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Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
I'm your Confidant
Friends in need
Make no mistake
Bonnie and Clyde
Rifle loaded
Loving on edge
Faithful destruction
Your life is my life
Your pain is my pain
I am killing you
Do you like it?
Do you want more?
Is it fun for you?
We can do anything
You never asked why
They will find us
This is not a game
Death on the heels
It won't be easy
We need one another
Bound by suffering
I know what will happen
We don't see anyone else
When you look at me
I am disarmed still
With you I am alive
The bullets that hit you
All pass through me
Friends in need
Make no mistake
Bonnie and Clyde
Rifle loaded
Loving on edge
Faithful destruction
Your life is my life
Your pain is my pain
I am killing you
Do you like it?
Do you want more?
Is it fun for you?
We can do anything
You never asked why
They will find us
This is not a game
Death on the heels
It won't be easy
We need one another
Bound by suffering
I know what will happen
We don't see anyone else
When you look at me
I am disarmed still
With you I am alive
The bullets that hit you
All pass through me
Author's Note
Just one I recorded a while back that I never really felt was good enough to post. I just saw it in drafts and thought what the heck so I hope you like it. :) I guess I just kind of want to move on from the last one.
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Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
29th Jul 2022 9:02pm
hello beautiful Kristina the content of this is very intense
I loved every word of it
I believe it to be one of your best
I am very turned on by you and your artistry 💕
I loved every word of it
I believe it to be one of your best
I am very turned on by you and your artistry 💕
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29th Jul 2022 9:24pm
I am always very intense. It can be scary. lol ;)
I really thought you might like this one, I hoped so!
So I am really happy you think it's one of the best, that's just so amazing to hear.
But I must admit I like hearing I turn you on even more, well and the artistry too. :p
Thank you so much for stopping by to visit me, listen, and share such lovely thoughts. <3
I really thought you might like this one, I hoped so!
So I am really happy you think it's one of the best, that's just so amazing to hear.
But I must admit I like hearing I turn you on even more, well and the artistry too. :p
Thank you so much for stopping by to visit me, listen, and share such lovely thoughts. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
29th Jul 2022 9:06pm
There's nothing like a Ride Or Die partner that's in the car until the very end. Bonnie also knew how to rock a Glock, tight work Lil X
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29th Jul 2022 9:28pm
Ride or die, hell yes! Too people with infinite amounts of passion for each other pushing every limit, every boundary, living every moment like the last. Willing to do anything for each other. That's the passion for me. A girl rocking a glock, yes! You know southern girls I_IS_ME. ;) Dangerous but so damn sexy, right? lol Thanks for stopping in to take this ride with me. I really love getting a tight work. <3
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29th Jul 2022 9:46pm
You know most people don't know that Clyde was in prison doing time, Bonnie not only broke him out of prison but also a friend that he had made in there. Yes she was that Badass
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29th Jul 2022 9:53pm
That girl definitely had passion. I mean yeah she knows how to get what she needs and wants... :p Love that bit of information.
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29th Jul 2022 10:00pm
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29th Jul 2022 9:39pm
Class, I love that... So UK of you. :p
Oh yes! that is exactly what I wanted you to feel. The excitement and thrill of being on the run together. Sharing the pain but so much pleasure too. Willing to go any distance and do anything. No limits.
And hell yes, all that mayhem just gets me so... * nevermind * you know...
A timeless classic, wow.... Such an awesome thing to say. That's amazing. I love how you think it all came together.
It was great to have you on this run with me, sharing the pain and pleasure. I certainly felt it all too so I am glad you did also. That's what I want. <3
Oh yes! that is exactly what I wanted you to feel. The excitement and thrill of being on the run together. Sharing the pain but so much pleasure too. Willing to go any distance and do anything. No limits.
And hell yes, all that mayhem just gets me so... * nevermind * you know...
A timeless classic, wow.... Such an awesome thing to say. That's amazing. I love how you think it all came together.
