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The road to Hell (with Reading)
The bus rushes to hell, welcome
Under the hot blue sun it burns..
Radiator grilles with daggers
Bared their teeth in an inanimate grimace.
Faces are pressed against the glass, spreading,
Holes of pale faces are opened in screams
We were convinced - we should like it,
We were told: the track is without borders.
Hope is left only by those who enter -
There are no doors at all for the exit...
The insanely wailing sounds of motion
Bubbling host of souls is rushing to Hell.
The motor roars godlessly, as if to drill out,
It tries to answer in sick brains,
If only someone could shoot at the tires
And send us to shreds in a ditch.
The hood smokes, panic howls in the cabin,
The eyes of madmen are obscured by darkness,
But the ancient mechanics is inescapable -
The road to Hell is long and hard,
And the chariot that rotates the blades
Curved knives, cutting flesh on the way,
The bus, red-hot, rushes to the abyss,
And to the end we can't get off it...
Under the hot blue sun it burns..
Radiator grilles with daggers
Bared their teeth in an inanimate grimace.
Faces are pressed against the glass, spreading,
Holes of pale faces are opened in screams
We were convinced - we should like it,
We were told: the track is without borders.
Hope is left only by those who enter -
There are no doors at all for the exit...
The insanely wailing sounds of motion
Bubbling host of souls is rushing to Hell.
The motor roars godlessly, as if to drill out,
It tries to answer in sick brains,
If only someone could shoot at the tires
And send us to shreds in a ditch.
The hood smokes, panic howls in the cabin,
The eyes of madmen are obscured by darkness,
But the ancient mechanics is inescapable -
The road to Hell is long and hard,
And the chariot that rotates the blades
Curved knives, cutting flesh on the way,
The bus, red-hot, rushes to the abyss,
And to the end we can't get off it...
Author's Note
Bought the wrong ticket again, but somehow I ended up back in the Underground... Kind of feels like an episode of The Twilight Zone. ;)
Happy Halloween weekend everyone! Be safe and be very bad... ;)
Video and music royalty free credit to Karl Casey @ White Bat Audio. Whoever you are Karl, you are one awesome dude; thanks!
Happy Halloween weekend everyone! Be safe and be very bad... ;)
Video and music royalty free credit to Karl Casey @ White Bat Audio. Whoever you are Karl, you are one awesome dude; thanks!
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Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 2:09pm
Righteous evil and mayhem
Plays like a typical commute in NYC
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
Plays like a typical commute in NYC
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 2:41pm
So much evil and mayhem to go around. :p Just like a typical commute in NYC. lol But there is always something to see on the ride right? And where would the world be without crazy people in it. I add lots of crazy to do my part damnit! Still trying to recover from my bus ride to Hell last night. lol It was a fun but very long ride, non-stop. And you always need to get off. It's important to have that destination if you ask me. :p
Re: Re. The road to Hell
2nd Nov 2022 1:21pm
Sometimes getting off is the best choice in more ways than one.
When in doubt head downtown and hang with the freaks.
Its always Halloween down there.
You nailed this one Kx
When in doubt head downtown and hang with the freaks.
Its always Halloween down there.
You nailed this one Kx
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Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 2:12pm
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 2:46pm
Well damn! you said a Hell of a lot there in 5 words. 'best' Hell yeah! love that. So you like the darkness I see... I take it you bought the same ticket so you could come see me. I have to admit I actually like how it came out but it's mostly because I figured out how to use something called a 'de-clicker' lol No not joking, that's what it's called damnit! To magically disappear the mouth clicky sounds and stuff. :p New mobile phone mics pick up everything. They are too damn good. lol
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 5:10pm
Maybe one day we'll exchange visits
Soon I will be in another country because I will leave Morocco
Maybe there will come a chance
To make you explore Morocco on your visit to my country
Soon I will be in another country because I will leave Morocco
Maybe there will come a chance
To make you explore Morocco on your visit to my country
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 5:18pm
Where are you going? If I may ask.
Definitely a new life adventure and those are so amazing.
I will absolutely explore Morocco one day, that's for sure. ;)
I watched more videos, just awesome.
Definitely a new life adventure and those are so amazing.
