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I'm trying to be a human
I'm not from earth
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
Author's Note
Box Head drawn by Poetspeak
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Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:15pm
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:17pm
Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:17pm
I think I said it before I love science fiction. I am intrigue on how your sister is considered normal and your not. Like the picture it goes well with the poetic story. Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:21pm
My sister did everything right.
School, ethics, sweetness.
I was damaged from birth, it's been a struggle forever though I've had success too..
I can't complain but stuff never leaves you.
Thx on the art. It's one of my great passions
School, ethics, sweetness.
I was damaged from birth, it's been a struggle forever though I've had success too..
I can't complain but stuff never leaves you.
Thx on the art. It's one of my great passions
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:25pm
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:29pm
Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:40pm
WOW! My General this promotes you to not 5 buy 6 stars. Lead on. Hugs and love, O
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:48pm
Yeah, telling my story O
It's messy but some fun parts too.
My dog has an O name... Onyx
We call her O a lot ....
Thx Colonel
It's messy but some fun parts too.
My dog has an O name... Onyx
We call her O a lot ....
Thx Colonel
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:51pm
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:53pm
Yes, our O knows all too.
Loves people
A rescue from Texas
Think she was glad to get of there ..
Loves people
A rescue from Texas
Think she was glad to get of there ..
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 3:56pm
Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 4:06pm
Really love the art. Box Head surrounded by the deep colors is a stunning contrast.
I've had a hard time being human too, but struggle is one of the birthplaces of poetry and art.
Cool job on this combo.
I've had a hard time being human too, but struggle is one of the birthplaces of poetry and art.
Cool job on this combo.
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 4:43pm
Yes, to be a poet you must suffer and also embrace the suffering. Suffering is like a side dish to life.
Appreciate the nod on this one. Title came to me while I was walking through the front door of my loft. It’s not really a loft but I call it that … Artist scum identity yo …
Thx Wendy
Appreciate the nod on this one. Title came to me while I was walking through the front door of my loft. It’s not really a loft but I call it that … Artist scum identity yo …
Thx Wendy
Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 10:55pm
That first line & I immediately thought Bowie...you did not disappoint!
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
27th Jul 2024 11:31pm
Re. I'm trying to be a human
28th Jul 2024 5:56am
Great to see you writing again, Mister.
Also: outsider boxhead number 138 rocks.
& now I have Space Oddity in my head...
Also: outsider boxhead number 138 rocks.
& now I have Space Oddity in my head...
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
28th Jul 2024 10:51am
Yeah, I'm a poet oddity ..
I almost deactivated so many times in the last few weeks but somehow found my voice again. You'll probably see more weirdness from me soon.
Weird is fun actually !!
Thx for your support D
Appreciate you ..
I almost deactivated so many times in the last few weeks but somehow found my voice again. You'll probably see more weirdness from me soon.
Weird is fun actually !!
Thx for your support D
Appreciate you ..
Re. I'm trying to be a human
30th Jul 2024 00:32am
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
30th Jul 2024 1:14am
Re. I'm trying to be a human
30th Jul 2024 12:38pm
Hey, I've been absent a lot but this happy box head is a joy to come back to! Don't try too hard to be human, it's overrated. Stay weird. And don't you dare deactivate!!!
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
30th Jul 2024 1:19pm
Yeah I know
Humans are holes in my underwear
You can always count on me for weirdness, normal isn't in my realm for too long...
I lost my will to write but I think it's coming back. Got a really weird one written, just a matter of time before I launch that puppy.
Preview Title:
I want to watch you take a shit .. Part 3
Thx kid
🤠❤
Humans are holes in my underwear
You can always count on me for weirdness, normal isn't in my realm for too long...
I lost my will to write but I think it's coming back. Got a really weird one written, just a matter of time before I launch that puppy.
Preview Title:
I want to watch you take a shit .. Part 3
Thx kid
🤠❤
Re. I'm trying to be a human
31st Jul 2024 1:49am
You're turning out to be a fine example of loony writers! Lol. We never feel like we belong exactly to the average mix. That's a good thing! You are unique as hell and entertaining to the max. Never adapt. Stay you!
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
31st Jul 2024 2:32am
I’ve always been different.
Often I call myself an opposite 😳 !!
Weird is good is my motto !!
Nice to see you
Thx Mark
Often I call myself an opposite 😳 !!
Weird is good is my motto !!
