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Click
Show me where
in this world
a billionaire
is without the blood
of someone on his hands
Show me case history
where there are no ghosts
shadowing his money trail
Or maybe the man
who built the machine
isn’t all bad
Maybe he works late
from a 58th floor
on Wall Street
counting the dead
on an abacus
How simple
ancient
innocent
Maybe the sound
of those clicking beads
is all he needs
to make him happy
After all, he’s too far into killing
to claim there is such a thing
as silence
There isn’t a ship in port
or stationed train
that can depart without blood
thick in the brig of its joints
Show me in nautical points
or across tracks
there are no ghosts
rising and falling
in the foam of landscapes
And I'll show you
the face of war
because there are no borders
when bloodshed
has no boundaries
My worst fear, you ask?
Is that humanity
the one that loves everybody
will just give up
click, click, click. . .
in this world
a billionaire
is without the blood
of someone on his hands
Show me case history
where there are no ghosts
shadowing his money trail
Or maybe the man
who built the machine
isn’t all bad
Maybe he works late
from a 58th floor
on Wall Street
counting the dead
on an abacus
How simple
ancient
innocent
Maybe the sound
of those clicking beads
is all he needs
to make him happy
After all, he’s too far into killing
to claim there is such a thing
as silence
There isn’t a ship in port
or stationed train
that can depart without blood
thick in the brig of its joints
Show me in nautical points
or across tracks
there are no ghosts
rising and falling
in the foam of landscapes
And I'll show you
the face of war
because there are no borders
when bloodshed
has no boundaries
My worst fear, you ask?
Is that humanity
the one that loves everybody
will just give up
click, click, click. . .
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Re. Click
20th Feb 2024 11:50pm
Indeed, I'm forever flabbergasted by the lack of attention to how we so rarely hear from the actuarial departments about firearm statistics.
What a difference that would make to the public discussion.
Law must be based on sound reason, accurate data, and compassion, or risk being completely irrelevant, or counterproductive, to the human condition, and our environment.
What a difference that would make to the public discussion.
Law must be based on sound reason, accurate data, and compassion, or risk being completely irrelevant, or counterproductive, to the human condition, and our environment.
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Re: Re. Click
27th Feb 2024 2:46pm
Thanks, Shannon. Those mines you reference are horrible! And yet, here we are reaping the benefits of their labor. Hopefully for positive awareness.
Re. Click
21st Feb 2024 5:37pm
Great poem; I love the image of the cold click-click of the abacus in contrast to the flesh & blood suffering on the battlefield.
In Robert Frost's poem "Mending Wall" there is that repeating line: ‘Good fences make good neighbors.’ I wish it were so.
In Robert Frost's poem "Mending Wall" there is that repeating line: ‘Good fences make good neighbors.’ I wish it were so.
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Re: Re. Click
27th Feb 2024 2:44pm
Thank you, Josh. You nailed the underlying meaning! Great poem reference by Frost; I wish it were so too.
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22nd Feb 2024 3:37pm
I've always said, they were genocidal maniac before they became philanthropist....
Great piece and a very true reflection of the world ...
Great piece and a very true reflection of the world ...
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27th Feb 2024 2:43pm
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27th Feb 2024 6:07am
Oh the honesty and the search for truth in this is outstanding.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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Re: Re. Click
27th Feb 2024 2:42pm
Thank you, Wally! Much appreciated. I am constantly seeking truth, sometimes through science and other times through spirituality.
Re. Click
4th Mar 2024 5:09am
Greetings Ahavati; how are you... I see you, murder death an sin predate human social & financial class separations...Ed Gein, for example was a poor country boy, that enjoyed dark perversions... But, dig this write, enjoyed readin this very much... Take good care mine friend:
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Re: Re. Click
4th Mar 2024 2:24pm
Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts, deadwolf. Much appreciated.
Re. Click
5th Mar 2024 10:31pm
Dearest Ahavati,
This is brilliance. You capture the wickedness in ill found wealth grown on the backs of the less fortunate...leaving wreckage in their wake without concern.
Love these lines:
there are no borders
when bloodshed
has no boundaries
And also fear that humanity will be lost. Thanks for sharing.
Bless
Mel
This is brilliance. You capture the wickedness in ill found wealth grown on the backs of the less fortunate...leaving wreckage in their wake without concern.
Love these lines:
there are no borders
when bloodshed
has no boundaries
And also fear that humanity will be lost. Thanks for sharing.
Bless
Mel
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Re: Re. Click
6th Mar 2024 3:32pm
Thank you, Mel! And for the RL honor! I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. xo
Re: Re. Click
15th Apr 2024 00:52am
Not in my book, thank goodness. There are still fighters for love.
Thanks for the comment and RL. Much appreciated.
Thanks for the comment and RL. Much appreciated.
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9th Oct 2024 11:08am
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