Inspirational by Top Critiquers Poems
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inspirational by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 1:04pm
22nd Oct 2024 1:04pm
Alchemic Nights
By bright meridian quadrature
she bids adieu to lingering billows
as if extinguishing cigarillos
for the burning crime of being impure
in the purity majesterium
where Mother Nature, from her highest perch,
over rules every Earthly church
with the flaxen moonbeam collyrium
in witch hour tincture forevermore
treating a soul's retinal fatigue
by astronomical beauty blitzkrieg
in actinic purification pour...
washing away the troubles of the day
with ataraxia... the lunar way!
she bids adieu to lingering billows
as if extinguishing cigarillos
for the burning crime of being impure
in the purity majesterium
where Mother Nature, from her highest perch,
over rules every Earthly church
with the flaxen moonbeam collyrium
in witch hour tincture forevermore
treating a soul's retinal fatigue
by astronomical beauty blitzkrieg
in actinic purification pour...
washing away the troubles of the day
with ataraxia... the lunar way!
#inspirational
150 reads
6 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 8:40pm
20th Dec 2024 8:40pm
~ethereal :: shadoe
viz : shadoe
#admiration
#inspirational
#love
#spiritual
#WritingPoetry
121 reads
5 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 3:00pm
18th Apr 2024 3:00pm
Broken Girl
at first it looks like
i'm a confident and
independent lady
while deep inside
there is this lonely
little girl who has
never felt loved
at times all that
she wants is for
someone to take
her hand, guide
her and lead her
through the battle
fields called life
show her the way
protect her tell her
she'll be okay, that
she's safe, that she
is and will always be
perfect exactly as she is
i'm a confident and
independent lady
while deep inside
there is this lonely
little girl who has
never felt loved
at times all that
she wants is for
someone to take
her hand, guide
her and lead her
through the battle
fields called life
show her the way
protect her tell her
she'll be okay, that
she's safe, that she
is and will always be
perfect exactly as she is
#inspirational
#women
373 reads
24 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
2nd Jun 2024 1:40pm
2nd Jun 2024 1:40pm
I'm in Love with Myself
Ultimate self poem
I've aged pretty well
I like my lips
Shadow beard
Xo
To
Me
💋
I've aged pretty well
I like my lips
Shadow beard
Xo
To
Me
💋
#inspirational
#love
#myself
#SelfWorth
#sexy
398 reads
48 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 2:09pm
30th Oct 2024 2:09pm
Entropy is a Planet in the Galaxy of Hypnosis
In the quiet embrace of countless worlds
where peace is the gentle heartbeat of existence
and love is the light that guides every soul,
there is a song of life, pure and unbroken.
There, hearts beat in harmonious rhythms,
each pulse a testament to boundless joy
where the essence of being is celebrated
and the beauty of existence is a given.
No shadows of regret linger in these realms,
where every day is a canvas of possibility,
painted with the colors of compassion and hope
and the air is filled with the whispers of...
where peace is the gentle heartbeat of existence
and love is the light that guides every soul,
there is a song of life, pure and unbroken.
There, hearts beat in harmonious rhythms,
each pulse a testament to boundless joy
where the essence of being is celebrated
and the beauty of existence is a given.
No shadows of regret linger in these realms,
where every day is a canvas of possibility,
painted with the colors of compassion and hope
and the air is filled with the whispers of...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
98 reads
7 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2024 5:42pm
22nd Jan 2024 5:42pm
sacrificial rebirth
I stood at her feet
awe etched in every inch of me
drawn to her indefinable nature
call it mystical...
...magical
...illusion
I knew then
I would slit my wrists
bleed my pain into her safekeeping
and she would not fail me
tearing strips of my weary flesh
from the ruins of my body
until I glistened before her
naked & new-born raw
a tattered remnant of my being
desperately willing
as her tendrils touched me
wrapping me in her healing
I gave up my solidity
learning from the grace of her ancient...
awe etched in every inch of me
drawn to her indefinable nature
call it mystical...
...magical
...illusion
I knew then
I would slit my wrists
bleed my pain into her safekeeping
and she would not fail me
tearing strips of my weary flesh
from the ruins of my body
until I glistened before her
naked & new-born raw
a tattered remnant of my being
desperately willing
as her tendrils touched me
wrapping me in her healing
I gave up my solidity
learning from the grace of her ancient...
#strength
#courage
#inspirational
#nature
#confessional
269 reads
10 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 9:00am
15th Dec 2024 9:00am
Pay Per(Version)
Fish love toothy smiles.
Yet, fear the crocodiles.
They swim in gut loads full of bile.
One by one; single file.
The guys love porn on site.
The girls love wine and late nights.
We all love the spotlights.
We're all stars shining bright.
We love our inner child.
Imaginary friends make us wild.
Not too crazy; only mild.
Leaves us thirsty to be beguiled.
Perversion isn't right.
It's not just sex that unites.
Sometimes it's the darkest night.
A surrender to the fight.
Surrounded by the...
Yet, fear the crocodiles.
They swim in gut loads full of bile.
One by one; single file.
The guys love porn on site.
The girls love wine and late nights.
We all love the spotlights.
We're all stars shining bright.
