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A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
A Spirit-Lion crossed my path
and stopped to say hello
the old hyena didn’t laugh
since she was in the know
An iguana rolled its eyes
in feigned forgetfulness
and teasing truth from out the lies
said “YOU have made the mess”
The more-than-human world looked on
and turned to have their say
“the humans may all be soon gone
because they’ve had their day”
I said “a remnant will survive
it’s always been the case
for evolution is alive
with sense of time and place”
The Spirit-Lion pawed the ground
observed “from dust you came
your techno-pride has done the rounds
has rattled earth’s domain
give up your foolish sacred cow
to rule and dominate;
to symbiosis you must bow,
we must co-operate”
I said “don’t speak to me, but those
who run this crazy show
the psychos in their bunkers, clothed
in scarcity, and though
your diagnosis fits the bill
it first will get much worse
the human race is mental, ill,
a solastalgic curse”
The Lion said “all’s well my friend,
because it starts with you
since consciousness can have no end
it’s true for every view”
I sat at the piano and
began to improvise
renewed my dulled and aching brand
and cut my cloth to size.
and stopped to say hello
the old hyena didn’t laugh
since she was in the know
An iguana rolled its eyes
in feigned forgetfulness
and teasing truth from out the lies
said “YOU have made the mess”
The more-than-human world looked on
and turned to have their say
“the humans may all be soon gone
because they’ve had their day”
I said “a remnant will survive
it’s always been the case
for evolution is alive
with sense of time and place”
The Spirit-Lion pawed the ground
observed “from dust you came
your techno-pride has done the rounds
has rattled earth’s domain
give up your foolish sacred cow
to rule and dominate;
to symbiosis you must bow,
we must co-operate”
I said “don’t speak to me, but those
who run this crazy show
the psychos in their bunkers, clothed
in scarcity, and though
your diagnosis fits the bill
it first will get much worse
the human race is mental, ill,
a solastalgic curse”
The Lion said “all’s well my friend,
because it starts with you
since consciousness can have no end
it’s true for every view”
I sat at the piano and
began to improvise
renewed my dulled and aching brand
and cut my cloth to size.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 16th Aug 2023
| Edited 27th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Retrocausal: where the present is affected by the future, as well as by the past. It’s a term used in the study of Syntropy (counterpart to entropy) in the field of quantum mechanics.
Solastalgia: “The pain or distress caused by the loss of solace and the sense of desolation connected to the present state of one’s home and territory. It is the lived experience of negative environmental change. It is the homesickness you have when still at home” (as defined on p.200 in Glenn A. Albrecht’s “Earth Emotions: New Words for a New World”; Cornell University Press, 2019)
(photo credit: Joshua Bond, [piano is a Roland FP5])
Solastalgia: “The pain or distress caused by the loss of solace and the sense of desolation connected to the present state of one’s home and territory. It is the lived experience of negative environmental change. It is the homesickness you have when still at home” (as defined on p.200 in Glenn A. Albrecht’s “Earth Emotions: New Words for a New World”; Cornell University Press, 2019)
(photo credit: Joshua Bond, [piano is a Roland FP5])
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Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
16th Aug 2023 4:14pm
Re: Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
18th Aug 2023 4:25pm
Thank you Kinkpoet. My father was a great Kipling fan, often quoting him. He had a complete set of leather-bound books of Kipling and if I'd been a bit older when he died decades ago, I would have kept them. I appreciate your commenting, and the RL. Best regards, Josh.
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
16th Aug 2023 8:55pm
Has me thinking more and more about ecosocialism and planned degrowth economics.
Love the spirit creature approach.
Great read.
Love the spirit creature approach.
Great read.
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Re: Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
18th Aug 2023 4:33pm
Hi MS, apart from an accident I had from which I'm recovering, the poem was also inspired by the work my wife (VeronikaB on DUP) is doing. From your observation, and your keen interest in words, you might be interested to check out her current project (https://www.symbiopaedia.com/). And thank you for the RL. Cheers, Josh.
