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Soaked sheets in the aftermath
Dream or reality? ... Reality or dream?
Wet lips and a sensual moan.
Everything is in a fog, darkens in the eyes,
There is no way back.
Gentle fingers slide over the skin
Spreading their sweet poison.
My heart beats wildly in my chest
Don't wake yet! My God! I beg you!
The blood boils, runs through the veins
And every muscle in the body trembles.
From the kisses, the body arched in an instant.
You go down so boldly!
Souls intertwined in a web of passion,
Everything we want is now in our power!
Bodies dance in a frantic rhythm.
Tossing and turning, embracing me tightly
Soaked sheets in the aftermath
On the lips a constant stream flows
My temperature steadily rises like the sun
Waking up out of breath, Fucked by a dream
Wet lips and a sensual moan.
Everything is in a fog, darkens in the eyes,
There is no way back.
Gentle fingers slide over the skin
Spreading their sweet poison.
My heart beats wildly in my chest
Don't wake yet! My God! I beg you!
The blood boils, runs through the veins
And every muscle in the body trembles.
From the kisses, the body arched in an instant.
You go down so boldly!
Souls intertwined in a web of passion,
Everything we want is now in our power!
Bodies dance in a frantic rhythm.
Tossing and turning, embracing me tightly
Soaked sheets in the aftermath
On the lips a constant stream flows
My temperature steadily rises like the sun
Waking up out of breath, Fucked by a dream
Author's Note
Although I don't plan on entering I noticed the Wet Dreams contest and this is what popped in my mind.
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8th Sep 2022 9:06pm
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8th Sep 2022 9:19pm
Haha, that's so cute how you used fxxk. I really appreciate you sparing my innocent eyes such an obscene word Ron. :p (yeah I know the x's mean other stuff too but I wanted to tease you anyway) Oh hell yeah! I love sexy as fxxk. And this definitely comes * cough * from experience. lol You better believe girls can get worked up in a dream too. So I just wanted to spill something on that.
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This has made me forget everything thing else going on at the moment in the world. I was drawn into your fantasy and it caused the heart to race. Perfection, because nothing quite feels like a woman on your fingertips …finger licking good.
Keith
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
8th Sep 2022 9:22pm
Damn right! That's what I want, you to forget everything else in the world. There is only me. ;) Drawing you into my fantasy like a wet dream. Causing your heart to race, because to me that's perfection. I love that you can dream with me Keith. And a woman on the fingertips, oh yeah that feels and tastes good doesn't it? ;)
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8th Sep 2022 9:30pm
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8th Sep 2022 9:48pm
Always in trouble for something, but it's not fault damnit! * innocent look *
Awesome, heating you up is my pleasure. :p
My devious plan was to pull you into my dream, because it's just not the same if no one is in there with you. :p Sharing every wet bit of passion, oh yeah! I love to share. I am good that way. lol
Everyone needs sleep, but my passion never sleeps. And I don't want yours too either. ;p
I do like to set the tone, and I thought that set it perfectly. Makes it easier to hypnotize you, and then I can electrocute you too. So shocking I know.
Your welcome, sharing is caring.
Cold showers are healthy. ;) But I think you will just heat up again.
Awesome, heating you up is my pleasure. :p
My devious plan was to pull you into my dream, because it's just not the same if no one is in there with you. :p Sharing every wet bit of passion, oh yeah! I love to share. I am good that way. lol
Everyone needs sleep, but my passion never sleeps. And I don't want yours too either. ;p
I do like to set the tone, and I thought that set it perfectly. Makes it easier to hypnotize you, and then I can electrocute you too. So shocking I know.
Your welcome, sharing is caring.
Cold showers are healthy. ;) But I think you will just heat up again.
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
8th Sep 2022 9:26pm
Reflecting on your comment to Ron, could say that was a savourable poetic spill. Picture only adds to its eroticism.
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
8th Sep 2022 10:06pm
Hey SS, it's always great to see you. I am very happy you found it a savourable poetic spill. You definitely know erotic and I value your opinion very much. Glad you like the picture too, it certainly only took me a second to say that's the one. lol Thanks for joining me in this wet dream and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it so much. ;)
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9th Sep 2022 12:51pm
The picture has inspired me with a poem called Morning after night before that I shall post in the competition.
