To The End of The Road

Just a query or an unconscious conflict straying out into the border world's of our known thoughts.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

Dear BK,

You sly minx you! Probably a bit of both if I’m honest…
Thank you for this insightful comment. I’m very grateful for your thoughts. A wonderful delight to see you today!  H🌷

Greetings for your expressive poem
I enjoyed reading it several times
Thank you for sharing your words with us

Dear M,

Thank you very much for your kind comment. That was very thoughtful and I really appreciate your visit today. H🌷

Dear K,

Thank you very much. I think if I listen carefully those answers will be presented. I’m very grateful for your read and loving comment. Thank you once again. H🌷

Dear T,

You honor me in a way I’m sure I don’t deserve. But I’m still going to take that lovely compliment and run away with it! 😊. Thank you so much for your support. I’m so indebted to you. H🌷

God wants us to stay in His light, therefore it may shine through you. Just like it has in this wonderful write you spilled and shared with us!

Dear T,

I believe He does want us in His light. When we dwell in the shadows is when things get sticky. I’m positively gobsmacked by your lovely comment, and very humbled by it. Thank you very much. H🌷

Everything is a yin yang
Take the alternate route I say, you never know what’s waiting for you on the road less traveled.

BIG LIKE

Dear PS,

I know you’re right. One of these days I’m going to do just that. I’ll meet you on the way! 😉 Thank you so much for your never ending encouragement and support. I’d be lost without it.
H🌷

Dear R,

Yes it is. You’ve positively nailed it. That was my intent when writing it so I’m glad it made its way through. Thank you, your lovely compliment has moved me immeasurably. I’m very grateful. Thank you again. H🌷

Cousin,
Don’t give up, and do not walk in anyones shadow.  You be the shadow caster instead. I Really enjoyed they way u played with your words here, your pen is mighty 👍🏻
Love Jackie ♥️♥️♥️🎃

Dear J,

Thank you for that push! Shadow caster. How wonderful! I like that notion a lot. I think I just might take that on. Thank you so much for your kindness and support. Who says he works is going rotten when there are so many gorgeous friends like all of you! Thank you. H🌷

It's never "just" a query, is it? These are serious thoughts, and it seems to me that they come from a desire to still travel together....
Sometimes it just takes a little longer for one to catch up. No need to backtrack, but stay on your path and keep shining your own (amazing!) light back for the other to follow.
Lovely to read this thought-provoking write. 😊
❤️k

Dear K,

No, it’s never a query. It is a desire to travel together. But there’s nothing worse than being trapped in a car that wants to take two separate routes. Backtracking, never! Advance advance advance (plus I know you’re right behind me and kicking my arse if I dare swerve😊) As always, I’m beyond grateful for your kindness and insight. X
H🌷

“To The End of The Road” – Till death do us part.

This is bittersweet – Like two trees in a forest. If they both are the same height, at some point one will experience shade while the other is in the sun and vice versa. But most of the time they share day and night. However, if one tree is taller than its adjacent tree, it always has the sun, whereas the shorter can be cast in the shade. The shorter tree remains part of the forest, but its growth is stunted.  Longer analogy than I was thinking.

A sacrifice is being made, and hopefully it is for the greater good, but this poem makes me think you are being short changed. Like your name, you have honor.

A very good poem.

Dear L,

You got it. What good is the vow if it can be cast aside? I loved your analogy of the trees. How meaningful, thoughtful and true. While I’ve acknowledged my shortcomings knowing they can be improved, both sides always need reflection and compromise. Im very touched by your lovely comment. I find this extremely meaningful. Thank you very much. H🌷

Hi H

So sorry about being late to this write!!
Bad Adelphina. LOL

You're writing is such a window into your soul amiga. Felt all of this
and the ending line resonates and echoes to me. More than you can possibly know:)
Always a pleasure to read your stuff!!
So excited when I saw you on my updates today.

Haunting write!!!

Dear A,

You’re right on time! It’s always a joy whenever you get here. I’m glad you mention the last line. I hesitated for a second about including it but it is what I felt, so in it went.  I’m very honored by your thoughts and lovely compliments. It’s just the boost I needed. Thank you very much. H🌷

Great poem, Honoria, and lots to think about. I think I would find this scenario unbearable- but that's just me.