It was great to have you on this run with me, sharing the pain and pleasure. I certainly felt it all too so I am glad you did also. That's what I want. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
29th Jul 2022 9:18pm
Powerful, heartfelt beautiful. Great job beautiful lived your reading too
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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29th Jul 2022 9:43pm
Powerful, heartfelt, beautiful - three of my favorite words. ;) I am so happy you could live this one with me. I have so much passion to share and when people feel it I love that. Nothing better than removing all the boundaries and living every minute like it is the last. Sharing that intense passion with someone through anything. Taking those bullets for each other. Thanks so much for visiting me on this journey and sharing your thoughts Ron. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
29th Jul 2022 9:26pm
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29th Jul 2022 9:47pm
Well you sure know how to shut me up too. lol I don't know what to say to that. That is such an absolutely amazing thing to hear. I am always way more self conscious about these so it just makes so happy you feel that way. Thanks so much for coming by to visit me, listen, and for making me feel so good. I really appreciate it more than you know. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
29th Jul 2022 9:44pm
I remember this one
Definitely a period in time I won't forget
Outlaws on the fringe of something
Darkness, pain, mayhem
Breaking laws with wild abandonment
You took my breath away
I knew we'd go down in passion and flames
Worth every minute
BIG PIERCING LIKE
Definitely a period in time I won't forget
Outlaws on the fringe of something
Darkness, pain, mayhem
Breaking laws with wild abandonment
You took my breath away
I knew we'd go down in passion and flames
Worth every minute
BIG PIERCING LIKE
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29th Jul 2022 9:50pm
Well damn! taking your breath away is an accomplishment. I feel pretty damn good about that. lol I have that tendency of taking peoples breath away but we are not going to talk about that. So many reasons including a lack of filter. lol But darkness, pain, and mayhem oh yeah I know them all well. Breaking the rules always, doing things you shouldn't. Getting into tons of trouble. Passion and flames any and everywhere... every minute.
BIG PIERCING LIKE, that's a new one.... ;) (you did say BIG LIKE everytime I will never forget damnit!) <3
BIG PIERCING LIKE, that's a new one.... ;) (you did say BIG LIKE everytime I will never forget damnit!) <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
29th Jul 2022 10:51pm
Great write, passionate reading, you are fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥
"I am killing you
Do you like it?"
Geez. Yes. Yes, I think I like it.
❤️k
"I am killing you
Do you like it?"
Geez. Yes. Yes, I think I like it.
❤️k
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30th Jul 2022 00:15am
Well, I know you know fire BT, because you are fire too. ;)
Canadian first tap maple syrup and Carolina reaper peppers...
You know I adore that combination, so hot and sweet.
And Damn! you really know how to get me all worked up.
I would make sure you like it. lol And I would love it. ;)
I am going to shut up now before I say... * nevermind *
Thanks for visiting me, listening, and getting me all hot and bothered.
Like I need any more of that. :p <3
Canadian first tap maple syrup and Carolina reaper peppers...
You know I adore that combination, so hot and sweet.
And Damn! you really know how to get me all worked up.
I would make sure you like it. lol And I would love it. ;)
I am going to shut up now before I say... * nevermind *
Thanks for visiting me, listening, and getting me all hot and bothered.
Like I need any more of that. :p <3
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29th Jul 2022 11:17pm
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30th Jul 2022 00:17am
I am so happy you liked the reading James. Thanks for stopping in to see me and listen, and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate that so much. I hope you are having a wonderful start to the weekend. Make sure to be very bad, you know do things I do. :p <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
30th Jul 2022 00:05am
Enjoyed the uniqueful pain of thy ah passionate expression within this poetic piece.
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30th Jul 2022 00:22am
You know how pain and passion always seem to go together don't they Birchel? And I know you know passion... ;) I can tell, I always know things like that - I am a passion detector. :p I like to be poetic sometimes. When you can push past all the boundaries of passion you can truly experience life, for all it's pain, pleasure, and intensity that just makes you feel everything. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that. <3
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30th Jul 2022 1:08am
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30th Jul 2022 1:26am
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30th Jul 2022 2:39am
You strike me as someone that would be there for someone Tim. ;) Being there for someone is one of the best things in the world in my book. I think it's really love and passion collide creating the most spectacular combination possible. And even the wreckage is beautiful, and you always repair the damage, making that bond even stronger. Thanks so much for visiting me, reading, and leaving me your thoughts. I really appreciate it. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
30th Jul 2022 1:30am
I feel this for sure. When someone i care for hurts it also is felt by me.
Wonderful poem. Really love the sentiment 😁
Wonderful poem. Really love the sentiment 😁
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30th Jul 2022 2:40am
I love that you feel it DC, it's easy to see you would do anything for someone you love. And that is a beautiful thing. I am the same, when someone I care for hurts I definitely feel it very strongly. I want to do anything to make them feel better. Even people I don't know I am extremely empathetic and I want to make them feel better. If someone is crying or something I really want to comfort them. Thanks so much for visiting me, listening, and sharing your thoughts. I love that. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
30th Jul 2022 2:01am
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30th Jul 2022 2:40am
It's always so wonderful when someone will do anything to protect you. Feeling that love, appreciation, and protection just makes me feel so much stronger about someone. And I would protect someone I love with everything I have. But feeling that strong presence of a protective man is overwhelming in all the best ways. Thanks for stopping by to see me, listening, and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much. <3
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Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
30th Jul 2022 2:34am
Hi Kristina:)
I remember this one. Loved that you did a recording on it.
Brings something different to the table since last time.
