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My world
Wake up world the bird twitters
Wake up world the squirrel yawns
The first sunrays peep
Through languid waving leaves
Blown by gentle cool breeze
It’s a new day, a new day
Chuckles the streams
Fronds of my roofs
Shading the veranda of my house
Fronds of palm trees
Overhanging the balcony
Of my bedroom
Towards the east
My paddy fields yellowing grains
From the cool babbling brooks
I carry water with bamboo cuts
To cook my first meal
Boiled tapioca and yams
To brew coffee beans
Picked and dried yesterday
My morning has started
Afternoon sun hot on my back
My nets are heavy with my catch
Wriggling tilapia and catfish
To cook on slow wood fire
Sprinkling chilli and salt
On roasted fish, fragrant
Eaten with fluffy white rice
Dinner eaten at the balcony
Looking out to the setting sun
Lighting rice balls with meat of boar
Cooked with golden wild honey
Bamboo shoots and wild mushrooms
Rice wine on bamboo cups
I toast the approaching evening
The twilight is here again
Distant sounds of owls commence
A dog bark far away
To my reed mat I go
Lie down and flirt with sleep
Goodnight my world
Tomorrow we meet again!
Wake up world the squirrel yawns
The first sunrays peep
Through languid waving leaves
Blown by gentle cool breeze
It’s a new day, a new day
Chuckles the streams
Fronds of my roofs
Shading the veranda of my house
Fronds of palm trees
Overhanging the balcony
Of my bedroom
Towards the east
My paddy fields yellowing grains
From the cool babbling brooks
I carry water with bamboo cuts
To cook my first meal
Boiled tapioca and yams
To brew coffee beans
Picked and dried yesterday
My morning has started
Afternoon sun hot on my back
My nets are heavy with my catch
Wriggling tilapia and catfish
To cook on slow wood fire
Sprinkling chilli and salt
On roasted fish, fragrant
Eaten with fluffy white rice
Dinner eaten at the balcony
Looking out to the setting sun
Lighting rice balls with meat of boar
Cooked with golden wild honey
Bamboo shoots and wild mushrooms
Rice wine on bamboo cups
I toast the approaching evening
The twilight is here again
Distant sounds of owls commence
A dog bark far away
To my reed mat I go
Lie down and flirt with sleep
Goodnight my world
Tomorrow we meet again!
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22nd Oct 2012 3:47am
Re: My world
22nd Oct 2012 5:28am
As Oregon gets rain, rain, and more rain, this is a nice reminder that seasons do change! But oh this is a tough poem to take on an empty stomach!
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22nd Oct 2012 8:43am
Jazzmanor, thank you for reading: yes, this is my world as is...rain and sun, rice fields and palm-fronds roofs.
Re: My world
What a lovely, splendid poem you wrote here my friend! It was so very beautiful, and was quite a good expression of the simple pleasures of nature's beauty. :D
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22nd Oct 2012 8:44am
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2012 2:09pm
You are on a roll...good luck grace!
strider
strider
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23rd Oct 2012 2:42am
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22nd Oct 2012 2:52pm
Beautiful Grace you truly painted an image with your words. good luck!
Red
Red
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23rd Oct 2012 2:42am
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22nd Oct 2012 3:38pm
Wonderful work. so much mindfulness towards and appreciation for what you have. I can see, hear, smell, and taste everything you describe. a very relaxing poem. thank you for sharing.
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23rd Oct 2012 2:43am
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22nd Oct 2012 10:00pm
The simpler the better. And right now I sure feel better.Reading this daily routine simply expressed in words,like an artist you painted this picture so well. Nice one Grace,thumbs up
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23rd Oct 2012 2:44am
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2013 00:48am
Indeed! This poem is all about the simplest joys that life can offer a person. In this age of information overload and technological mircales, we tend to forget the ways of our ancestors. You honor yours greatly, Grace! Always write with such beauty, honesty, and love.
It is truly inspiring! :D
It is truly inspiring! :D
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26th Jan 2013 4:46pm
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18th Feb 2013 5:04am
I adore this bright side You,
carrying the imagery
of home is perfected Beauty!!!
the only person I know who captures nature the way
my heart sees...
carrying the imagery
of home is perfected Beauty!!!
the only person I know who captures nature the way
my heart sees...
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18th Feb 2013 10:14am
Thank you soul, even with the most sloven of shacks, the right heart and words make it beautiful.
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19th Feb 2013 2:05am
BEAUTY IS THE NATURE AND LIFE!!!
TO LIVE IN IT AND KNOW IT IS AN AWARE AWAKE PERSON OF THE EARTH,PRIDE OF HOME AND ITS PLEASURES ARE THAT WHICH MAKE THE HEART WARM...
TO LIVE IN IT AND KNOW IT IS AN AWARE AWAKE PERSON OF THE EARTH,PRIDE OF HOME AND ITS PLEASURES ARE THAT WHICH MAKE THE HEART WARM...
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