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9th Sep 2022 1:04pm
Awesome, I love that it inspired you to do that. That's why I mentioned the competition so maybe some will get inspired and enter because I think that's great. :) I will check it out soon.
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8th Sep 2022 10:24pm
Love that you found it excellent, very often I do try to avoid overly gratuitous language while still wanting to paint vivid imagery in the mind. I love it if that worked effectively. I am not sure I know what you mean by Beat Poetry tools but I will look that up. :) It's always great when a poem can be a sensual experience although I did not specifically write it with the six senses in mind. That's just how it came to me but I am a very sensual person. ;) So much can be seen between the lines. Thanks so much for the great feedback. I really appreciate that so much. (Haha, more than just a spot Ted. ;) )
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I must admit in regards to being educated on poetry, I have none. So I really appreciate your knowledge on the subject and educating me a bit. Your perspectives make me look at things a different way. Although perhaps my lack of understanding on such things is why my style varies so much for what it's worth. I suppose it was intuitive then because I wrote it extremely fast off seeing the Wet Dream comp. There certainly was no planning and minimal editing. Although some lines I decided to change from the initial bat out of hell writing. lol But anyway, it's cool to know that someone educated in this could see where maybe I applied methods I know nothing about instinctually. :) So thank you.
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9th Sep 2022 1:50am
Yes, god forbid my OCD gets ahold of those rules and wants to force adherence. lol Yeah, it's probably better. ;)
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8th Sep 2022 10:27pm
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8th Sep 2022 10:43pm
What could be better than soaking minds James. ;) I love doing that. And I know we have all had those kind of dreams where you wake up going damn! lol Hopefully someone is around to help you out with making those dreams come true too because that's where the real magic is. But still I have definitely wanted to get back into dreams before, like I really need to go back to sleep to finish it off. (all kinds, not just the steamy ones) Anything can happen in a dream, like fantasies, but oh the possibilities of what you can do in real life. Now that's truly exciting. ;)
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
8th Sep 2022 10:28pm
I can soooooo relate to this write! BUT it wasn’t a dream, it was actual reality! Once you’ve had this kind of sexual experience nothing or no one else compares!
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
8th Sep 2022 10:48pm
Hey eyes, I am so glad you can relate. ;) This was definitely aimed at the wet dream aspect since that was the inspiration but I know exactly what you mean. Nothing can compare to those intense sexual experiences you can have in real life. Making dreams and fantasies come true is the absolute best thing ever. And definitely once you have had those experiences, you will always be seeking and needing more of that for sure. ;)
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Oh yes ma’am! Seeking with a flashlight! Begging for more! Needing more! Wanting more! Body aches for more! 💜💜💜
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8th Sep 2022 10:56pm
Lol, I love how you said that with so much excitement and passion. :p With a flashlight, perfect. :p Often you do find it in the Darkness so that makes total sense to me. ;) Body aches for more. Hell yeah it does... ;)
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8th Sep 2022 11:48pm
Dearest Kristina,
This one is so beautifully put upon the scream. And, wonderful this be of an ah speak upon an ah wet dream. And, the dream does fuck u, because u wake up finding out that it's all a damn dream
Great dream poetic descriptive ah write.
This one is so beautifully put upon the scream. And, wonderful this be of an ah speak upon an ah wet dream. And, the dream does fuck u, because u wake up finding out that it's all a damn dream
Great dream poetic descriptive ah write.
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 1:49am
Haha, yeah I suppose it really does fuck you in different ways Birchel. I had not really thought about that. Fortunately if there is someone next to you and it got you all worked up then that can end up being a really good morning indeed. Still, if I remember the dream; damn the stuff my mind comes up with can be otherworldly. lol Literally, even to the extent of aliens and stuff. lol Just saying. And hell yeah I want to get back into that to see what happens. :p I love your wonderful presence, you are always a breath of fresh air. ;)
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9th Sep 2022 5:44am
Thanks Kristina. As always, your writes like this one still rocks! Because if there was someone lying next to u upon the wake up, it can and will truly become a real thing. Again, excellent ah write! 🌈🍑👅💋🌷👍
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 2:07pm
You know it... Feeling someone's lips on you is the best way to wake up. ;) It definitely becomes the real thing. Sadly sometimes you are rush for work and such so it might have to be fast but that's better than not at all. I love that you think they all rock, that's so cool. ;) I like how you use emojis too, there is always a message in there.
