Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#motivational
motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:03am
Yesterday 5:03am
Eagle sails Above
Took over their house
Eagle fans stand tall and proud in the crowd push me a tush you can’t stop me
Flying a silver bird into Hollywood
Land on asphalt play on lab grown grass
Look across the stadium all I see is Kelly green
I can’t see Jack Nicholson in the front row
Stars scattered about not paying attention
To what is going on an Eagle sails above
As a Ram gets lost in the defense
Hurts me soo good
Hurts me soo good
Saquan is so good in Hollywood
Saquan is not Hollywood
Gets up...
Eagle fans stand tall and proud in the crowd push me a tush you can’t stop me
Flying a silver bird into Hollywood
Land on asphalt play on lab grown grass
Look across the stadium all I see is Kelly green
I can’t see Jack Nicholson in the front row
Stars scattered about not paying attention
To what is going on an Eagle sails above
As a Ram gets lost in the defense
Hurts me soo good
Hurts me soo good
Saquan is so good in Hollywood
Saquan is not Hollywood
Gets up...
#culture
#motivational
#sports #tradition
#sports #tradition
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 10:49am
9th Jan 2025 10:49am
I Don't Know
I don't know if it's just the way I feel.
The way I have been,or slowly heal.
I don't know if it's something I have seen.
But sometimes,I wish for something I've never been.
Yearning to feel those memories once more.
I don't know if I just fell on the floor.
Or if I had t actually walk out the door.
Maybe it's something I drank or ate.
Maybe it's destiny or fate.
I don't know if I ate something wrong.
But I feel broken like a love song.
I don't see if it's something I drank.
I want to be frank,not blank. ...
The way I have been,or slowly heal.
I don't know if it's something I have seen.
But sometimes,I wish for something I've never been.
Yearning to feel those memories once more.
I don't know if I just fell on the floor.
Or if I had t actually walk out the door.
Maybe it's something I drank or ate.
Maybe it's destiny or fate.
I don't know if I ate something wrong.
But I feel broken like a love song.
I don't see if it's something I drank.
I want to be frank,not blank. ...
#despair
#hope
#motivational #sadness
#motivational #sadness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 7:10pm
8th Jan 2025 7:10pm
Invoke Happiness
I stabbed myself repeatedly in the stomach about 3 times
there was no pain
there was no blood
instead, a greenish black goo oozed out onto the floor
A sign of relief
I was eradicating all negative energy from my body
this built up from years of anger, hostility, rage, hatred, tension and bitterness
surrounding yourself with people who bring you down
make a change, create and release the positive vibes within
associate with like minded individuals who love to invoke happiness
there was no pain
there was no blood
instead, a greenish black goo oozed out onto the floor
A sign of relief
I was eradicating all negative energy from my body
this built up from years of anger, hostility, rage, hatred, tension and bitterness
surrounding yourself with people who bring you down
make a change, create and release the positive vibes within
associate with like minded individuals who love to invoke happiness
#fiction
#horror
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
52 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
8th Jan 2025 1:26pm
Winter Glow
Where the pathway ends,
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
41 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 10:17am
8th Jan 2025 10:17am
Magic Touch
Times were slow,
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Amazing wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Amazing wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
#happiness
#love
#lyrics
#motivational
#relationships
79 reads
10 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 8:59pm
6th Jan 2025 8:59pm
PINK JULLIEN
PINK JULLIEN
Inside Roare
I try to read from your gray eyes
where your blue has gone.
Why are you so ordinary, why have you no color.
The blue from under your eyelashes always shone,
pink face.
Why is everything suddenly dark,
gray like a wall.
Jullien you feel that I can endure,
Jullien you see what I will endure.
Your cold gaze, icy palms.
Jullien, I want to breathe on them.
And breathe. And live.
Pull you out of the cobwebs and say I love you.
Look into your eyes and get your blue.
And...
Inside Roare
I try to read from your gray eyes
where your blue has gone.
Why are you so ordinary, why have you no color.
The blue from under your eyelashes always shone,
pink face.
Why is everything suddenly dark,
gray like a wall.
Jullien you feel that I can endure,
Jullien you see what I will endure.
Your cold gaze, icy palms.
Jullien, I want to breathe on them.
And breathe. And live.
Pull you out of the cobwebs and say I love you.
Look into your eyes and get your blue.
And...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
95 reads
0 Comments
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 5:11pm
5th Jan 2025 5:11pm
Step-by-Step
It takes STEP BY STEP,
You don't have to RUSH,
Just take your TIME,
POSITIVITY IS A PLUS!!!
Just go about it GRADUALLY, and
Take it DAY BY DAY,
If you keep this up then,
You will be on your MERRY WAY!!!
JUST TAKE THINGS SLOWLY,
and IN DEGREES,
Once you have ADJUSTED,
you WILL FEEL AT EASE.
It will be MELLOW and
It will BE A BREEZE,
You got it now, and
YOU AIM TO PLEASE!!!