I will absolutely explore Morocco one day, that's for sure. ;)
I watched more videos, just awesome.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 3:10pm
Anarchy and confusion... the story of my life. Always expressing myself in different ways. ;) Really love that you liked it. Very impatient at throwing them together but fortunately it's not that hard. A microcosm of society, ah yes! there is definitely a lot said in this one about a lot of things. We are all the road to somewhere. Some times that can be very pleasurable and other times it can definitely be Hell. But we have to keep going forward no matter what into that mysterious unknown. It certainly keeps you alive, while trying to kill you perhaps, and guessing sometimes. Love the 'Excellent job!' Ted, Thanks so much.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 3:47pm
Always the best road trip when you are get on the bus with me SMS. ;) Might be going to Hell but going to try out every sin on the way. :p
Wow! Holy crap, that's awesome! I need to make an epic horror movie. I love horror movies. I could totally make this into an awesome movie full of gore that would haunt your nightmares till your last day. Sorry you got me excited there...
Perhaps mayhem is a new nickname... I have so many here. (some I know I don't want to know but anyway). Visualize the mayhem unfolding... absolutely.
Adrenaline rush of darkness and evil. Hell yeah! Great title, I might have to write that too.
There is no end, I won't allow it.
There are always vacancies on the road to Hell.
Totally lucked out, that's exactly how the music was on the video so it just worked out great. So rare that happens. Mostly I just used the same royalty free music track from google in the past. I was really happy for something different.
Wow! Holy crap, that's awesome! I need to make an epic horror movie. I love horror movies. I could totally make this into an awesome movie full of gore that would haunt your nightmares till your last day. Sorry you got me excited there...
Perhaps mayhem is a new nickname... I have so many here. (some I know I don't want to know but anyway). Visualize the mayhem unfolding... absolutely.
Adrenaline rush of darkness and evil. Hell yeah! Great title, I might have to write that too.
There is no end, I won't allow it.
There are always vacancies on the road to Hell.
Totally lucked out, that's exactly how the music was on the video so it just worked out great. So rare that happens. Mostly I just used the same royalty free music track from google in the past. I was really happy for something different.
Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 3:40pm
The opening picture; Damn, if i had known that was you taking my picture from across the aisle, I would have looked up and smiled! I was tired, of haunting. Lol
As for your hot ride... where were you heading?! This result of torturous poetry is actually rather inviting! The energy that it emits, even if dark, is like feeding a hunger than we deny we crave. Like a ride-through at a haunted house themed park. Even as we scream, we crave for more!
You really outdid yourself, with the excellent, vivid details throughout this write. Although I can't see you as a victim in this. More like the culprit! Maybe you subconsciously got the right ticket?!
It really is a great write, Kristina. I love the details and the terror.
As for your hot ride... where were you heading?! This result of torturous poetry is actually rather inviting! The energy that it emits, even if dark, is like feeding a hunger than we deny we crave. Like a ride-through at a haunted house themed park. Even as we scream, we crave for more!
You really outdid yourself, with the excellent, vivid details throughout this write. Although I can't see you as a victim in this. More like the culprit! Maybe you subconsciously got the right ticket?!
It really is a great write, Kristina. I love the details and the terror.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 4:06pm
Haha! Oh yeah, that was me! how did you not know. lol Look up sometimes damnit. I know you love legs but c'mon there is a lot more up above. :p You know how much I love being haunted.
Always heading to Hell apparently. They miss me every time I leave and they make damn sure I get another ticket. It's free and I think it's a prize and then wham... back in Hell! I am here to torture you Styx. Crossed the river Styx so many times, wading through the dark waters... Sometimes slimy wrapping around my legs and working it's way... * nevermind, innocent look * Possibly too inviting. lol Denying the dark, just makes you crave it more sometimes it seems. Haunted house themed park, might have to write that. :p
Pushing the boundaries of Hell, because I get bored easily. I love vivid details, especially when riding. 'More like the culprit' Shhhhhhhhhhh.... you weren't supposed to say that damnit! geez. How will I give out all these tickets. My ticket was written with hell fire. It's like a Willy Wonka golden ticket. You will love it, promise. lol So much terror.
