Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#motivational
motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Honeybeevee
Poem Published
Today 5:43am
Today 5:43am
Growing Pains
To grow, is to change.
To love, is when you let go.
To live, you do both.
To love, is when you let go.
To live, you do both.
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #strength
#motivational #strength
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Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
Today 4:10am
Today 4:10am
Stars Delight
If the stars are too far..
Then reach for the fireflies in the night...
And one day soon with the stars you'll take flight...
For now from below we'll admire their light...
Then reach for the fireflies in the night...
And one day soon with the stars you'll take flight...
For now from below we'll admire their light...
#emotions
#happiness
#love #motivational
#love #motivational
37 reads
2 Comments
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:33pm
Yesterday 7:33pm
CLEAN
INSIDE ROARE
CLEAN
Who was allowed to kiss the mist from your lips.
who was allowed to touch your hair
Who was allowed to say beautiful things to your face
warm your palm in mine.
Say who.
Who was allowed to caress your neck
telling you beautiful nonsense.
Who made up a fairy tale for you
about clean wells where only we can.
Say who.
Pure as water, sweet as sugar,
tender as a cloud, salty as the sea.
White as the morning and the rising sun.
That's how you are.
Who was allowed to touch your...
CLEAN
Who was allowed to kiss the mist from your lips.
who was allowed to touch your hair
Who was allowed to say beautiful things to your face
warm your palm in mine.
Say who.
Who was allowed to caress your neck
telling you beautiful nonsense.
Who made up a fairy tale for you
about clean wells where only we can.
Say who.
Pure as water, sweet as sugar,
tender as a cloud, salty as the sea.
White as the morning and the rising sun.
That's how you are.
Who was allowed to touch your...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 10:59am
21st Apr 2024 10:59am
Engravings
I saw you showing up in your rainbow clothes.
I saw,that the time we met.
Your eyes looked black and white,despite your clothes and smile.
They say eyes are the windows of a soul.
But if I am able to read them,am I a ghoul?
We spent a lot of time together.
And I couldn't help,but notice something lurking in the shadows.
I asked,are you okay?
But you did not reply.
But trust me,when I say.
Undress and show me your layers,emotions.
Your wounds and mental scars.
I'll heal your soul,with my hand upon your chest. ...
I saw,that the time we met.
Your eyes looked black and white,despite your clothes and smile.
They say eyes are the windows of a soul.
But if I am able to read them,am I a ghoul?
We spent a lot of time together.
And I couldn't help,but notice something lurking in the shadows.
I asked,are you okay?
But you did not reply.
But trust me,when I say.
Undress and show me your layers,emotions.
Your wounds and mental scars.
I'll heal your soul,with my hand upon your chest. ...
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
29 reads
1 Comment
Honeybeevee
Poem Published
20th Apr 2024 3:56am
20th Apr 2024 3:56am
Spring Brings Change
As change comes, so does growth; both products of the never ceasing passage of time.
#motivational
#TimeHeals
46 reads
1 Comment
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 10:06pm
19th Apr 2024 10:06pm
FIRST
INSIDE ROARE
FIRST
Pa - is the first, like snowdrops in spring
v - is like the second, like an eternal search.
lazy - like lazy, not lazy when she brings me coffee in the morning.
Her smile the sun wakes up
The smell of her skin drives me crazy.
In - her eyes I look in vain for what I lost,
laziness - we wash the dust from our eyes, Paolina.
Your eyes and your beautiful mouth that is silent.
i would like to kiss Forever.
Paolinaaaaaaa, the name resonates to the core.
Paolinaaaaaaa, it's no use sobbing, she's not...
FIRST
Pa - is the first, like snowdrops in spring
v - is like the second, like an eternal search.
lazy - like lazy, not lazy when she brings me coffee in the morning.
Her smile the sun wakes up
The smell of her skin drives me crazy.
In - her eyes I look in vain for what I lost,
laziness - we wash the dust from our eyes, Paolina.
Your eyes and your beautiful mouth that is silent.
i would like to kiss Forever.
Paolinaaaaaaa, the name resonates to the core.
Paolinaaaaaaa, it's no use sobbing, she's not...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
45 reads
1 Comment
poeticdelight
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 6:50pm
19th Apr 2024 6:50pm
A Flower For Every Pöet
I will leisurely walk in the far fields, hail the herds, share the birds vernal songs,
and open my chest to gather all the winds in the high hills, stand on mountain's
top and fill the eye with so many landscapes that break my vision scope..........
Come rise to a fresh flower sending her perfume to every poet.
come rise to a higher scale of feelings, something never thought of before.....
Your days will stay longer than Earth's human calendar, as time will be slower
and your heart beats, shall peacefully and...
and open my chest to gather all the winds in the high hills, stand on mountain's
top and fill the eye with so many landscapes that break my vision scope..........
Come rise to a fresh flower sending her perfume to every poet.
come rise to a higher scale of feelings, something never thought of before.....