We love our inner child.
Imaginary friends make us wild.
Not too crazy; only mild.
Leaves us thirsty to be beguiled.
Perversion isn't right.
It's not just sex that unites.
Sometimes it's the darkest night.
A surrender to the fight.
Surrounded by the...
#inspirational
#meditation
#TruthOfLife
99 reads
14 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
30th Apr 2024 3:30am
30th Apr 2024 3:30am
Finding Purpose
It’s what matters most
What motivates us and pushes us to go forward
As we go about our daily lives
Listening to that inner voice
Calling to us…
It’s the internal compass that drives us
From ordinary every day decisions
To those significant and important milestones
Tipping points and shifting paradigms
Where building a more secure foundation
Becomes the priority
It’s the sense of duty laid out before us
Committed and steadfast
So that the intrinsic rewards gives us the fuel
To keep sailing through the hardships...
What motivates us and pushes us to go forward
As we go about our daily lives
Listening to that inner voice
Calling to us…
It’s the internal compass that drives us
From ordinary every day decisions
To those significant and important milestones
Tipping points and shifting paradigms
Where building a more secure foundation
Becomes the priority
It’s the sense of duty laid out before us
Committed and steadfast
So that the intrinsic rewards gives us the fuel
To keep sailing through the hardships...
#determination
#inspirational
#LifeGoals
#NaPoWriMo2024
#PersonalGrowth
228 reads
2 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
14th Apr 2023 7:27pm
14th Apr 2023 7:27pm
Drawn To You...
I feel drawn to you,
Totally drawn by your wild and crazy ways -
Like a painter is to canvas,
Like windows are to curtains,
And a butterfly is to cabbage...
Like boxers are to punching,
A harmer is to cutting,
Hot dogs are to mustard,
And a dog who has his bone.
...Lost souls finding their way home
I need you like a river needs to flow,
A drug addict can't say no -
Like all the best-laid plans,
Like, I'd like to hold your hand.
Yes, I'm totally struck by your 'WOW' factor!
My heart sinks like a hot...
Totally drawn by your wild and crazy ways -
Like a painter is to canvas,
Like windows are to curtains,
And a butterfly is to cabbage...
Like boxers are to punching,
A harmer is to cutting,
Hot dogs are to mustard,
And a dog who has his bone.
...Lost souls finding their way home
I need you like a river needs to flow,
A drug addict can't say no -
Like all the best-laid plans,
Like, I'd like to hold your hand.
Yes, I'm totally struck by your 'WOW' factor!
My heart sinks like a hot...
#inspirational
1342 reads
60 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
8th Mar 2023 9:00pm
8th Mar 2023 9:00pm
The Magic of a Woman...
The magic of lines,
Cascade in the rays of the sun
Beckons to be touched by the hand,
Flowing, alive.
Slim, graceful wrists,
Temptation that promises happiness.
Nature is a delicately feeling artist,
And the assessment of passers-by is not needed.
The golden ratio is the flow of lines...
Where necessary - wide, where necessary - narrow,
Where necessary - a hollow, where necessary - tears the blouse.
Part of the universal puzzle - Woman,
It seems so difficult to solve at times, so simple at others..
It's for a man,
What am I...
Cascade in the rays of the sun
Beckons to be touched by the hand,
Flowing, alive.
Slim, graceful wrists,
Temptation that promises happiness.
Nature is a delicately feeling artist,
And the assessment of passers-by is not needed.
The golden ratio is the flow of lines...
Where necessary - wide, where necessary - narrow,
Where necessary - a hollow, where necessary - tears the blouse.
Part of the universal puzzle - Woman,
It seems so difficult to solve at times, so simple at others..
It's for a man,
What am I...
#love
#women
#inspirational
#holiday
#passion
1069 reads
50 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 1:19am
6th Sep 2024 1:19am
Birthday Suit
I tried to iron it
with my eyes, that morning
before I picked you up at the airport.
I stood in front of the mirror
and judged what you would see.
That is, perhaps, if our subconscious selves
and our secretly screaming, run away selves
could agree that the scrutiny
that we can't ever wash off,
would be worth the risk or not
of should've stayed clothed.
All of my scars are guarded now
by dragon tattoos.
They've almost always slept through pain
because they were born in it.
And sometimes that fire ...
with my eyes, that morning
before I picked you up at the airport.
I stood in front of the mirror
and judged what you would see.
That is, perhaps, if our subconscious selves
and our secretly screaming, run away selves
could agree that the scrutiny
that we can't ever wash off,
would be worth the risk or not
of should've stayed clothed.
All of my scars are guarded now
by dragon tattoos.
They've almost always slept through pain
because they were born in it.
And sometimes that fire ...
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
333 reads
adagio
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 2:13am
7th Feb 2025 2:13am
Flow Slow
In nature's infatuation
as clouds flow slow
winsome the hours
as gladsome soft winds blow
melodies euphoric
whispering lightsome oboes
tending to the peace
of silence below
as clouds flow slow
winsome the hours
as gladsome soft winds blow
melodies euphoric
whispering lightsome oboes
tending to the peace
of silence below
#inspirational
#nature
#philosophical
92 reads
0 Comments
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