Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
Time Passing Through
Can't the future just wait?
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
#hope
#motivational
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 10:56am
17th Mar 2025 10:56am
Warmth
I don't know what's about the feeling.
Of warmth that comforts us and gets us reeling.
Maybe it's the way it reminds you of a friend's warm hug.
Or your own child,gently catching your attention by tugging on your shirt.
The warmth of sunshine rays.
On hot summer beach days.
The dear childhood days when you used to play.
And the times you would create.
The memories you hold onto.
And the upcoming of fate.
The warm sensation warmth does create.
Sometimes it can soothe the soul.
Or chase away any negative emotion...
Of warmth that comforts us and gets us reeling.
Maybe it's the way it reminds you of a friend's warm hug.
Or your own child,gently catching your attention by tugging on your shirt.
The warmth of sunshine rays.
On hot summer beach days.
The dear childhood days when you used to play.
And the times you would create.
The memories you hold onto.
And the upcoming of fate.
The warm sensation warmth does create.
Sometimes it can soothe the soul.
Or chase away any negative emotion...
#hope
#loneliness
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 11:59am
16th Mar 2025 11:59am
Internal Incarceration
I hold myself in disdain
I don't give a fuck
I've got nothing to hide
No one understands
A part of me has died
Utopia rejected on Earth that's hell
My mind is lonely, no different from a cell
My body is sick, which I can't leave behind
What will it take to medicate the mind
Exit the womb to a tomb
Can't adjust
Alone in my room
Depend on my departed friend
Not remembering
How long has it been
If there's one thing I've learned
Comfort cannot be found
Nowhere to grow
Nobody's fault but mine ...
I don't give a fuck
I've got nothing to hide
No one understands
A part of me has died
Utopia rejected on Earth that's hell
My mind is lonely, no different from a cell
My body is sick, which I can't leave behind
What will it take to medicate the mind
Exit the womb to a tomb
Can't adjust
Alone in my room
Depend on my departed friend
Not remembering
How long has it been
If there's one thing I've learned
Comfort cannot be found
Nowhere to grow
Nobody's fault but mine ...
#loneliness
#motivational
#rhyming
#sadness
#TruthOfLife
79 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 9:27am
14th Mar 2025 9:27am
Don't think about it, do it!
The weekend is here
Let's get out, and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
Let's get out, and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#senryu
#uplifting
90 reads
10 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 6:09am
14th Mar 2025 6:09am
Secret Motivation
Just know that I thrived to make you smile
And that I also I strived to make your laugh
Because I cried too with you in your grief
Even if my tears didn’t bring you any relief
But it was my belief that in sharing these emotions
I would kind of move you in some type of way
Even if I was a faceless stranger in the distance
We’d bond like little innocent children at play
Perhaps it was the silly rhymes I’d add in lines
To make you awe in wonder, ponder and think
So if you drink the ink to open up your mind’s eye
You...
And that I also I strived to make your laugh
Because I cried too with you in your grief
Even if my tears didn’t bring you any relief
But it was my belief that in sharing these emotions
I would kind of move you in some type of way
Even if I was a faceless stranger in the distance
We’d bond like little innocent children at play
Perhaps it was the silly rhymes I’d add in lines
To make you awe in wonder, ponder and think
So if you drink the ink to open up your mind’s eye
You...
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational #WritingPoetry
#motivational #WritingPoetry
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 10:53am
11th Mar 2025 10:53am
Writing Books
When you write a book using the feather of a hen.
Dip it in ink or use a fountain pen.
You can write whole new worlds.
Like magic,fantasize.
With your pure imagination.
And before your eyes.
The words begin to come alive and dance.
Like a romance novel with a chance.
An adventure plot in advance.
Or a comedy with a glance.
It's like your pen holds power.
As beautiful as a freshly bloomed flower.
The smell of a new book is one you cannot resist.
With a new plot,a new cover.
And the memory of the plot...
Dip it in ink or use a fountain pen.
You can write whole new worlds.
Like magic,fantasize.
With your pure imagination.
And before your eyes.
The words begin to come alive and dance.
Like a romance novel with a chance.
An adventure plot in advance.
Or a comedy with a glance.
It's like your pen holds power.
As beautiful as a freshly bloomed flower.
