Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#motivational
motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:58am
Yesterday 10:58am
Feeling Of A New Book
Not much people talk about the feeling of a new book.
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
#books
#hope
#magic
#motivational
#prose
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
27th Feb 2025 1:38pm
Make it a great day!
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
#inspirational
#motivational
#rhyming
#support
#uplifting
92 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 11:28pm
26th Feb 2025 11:28pm
Little Girl With A Purpose
I see that little girl everyday
She always runs to wherever she's going
Xmas came and left her with a bike
Now she rides up & down the street
It seems she never gets tired
She always plays by herself
I saw her the other day standing with her bike next to all these other kids who were much older than she
She wasn't even paying attention to them
She was standing there because they were
The older ones were smoking and talking a bunch of loud mouthed shit
All at once she got on her bike and sped away like she had some important place to be ...
She always runs to wherever she's going
Xmas came and left her with a bike
Now she rides up & down the street
It seems she never gets tired
She always plays by herself
I saw her the other day standing with her bike next to all these other kids who were much older than she
She wasn't even paying attention to them
She was standing there because they were
The older ones were smoking and talking a bunch of loud mouthed shit
All at once she got on her bike and sped away like she had some important place to be ...
#children
#drugs
#hope
#motivational
#poverty
92 reads
19 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 10:56am
21st Feb 2025 10:56am
Heart Of Gold
What makes a heart of gold?
It doesn't matter are you young or old.
Whether you are shy or bold.
Maybe it's when you don't believe all the stories you are told.
And when kindness ,patience through you unfold.
A golden heart is a rare sight.
You can find it often within the guiding light.
Walking through the forest at night.
You catch a shiny gleam.
Gold and bright,like once upon a dream.
A heart of gold is not always what it seem.
Because you can't see it on the outside.
You have to peek through.
Through...
It doesn't matter are you young or old.
Whether you are shy or bold.
Maybe it's when you don't believe all the stories you are told.
And when kindness ,patience through you unfold.
A golden heart is a rare sight.
You can find it often within the guiding light.
Walking through the forest at night.
You catch a shiny gleam.
Gold and bright,like once upon a dream.
A heart of gold is not always what it seem.
Because you can't see it on the outside.
You have to peek through.
Through...
#happiness
#hope
#kindness
#motivational
#uplifting
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 12:50pm
16th Feb 2025 12:50pm
Porcelain Dreams
Empty days drift in a world made of smoke and disguise,
Made-up lies, a life of despise while she hides.
A castle of echoes, a throne built on fantasy,
Her lack of reality—this is her majesty.
A queen in her kingdom of neon-lit haze,
Words set relationships ablaze,
Pretending to raise while seeking pity then praise.
Where nothing is real, yet she basks in the sunlight, acts brave.
She dances with thoughts of grand junction, whispers her name—total dysfunction.
Plays puppets with fate in her self-written game.
Muppets...
Made-up lies, a life of despise while she hides.
A castle of echoes, a throne built on fantasy,
Her lack of reality—this is her majesty.
A queen in her kingdom of neon-lit haze,
Words set relationships ablaze,
Pretending to raise while seeking pity then praise.
Where nothing is real, yet she basks in the sunlight, acts brave.
She dances with thoughts of grand junction, whispers her name—total dysfunction.
Plays puppets with fate in her self-written game.
Muppets...
#motivational
#obsession
#wisdom
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 11:03am
14th Feb 2025 11:03am
Things I Love
I love the smell of fresh wind.
And the colors of red roses.
I love the feeling of happiness.
That not always decomposes.
A memory I had long ago.
That to this day I don't feel foul.
I love the taste of sweet cheesecake.
A cup of juice and a breakfast pancake.
I love the way the wind blows.
The way the leaves rustle.
And the night sky shows.
Maybe his laughter or smile.
That you can listen for a while.
I love the way my pen feels in my hand when I write my poems.
Or with the feather of a hen.
...
And the colors of red roses.
I love the feeling of happiness.
That not always decomposes.
A memory I had long ago.
That to this day I don't feel foul.
I love the taste of sweet cheesecake.
A cup of juice and a breakfast pancake.
I love the way the wind blows.
The way the leaves rustle.
And the night sky shows.
Maybe his laughter or smile.
That you can listen for a while.
I love the way my pen feels in my hand when I write my poems.
Or with the feather of a hen.
...
#motivational
#uplifting
#ValentinesDay
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 10:53am
13th Feb 2025 10:53am
Childhood Tales
Do you remember the stories we were told as kids?
About evil monsters and witches.
Vile characters with wounds and stitches.
When we all sat near the fire.
And we listened to our parents tell us the stories.
Like the story of an evil witch.
That used to be a normal human like all of us,
The story of an evil monster.
