Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 11:15am
4th Apr 2025 11:15am
The Perfect World
Can you imagine a world with butterflies?
A world empty of pretty lies?
With light blue,sparkly skies?
Could you imagine the ground we stand?
Where justice and happiness defend?
A world empty of sadness or woe.
And empty of war and foe.
Where wind sways and flowers grow.
And there is one thing that everybody know.
A world where everything is bright and happy.
Maybe even wholesome or sappy.
A world where nobody cries.
Where sadness dies.
Nobody feels lonely and nobody denies.
Maybe a world of sunshine...
A world empty of pretty lies?
With light blue,sparkly skies?
Could you imagine the ground we stand?
Where justice and happiness defend?
A world empty of sadness or woe.
And empty of war and foe.
Where wind sways and flowers grow.
And there is one thing that everybody know.
A world where everything is bright and happy.
Maybe even wholesome or sappy.
A world where nobody cries.
Where sadness dies.
Nobody feels lonely and nobody denies.
Maybe a world of sunshine...
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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cabcool
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 00:48am
1st Apr 2025 00:48am
ink-lined to inspire
inks on fire: inkblot 04
in the heat of pen and ink,
when parchments are blank,
my scripts lean and lank,
episodes hang on the brink,
waiting to be written down,
that they may assume
a context to bloom
where the poet may find renown.
let each utterance come forth,
ink-lined to inspire
with eloquent fire,
that my tongue may find its worth.
for the heat of pen and ink,
unready to die,
must yet testify
that i am, because i think.
© Copyright 2023 April 04
by...
in the heat of pen and ink,
when parchments are blank,
my scripts lean and lank,
episodes hang on the brink,
waiting to be written down,
that they may assume
a context to bloom
where the poet may find renown.
let each utterance come forth,
ink-lined to inspire
with eloquent fire,
that my tongue may find its worth.
for the heat of pen and ink,
unready to die,
must yet testify
that i am, because i think.
© Copyright 2023 April 04
by...
#LifeAsAWriter
#motivational
#MyInspiration
#NaPoWriMo2023
#WritingPoetry
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Sage_6_paths_light
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 7:29pm
29th Mar 2025 7:29pm
Eternal Love
Some people call it fate and some would call it destiny.
But what we have has much more depth I have searched eternity.
Each lifetime that we meet we have been threw heartache and deceat.
But this bond we hold is are love untold let's make a foundation that's concrete. Our eternal love will always hold my heart .
Just like davinci's life work our passion and love is like art.
I know you have doubts I had them too.
But A life with out you is not a life I wish to see threw.
No matter what we do our love is beyond...
But what we have has much more depth I have searched eternity.
Each lifetime that we meet we have been threw heartache and deceat.
But this bond we hold is are love untold let's make a foundation that's concrete. Our eternal love will always hold my heart .
Just like davinci's life work our passion and love is like art.
I know you have doubts I had them too.
But A life with out you is not a life I wish to see threw.
No matter what we do our love is beyond...
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#motivational
99 reads
1 Comment
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 11:00am
29th Mar 2025 11:00am
Loving Eyes
What happens underneath someone's eyes?
When they fall inlove and realize?
Does their life appear in front of their eyes?
Do they feel flutters in their stomach?
Or fantasize?
Is it like a shimmer in their eyes?
Or letting out dreamy sighs?
Let's go and swim in them together.
Imagine a person who's inlove,however.
The magic happening behind their eyes.
It's deeper than an ocean,you realize.
Maybe if you swim in it,it's like a red rose garden.
With roses,without any thorns.
Maybe it's magic,like a...
When they fall inlove and realize?
Does their life appear in front of their eyes?
Do they feel flutters in their stomach?
Or fantasize?
Is it like a shimmer in their eyes?
Or letting out dreamy sighs?
Let's go and swim in them together.
Imagine a person who's inlove,however.
The magic happening behind their eyes.
It's deeper than an ocean,you realize.
Maybe if you swim in it,it's like a red rose garden.
With roses,without any thorns.
Maybe it's magic,like a...
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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Kementic1
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 6:47pm
28th Mar 2025 6:47pm
Standing On Love
I long for the synergy
of our combined love energy
Two souls spinning in a swirl
in a new spiritual world
Living in our own Eden
on an island in Sweden
Feeling the glory of heaven above
just us-Standing on Love
Our entanglement is on a quantum level
and in the joy of this we revel
With you as a Co-polit at the helm
We seek a new metaphysical realm
No longer constrained by this reality
we seek immortality
The fantasy that I dreamt of
we two-Standing on Love
...
of our combined love energy
Two souls spinning in a swirl
in a new spiritual world
Living in our own Eden
on an island in Sweden
Feeling the glory of heaven above
just us-Standing on Love
Our entanglement is on a quantum level
and in the joy of this we revel
With you as a Co-polit at the helm
We seek a new metaphysical realm
No longer constrained by this reality
we seek immortality
The fantasy that I dreamt of
we two-Standing on Love
...
