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Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
Remember those years in the tiny walk up
You were writing erotica hoping to get discovered
I was working on my doctorate in sin
Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
That was dingy NYC
Long before organic
When Holly was working the Lincoln Tunnel entrance
You could get a quick suck for five bucks
Nobody cared if she had too many teeth
or if she was really a she
Life was less complicated back then
Holly bought mouthwash in industrial quantities
Hygiene on the fly still important
A woman still needs some dignity
If any money was left over at the end of the month
We went to the Scorpion bar on 14th between B and C
No hipsters back then
Just real people in dollar store clothes
Happy for a few snorts and a couple of rot gut chasers
There's no happy ending
Continuance is all you get
It was a soiled life
We got older and then got real jobs
Then we got better clothes
The mac and cheese life rolled over
Looking back it was romantic in a dime store way
We laughed at our poverty
Grateful to have had the moment
A love affair in sordid NYC
We didn't overdose
That was good
You were writing erotica hoping to get discovered
I was working on my doctorate in sin
Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
That was dingy NYC
Long before organic
When Holly was working the Lincoln Tunnel entrance
You could get a quick suck for five bucks
Nobody cared if she had too many teeth
or if she was really a she
Life was less complicated back then
Holly bought mouthwash in industrial quantities
Hygiene on the fly still important
A woman still needs some dignity
If any money was left over at the end of the month
We went to the Scorpion bar on 14th between B and C
No hipsters back then
Just real people in dollar store clothes
Happy for a few snorts and a couple of rot gut chasers
There's no happy ending
Continuance is all you get
It was a soiled life
We got older and then got real jobs
Then we got better clothes
The mac and cheese life rolled over
Looking back it was romantic in a dime store way
We laughed at our poverty
Grateful to have had the moment
A love affair in sordid NYC
We didn't overdose
That was good
Written by
PoetSpeak
Published 6th Oct 2022
Author's Note
Inspired by my hero LOU REED
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 3:55am
hello dearest Poet there is a lot to be appreciated looking back
experience being one thing can't buy that...
I love this sexy write ❤️
experience being one thing can't buy that...
I love this sexy write ❤️
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 3:59am
I moved into NYC In late 1970s
A lot of wild times I can look back on and say I did it
Always a city rogue
This was a fun one to write
Lou Reed would have been proud R.I.P.
You should have been there ..
Thx B
❤
A lot of wild times I can look back on and say I did it
Always a city rogue
This was a fun one to write
Lou Reed would have been proud R.I.P.
You should have been there ..
Thx B
❤
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 7:01am
This does indeed have a Lou Reed feel to it. Nicely done.
Mac and cheese is forever.
Mac and cheese is forever.
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 10:45am
I have so much identity to Lou Reed
Dude blew my fucking mind with realism
Thx Pink
Dude blew my fucking mind with realism
Thx Pink
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 7:23am
This was wonderful and fascinating. Reminds me of my days growing up as a poor kid. There is a bit of romance and beauty when one comes from the gutter.
Great ink, friend 😁
Great ink, friend 😁
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 10:50am
Indeed there is DC
I miss dingy NYC
Fucking place is homogenized and like a mall now
I can't leave though, city needs me to report its story
Thanks for the nod Mister
I miss dingy NYC
Fucking place is homogenized and like a mall now
I can't leave though, city needs me to report its story
Thanks for the nod Mister
Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
18th Feb 2023 2:45pm
I know. ''Clean and proper now'' but there is still a stinky smell lingering around.
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Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 8:01am
Extremely human poem, both good and bad but those labels are impossible to apply here. If you don't mind I would like to nominate this poem for the month. Of course, the last time I did that, it wasn't a complete success so idk, I'll let you think on it for a while. Of course, I do think PG poems are preferred but this poem is so magnificently human....
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 11:08am
I would be honored APPS, it's one of my favorite writes and I'd like more people to see it. I really appreciate you wanting to nominate it.
Fuck PG
THANKS
Fuck PG
THANKS
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 11:32am
It was so unique in it's sleazy ways back then.
I remember walking on West 42nd between Broadway and 7th at night thinking this is the end of the world as we know it ....
Long live the upstairs Peep Shows !!
Lou Reed and Andy Warhol told it best
Thx Ted
P.S. your Times Square poem ROCKED
I remember walking on West 42nd between Broadway and 7th at night thinking this is the end of the world as we know it ....
Long live the upstairs Peep Shows !!
Lou Reed and Andy Warhol told it best
Thx Ted
P.S. your Times Square poem ROCKED
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6th Oct 2022 11:18am
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 11:35am
Times Square was a frigging toilet back then but you had to experience it to believe it. I'm glad I did. All that stuff us gone now.
Appreciate your approval Steve
Listen to Lou Reed's NEW YORK album from 1989 I believe ...