Love that you are broadening your horizons amiga:)
Keep it up!!
I remember this one. Loved that you did a recording on it.
Brings something different to the table since last time.
Love that you are broadening your horizons amiga:)
Keep it up!!
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30th Jul 2022 2:46am
Your encouragement and support means so much to me. It's good to broaden the horizons. :) I really love that you liked hearing it. I am always reluctant to do or post these but people usually say some really nice things when I do so that helps. Thanks so much for coming to see me Chica and sharing your thoughts with me, I always love seeing you. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
Reading and listening to your voice is a thrill.
It's 5:06 AM, I should be sleeping but of course I'm not.
I can't think of better company than you and your magical touch to
my senses ..
BIG LIKE AGAIN
It's 5:06 AM, I should be sleeping but of course I'm not.
I can't think of better company than you and your magical touch to
my senses ..
BIG LIKE AGAIN
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30th Jul 2022 1:18pm
That's a super nice thing to say Poetspeak. I really like that a lot. It makes me happy you think my voice is a thrill, I know I have said it before but I have a harder time with sharing these. I am even more critical of myself which is saying something. That you find me good company and a magical touch to the senses is really beautiful. I love that and I thanks so much for stopping back by, having a listen and sharing with me some more. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
30th Jul 2022 7:15pm
Guy/gurl enamored by KX; willing to break the law if need be to be by her side. KX an outlaw bad@ss knows the life and accepts the consequences. However, she feels guilty / regret drawing in a suitor to that life.
Gangstah with a conscience.
Your voice I think can make many cross that line! 👩🎤🎶🚸
Gangstah with a conscience.
Your voice I think can make many cross that line! 👩🎤🎶🚸
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30th Jul 2022 9:08pm
That is such an interesting take DaVinci. You do have a way of digging into some deeper meanings in consideration of the writer. It actually made me think of something else I just wrote that I have yet to decide to post. Anyway, back to this. Breaking the rules can be so thrilling and when you are willing to do anything for one another. That everything they feel you feel and vice versa, it can be so incredibly intense. I know my feelings overwhelm me and others so to combine that with someone else is well... I guess it's dangerous but damn can it be incredible. :p Feeling guilty is entirely another subject also. I really love the depth and understanding you have shown.
Oh wow! Damn! that's such an awesome thing to say. How am I supposed to respond to that? I bet that's why you did it isn't it? lol Thanks so much for coming by and sharing with me. I love that. <3
Oh wow! Damn! that's such an awesome thing to say. How am I supposed to respond to that? I bet that's why you did it isn't it? lol Thanks so much for coming by and sharing with me. I love that. <3
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
31st Jul 2022 1:58am
Dear K,
You a gangsta!
Hehe that’s the best I can do talking the rap.
There are very few people on this planet who are passionate and love that deeply to take a bullet for someone and you are one of those very few! I always enjoy a story or poem about this level of love and loyalty. It reminds me of how I’m so not but if I were I would totally be that. 😊
I loved the reading. While I can create a story line in my head reading on my own there is an increased amount of character hearing it read for me that I dig.
Wonderful read and write!
H🌷
You a gangsta!
Hehe that’s the best I can do talking the rap.
There are very few people on this planet who are passionate and love that deeply to take a bullet for someone and you are one of those very few! I always enjoy a story or poem about this level of love and loyalty. It reminds me of how I’m so not but if I were I would totally be that. 😊
I loved the reading. While I can create a story line in my head reading on my own there is an increased amount of character hearing it read for me that I dig.
Wonderful read and write!
H🌷
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I want you to know something regardless of what happens. You are a bright spot here, I think everyone loves you and it's easy to see why. I want people to feel like that about me too. I would take a bullet for those I love. I feel things very deeply and I just want to make people feel good and that's the best way to make me feel good too. You can do anything and I think other people see that, I just fear that maybe you don't. And when you say things about yourself that lead me to believe you don't then I just want you to see it too. You always make me feel good despite other stuff going on here or elsewhere. And you make other people feel good too all the time. So I just wanted you to know that.
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1st Aug 2022 00:34am
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31st Jul 2022 7:18pm
I want to dress like Bonnie(you) and Clyde, and drive that ol car, and carry those cool rifles! What an adventure that would be!
And you reciting this poem, at the top of your lungs, as I haul our asses outta town!
And the ending will be much better than theirs. We won't actually rob or hurt anyone. Lol.
Hey, this is a good write that deserved your time to commit back to. Awesome read and of course the poem itself. Well worth your time and all of ours.
And you reciting this poem, at the top of your lungs, as I haul our asses outta town!
And the ending will be much better than theirs. We won't actually rob or hurt anyone. Lol.
Hey, this is a good write that deserved your time to commit back to. Awesome read and of course the poem itself. Well worth your time and all of ours.