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9th Sep 2022 4:17pm
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9th Sep 2022 1:52am
You know I love being very sexy, Francisco. ;) With those kind of dreams I always enjoy myself. lol Waking up all hot and bothered, needing to enjoy myself so more for sure though. I am really hoping I have some really crazy wet dream tonight. lol Gonna see what happens but I often go to sleep with certain images still in my head that lead down that road even after having just traveled there in real life. :p
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8th Sep 2022 11:59pm
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9th Sep 2022 1:55am
Great to see you chy, I really appreciate you stopping by, reading, and giving me your thoughts. The last line definitely pulls it all together in my mind so I am glad you found it impactful. Otherwise like you said there definitely would have been something missing. Sometimes dreams can definitely have a real impact on us. ;)
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9th Sep 2022 2:24am
You are so elaborate with your words and replies it makes me feel great to see you being so active within the art of poetry.
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 5:13pm
Thanks so much chy, that really means a lot to me. It's such a beautiful thing to say and I am really happy you are here and I look forward to reading more when I have a chance. :)
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 00:07am
I have these dreams often, the hidden face of a witch, gentle hands of flame caressing me in fire, sweat soaks skin sliding close, the blood pulsing in my lions, waking up with a dick so hard it hurts. Disoriented and confused, fighting to fall asleep, cursing that the dream is lost. There is power in your poetry, spells cast by your words. I loved the insistence rhythm mirrored by my lust. A beautiful poem in so many ways.
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9th Sep 2022 2:03am
Oh yes! so often a witch will torment you in your dreams. ;) But it's only because she really likes you a lot. Can she help it if black magic is powerful stuff and sometimes leaves you with a hard on that just won't go away. You might even have to go to the hospital. :p But to be in those gentle hands for real, you might not make it out alive. lol Sweat sliding close, blood pulsing... damn that's sexy. If I wasn't already all worked up that would sure do it. ;) And yes I know what it's like to wake up from a dream and want to get back in there. Sadly, I never can; once I wake up that's it. All kinds of witchy power and spells being cast, you know it. Mirroring someone's lust can be really intense. Really happy you saw and felt this deeply APPS. ;)
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 00:33am
wow very hot indeed! the type of dream you dont wanna wake up... this ink is fire :D
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9th Sep 2022 2:07am
I love dreams you don't want to wake up from, unfortunately you always wake up and sometimes at the best part. lol I always want to keep it very hot for you MV, keep you sweating but for all the best reasons. But often I disturb someone's dreams because you know I need something and I am going to get it, asleep or not. But there are some pretty awesome ways to wake someone up and I know them all. 'this ink is fire' Hell yeah! I love that so much. Have some crazy wild dreams tonight okay... ;)
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 1:08am
No advanced psychology needed – just a young, fit lady with a strong healthy libido and a vivid imagination.
Recommendations after: bathroom break (add clothes if non-lovers could pop up in the path), glass of water, lip balm (you probably bit your lip), and turn the fan up!! : )
PS. If this was reality instead of a dream, same applies.
Recommendations after: bathroom break (add clothes if non-lovers could pop up in the path), glass of water, lip balm (you probably bit your lip), and turn the fan up!! : )
PS. If this was reality instead of a dream, same applies.
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 2:13am
Haha, I know all about psychology though. :p A young, fit lady with an intense libido and crazy imagination learns a lot things quickly in life. It's definitely not always the easy way though. But the very difficult stuff teaches psychology the fastest for better or worse.
Always have the fan on max because I am too hot. :p And I like the noise it makes, it helps me sleep because I struggle with that. Overactive mind and body. :p Lip balm check... glass of water is always good. Non-lover in the path... Well I suppose they might get a thrill then. But what are they doing here? lol
PS. Very true... Sometimes the dream follows reality and the reality follows the dream again because you wake up hot and bothered. Just saying...
