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Part of the whole.
She was the add-on,
The last bit on the sand castle
Which would prove to be
A winner.
The last bit on the sand castle
Which would prove to be
A winner.
Published 29th Jul 2023
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30th Jul 2023 2:30pm
30th Jul 2023 2:32pm
Thanks. My preference as well, Go with a punch, not a whole bit of blah blah blah nonsense. Regards, Robert.
4th Aug 2023 6:12pm
We all need that last bit to be whole. Without it the longing and desire can never be satisfied...
When you find that perfect add-on, that's when the castle can hold up to anything and become truly beautiful...
When you find that perfect add-on, that's when the castle can hold up to anything and become truly beautiful...
4th Aug 2023 6:14pm
20th Aug 2023 7:32am
