Inspirational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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inspirational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:27pm
Yesterday 10:27pm
HARP
INSIDE ROARE
HARP
From the little toe to the ears to kiss the whole
I would like one day.
Your tender fingers in my mouth,
kissing your eyelids and saying how much I should
Your body vibrates like a harp with millions of strings.
I would like to play it and sing with the orchestra.
Who tuned your instrument, who tuned your body
to keep wanting, keep shaking.
Talk and keep offering me a new tone.
From the smell of the palms, a new part and from the lids of the eyes new notes sound,
from the inside of the bosom...
HARP
From the little toe to the ears to kiss the whole
I would like one day.
Your tender fingers in my mouth,
kissing your eyelids and saying how much I should
Your body vibrates like a harp with millions of strings.
I would like to play it and sing with the orchestra.
Who tuned your instrument, who tuned your body
to keep wanting, keep shaking.
Talk and keep offering me a new tone.
From the smell of the palms, a new part and from the lids of the eyes new notes sound,
from the inside of the bosom...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
76 reads
1 Comment
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:08pm
Yesterday 9:08pm
The Job Interview
She sat in her chair fidgeting. She sized up the room and saw the men looking poised and confident. She wondered why she was there. She had done her research and knew that there had never been a woman hired for the position she was there to interview for. Thoughts of doubt flooded her mind. It was pointless. Its not that she wasn't qualified. Qualification was one thing that she wasn't lacking. Years of putting in her dues had paid off in that regard. This was a man's world. Although she had found her place, it was a place that those men were comfortable with. This was different. She was...
#courage
#determination
#inspirational #strength
#inspirational #strength
43 reads
3 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:41pm
Yesterday 8:41pm
Arbitrary Regrets!
By Stanley Collymore
It's quite ridiculous, futile and
likewise counterproductive
to basically spend one's
time simply regretting something which
didn't happen; more than likely, actually
never would have realistically occurred
and in the basically, very unlikely event
that it did happen, would actually have
in all probability been, unquestionably,
a consummate disaster; and, crucially
whose actual appeal to you long after
this non-achievable event, is naturally
your quite fanciful or even delusional ...
It's quite ridiculous, futile and
likewise counterproductive
to basically spend one's
time simply regretting something which
didn't happen; more than likely, actually
never would have realistically occurred
and in the basically, very unlikely event
that it did happen, would actually have
in all probability been, unquestionably,
a consummate disaster; and, crucially
whose actual appeal to you long after
this non-achievable event, is naturally
your quite fanciful or even delusional ...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
26 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:38am
Yesterday 4:38am
If it's Meant to Be
It’s difficult to accept that everything has been predetermined
As if our paths were already chosen and we just fulfill the destiny
And even if midway down the road we change the way it goes
Was the change too already planned just like it was meant to be?
Some are born into poverty but will strive to get out of there
While others with riches and resources decide to be miserable
Some will acquire the drive to change and better their lives
While others leave it to chance staying stagnant and pitiful
The law of attraction can be very real ...
As if our paths were already chosen and we just fulfill the destiny
And even if midway down the road we change the way it goes
Was the change too already planned just like it was meant to be?
Some are born into poverty but will strive to get out of there
While others with riches and resources decide to be miserable
Some will acquire the drive to change and better their lives
While others leave it to chance staying stagnant and pitiful
The law of attraction can be very real ...
#identity
#inspirational
#fate
39 reads
4 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 5:55am
16th Apr 2024 5:55am
Zombie Lines
These words fade before the ink dries
When intentions to actions fail to materialize
Fabricating inspiration, reputation embodied in an empty phrase
All the ammunition without the impact, handicaps of shame
The right words without the follow through, the low highs of shallow praise
Wasted potentials relegated to make a name
Play the role and write the script
Saint facades of the linguist hypocrite
Thriving on the uninspired
The taste for silence is acquired
Every word is noise that is love without meaning
When character...
When intentions to actions fail to materialize
Fabricating inspiration, reputation embodied in an empty phrase
All the ammunition without the impact, handicaps of shame
The right words without the follow through, the low highs of shallow praise
Wasted potentials relegated to make a name
Play the role and write the script
Saint facades of the linguist hypocrite
Thriving on the uninspired
The taste for silence is acquired
Every word is noise that is love without meaning
When character...
#inspirational
#WritersBlock
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
#NaPoWriMo2024
35 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 11:40am
15th Apr 2024 11:40am
Death & Taxes
Is life just about taxes & death?
Were surviving, not living
disrespectful, unforgiving
Let's make a change, life is short
Give and respect, before we all abort
Were surviving, not living
disrespectful, unforgiving
Let's make a change, life is short
Give and respect, before we all abort
#LifeStruggles
#inspirational
#spiritual
#LifeGoals
#respect
51 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 8:36pm
13th Apr 2024 8:36pm
Push Ahead, Don't Pull Back
Looking back towards me
You should see that I moved forth
You can make that change
You should see that I moved forth
You can make that change
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational
#haiku
#SelfDiscovery
38 reads
2 Comments
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 5:28pm
13th Apr 2024 5:28pm
SWEET
SWEET
INSIDE ROARE
I would like to taste your whole body.
