Motivational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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motivational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:58am
Yesterday 4:58am
Laugh Think Cry
Laugh think and cry every day
You don’t get to decide where it ends
But your life spirit is incandescent
No one can tell you you have 30 seconds
You laugh and curse at him in Italian
As you work the crowd with your words and wit
You don’t get to decide where it ends
But your life spirit is incandescent
No one can tell you you have 30 seconds
You laugh and curse at him in Italian
As you work the crowd with your words and wit
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#motivational
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2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 1:27pm
11th Oct 2024 1:27pm
In Th Wake Of Summer
The sky is blue, blue indigo, largely swept with a cotton brush of cloud,
as the wind gently comes into the scene, has given the canvas a spiritual feel,
Heaven is present, past and future,
This very time is reminiscent of some old Autumn, with a sun like lemon,
that pours down, tasting of sour venom, and leaves a scar deep into the bone,
This is Autumn, " that Fall" to its deepest bottom, and fathoms the soul of that man,
that child now adult, in the clasp of his boyhood memories.
The time is quite about a mile from the...
as the wind gently comes into the scene, has given the canvas a spiritual feel,
Heaven is present, past and future,
This very time is reminiscent of some old Autumn, with a sun like lemon,
that pours down, tasting of sour venom, and leaves a scar deep into the bone,
This is Autumn, " that Fall" to its deepest bottom, and fathoms the soul of that man,
that child now adult, in the clasp of his boyhood memories.
The time is quite about a mile from the...
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
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1 Comment
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 00:00am
11th Oct 2024 00:00am
Angels
(Fia Naturie/Billy Snagg)
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
#love
#motivational
#relationships
#respect
#sonnet
81 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 11:32am
10th Oct 2024 11:32am
Make a change
If the time doesn't arrive when I'm alone,
and it seems I don't have the one to call my own
Don't feel that you should journey, to change my side around,
when it is that I'm higher than I'm down
If the sky trips through the dawn my way of black,
and it seems that I have no way of turning back
The way that I am facing is not going unbound,
when it is that I'm higher than I'm down
I'm no friend to a place of what I am,
when people say that I am not just what I can
They just don't understand me, I am the way I am found, ...
and it seems I don't have the one to call my own
Don't feel that you should journey, to change my side around,
when it is that I'm higher than I'm down
If the sky trips through the dawn my way of black,
and it seems that I have no way of turning back
The way that I am facing is not going unbound,
when it is that I'm higher than I'm down
I'm no friend to a place of what I am,
when people say that I am not just what I can
They just don't understand me, I am the way I am found, ...
#happiness
#identity
#lyrics
#motivational
#SelfReflection
43 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 5:40am
10th Oct 2024 5:40am
Sell the Positive
Sell the positive
Discard the negative
Positivity living in all of us
Can’t think negative
It just defeats my soul
So I sell positive in every breath I take
Positivity that’s what sustains
Pose a question just to me
If you live positive and not negative
Flowers bloom in your situation
Not every day is a Daisy
Some days all I have is weeds
Positive in motion you can’t stop it
If you dip into positive shed negative notions
Think about what we are grateful for
Family friends and...
Discard the negative
Positivity living in all of us
Can’t think negative
It just defeats my soul
So I sell positive in every breath I take
Positivity that’s what sustains
Pose a question just to me
If you live positive and not negative
Flowers bloom in your situation
Not every day is a Daisy
Some days all I have is weeds
Positive in motion you can’t stop it
If you dip into positive shed negative notions
Think about what we are grateful for
Family friends and...
#gratitude
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:56am
9th Oct 2024 1:56am
Benjamin do you still remember me?
Benjamin
Do you still remember me?
Because I remember you
We have our lives to live
Benjamin
We can't dream all the time
Do you agree with me
Benjamin?
Life is tough
And sometimes we have to make some decisions for ourselves
Benjamin
Do you dream at night in your sleep
Benjamin?
Can you see me in your dreams
Benjamin?
Because I am talking to you in your dreams each night
Also in your dreams there are butterflies that are flying inside of your Heart
And I think that it is amazing
Benjamin
I...
Do you still remember me?
Because I remember you
We have our lives to live
Benjamin
We can't dream all the time
Do you agree with me
Benjamin?
Life is tough
And sometimes we have to make some decisions for ourselves
Benjamin
Do you dream at night in your sleep
Benjamin?
Can you see me in your dreams
Benjamin?
Because I am talking to you in your dreams each night
Also in your dreams there are butterflies that are flying inside of your Heart
And I think that it is amazing
Benjamin
I...