Always heading to Hell apparently. They miss me every time I leave and they make damn sure I get another ticket. It's free and I think it's a prize and then wham... back in Hell! I am here to torture you Styx. Crossed the river Styx so many times, wading through the dark waters... Sometimes slimy wrapping around my legs and working it's way... * nevermind, innocent look * Possibly too inviting. lol Denying the dark, just makes you crave it more sometimes it seems. Haunted house themed park, might have to write that. :p
Pushing the boundaries of Hell, because I get bored easily. I love vivid details, especially when riding. 'More like the culprit' Shhhhhhhhhhh.... you weren't supposed to say that damnit! geez. How will I give out all these tickets. My ticket was written with hell fire. It's like a Willy Wonka golden ticket. You will love it, promise. lol So much terror.
Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 4:36pm
Take me to a world I've never lived before
Dark and fantasy world
enjoy reading
Dark and fantasy world
enjoy reading
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 4:56pm
Hey MP! The road leads everywhere but so often into a Dark and fantasy world.
And what a great title that is. ;) Have to try living everywhere even if just for a moment.
Try everything, experience every culture, different places, tastes, smells, touch, sights.
The darkness contains so many things and things can be so much different than in the light.
I am really glad you got a ticket to come and visit me. ;)
And what a great title that is. ;) Have to try living everywhere even if just for a moment.
Try everything, experience every culture, different places, tastes, smells, touch, sights.
The darkness contains so many things and things can be so much different than in the light.
I am really glad you got a ticket to come and visit me. ;)
Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 4:37pm
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 4:56pm
Well if you are going to say one word then I really love how you said that. lol
It made me feel pretty damn good. :p and so many hearts too... Lovely.
It made me feel pretty damn good. :p and so many hearts too... Lovely.
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 5:03pm
Your writing deserves more than that
I suffice with the hearts, because my tongue is unable to express
I suffice with the hearts, because my tongue is unable to express
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 5:14pm
That's such an incredible thing to say. You made me speechless too, so there. :p
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 ;)
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 ;)
Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 4:43pm
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 4:57pm
Love that evil Jack-o-Lantern look you got going on. Looks totally sinister and naughty.
Waiting to devour someone in those orange flames. So happy you got a ticket too,
to come by and visit me for Halloween. I know you love it like I do. So many creatures of the night to party with. So many dark fantasies to live out. These rituals of the night! Perhaps visit the grave yard and help wake the dead.
Waiting to devour someone in those orange flames. So happy you got a ticket too,
to come by and visit me for Halloween. I know you love it like I do. So many creatures of the night to party with. So many dark fantasies to live out. These rituals of the night! Perhaps visit the grave yard and help wake the dead.
Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 5:57pm
Can't wait to go to Hell...all my friends are there.
Excellent job Kristina throughout and tastes so sweet and devilishly delicious to have a taster before the main event tomorrow evening.
For when writing dark then go the whole hog and embrace it, let it consume one like an open armed willing disciple.
So said this 'good' catholic boy.
See you tomorrow night. and thanks for the offering.
Excellent job Kristina throughout and tastes so sweet and devilishly delicious to have a taster before the main event tomorrow evening.
For when writing dark then go the whole hog and embrace it, let it consume one like an open armed willing disciple.
So said this 'good' catholic boy.
See you tomorrow night. and thanks for the offering.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 8:53pm
There are so many ways to get there. The road to Hell is always open but just know it always takes a toll. So have a lot of cash on you, in case the credit cards aren't working. Hell rarely gives you much of a limit and the interest is ridiculously high. Make sure you read the terms before you sign your soul away. Tons of small print written in Latin, Aramaic, or god knows what. Something you can't read for sure. lol But hey at least we all have friends there. Want to give you something that will burn your lips because hot and spicy is so delicious. The main event, oh yeah! It's always amazing... tomorrow evening indeed. Hope you have some devilish plans. Absolutely have to embrace the darkness, it embraced me after all. Always a willing disciple I suppose. ;) 'good' catholic boy. :p Oh boy... not touching that.
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 9:01pm
I have some diabolical plans to present and perform tomorrow evening and tomorrow morning as well.
See you on the flipside Kristina and sweet dreams.
