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Fair warning
Be careful, you might steal my heart
with lines of poetry so sweet!
Your rhymes and metaphors so smart
will have me captive at your feet.
If glimpses of your soul you share,
be careful! You might woo my heart.
Your self in songs or canvas fair
can slay me like a magic dart.
If down that soulful road we start,
of you, I’ll never have enough.
Be careful! You might hold my heart,
and keeping that beast fed is tough.
If authenticity you bring,
I’ll dream of you when we’re apart.
When with your brokenness, you sing --
be careful! You might steal my heart.
with lines of poetry so sweet!
Your rhymes and metaphors so smart
will have me captive at your feet.
If glimpses of your soul you share,
be careful! You might woo my heart.
Your self in songs or canvas fair
can slay me like a magic dart.
If down that soulful road we start,
of you, I’ll never have enough.
Be careful! You might hold my heart,
and keeping that beast fed is tough.
If authenticity you bring,
I’ll dream of you when we’re apart.
When with your brokenness, you sing --
be careful! You might steal my heart.
Written by
brokentitanium
(k.)
Published 13th Apr 2023
| Edited 20th Aug 2024
Author's Note
#12/30
Artists of all sorts are so darn easy to fall in love with. Put yourself on a page, a canvas, a song.... oh my, I'm all swoony. Dedicated to all you lovely creative folks. ❤
Artists of all sorts are so darn easy to fall in love with. Put yourself on a page, a canvas, a song.... oh my, I'm all swoony. Dedicated to all you lovely creative folks. ❤
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Re. Fair warning
13th Apr 2023 00:59am
i loved this
what a well written ink
fair warning
you might steal my heart sigh.....
what a well written ink
fair warning
you might steal my heart sigh.....
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13th Apr 2023 4:59am
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13th Apr 2023 5:01am
Re. Fair warning
13th Apr 2023 5:13am
Nicely structured K...
Quite profound as well...
I...
Personally, do not get enamored very easily...
But it is possible...
:)
Frankly, well...
I have pondered the nature of...
Love...
And things...
Oh...
I was actually thinking, specifically of this,
concept, in relation to songs...
Heard a song on movie that just...
Brought up so many memories and direct connections...
I thought about how many
hearts were moved by the song...
Quite profound as well...
I...
Personally, do not get enamored very easily...
But it is possible...
:)
Frankly, well...
I have pondered the nature of...
Love...
And things...
Oh...
I was actually thinking, specifically of this,
concept, in relation to songs...
Heard a song on movie that just...
Brought up so many memories and direct connections...
I thought about how many
hearts were moved by the song...
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Re: Re. Fair warning
13th Apr 2023 5:26am
Oh, music is my biggest weakness of all! I can easily get intrigued, smitten, and hyper-focused on someone who pours their heart out in song or poem.... What a cool thought, wondering how many hearts have been moved by the same song!
Thanks for the read & comment.
❤️k
Thanks for the read & comment.
❤️k
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13th Apr 2023 7:17pm
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15th Apr 2023 1:09am
Thank you for sharing your idea of writing quaterns in the NaPo discussion... the form has helped me write on difficult days a few times now! Cheers,
❤️k
❤️k
Re. Fair warning
17th Apr 2023 5:55am
Re. Fair warning
19th May 2023 11:56pm
Wonderful heart touching piece broken. Many writers here do reach out with certain words and verses and you've done an excellent tribute here.
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