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If I were a tootsie pop
First break my protective shell
Taking me home and unwrapping me
Hard at first, but making you hard too
Softened by your kisses
Eventually yielding
You find the soft and chewy center
Proud of your accomplishment
It's so gratifying
This sweet taste to be savored
While I am taking you in.
So happy for you to be the stick
This Tootsie Pop
that you penetrate and lick.
Melts again and again
As you push in deeper
Until you fill me completely
Making me whole once more...
But now always wanting a taste.
To take me home and unwrap me.
So just remember...
Tootsie Pops are addictive.
Taking me home and unwrapping me
Hard at first, but making you hard too
Softened by your kisses
Eventually yielding
You find the soft and chewy center
Proud of your accomplishment
It's so gratifying
This sweet taste to be savored
While I am taking you in.
So happy for you to be the stick
This Tootsie Pop
that you penetrate and lick.
Melts again and again
As you push in deeper
Until you fill me completely
Making me whole once more...
But now always wanting a taste.
To take me home and unwrap me.
So just remember...
Tootsie Pops are addictive.
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Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:02am
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26th Oct 2022 1:11am
Haha, damn right! it's going to take a lot more than three licks. We are definitely talking about an all night endeavor to get to the center (over and over again). ;) And why the hell isn't candy a theme damnit! I mean c'mon.
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:09am
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26th Oct 2022 1:20am
Not to worry, I have mounds, almond joy, baklava, skor... you name it, I aim to please. But still a Tootsie Pop just sounds so sexy and cute doesn't it. You know you want one. You can always start with that and end with... * nevermind, innocent look *
Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:41am
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26th Oct 2022 1:46am
I know what you meant. * eye roll * lol Geez, you know blondes are actually smart right? :p (don't believe the jokes damnit)
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:10am
I'd devour you and I've never heard of a Tootsie pop
I'm just always hungry and horny lol
Love and light gorgeous
Ron xx
I'm just always hungry and horny lol
Love and light gorgeous
Ron xx
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:22am
Never heard of a Tootsie Pop. lol You know now that I think of it, I don't ever remember hearing about them in the UK either. :p I am here to teach you about new things Ron. So you can devour all that 'knowledge'. * cough * Yes, I know how much you like candy. ;)
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:22am
image and verse combine to work their power...a very pleasurable experience....
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:28am
First that avatar is so damn cute! I really liked the image and thought it complimented the verse perfectly also. ;) It's all about being a pleasurable experience, because that's what I want to provide. ;) Well and some super dark and twisted stuff too. I love Halloween.
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26th Oct 2022 1:59am
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26th Oct 2022 2:07am
Aww, Paxton is adorable... definitely scheming something though. lol That face, he's up to no good I can tell. Stimulation is always good... mind and body. ;)
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:42am
Wonderful poem
Even your combination of these sweets made the hard shell and inside the sweet, sticky and delicious liquid makes me navigate in the meaning of what is hidden between the lines
you mastered the poem and was able to make a reader imagine the scene to between your lines
Even your combination of these sweets made the hard shell and inside the sweet, sticky and delicious liquid makes me navigate in the meaning of what is hidden between the lines
you mastered the poem and was able to make a reader imagine the scene to between your lines
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 1:54am
I have to admit I do love baklava, and I bet you get some of the best there. That and Moroccan mint tea, that's so sweet and awesome. There is so much between the lines my dear MP and I am so happy you can see that and the scene that's playing out there. I love to take the reader with me. I am betting you have a sweet tooth as well; I can tell. ;)
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26th Oct 2022 2:04am
Haha, yeah that was a mistake I am so sure. * cough* But a BIG LICK is more meaningful than a BIG LIKE right? Just saying... I always love the many types of BIG LIKEs though so I will just take them both. Perhaps I am greedy that way, but worth it damnit! Alright short and sweet. ;)
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26th Oct 2022 2:36am
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26th Oct 2022 3:00pm
Jugs * eye roll * Do people still say that? lol Well I suppose you answered that question didn't you.
Not this time, but she is damn cute. I don't normally go for other girls but that smile (yep the smile) really make me think yeah I would definitely go there. :p
Blonde on blonde action, what a show right? ;)
Not this time, but she is damn cute. I don't normally go for other girls but that smile (yep the smile) really make me think yeah I would definitely go there. :p
Blonde on blonde action, what a show right? ;)
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Yeah
Not to mention one of the greatest albums of all time by Bob Dylan was entitled "Blonde on Blonde" .....Legendary, all of you !
Actually Positively 4th Street wasn't on Blonde on Blonde, it was on Greatest Hits !!
Blonde on Blonde still iconic and legendary
Not to mention one of the greatest albums of all time by Bob Dylan was entitled "Blonde on Blonde" .....Legendary, all of you !
Actually Positively 4th Street wasn't on Blonde on Blonde, it was on Greatest Hits !!