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31st Jul 2022 9:30pm
Haha, what a picture you have drawn, or shall I say you stepped into with me. Oh yes! an incredible world of adventure, there is so much to see and do; so many rules to break doing it. I love the idea of just being free like that, living every minute like the last.
Yeah, definitely not do those type of actions. There are other ways to break the rules that are extremely exciting and thrilling though.
Really happy you thought it was worthwhile and worth the time. That's always wonderful to hear. And of course knowing you thought the read was awesome really helps me a lot. Thank you so much for stopping by to take this ride with me on a little adventure and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much. <3
Yeah, definitely not do those type of actions. There are other ways to break the rules that are extremely exciting and thrilling though.
Really happy you thought it was worthwhile and worth the time. That's always wonderful to hear. And of course knowing you thought the read was awesome really helps me a lot. Thank you so much for stopping by to take this ride with me on a little adventure and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much. <3
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1st Aug 2022 4:09am
Only the most passionate people are wired that way. To take a bullet for each other, to be together no matter what and live every minute like the last. What an adventure that is, ride or die, but so difficult to find. And there is so much risk when dealing with such incredible passion. For me pushing the limits is important, there is so much to experience if you let yourself. Societal and other constraints tend to create so many boundaries. And people create so many for themselves. But there are so many ways to push those and take the barriers down to feel so much more.
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
1st Aug 2022 4:28pm
That last line shows complete empathy for someone else's pain (and or suffering). Your spoken word pieces also show the sincerity and honesty. It's palpable, unbearable and all so stunning.
Wonderful work.
Wonderful work.
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1st Aug 2022 4:36pm
It's interesting you say Empathy since I just posted one by that name. I hope most can see that I am sincere and honest in everything. Sometimes I say too much or my sarcastic sense of humor is not understood but that's just how I am. Knowing that you feel it's palpable, unbearable, and stunning is just so wonderful. You always know what to say. Perhaps it's because we are always on the same wavelength or maybe something else. Still, I love that you understand and can articulate that so well. I appreciate you stopping by so much and sharing your thoughts. It's so easy to see the type of person you are. And that's one of the best for sure.
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People in history infamous or famously remembered are still a subject to reckon with and especially with the infamous kind, it brings the dark side of humanity to light and you did it justice, more than a little! Nice write. ~LB
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2nd Aug 2022 9:58pm
It's so interesting reading about infamous people in history, definitely a subject to reckon with. Although they can do some really bad things there is no arguing the intense passion and living every minute like the last. Bonnie and Clyde were a different breed and there can be no doubt of the love and passion they shared. When you feel everything like one person, suffer everything together, experience things deeper, and nothing is more important than each other. I am so happy you stopped by LB and that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for sharing with me.
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
3rd Aug 2022 4:22am
Yes I do. If course I do, And yes it certainly is. Miss KrissyX has done it again. Your intoxicating vibrations word for word keeps me hanging. You crushed the crux of the matter. Outstanding submission. Write on.
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3rd Aug 2022 1:10pm
I am so glad you want more zinn. I love having fun with you. ;) Always doing it again, mostly getting into trouble. Intoxicating vibrations feel so good, they make me want to... * nevermind * ;) And I love that you thought it was outstanding, so that's so nice to hear. Thank you so much for stopping in to see me, listening, and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much.
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
3rd Aug 2022 4:57pm
So much has already been said that I am not sure I can add much. I thought the audio added a lot and you did a really good job with that. Keep it up.
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3rd Aug 2022 5:30pm
You added a lot. :) Knowing that the audio added something for some people really helps me a lot. I am so happy you thought I did a good job with that. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me, listen, and share your thoughts. It really does mean a lot to me. And thanks for the encouragement.
Re. Your Pain is My Pain (with Reading)
10th Aug 2022 4:27pm
Hello Kristina,
The words of your poem are very committed. Your voice is intense with affection and attachment. I love you, your voice and video. A great attempt. Keep it up.
Love,
KS
The words of your poem are very committed. Your voice is intense with affection and attachment. I love you, your voice and video. A great attempt. Keep it up.
Love,
KS
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10th Aug 2022 5:00pm
Yes, it's a powerful expression of that commitment you can have to someone else and each other. I am happy you felt the intensity, affection and attachment. 'I love you' that's so very sweet KS, thanks you so much. :) And I really appreciate your feedback on the reading so much as well. It's never easy to post these and I keep telling myself this one will be the last. :p But knowing people get something from them I just always seem to do it again anyway. <3
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22nd Aug 2022 2:21pm
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22nd Aug 2022 2:48pm
Well hey POH, I am so happy you decided to pay me a visit; listen, read, and share with me. :) Thank you so much for the heart. I really appreciate it. 💖💖 <3