See you on the flipside Kristina and sweet dreams.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 9:05pm
Diabolical plans to present and perform huh? Well that sure has me curious! I have to admit always kind of sad the day after... why can't every day be Halloween? ;)
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 9:16pm
Kristina if every day was Halloween there wouldn't be any goodies left to dish out.
But there is a dark offering in my Halloween goody bag that maybe of interest to you a poem called Nightmaria and dedicated to your engaging self.
You can get something for nothing in this troubled world and tomorrow morning there for you to view.
Thanks Kristina for backing my poetry corner (however dark) on past poems.
But there is a dark offering in my Halloween goody bag that maybe of interest to you a poem called Nightmaria and dedicated to your engaging self.
You can get something for nothing in this troubled world and tomorrow morning there for you to view.
Thanks Kristina for backing my poetry corner (however dark) on past poems.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 9:50pm
There are ALWAYS goodies to be had and dish out... And the best ones are sweet (among other things, which shall remain unsaid lol), but they aren't candy. ;) A dark offering, oh Hell yeah! Nightmaria. Now that's got my name on it for sure. Wait? What? Maybe it actually has my name on it. lol Now you are just being a big tease. Damn! so excited to read that now! Another thing to look forward to on Halloween. ;) I am getting back around to reading and you know how much I love the dark.
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 9:59pm
Will put up in about 10/11 hours and another dark hokum one, then off to work.
Just gutted about that eight hour delay and can only up two at a time between posts.
Ho hum, c'est la vie.
Guess it stops this site from being swamped with swamp thing poetry.
Just gutted about that eight hour delay and can only up two at a time between posts.
Ho hum, c'est la vie.
Guess it stops this site from being swamped with swamp thing poetry.
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Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 6:19pm
Iesu Grist! Actually, if there was an Underground in my town it would look very similar to that. Your State's Tourist Board should hire you to do voice-overs for their promotional adverts. Dark deeds indeed. Enjoyed. Much.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 8:46pm
Iesu Grist - well I don't need to translate that Rob. lol But I LOVE the enthusiasm and surprise. lol Oh man! your town sounds absolutely incredible. Like the subway would be located on the 3rd plane of Hell. Damn! Yeah, I could talk all kinds of seriously dark and sinister stuff to attract people. Dark 'Dirty deeds done dirt cheap'... Okay you made me think of the song. :p Tourism is never cheap damnit. Especially in Hell, you pay with your body, mind, and soul. There will always be a ticket waiting for you to my Hell Rob. ;) I know how you like the torture, and what I can I say I do too. Love that you enjoyed it!
Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 8:44pm
Been there done that but hell kicked me out. Next I tried heaven but they wanted no part of me. So here I stay, haunted by your prose and haunting you in your sleep. You'll know when I'm around as I trickle you nose and make you sneeze.
A truly devilish poem that only darkness could write. Yes I feel the heat, smell the tires burning, and the engine running red hot, the anti-freeze boiling over. Perfectly composed and paced with imagery the haunts the mind. Awed, and ready for a road trip.
A truly devilish poem that only darkness could write. Yes I feel the heat, smell the tires burning, and the engine running red hot, the anti-freeze boiling over. Perfectly composed and paced with imagery the haunts the mind. Awed, and ready for a road trip.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 9:01pm
Hey I just said something about Hell's desire to keep me on earth. Oh boy, so many reasons for that apparently. Been there so many times and still here I am. So I guess I am in good company. Haunting me to sleep, oh that was you. lol Yes, and I love the kind of sneeze that just about blows your head off. Why is that so satisfying and feels so good. Well I am weird. :p So darkness is my newest nickname then, I like it. lol Devilish poem, yes he gave me the tickets to distribute. 'feel the heat' yeah you do, I know you do. Smell the tires burning, oooo love it. the engine running red hot anti-freeze boiling over. You totally get it... But nothing can stop this bus. It runs on Hell fire. I am here to haunt your mind, as I always do. ;) And who doesn't love a road trip. Always ready for another one...
Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 9:59pm
Behold the sight seeing cruise in hell, invite fiends, and family. A once in a lifetime chance to see friends and relatives you don't like, and nothing cooks a steak like brimstone. We're all nudists here, clothing optional as we strip all your sins bare, and the mud baths of lava with leave you looking years younger. Visit all 9 levels of hell in their majestic beauty, you will not be disappointed. You will want to return again and again, so make your reservations now, spaces are selling out fast. ............ Road trip to hell? I'm your huckleberry.
