Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#motivational
motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 10:03pm
27th Apr 2025 10:03pm
The Closing of a Wonderful Poetry Website
Administrator of DUP known as Mistress of the Underground,
Guardians of Shadow, and fellow members, I’d like to say farewell to all of you.
Please allow me to say a special thank you to my followers.
I’d also like to thank my readers and commenters for their supports.
Poetry enthusiasts who have visited this website, I express my gratitude to you.
I can’t go without mentioning some of the faces I usually see when I log in,
LilDragonFly, nutbuster, SweetKittyCat5, I_IS_Me, and Dimpy, to name a few.
Those whose names I haven’t listed, I’ll still remember you. ...
Guardians of Shadow, and fellow members, I’d like to say farewell to all of you.
Please allow me to say a special thank you to my followers.
I’d also like to thank my readers and commenters for their supports.
Poetry enthusiasts who have visited this website, I express my gratitude to you.
I can’t go without mentioning some of the faces I usually see when I log in,
LilDragonFly, nutbuster, SweetKittyCat5, I_IS_Me, and Dimpy, to name a few.
Those whose names I haven’t listed, I’ll still remember you. ...
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational #WritingPoetry
#motivational #WritingPoetry
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gifteth
AliboTerna
AliboTerna
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 10:32am
23rd Apr 2025 10:32am
DARE, SEER
To the girl who froze, yes, like stew in the fridge,
Once danced in jollof sun, now strides a snowy ridge.
Yet still she flies, feathered fierce and rare,
Because every day na another day to dare.
I remember: how you used to wake up at midnight,
Clatter in the flame-lit room,
Spices rising like war chants in smoky bloom,
Just to fix a tight meal that tasted like home.
You stirred pots like spells, with wisdom to pour,
Head sharp like blade, heart rich to the core.
Brains wey de blaze, hands that bless --
Queen of soup and dreams no...
Once danced in jollof sun, now strides a snowy ridge.
Yet still she flies, feathered fierce and rare,
Because every day na another day to dare.
I remember: how you used to wake up at midnight,
Clatter in the flame-lit room,
Spices rising like war chants in smoky bloom,
Just to fix a tight meal that tasted like home.
You stirred pots like spells, with wisdom to pour,
Head sharp like blade, heart rich to the core.
Brains wey de blaze, hands that bless --
Queen of soup and dreams no...
#hope
#inspirational
#love #motivational
#love #motivational
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 10:58am
21st Apr 2025 10:58am
Fireflies At Night
You might not believe your eyes at the sight.
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
#hope
#motivational
#nature #uplifting
#nature #uplifting
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Solomon_Song
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 7:53am
21st Apr 2025 7:53am
LET ME SHARE THE STAGE WITH YOU
Let me share the stage with you,
show I am proud of what you do.
Make sure I'm in the sound tracking
while I give my words of backing.
Such is my depth of commitment
to you and your life's fulfilment.
show I am proud of what you do.
Make sure I'm in the sound tracking
while I give my words of backing.
Such is my depth of commitment
to you and your life's fulfilment.
#courage
#gratitude
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
82 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 11:39pm
16th Apr 2025 11:39pm
Restore Me
As I rise upon another day in my own life, I will always give my thanks to GOD ALMIGHTY. WHO has been my angel 😇 watching over me all the nights and days of my life, with the things that have somehow change my life and turn my world around. But yet through my cancer I've learned, more about my self in so many ways, that even I was surprised how strong, I was and am not giving up on life. Yet what I can say is that, I've never gave up on my faith and beliefs. But yet as it's been four years since, my diagnosis of cancer I still keep standing and fighting for this precious gift of life....
#kindness
#motivational
#patience
#spiritual
#strength
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Wordsmith
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 9:02am
16th Apr 2025 9:02am
QUE FIT NO SERA SERA
"Que Sera Sera;” one of the lies that’s been passed down in ages
A sweet lullaby for the lazy
a lullaby that kills the will
We’re told; “Whatever will be; will be;”
but forget that what will be needs 'Will' to be
Destiny isn’t a scripted play; it’s a field
And man was gifted a tool; the name is "will"
Yet we sit; fold arms; and call it fate
as if the Most High created us to spectate
Not every dream dies because it wasn’t meant to be
Some die because someone refused to will it into being
“Que Sera Sera”; A...
A sweet lullaby for the lazy
a lullaby that kills the will
We’re told; “Whatever will be; will be;”
but forget that what will be needs 'Will' to be
Destiny isn’t a scripted play; it’s a field
And man was gifted a tool; the name is "will"
Yet we sit; fold arms; and call it fate
as if the Most High created us to spectate
Not every dream dies because it wasn’t meant to be
Some die because someone refused to will it into being
“Que Sera Sera”; A...
#fate
#hope
#motivational
#philosophical
#strength
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1 Comment
seekingkate
kateA
kateA
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 5:50am
16th Apr 2025 5:50am
DU and Me
The end of an era
both yours DU, and mine.
Sometimes it’s best just to say goodbye
to close the door and not…hang on.
Urgently my fingers copy and paste my trove of poems
just to make sure…just to make sure I’ve got them all
before you close your doors.
Every now and then I read one and I'm
taken back to that space and time.
It’s like walking the yellow brick road in reverse
where life was lived, where joy was felt
where heartache reigned.
But more importantly - I see...I see
how I have grown...how I have...
both yours DU, and mine.
Sometimes it’s best just to say goodbye
to close the door and not…hang on.