#admiration
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 1:44am
26th Mar 2025 1:44am
It's a sad day
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ it's a sad day that there will not be a DUP no more after 5-12-2025 😔 For me I truly enjoyed my time on the site, for sure when I signed up for DUP I can say it's been great for me as it let me express my thoughts and insight and imagination for during my time on here I've meet a lot of good people's that I admired as they encourage me as they inspire me to be able to express my thoughts and talents of unspoken words ✍️ for being here was like family among friends who were writers and artists sometimes being...
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#motivational
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
74 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
Door to a new world
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
90 reads
10 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 7:40pm
24th Mar 2025 7:40pm
I deserve it all
Twice the peace; twice the grace... Sound mind; steady pace
All the heights; I’m meant to chase... Man; I deserve it all.
Fewer foes; sharpest plans... Golden stocks and bigger brands
Built it up with my own hands... Yea; I deserve it all.
Shining stones; my wrist aglow... Seats reclined; the engines roar
Waves that kiss my private shore... I deserve it all.
Respect my name; let praises ring... Islands where the palm trees swing
Every blessing wealth can bring... I deserve it all.
For the my sister who left too...
All the heights; I’m meant to chase... Man; I deserve it all.
Fewer foes; sharpest plans... Golden stocks and bigger brands
Built it up with my own hands... Yea; I deserve it all.
Shining stones; my wrist aglow... Seats reclined; the engines roar
Waves that kiss my private shore... I deserve it all.
Respect my name; let praises ring... Islands where the palm trees swing
Every blessing wealth can bring... I deserve it all.
For the my sister who left too...
#faith
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 3:47pm
24th Mar 2025 3:47pm
One Bullet, Five Chances
I came to you for a problem
Instead, all I heard were your problems!
I really needed you in these dark times
I had no one else to talk to
I truly thought I meant something to you
I guess not
You can't stop talking about yourself, can you?
It's sickening how self-centered and vain you really are
Even when it's negative, you seem to address it, like some exciting movie script
You don't care what kind of audience you have
As long as they have a pulse
Someone could be lying on the ground dying,
and you would talk about your day or...
Instead, all I heard were your problems!
I really needed you in these dark times
I had no one else to talk to
I truly thought I meant something to you
I guess not
You can't stop talking about yourself, can you?
It's sickening how self-centered and vain you really are
Even when it's negative, you seem to address it, like some exciting movie script
You don't care what kind of audience you have
As long as they have a pulse
Someone could be lying on the ground dying,
and you would talk about your day or...
#inspirational
#motivational
#suicide #support
#suicide #support
105 reads
9 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 6:09pm
22nd Mar 2025 6:09pm
Hooked
I walked out onto the pier
in one hand was a fishing rod
In the other hand, was the gear
Today was the day I was going to show
I'm coming back with a fish
I will not buy it from the store
They all laughed at me
They cannot believe it is true
I'll show them they'll see
I placed the gear down
I took the blood worm out
casting into the blue was easy I found
Two hours in
The line began to jiggle a bit
This is where the fight begins
I yanked the rod up in a start ...
in one hand was a fishing rod
In the other hand, was the gear
Today was the day I was going to show
I'm coming back with a fish
I will not buy it from the store
They all laughed at me
They cannot believe it is true
I'll show them they'll see
I placed the gear down
I took the blood worm out
casting into the blue was easy I found
Two hours in
The line began to jiggle a bit
This is where the fight begins
I yanked the rod up in a start ...
#courage
#motivational
114 reads
15 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 5:26am
22nd Mar 2025 5:26am
Belong
It doesn't matter what's been and past
Doesn't matter if you finish first or last
It doesn't matter if you're loved by all
Doesn't matter if your rich or poor
It doesn't matter if your right or wrong
What matters is you find the place where you belong
Doesn't matter if you finish first or last
It doesn't matter if you're loved by all
Doesn't matter if your rich or poor
It doesn't matter if your right or wrong
What matters is you find the place where you belong
#motivational
63 reads
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
Time Passing Through
Can't the future just wait?
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
#hope
#motivational
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
#uplifting
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