Nice to see you
Thx Mark
Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
31st Jul 2024 2:36am
You're welcome Gary.
I literally fit no molds. I know I'm one of a kind!
Because God said "Oh shit! I won't do that again!".
I literally fit no molds. I know I'm one of a kind!
Because God said "Oh shit! I won't do that again!".
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
31st Jul 2024 2:44am
My mom used to tease me that she got the wrong baby from the hospital …
I miss her telling me that ..
I miss her telling me that ..
Re. I'm trying to be a human
1st Aug 2024 00:16am
I always thought you were human. it's human not to feel human. And if you're not human can you call the aliens to come and pick me up. I almost had enough of earth.
Great write.
Mind expanding
Regards James
Great write.
Mind expanding
Regards James
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
1st Aug 2024 1:10am
You got it James.
Problem now is the planets are getting crowded with ex-Pat earthlings. But I think we’ll find you a nice vista …
Problem now is the planets are getting crowded with ex-Pat earthlings. But I think we’ll find you a nice vista …
Re. I'm trying to be a human
1st Aug 2024 1:25am
Man Styx said it best - you are fucking unique. There is no other Sheriff on this site with swagger or heart quite like you. This was well done.
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
1st Aug 2024 2:14am
Wow
High Praise
I love it
This one is personal and defines me.
I appreciate your comment and stay tuned for more unique..
I’m on it !!
High Praise
I love it
This one is personal and defines me.
I appreciate your comment and stay tuned for more unique..
I’m on it !!
Re. I'm trying to be a human
1st Aug 2024 10:00pm
More like a Joan Collins then, ay, PS? You said it was a girly drink after all, lol. I'd rather have a Gin & Tonic to be honest. Sorry I've been neglecting you. 😊
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
1st Aug 2024 10:45pm
I know Billy
I’m hurt
Whom have you been cheating with and ignoring me ?
Tom Collins was dang good. I could even do Joan Collins at 90 after 3 Tom’s. Aliens have
SUPER COCKS !!
I’m hurt
Whom have you been cheating with and ignoring me ?
Tom Collins was dang good. I could even do Joan Collins at 90 after 3 Tom’s. Aliens have
SUPER COCKS !!
Re. I'm trying to be a human
2nd Aug 2024 12:18pm
Re. I'm trying to be a human
5th Aug 2024 5:33pm
Dude the first time we read this was offline and thought that we commented. We thought piece and pic took us back to a younger time and this should be titled "Sorting Through The Piece." The pic carries us to childhood puzzle pieces and the piece makes us think of continually trying to sort life. Tight
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Re. I'm trying to be a human
5th Aug 2024 5:42pm
Mister
We all long for different times.
But we take what’s given.
These hid heads are like Mad Magazine with a modern approach but in the end it’s all the same ..
Buy low
Sell high
Grate your carrot if no pork chops available locally !!
Thx
We all long for different times.
But we take what’s given.
These hid heads are like Mad Magazine with a modern approach but in the end it’s all the same ..
Buy low
Sell high
Grate your carrot if no pork chops available locally !!
Thx
Re. I'm trying to be a human
6th Aug 2024 9:38pm
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6th Aug 2024 9:45pm
Re. I'm trying to be a human
7th Aug 2024 5:37am
Dear PS,
I don’t think I’ve ever had a Tom Collin’s. 🤔
You’re not an alien. I speak from experience and I know everything (big fib) you’re the dang sheriff! And the best dang sheriff there ever was. 😘
H🌷
I don’t think I’ve ever had a Tom Collin’s. 🤔
You’re not an alien. I speak from experience and I know everything (big fib) you’re the dang sheriff! And the best dang sheriff there ever was. 😘
H🌷
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Re: Re. I'm trying to be a human
7th Aug 2024 11:16am
Dear H,
Some women would probably like to drink a Tom Collins and then drink the Tom Collins again if you know what I mean ....wink
It's a power cocktail....oops pun city
Drink up luv !!
Yeah, I'm still typing Sheriff. It's a good gig and I have job security, there's always somebody to arrest !!
Thanks H
🤠❤
Some women would probably like to drink a Tom Collins and then drink the Tom Collins again if you know what I mean ....wink
It's a power cocktail....oops pun city
Drink up luv !!
Yeah, I'm still typing Sheriff. It's a good gig and I have job security, there's always somebody to arrest !!
Thanks H
🤠❤
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8th Sep 2024 00:48am
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8th Sep 2024 3:19am