To get to places where no one has ever been.
I know you're sweet with a soft caramel taste.
with a cherry in the middle.
I feel you shiver as I taste you
i feel the touch of your hands
I want to taste you all over.
You are a cake with whipped cream to me
and I have to eat it all.
Your blueberry fingers at the end
your cinnamon-scented feet.
Your feet that are vanilla flavored.
You are a living confectionery for me.
I feel you shiver as I...
INSIDE ROARE
I would like to taste your whole body.
To get to places where no one has ever been.
I know you're sweet with a soft caramel taste.
with a cherry in the middle.
I feel you shiver as I taste you
i feel the touch of your hands
I want to taste you all over.
You are a cake with whipped cream to me
and I have to eat it all.
Your blueberry fingers at the end
your cinnamon-scented feet.
Your feet that are vanilla flavored.
You are a living confectionery for me.
I feel you shiver as I...
#love
#motivational
#inspirational
#respect
#emotions
126 reads
4 Comments
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 4:32pm
13th Apr 2024 4:32pm
JUST A SECOND
INSIDE ROAR
JUST A SECOND
Every second, every breath, the whole world changes.
With every blink of an eye, the world changes colors.
Every time I open my eyes in the morning there is something new.
Every time I come to work it's the same.
There is a mistake somewhere.
The world is changing every second.
Every second you have a different smile on your face.
Every second I crave something else.
I should change something.
Every second, time is somewhere else.
Soon we will each be somewhere else every second.
Every...
JUST A SECOND
Every second, every breath, the whole world changes.
With every blink of an eye, the world changes colors.
Every time I open my eyes in the morning there is something new.
Every time I come to work it's the same.
There is a mistake somewhere.
The world is changing every second.
Every second you have a different smile on your face.
Every second I crave something else.
I should change something.
Every second, time is somewhere else.
Soon we will each be somewhere else every second.
Every...
#love
#motivational
#inspirational
#respect
#emotions
41 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 5:44am
12th Apr 2024 5:44am
Expect the Unexpected
I always expect the unexpected you see
No matter how ridiculous or stupid it may be
Prepare for the worst and hope for the best
Because planning helps me deal with the stress
I usually have a back-up plan in the back of my mind
Covering my bases so that everything is aligned
Because if things go south I will not be surprised
I’ll be able take the punch just like I exercised
And if the shit hits the fan you know I’m the man
I lean on my skills and wits to deal with the slam
I’ve been burned before like hard lessons learned
I...
No matter how ridiculous or stupid it may be
Prepare for the worst and hope for the best
Because planning helps me deal with the stress
I usually have a back-up plan in the back of my mind
Covering my bases so that everything is aligned
Because if things go south I will not be surprised
I’ll be able take the punch just like I exercised
And if the shit hits the fan you know I’m the man
I lean on my skills and wits to deal with the slam
I’ve been burned before like hard lessons learned
I...
#inspirational
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeGoals
43 reads
3 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 2:24am
12th Apr 2024 2:24am
might i from fresh fountain-heads not drink?
a psalm of life for eerie
but what if i choke on my own words?
what if thoughts too bitter for my lips
should hover behind the palate and strangle me?
i'd best let the hush be golden—
an urn for unspoken eloquence.
but what is the hope of strangled birds,
when their wings the shining sword edge clips?
are there any dreams at evening, when misery
my countenance has beholden,
a forum for nubian eminence?
but what if i rise above these great, dark clouds:
might not i pull someone...
but what if i choke on my own words?
what if thoughts too bitter for my lips
should hover behind the palate and strangle me?
i'd best let the hush be golden—
an urn for unspoken eloquence.
but what is the hope of strangled birds,
when their wings the shining sword edge clips?
are there any dreams at evening, when misery
my countenance has beholden,
a forum for nubian eminence?
but what if i rise above these great, dark clouds:
might not i pull someone...
#LifeStruggles
#motivational
#inspirational
#LifeChangingMoment
#NaPoWriMo2024
48 reads
4 Comments
Inside_Roare
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 9:25pm
11th Apr 2024 9:25pm
Fifty Lamps
Fifty Lamps
ISIDE ROARE
I would like to light my fifty lamps.
For your beauty.
I would like to light fifty lamps.
On your gentle hands caressing me.
And seduces, teases.
I'd like to light up fifty lamps for everyone to see
to hate
To shine and see into your soul to hate.
I would like to light fifty lamps,
so I don't have to keep telling you what to do.
Fifty or a thousand lamps are still better than none,
I know your head is light, it's ... slightly on the side,
but our demands, here...
ISIDE ROARE
I would like to light my fifty lamps.
For your beauty.
I would like to light fifty lamps.
On your gentle hands caressing me.
And seduces, teases.
I'd like to light up fifty lamps for everyone to see
to hate
To shine and see into your soul to hate.
I would like to light fifty lamps,
so I don't have to keep telling you what to do.
Fifty or a thousand lamps are still better than none,
I know your head is light, it's ... slightly on the side,
but our demands, here...
#love
#motivational
#inspirational
#respect
#emotions
40 reads
0 Comments
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