Urgently my fingers copy and paste my trove of poems
just to make sure…just to make sure I’ve got them all
before you close your doors.
Every now and then I read one and I'm
taken back to that space and time.
It’s like walking the yellow brick road in reverse
where life was lived, where joy was felt
where heartache reigned.
But more importantly - I see...I see
how I have grown...how I have...
#gratitude
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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3 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 3:02am
16th Apr 2025 3:02am
Rigel Orion
Some paint murals on walls
Some write poetry to touch hearts
Some create music to move the soul
While many push to promote the arts
Some inspire through education
Some motivate through their fashion
Some vocations are here to help humanity
Lifting others by showing empathy and compassion
Some encourage others to be curious
Knowing the universe is always expanding
Promoting knowledge to be fun and creative
As they foster collaboration and understanding
Some spread joy with their skills
Some help heal and bring...
Some write poetry to touch hearts
Some create music to move the soul
While many push to promote the arts
Some inspire through education
Some motivate through their fashion
Some vocations are here to help humanity
Lifting others by showing empathy and compassion
Some encourage others to be curious
Knowing the universe is always expanding
Promoting knowledge to be fun and creative
As they foster collaboration and understanding
Some spread joy with their skills
Some help heal and bring...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#stars
#universe
70 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 1:43pm
15th Apr 2025 1:43pm
Nature Speaks Poesy
Nature Speaks Poetry
Flavoured with the softest zephyr, soaked into the finest dew,, served in flowered cup of the time,
spring comes to life again, waddling in the fields, dancing with growing greens bending its shoulder
to nod assent to every willing poet.....i come entranced to bow silently to this celestial eternity,
try to pour my heart, my feelings like a liquid love into honeyed words.
i am enchanted, ever again and more inebriated,,, the perfume souvenirs come alive,
with every daisy blooming; with every beak chirping, with...
Flavoured with the softest zephyr, soaked into the finest dew,, served in flowered cup of the time,
spring comes to life again, waddling in the fields, dancing with growing greens bending its shoulder
to nod assent to every willing poet.....i come entranced to bow silently to this celestial eternity,
try to pour my heart, my feelings like a liquid love into honeyed words.
i am enchanted, ever again and more inebriated,,, the perfume souvenirs come alive,
with every daisy blooming; with every beak chirping, with...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness #motivational
#happiness #motivational
59 reads
4 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 10:59am
13th Apr 2025 10:59am
Still Aflame
I don't know what's about it.
And I don't know how to say this.
I don't know how to tell this.
Or how to explain it.
On one side is a dimlit light.
Strong,powerful firelight.
Near a strong,warm fireplace.
Yet at the same time,something feels cold.
Like a forming disease or mold.
The fire is slowly burning out.
But you can still see it well.
The fire still seems bright.
After everything I tell.
Long ago,a fire burned.
Screeches sounded and peace hurled.
At first,the fire was...
And I don't know how to say this.
I don't know how to tell this.
Or how to explain it.
On one side is a dimlit light.
Strong,powerful firelight.
Near a strong,warm fireplace.
Yet at the same time,something feels cold.
Like a forming disease or mold.
The fire is slowly burning out.
But you can still see it well.
The fire still seems bright.
After everything I tell.
Long ago,a fire burned.
Screeches sounded and peace hurled.
At first,the fire was...
#despair
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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Wordsmith
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 6:10pm
11th Apr 2025 6:10pm
Wake Up
Wake up; there's no warmth in the morning
Wake up; just the cold on my skin
No love; just the echoes of the silence
No hand ever reaching within
Wake up; is there anyone who's listening?
Wake up; I’ve been crying without sound
Oh love; I have begged beneath the ruins
Still no soul is ever around
Alone; alone... no one’s coming
Alone; alone... just the rain
Alone; alone.... can you hear it?
The sound of a world gone vain.
Wake up; see the riches getting richer
Wake up; while we’re sleeping in pain
No love;...
Wake up; just the cold on my skin
No love; just the echoes of the silence
No hand ever reaching within
Wake up; is there anyone who's listening?
Wake up; I’ve been crying without sound
Oh love; I have begged beneath the ruins
Still no soul is ever around
Alone; alone... no one’s coming
Alone; alone... just the rain
Alone; alone.... can you hear it?
The sound of a world gone vain.
Wake up; see the riches getting richer
Wake up; while we’re sleeping in pain
No love;...
#HumanRights
#LifeStruggles
#loneliness
#motivational
#TruthOfLife
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 5:15am
11th Apr 2025 5:15am
Music and Politics
Do you remember the days
When you heard the radio play
We are the world
And “One” on Bono’s tour
We just wanna have fun
Was chased by I wanna dance with somebody
Are those days done
Hello anybody!
A Smooth Criminal was played all-day
Now we have one in the white house
Hip hip hooray
Yea quiet like a church mouse
I remember when the wall came down
The shock and awe of it all
I remember when another house came down
It was crazy. We knew who started that ball
There was a singer named George...
When you heard the radio play
We are the world
And “One” on Bono’s tour
We just wanna have fun
Was chased by I wanna dance with somebody
Are those days done
Hello anybody!
A Smooth Criminal was played all-day
Now we have one in the white house
Hip hip hooray
Yea quiet like a church mouse
I remember when the wall came down
The shock and awe of it all
I remember when another house came down
It was crazy. We knew who started that ball
There was a singer named George...
#anxiety
#fear
#frustration #motivational
#frustration #motivational
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