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greed is good
We sex talk fuck
sequestered
in our darkness
last bits
of pretense have long
eroded away
dissolving
in degrees
of forged desire
satiated via strict demand
and fearless obeying
oxytocin surges
from stem to stern
as my cum
clings to your face
fingers
and my own mouth
tasting myself
on your tongue
is how life should always feel—
free, alive and
imbued with complete
and utter satisfaction
droplets
still slick the inside of my thighs
skin chill-shivers to trembling
either from the ceiling fan
or from your expertise
at orchestrating my flesh
to transcend
upon your command
that thought
causes my nipples to harden
again
already aching
from hours of joyous abuse
yet still
voraciously
wanting more
needing more
becoming more
when acquiescing
on my knees
positioned silently
begging
for more.
Because
greed is good
and so am I.
sequestered
in our darkness
last bits
of pretense have long
eroded away
dissolving
in degrees
of forged desire
satiated via strict demand
and fearless obeying
oxytocin surges
from stem to stern
as my cum
clings to your face
fingers
and my own mouth
tasting myself
on your tongue
is how life should always feel—
free, alive and
imbued with complete
and utter satisfaction
droplets
still slick the inside of my thighs
skin chill-shivers to trembling
either from the ceiling fan
or from your expertise
at orchestrating my flesh
to transcend
upon your command
that thought
causes my nipples to harden
again
already aching
from hours of joyous abuse
yet still
voraciously
wanting more
needing more
becoming more
when acquiescing
on my knees
positioned silently
begging
for more.
Because
greed is good
and so am I.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 4th Aug 2023
Author's Note
© Blu2023
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Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:05pm
Dig that type of greed, indeed, girl.
Takes me back to my younger days
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Takes me back to my younger days
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:42pm
I'm glad you can applaud a ravenous appetite, bk. What a pleasure it is to take you back to what I'm assuming are some outstanding memories!! ;)
Thanks for being here and sharing your thoughts with me.
🌹💙 - x
Thanks for being here and sharing your thoughts with me.
🌹💙 - x
Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 2:24pm
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:15pm
Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:47pm
Hee hee...
It's been awhile since I've penned a spicy submissive sumthin' sumthin'!! Thrilled that you found sn erotic smolder, my brave Knight! That's high praise, coming from you.
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹💙-⚔️
It's been awhile since I've penned a spicy submissive sumthin' sumthin'!! Thrilled that you found sn erotic smolder, my brave Knight! That's high praise, coming from you.
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹💙-⚔️
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:23pm
your words, always spot on
the description brilliant,
me, finding that greed for more,,,
as i read your last line,
so good, once again, i find in your words.
my mind,..
hears your voice enunciating each syllable,
as you stress that greed.
thank you for sharing your talent.
how that talent is appreciated.
as always,
Mysticstones
the description brilliant,
me, finding that greed for more,,,
as i read your last line,
so good, once again, i find in your words.
my mind,..
hears your voice enunciating each syllable,
as you stress that greed.
thank you for sharing your talent.
how that talent is appreciated.
as always,
Mysticstones
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Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:59pm
Wow!!
Hey there, Mysticstones
You're a lovely site for sore eyes, this morning! Thank you deeply for your extremely moving sentiments. You really had me grinning from ear to ear as I imagined you hearing my voice and feeling its affects from this piece ... Talk about sensually alluring! Maybe I should consider recording a spoken word version to add? Hmmm... it's definitely food for thought.
You honor me with true kindness, thank you thank you.
In returned appreciation and much love,
🌹💙-B
Hey there, Mysticstones
You're a lovely site for sore eyes, this morning! Thank you deeply for your extremely moving sentiments. You really had me grinning from ear to ear as I imagined you hearing my voice and feeling its affects from this piece ... Talk about sensually alluring! Maybe I should consider recording a spoken word version to add? Hmmm... it's definitely food for thought.
You honor me with true kindness, thank you thank you.
In returned appreciation and much love,
🌹💙-B
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:31pm
Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:51pm
hahaha...
You made me giggle.... Thanks for the compliment, my DUP bff!! I deeply appreciate the support, the RL add and your kindness...