Your days will stay longer than Earth's human calendar, as time will be slower
and your heart beats, shall peacefully and...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#kindness
#motivational
50 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 2:49pm
19th Apr 2024 2:49pm
The Vault of Heaven
Constellation Leo westerly leaps
as if pouncing after the setting moon
when all the while humanity sleeps
much to the relief of every racoon
who know full well that midnight will not last
and to make the most of the peace it gives,
like a leftover slice of Yule past;
a dark comfort modicum that still lives
in the cool hours of every night
zephyred wide open for each vista star
beyond the faintest plodding satellite
gamboling the early warning radar...
watching the heavens no where near as much,
as an idealist...just out...
as if pouncing after the setting moon
when all the while humanity sleeps
much to the relief of every racoon
who know full well that midnight will not last
and to make the most of the peace it gives,
like a leftover slice of Yule past;
a dark comfort modicum that still lives
in the cool hours of every night
zephyred wide open for each vista star
beyond the faintest plodding satellite
gamboling the early warning radar...
watching the heavens no where near as much,
as an idealist...just out...
#motivational
46 reads
2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 11:01am
19th Apr 2024 11:01am
My Fictional World
It was just a regular day.
My imagination was ready and astray.
I then grabbed my pen.
I filled it with magic and ink.
I took some paper and began to think.
I wrote down a happy,ever after.
With the future I am after.
The romances I had made popped out of the paper.
And I didn't have to worry about later.
I wrote down a beautiful nymph.
And she began to sing her song to me.
I wrote down a happy future ,too.
In the back of the car,with the man of my dreams.
And soon,it came true.
With magic,I made it...
My imagination was ready and astray.
I then grabbed my pen.
I filled it with magic and ink.
I took some paper and began to think.
I wrote down a happy,ever after.
With the future I am after.
The romances I had made popped out of the paper.
And I didn't have to worry about later.
I wrote down a beautiful nymph.
And she began to sing her song to me.
I wrote down a happy future ,too.
In the back of the car,with the man of my dreams.
And soon,it came true.
With magic,I made it...
#fiction
#motivational
#uplifting
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Inside_Roare
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 10:27pm
17th Apr 2024 10:27pm
HARP
INSIDE ROARE
HARP
From the little toe to the ears to kiss the whole
I would like one day.
Your tender fingers in my mouth,
kissing your eyelids and saying how much I should
Your body vibrates like a harp with millions of strings.
I would like to play it and sing with the orchestra.
Who tuned your instrument, who tuned your body
to keep wanting, keep shaking.
Talk and keep offering me a new tone.
From the smell of the palms, a new part and from the lids of the eyes new notes sound,
from the inside of the bosom...
HARP
From the little toe to the ears to kiss the whole
I would like one day.
Your tender fingers in my mouth,
kissing your eyelids and saying how much I should
Your body vibrates like a harp with millions of strings.
I would like to play it and sing with the orchestra.
Who tuned your instrument, who tuned your body
to keep wanting, keep shaking.
Talk and keep offering me a new tone.
From the smell of the palms, a new part and from the lids of the eyes new notes sound,
from the inside of the bosom...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
102 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 10:01pm
17th Apr 2024 10:01pm
Stop feeding off the negative
Once a week I do a complete shave of my face
I look forward to the warm water, shaving cream and Gillette Razor taking every whisker completely off
As I looked at my face today, the only hair that was left was above my lip
I don’t call this a mustache because I’m not trying to grow one of those
As I stared at myself and looked at the hair above my lip
I said to myself,
what if I donned a toothbrush mustache?
For those of you that don’t know what a toothbrush mustache is,
look at the visual I attached to this story
Not a real attractive...
I look forward to the warm water, shaving cream and Gillette Razor taking every whisker completely off
As I looked at my face today, the only hair that was left was above my lip
I don’t call this a mustache because I’m not trying to grow one of those
As I stared at myself and looked at the hair above my lip
I said to myself,
what if I donned a toothbrush mustache?
For those of you that don’t know what a toothbrush mustache is,
look at the visual I attached to this story
Not a real attractive...
#hate
#kindness
#motivational
#respect
#tolerance
70 reads
10 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 8:41pm
17th Apr 2024 8:41pm
Arbitrary Regrets!
By Stanley Collymore
It's quite ridiculous, futile and
likewise counterproductive
to basically spend one's
time simply regretting something which
didn't happen; more than likely, actually
never would have realistically occurred
and in the basically, very unlikely event
that it did happen, would actually have
in all probability been, unquestionably,
a consummate disaster; and, crucially
whose actual appeal to you long after
this non-achievable event, is naturally
your quite fanciful or even delusional ...
It's quite ridiculous, futile and
likewise counterproductive
to basically spend one's
time simply regretting something which
didn't happen; more than likely, actually
never would have realistically occurred
and in the basically, very unlikely event
that it did happen, would actually have
in all probability been, unquestionably,
a consummate disaster; and, crucially
whose actual appeal to you long after
this non-achievable event, is naturally
your quite fanciful or even delusional ...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
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