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
30th Oct 2022 10:46pm
Well you sure know how to sell it!!! I will give away these tickets so much faster now. See friends and relatives you don't like, they are the steaks cooking on brimstone. (nevermind, I didn't say that) All nudists because the clothes just burn off. :p Stripping all your sins bare, now you are just showing off. Mud baths of lava do keep you looking so young. Not a single blemish left and you lose weight too. lol So many levels to keep you busy and always the darkest thrills, that's why you hear all those screams. You will never want to leave. Not that you can anyway. :p Definitely make your reservations because people are dying to get in. ;) Let's go. (again)
Re. The road to Hell
31st Oct 2022 1:31am
Hi Kristina:)
Loved this whole production. The background music was perfect and didn't take away
from your voice. It added an extra layer to this piece of Halloween madness. hahaha
Loved the whole thing. I always admire people who take the time to do audio.
I'm a horrible reader - stumble over my words all the time - so I really appreciate the
effort anyone takes to do a recording.
Thanks for posting amiga!!
Loved this whole production. The background music was perfect and didn't take away
from your voice. It added an extra layer to this piece of Halloween madness. hahaha
Loved the whole thing. I always admire people who take the time to do audio.
I'm a horrible reader - stumble over my words all the time - so I really appreciate the
effort anyone takes to do a recording.
Thanks for posting amiga!!
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Re: Re. The road to Hell
31st Oct 2022 12:06pm
When you say it like that, it sounds so official. :p I totally lucked out on the video and background music. The two came together exactly like that which was perfect because it made things easier and better. :p So happy you joined into my Halloween madness. lol We could certainly cause a lot of sexy trouble together. haha. As vampires, witches, demons, not angels. :p You just don't want to melt hearts with your voice is all. See, I know everything. lol I definitely kept a ticket aside for you because I know what an awesome travel buddy you make. I really appreciate the wonderful comment and vote of confidence Adel. ;)
Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
31st Oct 2022 1:45am
Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
31st Oct 2022 1:03pm
Very good at being very bad. lol And getting into trouble too. :p I always seem to be on the road to Hell. Some people say it's a short road but when the Devil wants you here then it becomes never ending. I adore Halloween, it was an eventful weekend. Although definitely got no sleep Saturday night so I might pay for that. Sleep been generally bad lately anyway so may as well use that time to do very bad things. lol
Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
1st Nov 2022 3:48am
We can do naughty things to each other. If I dared you would you put on a whipped cream bikini?
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
1st Nov 2022 12:18pm
Haha, that's an interesting question... a whipped cream bikini. mmmmm. I could wear one. :p I have been dared to do some crazy stuff that's for sure. lol
Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
31st Oct 2022 11:54am
Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
31st Oct 2022 1:09pm
The highway is what everyone takes. I take the back roads damnit! Way more interesting and full of the craziest stuff ever, like me. lol I am going to listen to Highway to Hell now though. The Devil won't let me through those toll booths anyway on the highway, loves having me here. In a different Hell, but the back roads seem to have way more tolls but I have the transit pass... It just takes committing tons of sins to keep a balance on it. Fortunately I know so many... Happy Halloween DaVinci, I hope you get into all kinds of trouble tonight. lol :p
Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
31st Oct 2022 12:24pm
This was epic! The music made me feel like I was watching an 80’s horror movie.loved it! cranking out hellish rpm’s unstoppable straight to hell🔥Plus your voice,I was not expecting a southern accent 😄❤️
Oh and happy Halloween Kristina🔥🎃🔥🎃🔥
Oh and happy Halloween Kristina🔥🎃🔥🎃🔥
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
31st Oct 2022 1:28pm
Epic! Oh Hell yeah! I so lucked out with the music. I love it! too. 80's horror movie, damn right! :p The bus has a very good speaker system constantly playing screams of damned souls. Those ancient mechanics are unstoppable, the road to Hell never closes... And for never being maintained that old bus will still never breakdown despite potholes that lead to Hell below as well. A taste of it. Haha, not expecting huh? lol Well I love to surprise damnit! Keeps things interesting... ;) Still feeling pretty good about that 'Epic!' Love it! Happy Halloween! jigg...