Always have the fan on max because I am too hot. :p And I like the noise it makes, it helps me sleep because I struggle with that. Overactive mind and body. :p Lip balm check... glass of water is always good. Non-lover in the path... Well I suppose they might get a thrill then. But what are they doing here? lol
PS. Very true... Sometimes the dream follows reality and the reality follows the dream again because you wake up hot and bothered. Just saying...
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 1:48am
OMG yes... YES!! Nothing better than a dream fuck. I think I'm ready to head off to bed now...
You do stir the imagination, and sometimes I think you also might be in my head, spying....
❤️k
You do stir the imagination, and sometimes I think you also might be in my head, spying....
❤️k
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 2:18am
Damn! you are getting me excited with OMG yes.,, YES!! I love Canadian Maple syrup and Carolina Reaper peppers so be careful with that. :p Dream fucks can be super crazy wild can't they? Absolutely no limitation on where you are and what the hell is going on. lol My thoughts might get me institutionalized so I am just going to stop there now. I love that I could encourage you into the bed while stirring the imagination; that's the best way to bring on certain dreams. ;) Oh yeah! I am in there spying for sure, you weren't suppose to know that damnit! (and I like what I see).
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When I was younger if I went to bed and my thoughts were about baseball, I was guaranteed a sex dream 5 out 7 nights. No wonder I watched a lot of games on TV. You're dreams don't involve strikes most likely but I'm sure there's plenty of balls to play with...
BIG WET SPITBALL LIKE
P.S. by the looks of where her hand is, think she's motioning to the pitcher to throw a slider ...
Google baseball terms
Spitball
Slider
BIG WET SPITBALL LIKE
P.S. by the looks of where her hand is, think she's motioning to the pitcher to throw a slider ...
Google baseball terms
Spitball
Slider
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 2:00pm
Oh God! I was going to say how the hell do you go from baseball to wet dreams BUT immediately I started thinking about a baseball game turning into an orgy. And I was kind like damn that is pretty hot. ugh! lol Hell I might even have a dream about that now, it's certainly got an effect but I guess I am hopeless in some ways.
Her hand is definitely in the right place to finish things off. She wants a homerun for sure and she's going to get it. I know how that is. Yeah I will have to google been to baseball games and even played some casually but I don't know all the lingo... Thanks for dropping in and making me think about all the possibilities in baseball. I love that. lol
Her hand is definitely in the right place to finish things off. She wants a homerun for sure and she's going to get it. I know how that is. Yeah I will have to google been to baseball games and even played some casually but I don't know all the lingo... Thanks for dropping in and making me think about all the possibilities in baseball. I love that. lol
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Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 4:10am
*Well it's popping in a lot of other people's minds now too!
The picture and the words you weaved make a good bedtime story for grown ups!
I was wondering why you didn't put this in your Xtina account. Yet, I see the subtle differences that makes this NOT belonging there. Your writing really is expanding.
And this is more feminine than what you'd put over there, which is usually more carnal. -Nothing wrong with that either.
I like this version better. Which I've always told you.
Very alluring write you have here. Awesome stuff!
Wet sheets.... put a damn towel down! Lol
The picture and the words you weaved make a good bedtime story for grown ups!
I was wondering why you didn't put this in your Xtina account. Yet, I see the subtle differences that makes this NOT belonging there. Your writing really is expanding.
And this is more feminine than what you'd put over there, which is usually more carnal. -Nothing wrong with that either.
I like this version better. Which I've always told you.
Very alluring write you have here. Awesome stuff!
Wet sheets.... put a damn towel down! Lol
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9th Sep 2022 2:02pm
Oh yeah! I want to get into your head... (I guess both of them lol)
I am awesome at bedtime stories, very interactive.
The xinaskirt account was always for very explicit stuff that might not be something some people want to see. I have thought about just doing it all here but I am reluctant to do that. I suppose really it wouldn't matter much but I have learned to follow my instincts, because when I don't... This is exactly the erotic type I would post here. And although carnal I still feel like the other stuff is feminine but in a different way. Expressing that women can and do have those desires and drive or at least some do. I suppose I can only speak for myself but you know what I mean.
