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Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
Stop breathing
my god damn oxygen.
Anger simmers in my heart,
like embers..
Clenching my fists tightly,
fucking sick of it all.
No regrets
you've taken her from me.
Defiled her innocence.
A broken man I am.
Any saving grace has forsaken me.
Nothing to contain,
not a thing to control
ME.
Your life grows short,
delivering the fear
living in the moment
without a care for the law.
Blood sprays upon me
as a drive my elbow into your face.
over and over again,
shattering teeth and bone.
Delivering the fear with every strike.
Sick of it all.
Striking out of hatred
for what you have done.
An animal I have become,
living purely on instinct.
Satisfying my murderous rage,
in a desolate back street alley.
A night of drinking you were hoping?
Here, drink your own fucking blood.
Never will I forget
and never will I forgive.
She was helpless
alone.
You were weak
and struck the innocent.
You escape punishment through
a pathetic justice system.
I will suffice
as your judge.
Jury.
And executioner.
You scumbag
Rapist pig.
You will
NEVER
touch her again.
You are scum
and I will end you.
You're struggling?
Struggle some more!
Yeah, that's better.
You beg,
like pigs beg for shit.
Roll around in your tears
on the ground,
right where you belong!
Sick of it all!
Raining down pain,
delivering the fear.
You have nothing left
and I am finally satisfied.
Leaving you to your blood,
stray teeth.
And shattered facial bones.
Leaving you to your pain
I rise.
Standing over you.
Fear,
delivered.
Pain,
returned.
my god damn oxygen.
Anger simmers in my heart,
like embers..
Clenching my fists tightly,
fucking sick of it all.
No regrets
you've taken her from me.
Defiled her innocence.
A broken man I am.
Any saving grace has forsaken me.
Nothing to contain,
not a thing to control
ME.
Your life grows short,
delivering the fear
living in the moment
without a care for the law.
Blood sprays upon me
as a drive my elbow into your face.
over and over again,
shattering teeth and bone.
Delivering the fear with every strike.
Sick of it all.
Striking out of hatred
for what you have done.
An animal I have become,
living purely on instinct.
Satisfying my murderous rage,
in a desolate back street alley.
A night of drinking you were hoping?
Here, drink your own fucking blood.
Never will I forget
and never will I forgive.
She was helpless
alone.
You were weak
and struck the innocent.
You escape punishment through
a pathetic justice system.
I will suffice
as your judge.
Jury.
And executioner.
You scumbag
Rapist pig.
You will
NEVER
touch her again.
You are scum
and I will end you.
You're struggling?
Struggle some more!
Yeah, that's better.
You beg,
like pigs beg for shit.
Roll around in your tears
on the ground,
right where you belong!
Sick of it all!
Raining down pain,
delivering the fear.
You have nothing left
and I am finally satisfied.
Leaving you to your blood,
stray teeth.
And shattered facial bones.
Leaving you to your pain
I rise.
Standing over you.
Fear,
delivered.
Pain,
returned.
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Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
Love it Evan...a simple Fuck Yeah sums up my response to this piece. This was great.
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13th Feb 2013 3:31am
Thanks mate, this is from an experience I had with a close friend of mine, and she was sexually assaulted by the guy receiving the beat down depicted in this poem.
This is as 'true story' as it gets.
This is as 'true story' as it gets.
Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 3:40am
It's filled with pent up anger. And it shows. I love when I can feel the readers emotions in their work
Very good I really enjoyed it xoxox
Very good I really enjoyed it xoxox
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re: Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 3:43am
That's great to hear Gigi, I injected as much of my anger as I could.
Thanks for your comments Gigi, right back at you. xox.
Thanks for your comments Gigi, right back at you. xox.
Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 3:41am
I really like the use of bold, but thought you could have used it in other places but besides that it's generally a head splitting piece. Good work.
Keep writing, young scribe!
Keep writing, young scribe!
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re: Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 3:44am
I use it sparingly, as it is a special tool, for myself at least.
Thanks for your comments Will, always good having you stop by.
Thanks for your comments Will, always good having you stop by.
Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 4:06am
I love this dark, angry, sorrowful and beautiful written piece.
Even though you reigned personal retribution, in the end.....the pain returned! Realistic emotions flowed boldly in this piece...xo
Even though you reigned personal retribution, in the end.....the pain returned! Realistic emotions flowed boldly in this piece...xo
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re: Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 4:18am
Thanks raincourtel. Yeah, it's a ever flowing stream of sorrow as of today.
Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
Anonymous
13th Feb 2013 4:10am
Truly an amazing/awesome write, Evan! Strong words -- strong poem! Keep up the great work! :)
Carlene
Carlene

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re: Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 4:18am
Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 5:43am
You put into words what families of victims only think but dare say out loud. I especially liked the end "fear delivered; pain returned" that's real talk!
pen up!
pen up!
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re: Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
13th Feb 2013 5:46am
Thank you My lady :-) Glad you enjoyed my work! Yeah, I thought I'd use something concise to finish this piece off. And that worked nicely.
Thanks again for your comments! :-)
Thanks again for your comments! :-)
Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
First of all, I'd like to express my condolences at your muse. May you make the next rapist who reads this quiver in their boots and rethink their sad miserable existence.
Ok, now the poetry. Remember when you asked me what your poetry was lacking? Passion. Well ,this poem, I'm very happy to say, personifies passion, emotion, rage, and malevolence.
You are finally SCREAMING your emotions, and I bet it feels really good.
This poem feels like a breath of fresh air after being in a stale room for a month, mixed with a fresh swish of vodka. There is fire cleansing your lungs, and a fire sweeping through your mind.
Great job, Evan. I know you hate Vegan, but you just brought back the best part of him, and I bet it feels like coming home, yet breaking through brick walls all at the same time.
I finally feel like you have started your "Ascension."
Much love,
Caliban
Ok, now the poetry. Remember when you asked me what your poetry was lacking? Passion. Well ,this poem, I'm very happy to say, personifies passion, emotion, rage, and malevolence.
You are finally SCREAMING your emotions, and I bet it feels really good.
This poem feels like a breath of fresh air after being in a stale room for a month, mixed with a fresh swish of vodka. There is fire cleansing your lungs, and a fire sweeping through your mind.
Great job, Evan. I know you hate Vegan, but you just brought back the best part of him, and I bet it feels like coming home, yet breaking through brick walls all at the same time.
I finally feel like you have started your "Ascension."
Much love,
Caliban
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re: Re: Deliver the Fear (Sick Of It All)
Thank you for your gracious comments and for staying the course with me in my poetic journey, bloody oath it feels great! And yeah, that part of me will always exist. Aha as for the muse, yeah. I despise Rapists.
Thank you once again, Caliban.
Much love straight back at you. :-)
Thank you once again, Caliban.
Much love straight back at you. :-)
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