Appreciate your approval Steve
Listen to Lou Reed's NEW YORK album from 1989 I believe ...
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 1:03pm
Wish the adult theaters were back so you can enjoy your woman's company in there. Keep on writing.
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6th Oct 2022 1:10pm
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6th Oct 2022 9:05pm
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6th Oct 2022 9:07pm
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 1:18pm
Great storytelling, grit and romance (maybe the romance is in the freedom). As a small town kid, I only went there in my mind, but I have a good imagination... (my rural husband calls me a city girl, it's hilarious).
It's true there's no happily ever after... just a chance to keep going and grab bits of happy along the way. Better than the alternative.
Give my regards to Holly
❤k
It's true there's no happily ever after... just a chance to keep going and grab bits of happy along the way. Better than the alternative.
Give my regards to Holly
❤k
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 1:41pm
Yeah
You had to see it to believe it back then.
Midnight Cowboy on steroids
Wonderfully depraved and dangerous.
Coulda used face masks back then but you might have missed a suck of a lifetime …
Holly Ruled, went in to become a dental hygienist…
😃😝🤠
You had to see it to believe it back then.
Midnight Cowboy on steroids
Wonderfully depraved and dangerous.
Coulda used face masks back then but you might have missed a suck of a lifetime …
Holly Ruled, went in to become a dental hygienist…
😃😝🤠
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
6th Oct 2022 2:57pm
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
6th Oct 2022 3:03pm
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 1:41am
Take a walk on the wild side.... Awesome visuals, NYC is always a wild surfboard ride through the sea of humanity...
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 1:53am
It's all here. Been here my whole adult life. It's dirty, chaotic and terribly exciting...
Nice to see you ML
THX
Nice to see you ML
THX
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 1:55am
Hey PS
Such a gritty and iconic write. I can feel the edginess vibe throughout the whole piece.
No sugar coating makes it authentic amigo.
Great one!
Such a gritty and iconic write. I can feel the edginess vibe throughout the whole piece.
No sugar coating makes it authentic amigo.
Great one!
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 2:03am
Living here and having all the music and the city was really run down then so these characters are based on truth. Wild times I wouldn't trade for anything. Coming home at 2am on a work night in a taxi with the driver blasting Salsa, I'm going what is that music. I found out. So much went on musically. I was really into straight ahead hard bop jazz to during period. I could see amazing players in little smokey clubs. I was in heaven ....
My BIG LIKE ERA
THX ADEL AKA 🔥
My BIG LIKE ERA
THX ADEL AKA 🔥
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 8:27am
Dear PS,
Nothing like it anywhere else on the planet. I thoroughly enjoyed this write and the memories you’ve shared. Gritty, dirty, fantastic! More.
H🌷
Nothing like it anywhere else on the planet. I thoroughly enjoyed this write and the memories you’ve shared. Gritty, dirty, fantastic! More.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 12:49pm
Dear H,
Thanks so much
What a time that was in the BIG BAD APPLE
Poem says it all and Lou Reed said it to me, I was the messenger
Stay tuned, more to come
X
Thanks so much
What a time that was in the BIG BAD APPLE
Poem says it all and Lou Reed said it to me, I was the messenger
Stay tuned, more to come
X
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 8:33pm
You tell a great story. I have never been to New York, you always sell the apple well. Maybe one day. You talk of the side of New york that has character, no gentrifed nonsense.
Regards
James
Regards
James
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
7th Oct 2022 8:41pm
Yeah, I'm a meat and potatoes dude
I eat organic but don't need to advertise it
New York City is a state of mind
The United Nations is here for a reason.
It's not pretty here bit is iconic
Whatever you want, it can be had for a price.
This was another side of life back when
Portable hand sanitizer would have come in handy...
Appreciate the comment James
Thanks
I eat organic but don't need to advertise it
New York City is a state of mind
The United Nations is here for a reason.
It's not pretty here bit is iconic
Whatever you want, it can be had for a price.
This was another side of life back when
Portable hand sanitizer would have come in handy...
Appreciate the comment James
Thanks
Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
28th Oct 2022 11:18pm
You really captured the essence of an era in a big city back in those days. Perhaps it’s the music, the scene, but you really brought this to life.
BIG LIKE
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
28th Oct 2022 11:43pm
Yes Wally
It was like that back then with some story embellishment of course.
Guess all that Lou Reed music I listen too gave me license for my own tales
Appreciate the BIG LIKE
Nice to get them back
Thx W
It was like that back then with some story embellishment of course.
Guess all that Lou Reed music I listen too gave me license for my own tales
Appreciate the BIG LIKE
Nice to get them back
Thx W
Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
29th Oct 2022 3:54am
My bad. I forgot hit RL and will surely vote for poem of the month.
Poem of the year too.
Poem of the year too.
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Re: Re. Running projection at that porn theater in Times Square
29th Oct 2022 3:57am