Nice knowing I 'inspire'... ;)
Much love from here to the beautiful there.
🌹💙
xoxo
You made me giggle.... Thanks for the compliment, my DUP bff!! I deeply appreciate the support, the RL add and your kindness...
Nice knowing I 'inspire'... ;)
Much love from here to the beautiful there.
🌹💙
xoxo
Re. greed is good
Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:49pm
You really put it in such perfect perspective, LilD.
You inspire me.... thank you.
I appreciate your thoughtfulness.
🌹-x
You inspire me.... thank you.
I appreciate your thoughtfulness.
🌹-x
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 12:56pm
Nice Gecko reference...
Although you made it entirely your own...
Smooth read...
Although you made it entirely your own...
Smooth read...
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Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 1:00pm
Only my movie buff buddy would catch my 'steal'... it had to be done!!
Thanks for the lovely comments, the killer RL add and for feeling my vibe, my lovely friend.
Glad you dug it.
🌹💙
xo
Thanks for the lovely comments, the killer RL add and for feeling my vibe, my lovely friend.
Glad you dug it.
🌹💙
xo
Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 1:53pm
Devil horns unto thee, forever thus...
(Also...
Nice usage of the word cum...
(Also...
Nice usage of the word cum...
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Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 2:12pm
heh heh heh.... /m\
Danke Schoen, dear Cipher.
(totalling Cheshire Cat grinning)
xoxo
Danke Schoen, dear Cipher.
(totalling Cheshire Cat grinning)
xoxo
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 1:39pm
Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 2:15pm
My lovely... what a beautiful surprise to see you! 🦋
I can't thank you enough for that kind offering of support, it really does mean so much to me.
I adore you visiting and I'm immensely grateful for the generous list add and the time you invest in reading.
Much love and many warm regards - 💙
I can't thank you enough for that kind offering of support, it really does mean so much to me.
I adore you visiting and I'm immensely grateful for the generous list add and the time you invest in reading.
Much love and many warm regards - 💙
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 2:39pm
''As my cum'' or ''as my cunt''............or both? Sounds very juicy either way. PS: tried nipple clips along the way to make the experience more painful.and also more enjoyable? Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 2:42pm
It's the high of removal of those clamps that really entices a yowl!! ;)
It could actually be either, I preferred the bluntness of cum, that's where my mindset was... hahaha... So to speak.
Thank you for sharing your fetishistic thoughts with me, there's always a learning experience somewhere!
Much obliged and many warm regards,
🌹💙 - x
It could actually be either, I preferred the bluntness of cum, that's where my mindset was... hahaha... So to speak.
Thank you for sharing your fetishistic thoughts with me, there's always a learning experience somewhere!
Much obliged and many warm regards,
🌹💙 - x
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 4:32pm
Simply delicious my dearest Lady Blue👅💦 I felt my own immense surge reading the 4th stanza. And, WOW❣WOW❣WOW❣ the ecstasy evoking power of this passage is phenomenal,
"tasting myself
on your tongue
is how life should always feel"
You inspired me to greater heights with this conglomeration of seductive words. Bravissima! 🐻💞🐰🌹
"tasting myself
on your tongue
is how life should always feel"
You inspired me to greater heights with this conglomeration of seductive words. Bravissima! 🐻💞🐰🌹
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Re: Re. greed is good
Omg... - 💞
Your overwhelming support and deeply felt warmth really makes a lady's day, dearest BB.
Getting all those Wow's definitely feels like I hit a very apt balance of emotional revealing along with my own erotic no holds barred admissions, which really is a smile worthy bit of cherished feedback. It makes for a personal high and proud achievement when I know that there's at least one other person out there that I could beautifully inspire... and especially when that person is you, my Majestic one. - 🙏🏻
Freely felt and moved to the extent that you bask within the sensuality of it all, is true bliss, indeed.
Thank you so very much for sharing your thoughtful sentiments and enormously moving emotional truth. I adore you so....
Much much love, BB!
🐰💞🐻
x
Your overwhelming support and deeply felt warmth really makes a lady's day, dearest BB.