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
31st Oct 2022 6:19pm
Well hey love stoned faery. ;) It's nice to meet you. I love how upbeat your comment is, such a great energy. I couldn't help but smile reading it. I love being fun and exciting, and I can tell you are too. Oh yeah, I wanted something good and in the spirit for Halloween. All the evil, horror, blood, and gore. Like travel in NYC, haha... For me it was the UK while growing up. Oh I love the Tube. That underworld is something special and definitely so many beings. Tons of stories and stories always being written too. Snacks always attract the beings from the shadows, but really you are the snack right? lol Gruesome places can be so much fun though.
Always looking to inspire... dig it up. ;) Write about it. :p Then you will be thinking damn I miss it so much. lol Just saying... Beyond creative and chills... LOVE IT! Thank you so much.
Always looking to inspire... dig it up. ;) Write about it. :p Then you will be thinking damn I miss it so much. lol Just saying... Beyond creative and chills... LOVE IT! Thank you so much.
Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
1st Nov 2022 9:08pm
Hello Kristine,
The story is amazing and voice is a magic. I love both and you as well.
Kiss,
KS
The story is amazing and voice is a magic. I love both and you as well.
Kiss,
KS
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
1st Nov 2022 10:48pm
Ah, the story of my life is the road to Hell perhaps. Glad you found this one to be an amazing story. ;) There are certainly so many stories in life and I am here to share some of those with you my dear KS. Voice is magic, well I adore that and that you love them both. Well damn! and me too. :p But I am pretty loveable when not driving you crazy. lol Still crazy can be so much fun... While normal is just mundane and boring, right? Really appreciate the love and kiss. ;) And so happy you got a ticket for my trip to Hell.
Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
2nd Nov 2022 4:13am
This mother trucking AMAZING Kristina. Very well written and spoken 🖤🖤
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
2nd Nov 2022 12:59pm
Mother trucking AMAZING, oh hell yeah! Now that's an awesome compliment. You definitely want a ride on my bus. ;p So happy you do too. lol Hell can be really nice in the Fall and Winter. * cough * As I hand you a ticket. It's just like a Willy Wonka golden ticket but better I promise. :p But burning with me is always an experience, you know you want it. ;) It might be painful but it will be the most pleasure you have ever had. Really so happy you liked it Wh1skey and to see you...
Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
16th Nov 2022 11:13pm
Kristina, that was a pretty awesome reading. It reminded me of the "abandon all hope ye who enter here" line. Your unique style and delivery is always entertaining.
Great work!
Great work!
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
17th Nov 2022 2:00pm
I must admit, I do like how this one turned out. ;) Awesome really makes me feel good about it. "abandon all hope" exactly. Once you get aboard my bus to Hell. Now there is a metro/subway too. There were just to many passengers going there with me. I saved you a ticket for sure. I am so happy you like my weird style. :p And found the delivery entertaining, I love that. Thank you so much for taking this ride with me and sharing your thoughts on the way. ;)
Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
Anonymous
26th Dec 2022 10:40pm
that was enjoyable and lead me to remember a short trip on short bus to hell..now i must dig it off the pillars and post it here for you...fucking A
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
27th Dec 2022 00:27am
Well I always want it to be enjoyable. (with certain exceptions) A short trip on bus to hell. Now I definitely want to read that one. I am so glad you are going to dig it off the pillars for me. Fucking A indeed. Is this a true experience bus trip or more of a poetic one? I really hope you do find it damnit! Now I am super curious. The road to Hell is always the most interesting isn't it?
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2022 00:58am
poetic insight into a demented cerebellum driven by prompt. i know where it is... i dont know if i can post more today thou..
i think i have a "army O Darkness'inspired one here.. ill message link if so..wafers to deviate..
i think i have a "army O Darkness'inspired one here.. ill message link if so..wafers to deviate..
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Re: Re. The road to Hell (with Reading)
27th Dec 2022 1:10am
Demented cerebellum, oh boy do I know that one. And oh yes! definitely send me the link. I love 'Army of Darkness' too. It will probably be tomorrow before I get to anything anyway.