baby I don't need a pump, I do my gassing
Time to give you this lyrical lashing
Whip you into shape, to help build up your vernacular
I'm cocky, so every word spewed onto this paper, with my ink is spectacular
I am heavenly crafted...
#motivational
#myself
#SelfWorth
142 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 4:57pm
28th Nov 2024 4:57pm
Nature, Beauty and Ink
It is wise to dive headlong into the wild, close the blind eyes and open the clear mind, its wise to rise from the cluttered mind, infested with recycled cliches and mindset and outworn rotten habits..
..
Rise and stretch the feet that are turned frozen inside a cold seat, a mechanical heat, won't ever warm the cold heart, sun is your hearth, lounge in the open airs and gather as much as you can. and fill the empty inside with heaven's breath...
While time is wide and the plains get greener and flat, decked with poppies and daffodils and daisies..and so many fragrant...
..
Rise and stretch the feet that are turned frozen inside a cold seat, a mechanical heat, won't ever warm the cold heart, sun is your hearth, lounge in the open airs and gather as much as you can. and fill the empty inside with heaven's breath...
While time is wide and the plains get greener and flat, decked with poppies and daffodils and daisies..and so many fragrant...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#religion
74 reads
2 Comments
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