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The Whole Enchilada
Don’t leave home
Call it in
Wait
Forget that
This is an art poem
I teased you with parts
Some saw nude women that needed waxing
Some saw tires
Here’s the whole enchilada
Feast on it
No sides needed
It’s all here
Call it in
Wait
Forget that
This is an art poem
I teased you with parts
Some saw nude women that needed waxing
Some saw tires
Here’s the whole enchilada
Feast on it
No sides needed
It’s all here
Author's Note
Acrylic and gouache on cold pressed paper by Poetspeak
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The Whole Enchilada
15th Jan 2023 6:13pm
"Young Love in a Dumpster Fire"
I dunno, that's just how it struck me. Great piece.
❤️k
I dunno, that's just how it struck me. Great piece.
❤️k
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15th Jan 2023 6:15pm
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2023 7:05pm
Now I gotta rethink it all.....
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15th Jan 2023 8:02pm
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2023 00:25am
I got nothin. Still only see what I saw before on both sides..... which must be a good thing!!
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17th Jan 2023 2:07pm
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2023 3:13pm
Me too!
More art please 🙂
More art please 🙂
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17th Jan 2023 3:31pm
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15th Jan 2023 8:23pm
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15th Jan 2023 8:44pm
Does anyone buy coffee table books?
Yeah, one of these days
Thx LDF
APPRECIATE 🤠❤
Yeah, one of these days
Thx LDF
APPRECIATE 🤠❤
Re. The Whole Enchilada
15th Jan 2023 11:54pm
I see laundry hanging from a line towards the top. A group of people on my right side, and tires piled up on my left side ( just what I see).
Like.
hugs,
buddhakitty
Like.
hugs,
buddhakitty
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Re: Re. The Whole Enchilada
16th Jan 2023 00:27am
Everyone seems to see the tires, nude women too.
If I had a car, I be all set
Thx for your observations bk
❤
If I had a car, I be all set
Thx for your observations bk
❤
Re. The Whole Enchilada
16th Jan 2023 2:05am
The naked body of a woman is beautiful sexy masterpiece. Keep on writing.
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16th Jan 2023 2:06am
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16th Jan 2023 2:08am
Re. The Whole Enchilada
17th Jan 2023 3:56am
I know a lot about enchiladas buddy. hahaha
They are a pain in the ass to make but
if you're patient enough you have a great dinner!!
Lots going on in that piece and great color choices.
I enjoy that it's a bigger one. Took some time I'm sure - maybe?
So worth the time - like enchiladas!
They are a pain in the ass to make but
if you're patient enough you have a great dinner!!
Lots going on in that piece and great color choices.
I enjoy that it's a bigger one. Took some time I'm sure - maybe?
So worth the time - like enchiladas!
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I'm glad you like the BIG FORMAT painting. It's a 9x12 job.
I did spend more time on this one. I'm really into writing on painted surfaces lately. It's fun because I can show smaller sections and then tye whole thing. Thses paintings tell stories !!
Thx Hot Sauce. I'll bet yours are da bomb !
🤠💥💯
I did spend more time on this one. I'm really into writing on painted surfaces lately. It's fun because I can show smaller sections and then tye whole thing. Thses paintings tell stories !!
Thx Hot Sauce. I'll bet yours are da bomb !
🤠💥💯
Re. The Whole Enchilada
17th Jan 2023 6:58am
For a second I wanted to squint my eyes and find these women (like the Rorschach test).
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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17th Jan 2023 1:51pm
Re. The Whole Enchilada
18th Jan 2023 00:32am
Some 'saw tires?' What do you mean by this remark, Poet? Also, do you like meat, cheese or both in your Enchilada?!
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18th Jan 2023 1:32am
There’s a section with lines over gray paint that some here said looks like tires. I agree even though I wasn’t intending to paint tires. Abstract painting is subjective to the viewers. Usually different from each other but this time many concurred on tires.
I like all that you mentioned but probably chicken the most. It’s not good for me to eat too much red meat !!
I like all that you mentioned but probably chicken the most. It’s not good for me to eat too much red meat !!
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Makes sense now. Btw, those Mexican (I took liberties) Enchiladas did look rather delicious when I Googled them; still do, in fact!
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18th Jan 2023 1:52am
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19th Jan 2023 2:14am
Actually, sir, I see a man standing in the middle of a crowded apartment complex alleyway, where people string their clothesline across from all floors, and drape their linens out etc. While the bustle goes on all around him. Loud cats, cursing neighbors, etc.
But, eh, it's just me seeing things.
Keep doing what you do, amigo. We will keep admiring you for it.
But, eh, it's just me seeing things.
Keep doing what you do, amigo. We will keep admiring you for it.
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19th Jan 2023 2:36am
You're the second poet to see a clothesline.
I'm so illiterate when it comes to painting, I'm always amazed what people see. I paint flat on my living room table. Self taught and stubborn about technique. Somehow it usually comes out okay.
I'm baffled but I'll take it.
Thx Styx
I'm so illiterate when it comes to painting, I'm always amazed what people see. I paint flat on my living room table. Self taught and stubborn about technique. Somehow it usually comes out okay.
I'm baffled but I'll take it.
Thx Styx
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19th Jan 2023 2:40am
I didn't read any replies above mine. So maybe we are on to something with what we see?
Hey people help dissect me too at times. It's cool!
Hey people help dissect me too at times. It's cool!
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19th Jan 2023 3:09am
That's true
Sometimes we don't know our own power
It takes a village
I love that expression
Sometimes we don't know our own power
It takes a village
I love that expression