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Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
Cough syrup and Sprite
The loser chronicles
Yeah, you remember
Those gritty nights
Carnival
Arcade
Blow jobs behind the freak palace
Schools out forever
Short skirts
Hand jobs
Dense humidity
Road to nowhere
You always by my side
The loser chronicles
Yeah, you remember
Those gritty nights
Carnival
Arcade
Blow jobs behind the freak palace
Schools out forever
Short skirts
Hand jobs
Dense humidity
Road to nowhere
You always by my side
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
Anonymous
9th Dec 2024 4:12am
Bruce Springsteen is coming to mind, although you, of course, are dirtier.
This piece is gritty and real. I like it.
This piece is gritty and real. I like it.
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Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
9th Dec 2024 11:38am
Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
9th Dec 2024 12:30pm
Yay, boxhead is back :-) And yes, weird is good...
"Blow jobs behind the freak palace" > epic line, great piece & gorgeous painting.
"Blow jobs behind the freak palace" > epic line, great piece & gorgeous painting.
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Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
Yeah
Box Head is always lurking.
Gotta expose them more to the outside world ... Then again they're getting all the blow jobs so what more do they need ??
Stay tuned
More to cum
Thx D
Box Head is always lurking.
Gotta expose them more to the outside world ... Then again they're getting all the blow jobs so what more do they need ??
Stay tuned
More to cum
Thx D
Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
9th Dec 2024 9:29pm
Are we talking the arcades and the freak show at Coney Island circa 1960's/1970's? Between W16th & Jones Walk was the Bowery. That's where all the action was. In front & in back of these arcades.
This was brilliant. Nostalgic, Gritty, Authentic, Raw. Made in NYC!
This was brilliant. Nostalgic, Gritty, Authentic, Raw. Made in NYC!
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Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
9th Dec 2024 9:35pm
It was a collection of places.
Porn theaters like the Pussycat Lounge was a good place for some play to pay lunatic fringe sex . All the mailmen used to go there on their lunch breaks. Did you ever wonder what those mystery sticky spots on your letters were ? Off subject buy you got me thinking...
Porn theaters like the Pussycat Lounge was a good place for some play to pay lunatic fringe sex . All the mailmen used to go there on their lunch breaks. Did you ever wonder what those mystery sticky spots on your letters were ? Off subject buy you got me thinking...
Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
9th Dec 2024 9:38pm
HA! Well my parents opened the mail. I didn't. They probably had to deal with those sticky spots.
NYC is filled with wonderment and awe. Now it's filled with faux lifestyles and people that are destroying the cities soul & character.
NYC is filled with wonderment and awe. Now it's filled with faux lifestyles and people that are destroying the cities soul & character.
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Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
9th Dec 2024 10:07pm
It's a different city now but if you look behind the green door there's surely something you'll like and want to write about ...
Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
10th Dec 2024 1:02am
Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
10th Dec 2024 2:43am
My heart procedure brought back my smutty tendencies. My doctor is a Saint in the city ..
Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
10th Dec 2024 5:33am
Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
10th Dec 2024 11:25am
I left out the cotton candy and corn dogs but I think you get it ....
Thx for the comment Damian ..
Thx for the comment Damian ..
Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
14th Dec 2024 4:36pm
Love the title and Bukowski-esque approach. Can't tell if this is 80s and just last week, but who goes to arcade lately. Doesn't matter, it's a cool phenomenal write.
Boxhead is having a great time.
BL
Boxhead is having a great time.
BL
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Re: Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
14th Dec 2024 9:16pm
Box Head takes after his Father Speak.
Find the action and get paid and laid ….
The good life
Thx W
Find the action and get paid and laid ….
The good life
Thx W
Re. Sleazy nights beaming with loser pride
25th Dec 2024 4:13pm
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25th Dec 2024 11:10pm