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The Gift of Promises
I unwrapped myself
Full view for you
Wet and slick
I needed you, thick
Then my world eclipsed
As you whispered I love you
Full view for you
Wet and slick
I needed you, thick
Then my world eclipsed
As you whispered I love you
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Damnit. I wanted to keep this dirty…
I guess dreams and wishes permeate everything. Merry Christmas.
Damnit. I wanted to keep this dirty…
I guess dreams and wishes permeate everything. Merry Christmas.
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Re. The Gift of Promises
Yesterday 1:30pm
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Yesterday 1:31pm
Favourite lines for rhyme and the sense of easily imaginable sexual urgency:
Wet and slick
I needed you, thick
Wet and slick
I needed you, thick
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Re. The Gift of Promises
Yesterday 1:49pm
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Yesterday 1:51pm
I think about love all the time.
Getting it
Giving it
But
Love has nothing to do with sex
Let's keep sex dirty
That's pure
BIG LIKE
Getting it
Giving it
But
Love has nothing to do with sex
Let's keep sex dirty
That's pure
BIG LIKE
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Yesterday 2:19pm
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Yesterday 2:25pm
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Yesterday 3:59pm
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Yesterday 4:21pm
Why do dirty & fantasy have to be mutually exclusive? It went where it went & we rode along!
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Yesterday 8:48pm
I don’t want it to be, if just ends up that way,
Where is that elusive Superman anyway?
Where is that elusive Superman anyway?
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Yesterday 5:44pm
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Yesterday 7:09pm
Long and thin goes too far in but short and thick can do the trick.
I really like the first line.
🌲
I really like the first line.
🌲
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Re. The Gift of Promises
Yesterday 7:33pm
This is great holiday fun all wrapped within six lines!
Merry Christmas Mary:)
Merry Christmas Mary:)
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Yesterday 8:49pm