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Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
I'm worth it
But there's a short stay rate
Like fast food
Good going down
But makes you sorry later on
Best to enjoy me in the moment
The road is calling
Let's drink to today
The beer is cold
And this cowboy is singing your song
But there's a short stay rate
Like fast food
Good going down
But makes you sorry later on
Best to enjoy me in the moment
The road is calling
Let's drink to today
The beer is cold
And this cowboy is singing your song
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Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
4th Oct 2022 7:05pm
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4th Oct 2022 7:11pm
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4th Oct 2022 7:06pm
"Baby baby don't get hooked on me... " (there's a funny story about that Mac Davis song)
Love how you closed with a romantic ending after speaking your truth. Great write.
Love how you closed with a romantic ending after speaking your truth. Great write.
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4th Oct 2022 7:14pm
I think like a cowboy but probably the furthest thing from one.
But poems are my fantasy life so what the fuck...
Johnny Cash another hero
We both loved and love black
Grab a cold one Pink
Great comment
Thx
🤠❤
But poems are my fantasy life so what the fuck...
Johnny Cash another hero
We both loved and love black
Grab a cold one Pink
Great comment
Thx
🤠❤
Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
4th Oct 2022 8:13pm
We like this, every encounter isn't destine to end in love. Those mirages of oasis in the desert are eventually realized and passed. Tight, live for the moment
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4th Oct 2022 8:45pm
You know it ME
Couple of long necks and a few shots of whiskey and rock n' roll in her pants ...
Thx yo
Couple of long necks and a few shots of whiskey and rock n' roll in her pants ...
Thx yo
Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
5th Oct 2022 00:51am
You got to believe in love, but you can't believe in a guarantee. Keep on writing.
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5th Oct 2022 1:16am
Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
5th Oct 2022 00:52am
like any good meal
affairs ov the heart
are best enjoyed
before affection reaches
its sell by date
xo
it's wonderful reading you're still you
affairs ov the heart
are best enjoyed
before affection reaches
its sell by date
xo
it's wonderful reading you're still you
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Re: Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
No sense letting things spoil
Squeeze out every drop
Great to see you back babe
Yeah I'm still me
Edgy and direct
Xx
Squeeze out every drop
Great to see you back babe
Yeah I'm still me
Edgy and direct
Xx
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5th Oct 2022 1:32am
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Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
5th Oct 2022 2:59am
hello there dearest Poet this is sexy and true to yourself
living in the moment is all we can do if you look at things honestly...
beautiful 💕
living in the moment is all we can do if you look at things honestly...
beautiful 💕
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5th Oct 2022 3:07am
I approach life just looking at what I'm given to work with.
I'm a very in the moment bloke.
Like doing art, give me a bunch of anything and I'll make something of it ...
BIG THANKS BRENDA
APPRECIATE
💞
I'm a very in the moment bloke.
Like doing art, give me a bunch of anything and I'll make something of it ...
BIG THANKS BRENDA
APPRECIATE
💞
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5th Oct 2022 3:27am
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5th Oct 2022 3:31am
Me too
What a surprise
She brings it
Now we need Devlin and Tommielynn back
The old gang Firestarters. ..
Xx
What a surprise
She brings it
Now we need Devlin and Tommielynn back
The old gang Firestarters. ..
Xx
Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
5th Oct 2022 3:23am
Dear PS,
Too late. I’m smitten. 😊
As of late, it feels like we’re all “in the moment” sort of folks. Just passing through. Short trips. Tons of baggage. Great piece. H🌷
Too late. I’m smitten. 😊
As of late, it feels like we’re all “in the moment” sort of folks. Just passing through. Short trips. Tons of baggage. Great piece. H🌷
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5th Oct 2022 3:29am
Dear H,
It's true what you say.
I don't plan too far out and try to keep life simple.
I've fought a ton of battles and I'm tired of bullshit.
Cash and carry, off the grid, I like it there
Thx ❤
It's true what you say.
I don't plan too far out and try to keep life simple.
I've fought a ton of battles and I'm tired of bullshit.
Cash and carry, off the grid, I like it there
Thx ❤
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5th Oct 2022 6:08pm
Saddle up and grab a rope!
...make room big fat juicy burgers because Poet is on a roll .....like tumbleweed
Beer, Whiskey, and ''RYE'' gets this Rye-Stoned Cowboy spilling his matter-of-fact poetry like no other.
His daddy's a Pistol and this Son of a Gun ain't afraid to pull the trigger with brazen verse.
Poet is a DUP Poetic Outlaw Killer.
Slayed Another!!!
...make room big fat juicy burgers because Poet is on a roll .....like tumbleweed
Beer, Whiskey, and ''RYE'' gets this Rye-Stoned Cowboy spilling his matter-of-fact poetry like no other.
His daddy's a Pistol and this Son of a Gun ain't afraid to pull the trigger with brazen verse.
Poet is a DUP Poetic Outlaw Killer.
Slayed Another!!!
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5th Oct 2022 6:15pm
Yeah, you got me son
Just spilling and thrilling
It's good to be a poet, taking poetic license with myself
Thx Feet
Appreciate
Just spilling and thrilling
It's good to be a poet, taking poetic license with myself
Thx Feet
Appreciate
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Nov 2022 6:45pm
5th Oct 2022 8:08pm
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5th Oct 2022 11:37pm
Probably repost my Motel with No Bibles poem next.
Not a lot of flowery speak from me.
I'm direct and value oriented
Thx Os
Appreciate
Not a lot of flowery speak from me.
I'm direct and value oriented
Thx Os
Appreciate
Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
6th Oct 2022 1:49am
Well - you know I'm from Texas cowboy. hahaha
Confidence is attractive at any age in my opinion.
You got lots.
Great write amigo.
Confidence is attractive at any age in my opinion.
You got lots.
Great write amigo.
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6th Oct 2022 2:00am
New York and Texas could merge well.
Lotta people with something to say
Thanks 🔥
Lotta people with something to say
Thanks 🔥
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Re. Don't Fall in Love With Me ( Redux )
12th Oct 2022 7:48pm
Like appetizers, give 'em a taste so they'll come back for more.
I see what you did there.
BIG LIKE.
I see what you did there.
BIG LIKE.
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12th Oct 2022 7:57pm