Getting all those Wow's definitely feels like I hit a very apt balance of emotional revealing along with my own erotic no holds barred admissions, which really is a smile worthy bit of cherished feedback. It makes for a personal high and proud achievement when I know that there's at least one other person out there that I could beautifully inspire... and especially when that person is you, my Majestic one. - 🙏🏻
Freely felt and moved to the extent that you bask within the sensuality of it all, is true bliss, indeed.
Thank you so very much for sharing your thoughtful sentiments and enormously moving emotional truth. I adore you so....
Much much love, BB!
🐰💞🐻
x
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 6:53pm
Re: Re. greed is good
Ohhh Yesss, Sir!
I'm all devilishly smirking smiles here, my lovely FeNyX!
It does my heart wonders to know you're feeling the red hot effects... 🔥
Many returned blessings and much love, A.
-X
I'm all devilishly smirking smiles here, my lovely FeNyX!
It does my heart wonders to know you're feeling the red hot effects... 🔥
Many returned blessings and much love, A.
-X
Re. greed is good
4th Aug 2023 8:03pm
You are a beautiful strong smart sexy woman who needs to be loved all day and night long. You need to be receiving orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 12:10pm
You're always a bastion of betterment and positivity mixed with innuendos that always leave me chuckling.
Thank you for your charms, Francisco! There's something to be said for a continuous reminder of orgasmic bliss that really makes a point.
I appreciate you being here. You're steadfastness is valued!
🌹-B
Thank you for your charms, Francisco! There's something to be said for a continuous reminder of orgasmic bliss that really makes a point.
I appreciate you being here. You're steadfastness is valued!
🌹-B
Re: Re. greed is good
6th Aug 2023 9:11am
Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 00:05am
Re: Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 12:14pm
hahaha..
I appreciate the generous offer and I'm tickled you connected with my selfish sense of 'greed'
Thank you so much for making time to leave your takeaways with me. I enjoy it so...
🌹💙 - B
I appreciate the generous offer and I'm tickled you connected with my selfish sense of 'greed'
Thank you so much for making time to leave your takeaways with me. I enjoy it so...
🌹💙 - B
Re: Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 11:34am
Thank you for warmng yourself, my friend .. ;)
I appreciate you visiting to share that moving comment and for the very kind list add ... I'm thrilled you found some semblance of enjoyment here.
🌹💙 -B
I appreciate you visiting to share that moving comment and for the very kind list add ... I'm thrilled you found some semblance of enjoyment here.
🌹💙 -B
Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 12:17pm
What an orgasmic read, my urges kept accelerating the way you accelerated the visuals . I had to free my demon from my pant. Be it men or women , you have rightly hit the spot .. thank you ❤️❤️
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Re: Re. greed is good
hahaha... Well, from one little demon to another, I'm deeply pleased that you felt the passionate eroticism I earnestly hoped to pen. I very much attempt to authentically write in the way my mind's eye sees it and how my heart and soul inks the truth of it...
I appreciate you taking time to stop by to leave your thoughts with me.. thank you so much for that generous gesture
Nice meeting you...
regards,
🌹B
I appreciate you taking time to stop by to leave your thoughts with me.. thank you so much for that generous gesture
Nice meeting you...
regards,
🌹B
Re: Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 2:12pm
Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 3:02pm
As always, what I reach for with mere words, you paint with fire. Lust becoming a live and feral thing blurring the line between want and need - and you are very, very, good at that. And a very dear friend here. I just wanted you to know that. 🌼
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Re: Re. greed is good
5th Aug 2023 3:04pm
I cherish your thoughts, J.. thank you. and likewise, in regards to being dear.
🌹🌼-xx
🌹🌼-xx
Re. greed is good
Pain and pleasure addiction – masterfully described in poetic verse from the addict’s view. May your master maintain the control of the dosage to keep you on the edge. ⛓🪑
Useful insight for extracting information. 🕵️♂️
Useful insight for extracting information. 🕵️♂️
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Re: Re. greed is good
My heart skips a beat, now realizing there's an ongoing tally of 'useful information' that can be used for extraction.... Oh my, how my mind does wander...
There's addicted and then there's a much needed catharsis of random requirement. I mean I love chocolate but I understand that having it all the time is not only unhealthy it takes away a bit of the.... reward.
