Behind The Scenes

Fantastic. Well executed!

Thanks for checking it out and commenting.  Such is an inspiration to me.

The title works perfectly with this spot on poem.

My comments aren’t as descriptive as yours, my friend, but I think your poem is fantastic.

Nah, you don't have to have a word salad when sharing commentary.  To be honest, I'm a bit pretentious with intellectuality, sometimes.  Thank you for your support.  The fact that you checked this out and commented on it helps me to want to write more.  Yeah, I was going to put something else for the title (Corruption), but I saw that I had already used that, so it challenged me to think of another title, and this is the one I came up with.  It really does happen on an individual scale, and in massive scales - pride.  Anyway, again, thanks.

An excellent description of mainstream society. I get what you are saying about the
two words rolling of your tongue easier. I don't know if I could pull that off, lol.
You are really good at these!

I think I like haiku.  I'm going to have to write some more of these.  Yeah, the thing about the 3 and 4 syllable words, it just comes naturally to me, by now.  I've worked on the technical aspects of rhyme for over a decade, so I have experience.  You just have to keep putting the work in, along with passion, and gain experience.  It's like anything else - the more you put into it, the better the product/result.  You do, at least to me, seem to have a fluent flow to your vocabulary.  It's just a matter of garnering an awareness of it, to add the dimension of delivery and inflection, when you pay specific attention, and work on it.  With that said, it's really just a small tidbit of advice, heh.  You do have it naturally.  I've seen it in some of your works.  Anyway, I'm glad you commented, and checked this out.  Thank you, and I'll see you around!