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Hope
Part of the whole.
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Part of the whole.
She was the add-on,
The last bit on the sand castle
Which would prove to be
A winner.
Written by
robert43041
(Viking)
Published
29th Jul 2023
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#hope
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Re. Part of the whole.
Nizana
(Lauryn)
30th Jul 2023 2:30pm
That feels sweet to me when I read it. Love short poems.
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Re: Re. Part of the whole.
robert43041
(Viking)
30th Jul 2023 2:32pm
Thanks. My preference as well, Go with a punch, not a whole bit of blah blah blah nonsense. Regards, Robert.
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Re. Part of the whole.
KristinaX
4th Aug 2023 6:12pm
We all need that last bit to be whole. Without it the longing and desire can never be satisfied...
When you find that perfect add-on, that's when the castle can hold up to anything and become truly beautiful...
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Re: Re. Part of the whole.
robert43041
(Viking)
4th Aug 2023 6:14pm
Agreed. Regards, Robert.
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Re. Part of the whole.
wallyroo92
20th Aug 2023 7:32am
Nicely done as part of this minimalism venture.
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