Blonde on Blonde still iconic and legendary
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 3:06pm
What? I didn't know that album, perhaps I know the songs but that sounds awesome. I will be listening to that for sure too. You guys just keep giving me great music. That's awesome. "Legendary, all of you" Damn right! ;) (well I don't know about all, I do know some real bitches lol but hey that can be fun for you guys too right? lol)
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28th Oct 2022 5:16pm
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28th Oct 2022 5:19pm
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 2:32am
Listening to the song Take me Home Tonight. KristinaX you are my sexy tootsie pop. You make want do naughty things to you. Light my fire why don't you. Keep on writing.
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26th Oct 2022 3:00pm
What a wonderful and perfect song to accompany this. Fantastic, listening to it now. 80s music is awesome, that's 80s right? I think so. lol Well, I do love being a sexy tootsie pop with such an incredibly rewarding center. It's always so intensely thrilling getting to the center. lol Certainly thrilling for me. :p People are always telling me I make them want to do naughty things. lol But I love making people want to do naughty thing. Keeping the fires burning always. ;)
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27th Oct 2022 2:06am
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 2:38am
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26th Oct 2022 3:01pm
Hey Mary, your comments always make me smile every time. I can always tell you definitely get it. The passion, lust, and desires that lead to the sweetest things in life. If you are going to be candy then it definitely should be savored right? ;) Someone needs to take their time to taste all the sweetness and intensely naughty taste. Damn, I get excited so easily. lol So happy you loved it. "Nailed it!" perfect...
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 3:03pm
Haha, no restraint that's the spirit damnit. My other Purring one, not posted yet, is more the one to make pussy jokes on perhaps. lol Oh yeah, a Tootsie Pop sounds so seductive and inspires that lust to lick it but a Tootsie Roll, yeah that's not the same. :p Loving these song references, giving me some really great ones to listen to. Damn right! the sweetest stuff oozes out of me when I am super excited. lol You might get bitten too but most people like it. :p Tongue gymnastics is one of the best sports ever if you ask me. Eroticsensual word crafting, damn that sounds so HOT! Some addictions are worth it. ;) Sticky, oh yeah... just keeps that sweet taste going longer... and oh boy can it go for a long time.
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Special K is so cute, I love that. You better be flattered damnit! since you inspired this... I would surely be pouting if you weren't. My thoughts, oh god - let's not talk about that. Getting to the center of my thoughts is truly a crazy sexy scary journey into the unknown. Stop it, it's not SUPERIOR and would not exist without yours as inspiration. You would definitely go insane living in my mind for a while but it would be a hell of a thrilling time and leave you with memories that last a lifetime (and beyond). ;) I love that you enjoy my writing and the admiration is so sweet. Biggest fan, what? I have fans? that's so awesome. :p I love that too. And now I know there are many types of tootsie pops.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yd5KukyAu8Y (it's Halloween I couldn't help myself lol)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yd5KukyAu8Y (it's Halloween I couldn't help myself lol)
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 4:07pm
It's not really about credit for me but I appreciate everything you said so much. I never expected much accolades for my writing so it's pretty amazing to feel that. I think each person has their own way of expressing how something affected them. The inspiration to respond is a way of recognizing those things you mentioned for me. And if people can have fun with that it's okay with me.
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Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 3:57pm
Easy to entice the sweet tooth Kristina. Such a fun and sexy spill 🖤🖤🖤
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26th Oct 2022 4:28pm
Everyone loves fun and sexy right? Or they should damnit! I think it's pretty cute too. ;) And enticing the sweet tooth is something I love to do, the rewards of being seductive and sweet are enormous, so to speak. lol Yeah, that probably went through my head in the way you would expect leaving me quite distracted. And where the hell have you been? :p Sorry I like giving you hell... I have lots of hell to give. :p (and it's Halloween too)
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 4:47pm
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26th Oct 2022 5:20pm
Looks like a tootsie pop to me Robert. I definitely wanted the right pic for the job and that was it for me. I mean I am generally not into girls but I could definitely lick her to get to the center I think. Now look what you have done, distracting me again... Geez, I am truly hopeless in some regards. lol But what an amazing distraction it is, even if I feel like a break from work is in order now. Just saying... :p
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26th Oct 2022 8:43pm
Have you ever tried those 'Hot Pocket' snackers? I noticed them being advertised when I watched David Beckham help MLS side, LA Galaxy win the MLS CUP back in 2011, I think.
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
26th Oct 2022 9:33pm
Haha, I may have tried hot pockets before. ;) (No not going into details on that lol) But I would rather be a hot pocket for the most part. Just saying... And hot pockets are always being advertised. ;)
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26th Oct 2022 10:11pm
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
27th Oct 2022 00:14am
Well I always love a WOW! Ted. And I really appreciate you guys so much, it's always so nice to have encouraging and fun interactions and to contribute in a meaningful way however I can. If you have learned something from me that makes me really happy. So thank you for saying that!
