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Autumn Tenderness
Maybe it's the cooler weather
Sliding in next to you to warm up
One touch leads to another
A poem is born
Lately I'm thinking about you
Do you live alone ?
I wonder what you do for tenderness?
I'm not talking about sex
We'll get to that later
There's something about you
Fire, vulnerability and autumn at dusk
We'll make that soup
It's pretty spicy but just the right burn
Some good bread and Octoberfest beer
A toasty lager and centerline balance
You can't go wrong
I'm thinking about you more and more
Sure I'd love you to stay over tonight
Let's watch a movie or something
Then bed and keeping each other warm
A soft caress, life in the almost world
Tenderness, touch, then sleep
Sliding in next to you to warm up
One touch leads to another
A poem is born
Lately I'm thinking about you
Do you live alone ?
I wonder what you do for tenderness?
I'm not talking about sex
We'll get to that later
There's something about you
Fire, vulnerability and autumn at dusk
We'll make that soup
It's pretty spicy but just the right burn
Some good bread and Octoberfest beer
A toasty lager and centerline balance
You can't go wrong
I'm thinking about you more and more
Sure I'd love you to stay over tonight
Let's watch a movie or something
Then bed and keeping each other warm
A soft caress, life in the almost world
Tenderness, touch, then sleep
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Autumn Tenderness
22nd Oct 2023 9:35pm
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22nd Oct 2023 10:13pm
There's a lot going on in that soup, I loaded it up....
Thanks Pink
P.S. Your autumn poem inspired me ...
Thanks Pink
P.S. Your autumn poem inspired me ...
Re. Autumn Tenderness
22nd Oct 2023 10:19pm
it's so beautiful dearest Poet I can taste the tenderness and the soup... the painting is very lovely and soothing 💕
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22nd Oct 2023 10:25pm
I'll tell you Brenda
Nobody likes when summer ends but my energy level goes up considerably in autumn.
I'm now approaching my 10 anniversary writing here in DUP. I was pretty frustrated in the beginning I remember sending you a PM asking how I could get some comments. You gave me some sage advice and then things started to happen for me. I will always be grateful to you for the help and support !! This poem is like the way I used to write. I thunk I'm trying to reinvent myself.
Thanks Brenda
For everything
❤💯💥
Nobody likes when summer ends but my energy level goes up considerably in autumn.
I'm now approaching my 10 anniversary writing here in DUP. I was pretty frustrated in the beginning I remember sending you a PM asking how I could get some comments. You gave me some sage advice and then things started to happen for me. I will always be grateful to you for the help and support !! This poem is like the way I used to write. I thunk I'm trying to reinvent myself.
Thanks Brenda
For everything
❤💯💥
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22nd Oct 2023 11:35pm
I love your style dearest Poet...I'm painting today as well...keep doing what you do and know you're loved 💕
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22nd Oct 2023 11:44pm
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23rd Oct 2023 00:39am
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23rd Oct 2023 1:26am
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23rd Oct 2023 1:40am
You snuggle up to keep warm then her beauty and hotness cause you to get a pitch tent which is make her happy and feeling good. Keep on writing.
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23rd Oct 2023 1:50am
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23rd Oct 2023 2:25am
Lager, spice, and everything nice... squash soup & snuggles... quite a recipe you've painted here. 😍
Outstanding work!
❤️❤️❤️k
Outstanding work!
❤️❤️❤️k
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23rd Oct 2023 2:58am
Soup does miraculous things for a poet.
Or maybe it was the Lebanese combo meat platter I enjoyed last night. That's the most protein I've had in years ...
Darn tasty sugar
Thx Red ❤
Appreciate the RL
Or maybe it was the Lebanese combo meat platter I enjoyed last night. That's the most protein I've had in years ...
Darn tasty sugar
Thx Red ❤
Appreciate the RL
Re. Autumn Tenderness
23rd Oct 2023 3:04am
Dear PS,
I didn’t know you could cook?! When’s dinner? Lovely cozy poem and painting to support the recipe. H🌷
I didn’t know you could cook?! When’s dinner? Lovely cozy poem and painting to support the recipe. H🌷
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23rd Oct 2023 4:00am
Dear H,
I was thinking this morning.
Where's Honoria
Prayers answered 🙏
Appreciate the nod, you never know with this cowboy ...
Stay tuned yaw ..
Thx
🤠🤖
I was thinking this morning.
Where's Honoria
Prayers answered 🙏
Appreciate the nod, you never know with this cowboy ...
Stay tuned yaw ..
Thx
🤠🤖
Re. Autumn Tenderness
23rd Oct 2023 5:28pm
Tenderness...a rare aside from your BDSM streaks. Very nice. Lovely painting, as usual. Regards, Robert.
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23rd Oct 2023 5:34pm
Autumn always presents a different frame of mind for this rogue.
I'm glad you like the art and poem. Kinda fond of it myself for a different take ....
Thanks Robert
I'm glad you like the art and poem. Kinda fond of it myself for a different take ....
Thanks Robert
Re. Autumn Tenderness
23rd Oct 2023 5:51pm
So many things can spring forth from tenderness…
and end with it also.
So digging the softer you.
and end with it also.
So digging the softer you.
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I've been told I have a nice soft side.
It juxtaposes the rough and tumble.
