Spirit in Humankind

I'm so happy you wrote one! You did really good.
Perfect syllables, lol 😊
I love the last line.
You seem to be very good at this too.
Our minds are sensational at interpreting
physical characteristics through our senses.
I love that you kept your strongest style ( 2 word groupings)
and still managed to make it a haiku. That's impressive.

The enunciation seems to be more fluent, when you use bigger words.  The syllables just blend together and roll off the tongue.  I've found that to be true in writing rhymes.  When you write a ton of 2 and 1 syllable words, depending on the syllable stresses of the entire phrase grouped together, it can throw it off a bit.  Idk, just something I picked up on in rhyming.  Of course, you can use smaller words, and group them together, but I'm probably more comfortable in using 3 and 4 syllable words, especially for the 7-syllable line.  In this, I wanted to capture that human nature is to see things on a physical plane to relate to the human spirit.  Anyway, thanks for checking it out, and your enthusiasm.