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
16th Aug 2023 10:14pm
Re: Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
18th Aug 2023 4:38pm
Thank you Grace. I'm intrugued to know which bit(s) you found interesting and what thoughts they might have triggered. Sometimes I get comments and think "wow, I never saw my poem in that light" -- which I find a comforting experience to understand how diversity can spread from a single event.
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
17th Aug 2023 4:16am
Dear J,
I was on a bit of a roll with this write. I enjoyed all the metaphors throughout and the last stanza of playing piano as an activity to connect with creativity between the physical and the mental sides. Wonderful to see you and V!
H🌷
I was on a bit of a roll with this write. I enjoyed all the metaphors throughout and the last stanza of playing piano as an activity to connect with creativity between the physical and the mental sides. Wonderful to see you and V!
H🌷
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Re: Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
Dear H, when I scan through comments on my poems and see "H🌷" , I always feel uplifted - it seems to have become a symbol of "good energy' for me; thank you.
I've always found 'creative work' (in my world that's 'making things', and more recently re-learning the piano after giving up half a century ago as a teenager) is my saving grace from despair, despondency and depression. And you are right - piano (or learning any musical instrument I guess) definitely connects mind & body; I recommend it. Take care, J&V.
I've always found 'creative work' (in my world that's 'making things', and more recently re-learning the piano after giving up half a century ago as a teenager) is my saving grace from despair, despondency and depression. And you are right - piano (or learning any musical instrument I guess) definitely connects mind & body; I recommend it. Take care, J&V.
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
17th Aug 2023 5:42pm
Damn rabbit holes, keep utilizing what could be wasted time
Nice thought process.
Nice thought process.
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Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
18th Aug 2023 5:06pm
Hi maybe-it-is-me. Thank you for commenting. Time might be an illusion, but it sure as hell is a powerful one. And welcome to DUP. Cheers, Josh.
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
18th Aug 2023 7:11pm
the human race is mental, ill,
a solastalgic curse”
YES!
And that Spirit-Lion ~~~
I've seen her too lately, prowling around our fire circle
〰 great poem 〰
a solastalgic curse”
YES!
And that Spirit-Lion ~~~
I've seen her too lately, prowling around our fire circle
〰 great poem 〰
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19th Aug 2023 4:06pm
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
18th Aug 2023 11:34pm
I just read something today that stopped me in my tracks NOT because I didn't know of its truth, but because it had never been put that way before.
"But I am only one person, what difference could I make—
said 3 billion individuals."
It will get much worse before better, there's a humbling coming. And from the remnant, growth.
"But I am only one person, what difference could I make—
said 3 billion individuals."
It will get much worse before better, there's a humbling coming. And from the remnant, growth.
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Re: Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
19th Aug 2023 4:18pm
Hello A, I also sense it will get worse before better, but I sense more and more 'symbiocene' initiatives popping up all over the world - maybe it's the remnant getting ready, getting their feet in the soil and establishing pockets of psychological and physical fluidity for the times to come. RL appreciated. All the best, Josh.
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
19th Aug 2023 1:04am
The style of this reminds me of “The Hippopotamus” by TS Eliot. You manage the rhyme scheme well and elaborate in a lucid, user friendly fashion on some fairly intense philosophical concepts.
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Re: Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
19th Aug 2023 4:28pm
Hi CR, thank you for visiting, and the RL. I guess simple rhyming schemes make for a ready trigger to connect like with like. Interesting how serious poets like Eliot don't mind using this kind of "children's" format - I'm in good company. All the best, Josh.
Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
31st Aug 2023 3:51pm
Re: Re. A Retrocausal Solastalgia for Pre-Accident Times
1st Sep 2023 9:42pm
Hi MM, Thank you for reading, and the RL. "Punchy" was what I after in the rhyming flow. Hope you're doing all right. Best regards, Josh.