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Affair with your Mind ( Redux )
I want to have an affair with your mind
The secret places that fold into wetness
I want to gaze into your eyes
Your quiet reserve calling me home
On fire with desire
Until my combustion spills forth into ecstasy
The secret places that fold into wetness
I want to gaze into your eyes
Your quiet reserve calling me home
On fire with desire
Until my combustion spills forth into ecstasy
Author's Note
It was good then, perhaps better now ...
Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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5th Dec 2024 8:03pm
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5th Dec 2024 11:12pm
Re. Affair with your Mind ( Redux )
5th Dec 2024 8:12pm
Definitely better! It's like a pool of prisms reflecting off a cave wall. The poem isn't bad, either.
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5th Dec 2024 9:15pm
Awesome concept my friend. Great write. But please, no affairs with my mind!!
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5th Dec 2024 11:15pm
Trust me son
I'm not goin there though I can't say I haven't been there before local hero ...
I'm not goin there though I can't say I haven't been there before local hero ...
Re. Affair with your Mind ( Redux )
5th Dec 2024 9:33pm
We wonder which can first the piece, pic, or the title. This title absolutely fits this pic, have you ever looked at something and could dang never see someone. It's as if there's a face or set of legs emerging, but not. Tight
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5th Dec 2024 11:16pm
Poem came first. I was in lust for a lover far away...
Painting was several years ago in the pandemic fog ....
Thx ME
Painting was several years ago in the pandemic fog ....
Thx ME
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5th Dec 2024 10:39pm
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5th Dec 2024 11:47pm
STONE MAN 👍 I appreciate the nickname 😇 with respect and honor and support 🙏🪬 SHAMAN 🪬👍💪✍️
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2024 1:17am
One of your best pairings.
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6th Dec 2024 2:14am
Hot damn, this pairing is like a rare steak and a delicious merlot. I can sink my teeth into the painting, and the words make me a bit tipsy. One of your finest, I dare say. 🔥
❤️k
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6th Dec 2024 3:46am
Good Gravy as we say down South...
Yeah, I was a pretty good writer back in my day.
Gotta find more of these and repost
Thanks RED
🤠💌
Yeah, I was a pretty good writer back in my day.
Gotta find more of these and repost
Thanks RED
🤠💌
Re. Affair with your Mind ( Redux )
6th Dec 2024 10:46am
To have an affair with someone's mind is amazing - our brain being our biggest sexual organ.
"On fire with desire" > love this line! And I love your painting too, it's a beauty.
HUGE LIKE :-D
"On fire with desire" > love this line! And I love your painting too, it's a beauty.
HUGE LIKE :-D
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6th Dec 2024 11:23am
It is an amazing concept and I've been lucky in this life to live this dream of infatuation...
I've got hundreds of paintings but this one jumped out at me as the right one.
BIG THANKS D
You know !!
I've got hundreds of paintings but this one jumped out at me as the right one.
BIG THANKS D
You know !!
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7th Dec 2024 2:28pm
You know I'm gonna go there...the movement in the artwork is incredible! Like reflections of beautiful in rays of light piercing darkness. That is magic & very needed these days. The poem has the same energy & movement & is visible in the reflections. Well done!!!
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7th Dec 2024 3:12pm
Yes, movement is everything in painting.
In life too.
I sold this painting awhile back.
I almost wish I hadn't but they need good homes ...
Thus poem is near and dear to me and I brought it back to DUP to breathe life into it again. That's allowed isn't it??
Appreciate you Willow
Thanks ✋
In life too.
I sold this painting awhile back.
I almost wish I hadn't but they need good homes ...
Thus poem is near and dear to me and I brought it back to DUP to breathe life into it again. That's allowed isn't it??
Appreciate you Willow
Thanks ✋
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7th Dec 2024 7:27pm
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7th Dec 2024 9:20pm
Yes and it's a terrible thing to waste so stay connected and horny and all will be well Wally
Thanks Mister !
Thanks Mister !
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10th Dec 2024 4:31pm
You fucked my mind...
As your fingers pressed into my wet folds.
My eyes begging you to take control
You can feel all my reserves running down my leg.
Burning with desire... submitting completely.
Until my combustion spills forth again.
As your fingers pressed into my wet folds.
My eyes begging you to take control
You can feel all my reserves running down my leg.
Burning with desire... submitting completely.
Until my combustion spills forth again.
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Looked in the mirror
Saw you standing behind me
Turned around and grabbed you
Held you close
Lowered you to your knees
Fed you defiant cock
Your antidepressant
You'll never be hungry again
I'm binding your wrists
Capturing you
Spreading your legs
Devouring your sins in the folds
I'll be there all night and day....
Might take weeks
Old sins must go
To make room for mine
It's only fair ...
Saw you standing behind me
Turned around and grabbed you
Held you close
Lowered you to your knees
Fed you defiant cock
Your antidepressant
You'll never be hungry again
I'm binding your wrists
Capturing you
Spreading your legs
Devouring your sins in the folds
I'll be there all night and day....
Might take weeks
Old sins must go
To make room for mine
It's only fair ...