Alluring and awesome is perfect, I love that. ;)
Sleeping on a towel sucks. lol But it's definitely easier in the aftermath. But I have one of those allergy covers on the mattress so at least it doesn't get into the mattress. That repels the wet. lol Washing bedding is not so hard especially if you had a great time. :p
Thanks for letting me get into your mind for a bit. I like being there. ;)
I am awesome at bedtime stories, very interactive.
The xinaskirt account was always for very explicit stuff that might not be something some people want to see. I have thought about just doing it all here but I am reluctant to do that. I suppose really it wouldn't matter much but I have learned to follow my instincts, because when I don't... This is exactly the erotic type I would post here. And although carnal I still feel like the other stuff is feminine but in a different way. Expressing that women can and do have those desires and drive or at least some do. I suppose I can only speak for myself but you know what I mean.
Alluring and awesome is perfect, I love that. ;)
Sleeping on a towel sucks. lol But it's definitely easier in the aftermath. But I have one of those allergy covers on the mattress so at least it doesn't get into the mattress. That repels the wet. lol Washing bedding is not so hard especially if you had a great time. :p
Thanks for letting me get into your mind for a bit. I like being there. ;)
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
9th Sep 2022 5:14pm
From the pictures to the words itself has a erotic meaning all its own.
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9th Sep 2022 5:54pm
I can always expect you to find the meaning casket considering your own very erotic offerings. ;) So I am really glad you stopped in and appreciate this one. That's a great compliment. Sometimes you do find the perfect picture and I knew that was it as soon as I saw it for what I was trying to get across. Although I hope the words also do that on their own but a visual aid never hurts right. lol Sometimes after sex you still want more and dreams can help keep it going too.
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9th Sep 2022 6:04pm
A good picture always compliments the poem, that's why it takes me forever to find mine. As for more sex if she is laying there pussy wet and wide open I'm going back in deep until she runs out of the good stuff.
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9th Sep 2022 6:06pm
Haha... That's what lubricant is for, just in case she runs out of the good stuff. Although sometimes the good stuff is plentiful and there is only so much time in the day. lol
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9th Sep 2022 6:08pm
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9th Sep 2022 6:08pm
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11th Sep 2022 1:47pm
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That picture and your poem is an erotic wonderland.
It's writers like yourself that enforce my passion and bring me to a mecca of eroticism....
You're the best writer of passion and lust in my orbit ....
X
It's writers like yourself that enforce my passion and bring me to a mecca of eroticism....
You're the best writer of passion and lust in my orbit ....
X
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9th Sep 2022 6:02pm
Haha, I am an erotic wonderland my dear Iconic. :p I don't think I could live without passion, at the very least it would be a very unsatisfying and dull existence. So if I can be your tour guide to a mecca of eroticism then that's super cool in my book. The best, wow... I appreciate that so much. I think everyone has their own way and something wonderful to offer so I would not say there is a best. ;) Still I am really happy when someone connects with me on this level and appreciate the opinion so much. That makes me feel pretty damn good. ;)
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
10th Sep 2022 5:09am
"Fucked by a dream"
Super sexy, friend 😁
I read the poem then noticed the picture haha. Good thing no one was looking over my shoulder.
Super sexy, friend 😁
I read the poem then noticed the picture haha. Good thing no one was looking over my shoulder.