Who wasn't actually always one.
It used to be a pure creature,driven to do evil by pain.
By trauma or a painful stain.
The way people treated him for it.
And the names they would give it.
And...
About evil monsters and witches.
Vile characters with wounds and stitches.
When we all sat near the fire.
And we listened to our parents tell us the stories.
Like the story of an evil witch.
That used to be a normal human like all of us,
The story of an evil monster.
Who wasn't actually always one.
It used to be a pure creature,driven to do evil by pain.
By trauma or a painful stain.
The way people treated him for it.
And the names they would give it.
And...
#hope
#motivational
#philosophical #uplifting
#philosophical #uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 11:11am
10th Feb 2025 11:11am
Once Upon A Dream
I had a dream the other day.
It was about a cat from a dimension far away.
The cat was magical and true.
It had purple fur,too.
The cat had nine eyes.
With yellow,rich color.
It floats,not flies.
And her fur shines.
The name of the breed was certainly unique.
""Purple ,arabic cat"".
The breed was certainly magical.
And something from a story-like.
The cat appeared in front of me with a friendly face.
And purred,rubbing its face onto my legs.
Maybe the cat was a magical being. ...
It was about a cat from a dimension far away.
The cat was magical and true.
It had purple fur,too.
The cat had nine eyes.
With yellow,rich color.
It floats,not flies.
And her fur shines.
The name of the breed was certainly unique.
""Purple ,arabic cat"".
The breed was certainly magical.
And something from a story-like.
The cat appeared in front of me with a friendly face.
And purred,rubbing its face onto my legs.
Maybe the cat was a magical being. ...
#dreams
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 11:46am
8th Feb 2025 11:46am
Take that one chance and make it a great one
At a young age you were told "You have the whole world ahead of you to do what you like"
What do you do...Nothing. Most settle on what comes to them easily. Never striving for much more then the basics. It don't matter to you at the time. You have youth, energy, your having unprotected sex and hanging out with friends all the time. Life seems quite good, until you have to grow up.
At middle age you now think "I've should have done this to avoid that or to go this route instead of that route" You realize changes can be made but you become to content and set...
What do you do...Nothing. Most settle on what comes to them easily. Never striving for much more then the basics. It don't matter to you at the time. You have youth, energy, your having unprotected sex and hanging out with friends all the time. Life seems quite good, until you have to grow up.
At middle age you now think "I've should have done this to avoid that or to go this route instead of that route" You realize changes can be made but you become to content and set...
#aging
#LifeStruggles
#motivational
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 9:29pm
7th Feb 2025 9:29pm
All the miles everyday
It's so good to hear you sounding so good and happy, man that's awesome!!
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You gotta pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You gotta pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
#frustration
#LifeStruggles
#motivational
#PersonalGrowth
#philosophical
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Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 6:50pm
7th Feb 2025 6:50pm
Some are watching
INSIDE ROARE
Some are watching
You don't know ... shh
Who watches your steps,
You don't know ... shh
Who counts the number of smiles.
You don't know ... shh
Who counts your tears.
You don't know who shares your house.
Who looks into your windows,
Who suits a black coat.
Who has tears in their eyes,
....it's probably me.
Who looks into your windows,
....it's probably me.
You don't know ... shh
Who wakes up with you.
You don't know ... shh
Who goes to bed with you.
You don't know ......
Some are watching
You don't know ... shh
Who watches your steps,
You don't know ... shh
Who counts the number of smiles.
You don't know ... shh
Who counts your tears.
You don't know who shares your house.
Who looks into your windows,
Who suits a black coat.
Who has tears in their eyes,
....it's probably me.
Who looks into your windows,
....it's probably me.
You don't know ... shh
Who wakes up with you.
You don't know ... shh
Who goes to bed with you.
You don't know ......
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:49am
7th Feb 2025 10:49am
Treasure Within
I think that everyone is a treasure.
Everyone is unique.
And when everybody is different,life is never bleak.
I see people as item filled treasure chests.
Quite literally,you could say.
Everyone's souls look a different way.
Some chests are full of rats.
And moldy cheese and fruit.
Some seem like they are filled with mold.
But are filled with the rarest treasures you've seen.
The ones who say they are filled with mold.
Can be the most different people you've seen.
I think that anyone could be a treasure. ...
Everyone is unique.
And when everybody is different,life is never bleak.
I see people as item filled treasure chests.
Quite literally,you could say.
Everyone's souls look a different way.
Some chests are full of rats.
And moldy cheese and fruit.
Some seem like they are filled with mold.
But are filled with the rarest treasures you've seen.
The ones who say they are filled with mold.
Can be the most different people you've seen.
I think that anyone could be a treasure. ...
#hope
#motivational
#philosophical
#prose
#uplifting
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