😏🍫👠 ⛓️
I fucking love having your attentively acute eyes 👀 upon my.... page.
What a thrill, indeed.
I'll be sure to keep those blinds a bit askew... 🕵🏻♂️
-xo-
—B
There's addicted and then there's a much needed catharsis of random requirement. I mean I love chocolate but I understand that having it all the time is not only unhealthy it takes away a bit of the.... reward.
😏🍫👠 ⛓️
I fucking love having your attentively acute eyes 👀 upon my.... page.
What a thrill, indeed.
I'll be sure to keep those blinds a bit askew... 🕵🏻♂️
-xo-
—B
Re. greed is good
6th Aug 2023 7:42am
I like how this starts with the feeling and then gets fleshy and wet and soiled and then begs for more, cares less about being watched and all about getting filled with hard flesh cum soaked spirituality.
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Re: Re. greed is good
6th Aug 2023 8:03pm
I think that's how a lot of intimacy might begin, with a spark of something that connects to flames and then hopefully they both become incendiary when combined... just right.
Thank you for sharing your excellent feedback. I appreciate the meaningful conversation... truly.
Best,
🌹B
Thank you for sharing your excellent feedback. I appreciate the meaningful conversation... truly.
Best,
🌹B
Re. greed is good
Self-tasting and joyous nipple abuse.....good for you.
The more your own aesthetic is known, the more likely you'll get those joys met.
The more your own aesthetic is known, the more likely you'll get those joys met.
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Re: Re. greed is good
6th Aug 2023 7:31pm
Thanks, RT...
I'm definitely not shy, it's more about finding the type of connection I need (and prefer) which drives me and in turn my want/desire to share fully of my whole self...That's the kind of freedom of disclosure ... that I crave...
I'm definitely not shy, it's more about finding the type of connection I need (and prefer) which drives me and in turn my want/desire to share fully of my whole self...That's the kind of freedom of disclosure ... that I crave...
Re: Re. greed is good
6th Aug 2023 7:42pm
Re. greed is good
11th Aug 2023 00:47am
Re: Re. greed is good
11th Aug 2023 10:56am
Yessss... sometimes being a glutton is a must!!!
Hope you had a satisfying fill.
🌹💙
Hope you had a satisfying fill.
🌹💙
Re. greed is good
A full steaming mug of hot chocolate with a hefty spoonful of cool whip on top to make a delicious blend of passionate pleasures. Truly makes me wish I could gulp down mouthfuls of your sweet nectar...
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. greed is good
15th Aug 2023 1:24am
Ooooo lala... what a treat, indeed! ;)
Thanks again, for taking the time to stop in... I'm beyond delighted that you've tasted a sampling and found the 'sweetness' therein.
It's a pleasure, JJ
🌹B
Thanks again, for taking the time to stop in... I'm beyond delighted that you've tasted a sampling and found the 'sweetness' therein.
It's a pleasure, JJ
🌹B
Re. greed is good
21st Aug 2023 2:00am
"Greed is good" or the alternate title "how to make people spill their skittles using hot erotic content making them tingle and smile with vivid imagery", or something like that.
Excuse me while I go clean up the isle.
:-)
Excuse me while I go clean up the isle.
:-)
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Re: Re. greed is good
I love it when you're tasting the 🌈 rainbow and even more when those skittle are dropped and scattered... lol... hahaha 😂
Thanks for feeling the tingles, W.
So glad you enjoyed it.
🌹 B
Thanks for feeling the tingles, W.
So glad you enjoyed it.
🌹 B
Re. greed is good
10th Feb 2024 6:52pm
Re-read greed is good. It still is (no matter what century).
hugs/love
buddhakitty.
hugs/love
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. greed is good
10th Feb 2024 6:57pm
Hee hee hee... Love that comment, bk... thank you.
I couldn't help but bump this one.... it's so very delicious, glad you enjoyed it as much as I did/do
biggest hugs...
🌹
💙
I couldn't help but bump this one.... it's so very delicious, glad you enjoyed it as much as I did/do
biggest hugs...
🌹
💙