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
27th Oct 2022 1:45am
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27th Oct 2022 1:18pm
Hey there Jacob, I love that you could experience the imagery with me because I am here to turn you on! ;) Everyone loves a tootsie pop right? Take your time though because it's so fun getting to the gooey center. I know I sure do get super excited when someone is... * nevermind, naughty look *
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27th Oct 2022 5:54pm
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
27th Oct 2022 6:19pm
I love this,you definitely have a special talent for turning up the heat 🥵🔥 the visuals in this are enough to melt hard steel 😄
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
27th Oct 2022 6:47pm
I do love turning up the heat, I am very good at melting hard steel but that's after I have thoroughly used it in every possible way. ;) That said I love the COLD, so I need someone that can last a long time to try and cool me off. lol That definitely takes time and still I heat back up fast so it doesn't last long... So the high Energy Efficiency Ratio rating is very important. lol And oh that COLD stare that comes with BDSM... that's a different rating. :p
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
28th Oct 2022 4:52pm
Perfect timing just before the houses are bombarded with sugar. Who says Halloween is all treats for only the children?
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
28th Oct 2022 5:16pm
Haha, no doubt; so MUCH sugar... but oh yeah, I need other treats for sure. Dress up like a sexy demon or witch, going out and seeing just how many sins can take place in one night. And prying eyes just make it that much more thrilling. Making love on the dance floor in the dirtiest dance or on a chair for one but so perfect for two. In the alley, shadows having sex under the dim light. In the cemetery, waking the dead because what better place to be on Halloween. ;) So many possibilities... Oh yeah not all treats are for children.
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
28th Oct 2022 5:14pm
As you push in deeper
Great line, brings it all into focus
BIG JUGS LIKE
YES, JUGS STILL IN SERVICE !!!
Great line, brings it all into focus
BIG JUGS LIKE
YES, JUGS STILL IN SERVICE !!!
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
28th Oct 2022 5:22pm
I think everyone is very focused when pushing in deeper. :p And on wanting to push in too. You know how I love putting things in focus. Definitely certain things. lol Jugs... shaking my head. So crude. Yeah I know it's on purpose. :p And jugs are always in service and always in high demand. So many different kinds too. Just depends on what you are into. :p All of them, right?
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28th Oct 2022 5:32pm
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
30th Oct 2022 2:11am
Wait, implying licking to the soft chewy center. No one makes it all the way without crunching through that last piece of hard candy shell. Savoring the mixture of diamond shard like delicious, sweet crystals and chewy tootsie pop.
Yes addictive, until the tummy ache or sugar high gets you.
But you are right, getting the wrapper off and then working on the hard cover, does lead to that soft center. How many licks does it take to get to the “Tootsie Pop” center? Although, in your case you’d regenerate and alas a new tootsie pop to lick, and then another, and another!! LOL.
Yes addictive, until the tummy ache or sugar high gets you.
But you are right, getting the wrapper off and then working on the hard cover, does lead to that soft center. How many licks does it take to get to the “Tootsie Pop” center? Although, in your case you’d regenerate and alas a new tootsie pop to lick, and then another, and another!! LOL.
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30th Oct 2022 3:31pm
Haha, oh God - the imagery there... well yes licking the soft chewy center is always awesome right? making it all gooey. And that hard shell is so much fun to get through. lol Biting, oh yeah... what can I say, sometimes you just have to bite. You are just so excited to get to the center. Diamond shards may cut but they sure do shine and seduce. Sweet crystals taste so good... Crystal is such a pretty name. (Is that a stripper name? well stripper names are pretty :p) Chewy tootsie pops, they can be anything you want. Addictive always, no exceptions.
So get that wrapper off and start licking. :p Depends on how good you are with your tongue how many licks. And damn right regenerate... I can take as many Os as can be given and more... lol
So get that wrapper off and start licking. :p Depends on how good you are with your tongue how many licks. And damn right regenerate... I can take as many Os as can be given and more... lol
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
30th Oct 2022 1:41pm
Hello Kristina,
You expressed your feelings of love, passion and sensuality in most beautiful way. Three cheers and hug from me.
K
You expressed your feelings of love, passion and sensuality in most beautiful way. Three cheers and hug from me.
K
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Re: Re. If I were a tootsie pop
30th Oct 2022 3:25pm
Well hey KS, glad you came by to get a tootsie pop for Halloween. What better candy is there? ;) So much love, passion, and sensuality to share with you... in every way. :p (sometimes beautiful, sometimes dark, sometimes chaotic, sometimes who knows. ;) ) I want those cheers damnit and love the hugs too. I hope you are having a marvelous Halloween weekend and getting ALL kinds of sweet stuff laid on you. :p
Re. If I were a tootsie pop
15th Nov 2022 4:05am
Kristina, that was a fun and titillating write. I enjoyed your sense of humor and yhe provocative lines engaging all of us.
Great work
Great work
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15th Nov 2022 12:41pm
Fun and titillating is exactly what I wanted so I am happy it was a fun read Wally. I have a quirky sense of humor but hopefully I will write some more humorous ones in the future. ;) And of course the provocative lines will definitely come. :p I really appreciate you stopping by to have a tootsie pop. How many licks does it take to... * nevermind, innocent look *
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15th Nov 2022 1:31pm
Haha, that has to be one of the shortest comments ever. lol I am going to take Rereply as a good thing. Like you read it again because you needed a tootsie pop fix. :p