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The Road
pave me
crack me
that’s fine with me
I’ll still take
you anywhere
front and center
don’t be distracted
even when lost
just follow my lead
your legs are
worn and long
but persistent
there will be pain
uphill slow battles
and dead ends
but remember all the
animated borders
along the way
wild child flowers
pops of color
swaying independent
keeping us company
I promise you we'll
have sprinkled friends
especially in Ireland
so, my love
take my hand
with the souls
of your feet
and let's go see
together we shall
undust miles
of mysteries
you won't be alone
I'll be with you
I'm The Road
I'm invested too
I'm living
through you
crack me
that’s fine with me
I’ll still take
you anywhere
front and center
don’t be distracted
even when lost
just follow my lead
your legs are
worn and long
but persistent
there will be pain
uphill slow battles
and dead ends
but remember all the
animated borders
along the way
wild child flowers
pops of color
swaying independent
keeping us company
I promise you we'll
have sprinkled friends
especially in Ireland
so, my love
take my hand
with the souls
of your feet
and let's go see
together we shall
undust miles
of mysteries
you won't be alone
I'll be with you
I'm The Road
I'm invested too
I'm living
through you
Author's Note
I'm thinking about moving around and paths we follow.
I've met a lot of interesting people in my lifetime.
Life can be an adventure.
I'm excited about an upcoming trip also.
I've met a lot of interesting people in my lifetime.
Life can be an adventure.
I'm excited about an upcoming trip also.
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Re. The Road
3rd Sep 2024 1:41am
Re: Re. The Road
3rd Sep 2024 1:43am
Hey there!
Trips are good for the soul amigo!
Getting out of our environments or bubbles can
feel liberating:)
thanks for the comment and stopping by for a read
Trips are good for the soul amigo!
Getting out of our environments or bubbles can
feel liberating:)
thanks for the comment and stopping by for a read
Re: Re. The Road
3rd Sep 2024 1:50am
So true. I have a retreat in Colorado way above the Mile High City. Plan to recluse in a few weeks. Thanks for the reminder. Hugs and love, Oral
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Re. The Road
Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:07am
Hey:)
OMG! that is so spot on.
Yesterday morning I got up and went to work.
I had no idea I'd end the day singing
Karaoke with my older son at his work. LOL
He works at a karaoke bar. Just never know!
Thanks for the comment and read amigo!
OMG! that is so spot on.
Yesterday morning I got up and went to work.
I had no idea I'd end the day singing
Karaoke with my older son at his work. LOL
He works at a karaoke bar. Just never know!
Thanks for the comment and read amigo!
Re. The Road
3rd Sep 2024 2:37am
We love a good four day road trip, two days out and two days back. Lots of times we flip for direction or visit places from the food network. Tight one lady
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Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:16am
That sounds so fun because I love food. haha
I love that show - Dives, Diners and Drive-Ins!
I was a food network junkie a while back and loved watching Rachel Ray 30 min meals before she became mainstream.
Thank you for stopping by and commenting:)
I love that show - Dives, Diners and Drive-Ins!
I was a food network junkie a while back and loved watching Rachel Ray 30 min meals before she became mainstream.
Thank you for stopping by and commenting:)
Re. The Road
3rd Sep 2024 2:43am
Beautifully written. This is so uplifting, with a positive point of view. Love this. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:19am
Hi Damian
I'm in a positive mood and excited about the future.
I'm glad you found this uplifting and positive.
Anytime I give a reader that kind of outlook - great day:)
Thanks for the RL too!!
I'm in a positive mood and excited about the future.
I'm glad you found this uplifting and positive.
Anytime I give a reader that kind of outlook - great day:)
Thanks for the RL too!!
Re. The Road
3rd Sep 2024 3:32am
The only friends that are constant are the roads we travel in life… everything else changes…. Amazing poem
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Re: Re. The Road
Friends do come and go when we are on
our path that takes us to different places.
Growing outside of our bubble helps you meet
different people and perspectives.
But I'm also fortunate to still keep
in touch with my best friend from 6th grade!
she just texted as I was making this comment. LOL
Thanks for the RL by and commenting:)
our path that takes us to different places.
Growing outside of our bubble helps you meet
different people and perspectives.
But I'm also fortunate to still keep
in touch with my best friend from 6th grade!
she just texted as I was making this comment. LOL
Thanks for the RL by and commenting:)
Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:26am
Re. The Road
3rd Sep 2024 5:39pm
This is lovely. Favorite stanza
"especially in Ireland
so, my love
take my hand"
"especially in Ireland
so, my love
take my hand"
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Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:28am
Hi Fai:)
Thanks! I wanted to put some sort of destination
in this write and Ireland was it.