Dear L,

No, you’re in good company. It’s a cruddy situation no matter how you slice and dice but I really appreciate your kind comment and constant support. It made my evening. Thank you. H🌷

loved this but I kept reading different lines in my mind. Personal ascetics of course, but I will write those line down if you want to read them.  

Dear R,

Thank you for your kind comment. I’m very flattered.  I would enjoy reading your your lines of thought. Thank you for wanting to share them. I look forward to it. Thank you again. H🌷

I'm not in the habit of writing  my interpretations of another's poem, in fact I never done anything like this before. Except I heard these lines read to me [by your voice?] and they wouldn't leave until I wrote them down. I am also quite adept at translating big words into smaller one as will be most apparent [call me bilingual]  So w/o further ado
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A journey of a lifetime
an adventure yet to begin.

The good times, always welcome.
The bad times, a test strength and courage

Why when one heart forges onward
and another remains behind?-

our paths once converges, then slits in two
As a duo, was this only a part of our trek?

My thoughts implode from self-chatter.
My heart bleeds from self-doubt.

A long dark tunnel unexpected
perhaps we'll see illumination at the end.

Or just maybe,  
the skies of overcast remain,
where in hazy grey we see just silhouettes

If that’s all the illumination I’m to be given-
I will walk within your shadow.

Dear R,

I think this is lovely. I really appreciate your time to do this and like how you’ve phrased this for an entirely different meter. It kind of reads for me, like a romantic style poet(ry). Thank you very much for sharing this. Wonderful rewrite. 😊
H🌷

Thank you for your gracious reply, for not hating my presumptuousness, and for writing a wonderful poem to begin with.  

Excellent write from start to finish... great flow... layers of depth... engaging... killer closing couplet...

Dear L,

Thank you very much. I’m honored by your comments. I’m glad you liked the last lines. I thought they might be too old fashioned but I’m kind of an old fashioned gal. Thank you again. H🌷

Hey there, H
Your pen is always impactful; this poem was certainly no exception. I felt the deep emotion running throughout, filling me with reminders of my own bittersweet experience(s). Yes that last line.... is wow!

You leave the reader with much to ponder and explore, within.

Outstanding work, dear lady
🌹💙
-B

Dear BV,

Thank you for this lovely comment and compliment. I feel minuscule in your poetic presence for sure. Your ever ready kind support is always such a treat. While the experiences may be bittersweet I hope the reminders are pleasant. Thank you so much for your lovely reply. Made my night. H🌷

Somehow it seems the end of the road is always in sight.
And yet the road still goes on and on.
Perhaps it's a very difficult journey much of the time.
But it sure is an adventure of a lifetime...
So many scenic overlooks that are just so beautiful.
And so many rest stops for when you just have to take a break.
The good times are so amazing but also hard to find sometimes.
Bad times certainly have a way of making you break down.
Sometimes you feel left behind on the side of the road.
One heart forging onward while the other is hitchhiking.
Trying to catch up but perhaps it seems impossible.
Not knowing where life will take you next.
It seems the mind always has so much to say, too much.
And the heart listens intently to all that self doubt.
When you are a duo, it feels like that will last a lifetime.
But so often there are potholes and bumps in the road.
Maybe they even total the car making it so hard to repair.
It seems you will never make it out of the long dark tunnel.
However there is a light at the end of the tunnel.
And even if you have to walk, you will make it there.
There will be blue skies again, the storm clouds will clear.
I suppose what I am trying to say...

I think someone is lucky to walk in your shadow.
Because it means they get to be close to you.
And don't ever underestimate how much that's worth.
Don't let yourself be left on the side of the road.
Because you should always be carried forward.
So perhaps there is a detour or a delay...
But you will make it through it.
And whatever lies ahead can be so beautiful.
No matter what happens you will always be amazing.
So don't let anyone keep you from moving forward.
Or from having the appreciation and love you deserve.