The smell of a new book is one you cannot resist.
With a new plot,a new cover.
And the memory of the plot...
#books
#hope
#magic #motivational
#magic #motivational
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 10:55am
10th Mar 2025 10:55am
Yesterday's Dream
I knew him once upon a dream.
A dream like you have never seen.
And so have I.
But it seemed peaceful,with a light blue sky.
I saw a girl in that dream.
She was doubtful of all she's ever been.
She says,my pain I don't want you to carry.
I don't want you to worry,I want you to be merry.
The way she spoke in this vivid dream.
Like there is more to her than others have seen.
She says,but what if you don't like me?
What if you dislike the real me?
What if you don't like my flaws?
That stand out...
A dream like you have never seen.
And so have I.
But it seemed peaceful,with a light blue sky.
I saw a girl in that dream.
She was doubtful of all she's ever been.
She says,my pain I don't want you to carry.
I don't want you to worry,I want you to be merry.
The way she spoke in this vivid dream.
Like there is more to her than others have seen.
She says,but what if you don't like me?
What if you dislike the real me?
What if you don't like my flaws?
That stand out...
#dreams
#hope
#motivational
#sleep
#uplifting
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Hashman
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 2:11am
10th Mar 2025 2:11am
Happy Is As Happy Does...
Sunsets
the sound of the ocean
a breeze through the trees
a good strong hug
a brand new box of chocolates
fresh bed sheets
fresh morning dew
falling in love
a full moon
an ice cold mug of beer
walking in the summer rain
a Big $ winning loto ticket
Mickey and Minnie Mouse
music
life
et cetera, et cetera...
the sound of the ocean
a breeze through the trees
a good strong hug
a brand new box of chocolates
fresh bed sheets
fresh morning dew
falling in love
a full moon
an ice cold mug of beer
walking in the summer rain
a Big $ winning loto ticket
Mickey and Minnie Mouse
music
life
et cetera, et cetera...
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 10:59am
9th Mar 2025 10:59am
The Right Path
What happened beneath the trees?
Do they have falling green leaves?
Do they always fall far from the tree?
And do I have to follow?
Once my time comes,when it comes the sorrow.
Do I have to follow nature's path?
In order to live and survive?
Sometimes I wish,but couldn't I just stay and watch the stars in the night?
Like nature's course takes place.
I found a familiar face.
Green,dancing leaves.
And spring,lively trees.
If I were a leaf,I would dance.
And have a natural advance.
I would flow slowly...
Do they have falling green leaves?
Do they always fall far from the tree?
And do I have to follow?
Once my time comes,when it comes the sorrow.
Do I have to follow nature's path?
In order to live and survive?
Sometimes I wish,but couldn't I just stay and watch the stars in the night?
Like nature's course takes place.
I found a familiar face.
Green,dancing leaves.
And spring,lively trees.
If I were a leaf,I would dance.
And have a natural advance.
I would flow slowly...
#despair
#hope
#motivational #sadness
#motivational #sadness
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 11:03am
5th Mar 2025 11:03am
The Sunset
It was the beginning of dawn.
And the sun,moon was coming upside down.
The colors danced in the sky.
And birds began to fly.
We watched the sunset appear and burn down.
It looked stunning.
Like it was wearing a colorful gown.
It slowly began to rise and show in the sky.
As birds sing and leaves fly.
It began with red,like red roses immortal.
And went into orange,like orange juice.
It transitioned into yellow,like sunshine.
And had really pretty hues.
When it started coming back down, it started becoming...
And the sun,moon was coming upside down.
The colors danced in the sky.
And birds began to fly.
We watched the sunset appear and burn down.
It looked stunning.
Like it was wearing a colorful gown.
It slowly began to rise and show in the sky.
As birds sing and leaves fly.
It began with red,like red roses immortal.
And went into orange,like orange juice.
It transitioned into yellow,like sunshine.
And had really pretty hues.
When it started coming back down, it started becoming...
#hope
#motivational
#nature #uplifting
#nature #uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 10:58am
3rd Mar 2025 10:58am
Feeling Of A New Book
Not much people talk about the feeling of a new book.
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
#books
#hope
#magic
#motivational
#prose
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
Make it a great day!
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
#inspirational
#motivational
#rhyming
#support
#uplifting
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