It's nice to hear though Mary.
BIG THANKS 💗
It juxtaposes the rough and tumble.
It's nice to hear though Mary.
BIG THANKS 💗
Re. Autumn Tenderness
24th Oct 2023 1:10am
Heart strings have been tugged here.
Can autumn get any better than this?
Romantic and real, love it.
🤎🧡
Can autumn get any better than this?
Romantic and real, love it.
🤎🧡
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I'm gratified by your comment NG.
You'll note there was no mention of anything related to Pumpkin either. Autumn is a changing of the guard. There's cotton sweaters and sometimes merino wool.
All good things for this ranger.
I tried a little tenderness and it wasn't hard.
You might see more.
Thank you
🍁🍂💥🤠🧡🤎💛
You'll note there was no mention of anything related to Pumpkin either. Autumn is a changing of the guard. There's cotton sweaters and sometimes merino wool.
All good things for this ranger.
I tried a little tenderness and it wasn't hard.
You might see more.
Thank you
🍁🍂💥🤠🧡🤎💛
Re. Autumn Tenderness
24th Oct 2023 1:08pm
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24th Oct 2023 1:46pm
Something a little different Willow.
It was fun to write
Thank you !!
RL ... BIG LIKE
It was fun to write
Thank you !!
RL ... BIG LIKE
Re. Autumn Tenderness
25th Oct 2023 5:42pm
A fab romantic poem, appealing, inviting softly, gracefully like with a serenade. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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25th Oct 2023 9:50pm
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25th Oct 2023 10:29pm
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31st Oct 2023 3:21am
I could defiantly go on and on, but you know I love you and words....always <3
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31st Oct 2023 8:44am
"To everything, turn turn turn, there is a season, turn turn turn .....
...... Written by Bob Dylan and performed by the Byrds circa mid 1960's
My inspiration goes way back ML
...... Written by Bob Dylan and performed by the Byrds circa mid 1960's
My inspiration goes way back ML
Re. Autumn Tenderness
28th Oct 2023 2:16am
Not having sex and just lying in each other's soft touch and each other's warmth... that too very relaxing and peaceful... like the peace found in twilight after a long day....
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28th Oct 2023 3:16am
Yes dimpy, it's a like a timeout from mayhem.
Sleeping well and in the morning showing my monster again...
Sleeping well and in the morning showing my monster again...
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28th Oct 2023 3:20am
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28th Oct 2023 3:40am
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28th Oct 2023 9:24am
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28th Oct 2023 12:51pm
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28th Oct 2023 3:36pm
You're talking my kinda language, PS! This is a very good interpretation, definition or if I may, expression of tenderness.👍
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28th Oct 2023 3:40pm
A little tenderness goes a long way Billy.
I let my pen do the talking and the rest is as it is ....
Thx B
I let my pen do the talking and the rest is as it is ....
Thx B
Re. Autumn Tenderness
31st Oct 2023 2:13am
I love the casual, no pressure vibe of this. Let's them ease into the moment on their own terms. It's okay to be easy going! Lol. Let the warmth build, then it will get to raging.
This is a good read, Gary. I like your message in it.
This is a good read, Gary. I like your message in it.
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31st Oct 2023 2:26am
Rated G for Gary
No beige but plenty of oatmeal with
Unsweetened vanilla almond milk.
Wild Turkey 101 over ice when nobody is looking.
Thanks Mister !!
No beige but plenty of oatmeal with
Unsweetened vanilla almond milk.
Wild Turkey 101 over ice when nobody is looking.
Thanks Mister !!
Re. Autumn Tenderness
12th Nov 2023 1:04pm
Oh yeah! I can warm you up...
Like a little space heater. lol
One touch leads... it better damnit.
A poem is born from the aftermath.
What are you thinking about me then? :p
Always talking about sex... or thinking about it...
Fire, vulnerability, and autumn at dusk... so much.
Love the burn... Pretty spicy always.
and Octoberfest beer accompanies it so well.
But you just want to get me drunk,
so going to take something stronger...
There is definitely a lot of affection and caring here though.
A soft caress certainly pulls you into another world.
One of tenderness that so often turns to...
Well you know.
Like a little space heater. lol
One touch leads... it better damnit.
A poem is born from the aftermath.
What are you thinking about me then? :p
Always talking about sex... or thinking about it...
Fire, vulnerability, and autumn at dusk... so much.
Love the burn... Pretty spicy always.
and Octoberfest beer accompanies it so well.
But you just want to get me drunk,
so going to take something stronger...
There is definitely a lot of affection and caring here though.
A soft caress certainly pulls you into another world.
One of tenderness that so often turns to...
Well you know.
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12th Nov 2023 2:43pm
Yeah
I know ...
Heard about your wooden leg where all the beer goes, trust me when we start drinking the hard stuff you're gonna say, "Where have you been my whole life" ?
Well you've graced me with 40, only 29 more to go
Appreciate this comment Kx
My little space heater, now that's something to keep me warm at night.
Hot 🔥 actually !
I know ...
Heard about your wooden leg where all the beer goes, trust me when we start drinking the hard stuff you're gonna say, "Where have you been my whole life" ?
Well you've graced me with 40, only 29 more to go
Appreciate this comment Kx
My little space heater, now that's something to keep me warm at night.
Hot 🔥 actually !