BE COURAGEOUS and
ENCOURAGE YOURSELF,
YOU HAVE ONE BODY, and
HEALTH IS WEALTH!!!
JUST...
You don't have to RUSH,
Just take your TIME,
POSITIVITY IS A PLUS!!!
Just go about it GRADUALLY, and
Take it DAY BY DAY,
If you keep this up then,
You will be on your MERRY WAY!!!
JUST TAKE THINGS SLOWLY,
and IN DEGREES,
Once you have ADJUSTED,
you WILL FEEL AT EASE.
It will be MELLOW and
It will BE A BREEZE,
You got it now, and
YOU AIM TO PLEASE!!!
BE COURAGEOUS and
ENCOURAGE YOURSELF,
YOU HAVE ONE BODY, and
HEALTH IS WEALTH!!!
JUST...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
64 reads
2 Comments
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 5:08pm
5th Jan 2025 5:08pm
Stop Doubting Yourself
MY FIRST POEM OF 2025,
LET'S GET IT, LET'S GO!!!!!
Your NEW YEAR RESOLUTIONS IS TO:
"TAKE HEED TO THESE WORDS, and
SO WILL I!!!"
STOP DOUBTING YOURSELF,
YOU'LL be surprised at
what you COULD DO!!
There's a PURPOSE IN YOUR LIFE,
HE DIDN'T BRING YOU THIS FAR
TO LEAVE YOU,
You're going through SOME STRUGGLES
HE WILL DEFINITELY see you THROUGH,
You Also have TRIALS and TRIBULATIONS,
HE'LL know just what to DO
Don't worry about the whereabouts,
who, what, where and...
LET'S GET IT, LET'S GO!!!!!
Your NEW YEAR RESOLUTIONS IS TO:
"TAKE HEED TO THESE WORDS, and
SO WILL I!!!"
STOP DOUBTING YOURSELF,
YOU'LL be surprised at
what you COULD DO!!
There's a PURPOSE IN YOUR LIFE,
HE DIDN'T BRING YOU THIS FAR
TO LEAVE YOU,
You're going through SOME STRUGGLES
HE WILL DEFINITELY see you THROUGH,
You Also have TRIALS and TRIBULATIONS,
HE'LL know just what to DO
Don't worry about the whereabouts,
who, what, where and...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
43 reads
1 Comment
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 9:44pm
3rd Jan 2025 9:44pm
ice heart
INSIDE ROARE
ice heart
What you think about, what you dream,
what you believe, that is not a dream.
What you live for, let it not be a dream.
Believe that life is different.
You see the sky blue,
or full of stars.
The earth soaked in blood
that lies at your feet.
Forget about the sinful soul,
in your chest a foreign heart beats.
aaaaa
Heartless aaaa, like an ice queen,
aaaaa
look at who you have hurt,
perhaps a hundred years behind ice bars.
aaaaa
Even if you live alone,
to...
ice heart
What you think about, what you dream,
what you believe, that is not a dream.
What you live for, let it not be a dream.
Believe that life is different.
You see the sky blue,
or full of stars.
The earth soaked in blood
that lies at your feet.
Forget about the sinful soul,
in your chest a foreign heart beats.
aaaaa
Heartless aaaa, like an ice queen,
aaaaa
look at who you have hurt,
perhaps a hundred years behind ice bars.
aaaaa
Even if you live alone,
to...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
58 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
Stay
Rest your weary feet
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
67 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 12:40pm
2nd Jan 2025 12:40pm
Ready, Aim, Desire
She looked so goddamn sexy with that gun in her mouth.
It really brought out her cheekbones.
Ohhhhh Yeahhhhh, I get really aroused and hard just thinking about it.
I wonder if she'll pull the trigger?
Do you think I can encourage it?
Let's end this story right now.
It really brought out her cheekbones.
Ohhhhh Yeahhhhh, I get really aroused and hard just thinking about it.
I wonder if she'll pull the trigger?
Do you think I can encourage it?
Let's end this story right now.
#erotic
#girlfriend
#motivational #support
#motivational #support
105 reads
18 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 12:34pm
2nd Jan 2025 12:34pm
Look Out!
Fear is an addiction,
A debilitating disease!
Best that you control it
Or it will bring you to your knees
People become addicted to fear
Fear is a puppeteer!
Fear will minimize your goals
Fear will weigh down your soul
Fear's tongue is covered with shards of broken glass
It will lick your brain to shreds, lay you flat on your ass!
A debilitating disease!
Best that you control it
Or it will bring you to your knees
People become addicted to fear
Fear is a puppeteer!
Fear will minimize your goals
Fear will weigh down your soul
Fear's tongue is covered with shards of broken glass
It will lick your brain to shreds, lay you flat on your ass!
#anxiety
#fear
#LifeStruggles #motivational
#LifeStruggles #motivational
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20 Comments
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