#kindness
#love
#motivational
#redemption
#respect
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2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 12:17pm
8th Oct 2024 12:17pm
I Can Do This
It is Dangerous
To have Faith
In yourself
Without
A little Commonsense
To Understand
The abilities
You have now
Need to be
Upgraded
To the Abilities
You need to have
To have Faith
You can do
What your thinking
Or one will
Crash and burn
Into the scrub lands
Of twisted Bitterness
Of what ifs
Poor me denials
To have Faith
In yourself
Without
A little Commonsense
To Understand
The abilities
You have now
Need to be
Upgraded
To the Abilities
You need to have
To have Faith
You can do
What your thinking
Or one will
Crash and burn
Into the scrub lands
Of twisted Bitterness
Of what ifs
Poor me denials
#determination
#LifeGoals
#motivational
#risk
#wisdom
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 11:21am
8th Oct 2024 11:21am
You're the one
Times were slow,
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Magical wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Magical wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through the...
#happiness
#love
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
74 reads
6 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 1:07pm
7th Oct 2024 1:07pm
Shouldn't the rent now being paid by Britain to Mauritius not have gone to the Chagossians?
By Stanley Collymore
The Chagossians were entirely
brutally and even distinctly
rather savagely, with all
their animals and domestic stock actually
obviously extensively and systematically
slaughtered in their presence while they
themselves were distinctive, specifically
and discernibly, collectively thoroughly
expelled, and also obviously invariably
at gunpoint rather wholesale removed
both from their homes, and homeland
and basically dumped, unconcernedly
callously and significantly uncaringly, ...
The Chagossians were entirely
brutally and even distinctly
rather savagely, with all
their animals and domestic stock actually
obviously extensively and systematically
slaughtered in their presence while they
themselves were distinctive, specifically
and discernibly, collectively thoroughly
expelled, and also obviously invariably
at gunpoint rather wholesale removed
both from their homes, and homeland
and basically dumped, unconcernedly
callously and significantly uncaringly, ...
#admiration
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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Academic
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 10:17pm
6th Oct 2024 10:17pm
Gary Lineker a genuine Brit and quite discernibly also, a man of high stature!
By Stanley Collymore
So there are some of you, effectively
actually intellectually challenged,
brainwashed and invariably
braindead; also, as well, similarly and rather
thoroughly gullible and toxically verminous
scum; readily and simply easily led by your
noses, and with others wholly in charge of
that course of action, as you quite eagerly
at their behest quite actively, jump on this
evidently quite orchestrated, anti-BBC but
specifically rather in this case, really Gary
Lineker's bandwagon, very vilely churning ...
So there are some of you, effectively
actually intellectually challenged,
brainwashed and invariably
braindead; also, as well, similarly and rather
thoroughly gullible and toxically verminous
scum; readily and simply easily led by your
noses, and with others wholly in charge of
that course of action, as you quite eagerly
at their behest quite actively, jump on this
evidently quite orchestrated, anti-BBC but
specifically rather in this case, really Gary
Lineker's bandwagon, very vilely churning ...
#courage
#forgiveness
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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Wordsmith
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 7:43pm
6th Oct 2024 7:43pm
Teacher
In halls where wisdom softly swells,
The teachers toil through endless bells.
Their voices craft the future’s song,
Yet bear a burden far too long.
With steady hands; they mold the mind,
But justice still; remains unkind.
They ask for fair; yet walk alone,
Their struggles silent; rarely shown.
For every soul they guide and teach,
Their own ambitions fade from reach.
But in their hearts; a fire stays bright,
Through darkest hours; they guard the light.
They stand as towers; tall and strong, ...
The teachers toil through endless bells.
Their voices craft the future’s song,
Yet bear a burden far too long.
With steady hands; they mold the mind,
But justice still; remains unkind.
They ask for fair; yet walk alone,
Their struggles silent; rarely shown.
For every soul they guide and teach,
Their own ambitions fade from reach.
But in their hearts; a fire stays bright,
Through darkest hours; they guard the light.
They stand as towers; tall and strong, ...
#gratitude
#heartbroken
#hope
#motivational
#rejection
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0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 1:43am
6th Oct 2024 1:43am
Please Let Me Be Your Virus
Ohh lovely I have decided that I wanted to be your virus
I'm already attached to you like your skin is attached to every muscle and sinew
I'm going to penetrate and get deep into the core of that grey matter of yours
Just let me pop the coating on that cell right there and let me infiltrate you dear
ohh I understand you wanna keep your gene’s intact
but we can't have that can we?
No we cannot have that.
Replication is the core of creation, and I want to replicate in you
Once it's done, we can...
I'm already attached to you like your skin is attached to every muscle and sinew
I'm going to penetrate and get deep into the core of that grey matter of yours
Just let me pop the coating on that cell right there and let me infiltrate you dear
ohh I understand you wanna keep your gene’s intact
but we can't have that can we?
No we cannot have that.
Replication is the core of creation, and I want to replicate in you
Once it's done, we can...
#emotions
#motivational
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15 Comments
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