Plus, Mark has a slight Irish accent that slips out
occasionally when he talks. haha
Thanks for the RL!!
Thanks! I wanted to put some sort of destination
in this write and Ireland was it.
Plus, Mark has a slight Irish accent that slips out
occasionally when he talks. haha
Thanks for the RL!!
Re. The Road
4th Sep 2024 9:15am
Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:32am
Hi Cipher!
Pops of color are mandatory. hahaha
Right?
If not, then I might as well close my eyes.
Thanks for the RL!
Pops of color are mandatory. hahaha
Right?
If not, then I might as well close my eyes.
Thanks for the RL!
Re. The Road
4th Sep 2024 11:26pm
Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:35am
Hi K:)
Thank you!
I was jotting things
down all week and came up with this.
Thanks for stopping by!
Thank you!
I was jotting things
down all week and came up with this.
Thanks for stopping by!
Re. The Road
5th Sep 2024 4:40am
Dear A,
I thoroughly enjoyed the joy and supportive motif in this write. It leant itself to that feeling of being loved and secure within a relationship. Lovely write. H🌷
I thoroughly enjoyed the joy and supportive motif in this write. It leant itself to that feeling of being loved and secure within a relationship. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:42am
Hi H
Having support and love when you are on a quest of
self-discovery is important. It just feels good.
Thanks for getting it!
and for the RL
Having support and love when you are on a quest of
self-discovery is important. It just feels good.
Thanks for getting it!
and for the RL
Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 00:43am
Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:44am
Hey Cisco!
I've always thought Ireland is super cool.
All the lush greenery everywhere looks so stunning
online. Seeing it in person must be awesome!
Thanks for stopping by!
I've always thought Ireland is super cool.
All the lush greenery everywhere looks so stunning
online. Seeing it in person must be awesome!
Thanks for stopping by!
Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:14am
Dumb ol RL limits... wtf. Grrrrr
So, about your next piggyback ride...
I love how you accentuated certain details within the write. Even my (broken)accent?
Awesome lines portraying the journey of your thoughts! Little visuals that paint a picture of fantastical futures...
You ain't the road, baby. You're the goal.
Great stuff, you beautiful poetic boat partner!
So, about your next piggyback ride...
I love how you accentuated certain details within the write. Even my (broken)accent?
Awesome lines portraying the journey of your thoughts! Little visuals that paint a picture of fantastical futures...
You ain't the road, baby. You're the goal.
Great stuff, you beautiful poetic boat partner!
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Re: Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 2:48am
hello honey:)
Don't sweat the RLs!
Hahahah - boat partner I am! So excited for that.
You know me - I'm a visual writer. I love all my details and
scenes. Almost like little movie vignettes. And you're my
road, boat, airplane, roadtrip! hahaha
All in one fantastical man!
I love that you used that word in your comment
MWA big sexy!!
Don't sweat the RLs!
Hahahah - boat partner I am! So excited for that.
You know me - I'm a visual writer. I love all my details and
scenes. Almost like little movie vignettes. And you're my
road, boat, airplane, roadtrip! hahaha
All in one fantastical man!
I love that you used that word in your comment
MWA big sexy!!
Re. The Road
6th Sep 2024 7:54pm
I love how you wrote every line and worked up to "I'm the road" ... amazing through and through. I truly felt this poem Adel.. wow.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. The Road
7th Sep 2024 3:06am
Hey LJ
I'm so happy you stopped by chica!
I'm glad you got the vibe of this.
I've met so many interesting people in love
and in life. Everyone is following their own paths
and figuring this thing called life out.
So happy to have met you on the road!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by!
I'm so happy you stopped by chica!
I'm glad you got the vibe of this.
I've met so many interesting people in love
and in life. Everyone is following their own paths
and figuring this thing called life out.
So happy to have met you on the road!
Thanks for the RL and stopping by!
Re. The Road
31st Oct 2024 11:03pm
Traveling (or moving) can be quite the adventure, especially when it comes to settling roots in a new place. Hope everything goes according to plan.
Amazing write.
Amazing write.
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Re: Re. The Road
4th Nov 2024 00:58am
Hi Wally!
Thank you for that. I believe the adventure is the road. Wherever it points you. A partnership in a way. I've met people in my life that came in just the right time. Who knows if I would have met them if going in a different direction. Whether it's at a new job or a writing site:)
thanks for your all of your support and the RL amigo!
Thank you for that. I believe the adventure is the road. Wherever it points you. A partnership in a way. I've met people in my life that came in just the right time. Who knows if I would have met them if going in a different direction. Whether it's at a new job or a writing site:)
thanks for your all of your support and the RL amigo!