Dear K,

Love your thoughtful reply. The longer I go on the more I think I’ve figured things out and that’s when I realize how much I really don’t know. 😬
I do agree there is an honor to walking beside someone. In light or shadow the connection can be what you make of it. It’s the dreadful feeling of being left behind on the side of the road that diminishes me and I think therein lies the underlying meaning behind the poem. Shedding that negativity is the key- some days successful and others, well, could use improvement. The good news, I’ll keep trying😊
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. It has lifted and warmed my heart.
H🌷

Dear I,

If only the crazy 8 ball could be relied upon! I so agree and appreciate your thoughts. You’ve succinctly organized the evolution of relationships. Your closing thought is especially thoughtful as it’s so relatable and made me chuckle for its truth. Thank you for your lovely comment. H🌷

The journey never ends.
Thoughtful ink.

Dear O,

It really doesn’t end does it? Just when you think you can take a rest…you’ve got to get right back in the game. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. H🌷

"The bad times, test the strength of the commitment." oh they sure do.
It's a relatable piece, making us reflect on certain aspects of life, past and present. How much can we compromise knowing it's never a perfect road, but one that tests our hearts and spirits.

Intriguing piece Honoria.

Dear W,

Compromise. The name of the game right there. Always such a balancing act that never quite seems to balance. 🤷🏻‍♀️I am so glad for your thoughts on this write. Thank you so much and for your generous RL list.
Such a pleasure to see you today. H🌷

don't feel as if you need to walk in anyone's shadow, you deserve to walk in the sunshine.

Dear J,

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I’m encouraged by this and really grateful to you. Thank you for adding this to your RL. I’m much obliged. 😊
H🌷

In Zen practice there is no path to follow...one must create your own path in each everchanging moment. Beautiful poem H.

🙏 Mo

Dear M,

This is such a great piece of information to read. Sometimes being so caught up in a situation one can’t see anything but gloom. Creating a new path in an ever changing moment provides a whole different understanding to moving forward I hadn’t considered. Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, generous RL add and lovely compliment.  I’m flattered and very grateful. H🌷

The pleasure was all mine H.
Thank you for your wonderful words.

🙏 Mo

I think this is a wonderful poem!
-Bonnie

Dear B,

Thank you for this lovely comment and RL add. A delightful way to start the day and I’m very grateful to you for making it so. H🌷

I though of imploding thoughts and being buried beneath that self-doubt.  All I could feel is wanting to find where the light comes and start digging my way to it.
However, your ending lines made me feel like I'd rather be buried in my self-doubt than walk in anyone's shadow.
I felt this deep in my heart H, awesome piece.

LJ

Dear LJ,

I love that, finding that sliver of light and digging your way toward it. Totally get not wanting to walk in anyones shadow. No one should want to do that and yet…I always appreciate your comments. They impact me so much. Thank you for putting this on your RL. I’m honored.
Thank you again. H🌷

Miss Honoria
i love your profie picture
but whats important that
the quality of this poem
nice choice of words and combination
i really enjoyed it

Dear M,

Thank you very much for your lovely comment. It’s brightened my morning considerably and I thank you once again for your kindness. H🌷

Dear H,

I so enjoyed reading your poem, more than twice.
It left me with a couple of questions:

"If one heart forges onward
and another remains immobile-"
...
Which one is the heart that bleeds from self-doubt?

And when one emerges from the dark tunnel,
and walks into enough light to cast a shadow,
are not both moving in each other's orbits?
Is there no hope for both to join in each other's glow?

Dear VB,

Aaaahhhh my little grass hopper you postulate excellent questions! 😊

For me, the heart that remains immobile bleeds the most because the one that forged onward left.

While I’m merging from that long tunnel might allow each to move in each others orbits they are merely existing in the sake space.

All that suggested I firmly believe they can join together again and take joy in each others glow. But, will they…
I love your thoughtfulness! It makes me take a second look at my own meanings and that helps clarify things in my own head. Thank you for this delicious comment! H🌷

Great writing
The consistency and harmony of the verses
I enjoyed reading your poem
You can read my poem (Life goes on)
It has some answers for your poem inquiries

Dear MP,

Thank you for your lovely comment and I look very forward to reading your suggested poem. If you’re giving me answers I’m taking them! 😉
Thank you again. H🌷