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10th Sep 2022 4:35pm
Haha, I definitely felt like that last line really pulled it all together. Ending with an impact is always great. ;) You know I love super sexy, that's the best way to be in my opinion. Read and then noticed, damn! that's actually extremely flattering. My words were sexy enough to make the picture the second thing you saw. lol Someone looking over the shoulder would be kind of fun. "Yeah, I am just reading some poetry" lol Perhaps it needed the extreme content flag. Generally I don't like to use that unless I really have to. Like on the xina stuff. lol
Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
16th Sep 2022 10:38pm
Wow this is, respectfully, very hot. Poetic, a commentary on what truly gets a woman off, I like that you made it a dream ad well and the imagery is wow 👌 I'll have to cut myself off there lol
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17th Sep 2022 1:42am
You know me I love to be respectful. (yeah I know what you meant :p) But I love to be very hot way more. lol What truly gets a woman off now that's a topic I can write into infinity. ;) I made it a dream since it was inspired by the Wet Dreams competition so I am glad that theme worked well. As usual I kind of just saw the comp and wrote this immediately. That's just how my thoughts flow. I love that imagery is wow... I always want to wow... Oh yeah! there's there's the cut yourself off thing 'again', huh? Don't worry I won't give you a hard time about that. :p
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If I'm being honest, the image created in this poem makes me want to give the writer multiple organisms while going down on her just to taste while she tells me in her beautiful words just how amazing she feels. Then after that, get on top and tease and tease some more until she begs then put it in while kissing her entire body, all in hopes that our night turns into another poem for her. Worshiping every inch of her, reading her needs and giving her exactly what she desires without her having to ask. Then after a cig, we'd go again. Words like that would keep me hard for three rounds, cum everywhere, a body and mind worshiped, yet dominated to her desire. After we finished, I'd tell her that was only the beginning and next time I'm really going to impress her. The first tie was just for research. Now I know what she likes ;) how is that for honesty lol
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18th Sep 2022 7:10pm
Well damn! I really love honest and this writer definitely loves multiple orgasms and I know I taste really good, because I taste myself. lol Not sure I would be saying much at that point though... (not in words anyway) Well you certainly have put some images in my head and feelings in * nevermind, naughty look * The night turns in another poem for her, I love that either from the perspective of writing one for her or her writing one; really both. Worshipping every inch is divine. I have to admit not the easiest comment to reply to. :p Dominated and cum everywhere has me distracted. Ah yes, research and exploration is so important. I love the certainty about the next time too. Yeah, that's really honest. ;) I like honest.
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17th Sep 2022 00:31am
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17th Sep 2022 1:42am
Well Damn! I am not sure what to say to that. That's a pretty awesome thing to say. Deer in the headlights. Proper Southern expression. lol Thank you so much! Wow... But how many poems have you read in the last year? Inquiring minds want to know. :p
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17th Sep 2022 5:18am
I read everyday and poetry weekly just to say. I've read all types and it has been some time since I felt a response like that. Usually erotica is for shock factor but this is something else all together. Much respect.
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18th Sep 2022 7:13pm
Well that makes is an even greater compliment then. Thank you so much. I love giving the reader a response they can truly feel. I like writing erotica that creates vivid imagery and sensations despite not being explicit, although I like writing that too. But there is something special about being able to create those feelings without having to write it explicitly. I hope I have accomplished that a lot here. :)
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21st Sep 2022 1:42am
Ironically I got fkd by a dream myself last evening.' going down boldly ' ' on the lips a constant stream flows ' yeah this one sounds yummy. Never a dull or dry moment with your works of art.
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21st Sep 2022 2:37am
Well hey ZZ (like ZZ Top :p) I hope it was a really good fuck you got in your dream and you got to finish one way or another. :p Oh yeah, nothing like a skilled tongue to get the stream flowing. Now that's something that a dream just can't accomplish the same way is it? Dull and dry, oh no... you are not going to find any of that here my dear ZZ. All very exciting and wet, all the time. ;)
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23rd Sep 2022 5:34pm
I'd say, enter this poem in the competition and it would win. It encompasses everything we all strive to achieve in such dreams, relishing in a every delicious second, stirring every machination possible for ultimate satisfaction.
Enter the comp. I got a feeling you'd walk away with the trophy.
Enter the comp. I got a feeling you'd walk away with the trophy.
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Re: Re. Soaked sheets in the aftermath
23rd Sep 2022 5:58pm
Thanks Wally that really means so much to me that you think so. I already won because of your comment and that's enough for me. Anyway, I have my reasons for avoiding competitions. But I am glad others can have fun with them and I certainly would encourage others to enter if that's exciting for them. :) Oh yes! endless possibilities exist in our dreams and I love when those spill over (pun intended) into reality. Relishing every delicious second always. Ultimate satisfaction, oh yeah! definitely that. I don't need the trophy. I am just happy some people like my writing and share in my passion. That's what I love. Thanks again Wally, I love your certainty. ;)