Touching my neck with your lips...

Beautiful submission
Absolutely loved this write
Sexy, and awesome
Love and light
Ron x

I am so happy you could feel the love Ron. How beautiful it is to wake up in someone's arms, feeling the desire quickly growing behind me. ;) Lips on the neck electrifying hips... ready to dance.

You nailed this one. Fantastic.

I love that you could feel this one Adagio. Your thoughts have made me really happy that this expression of love, happiness, and desire is fully understood. :)

This u wrote Kristina is such sweetness of a luv poem. Remarkable job of straight forward explained understanding.

Hey there Birchel, I am really happy u came to get some luv. And of course u understand me like I knew u would; attracted by the sweetness of raw honey. Not that cheap pasteurized stuff at the store, only the best kind. Smooth, sweet, and with a depth of notes and colors. ;)

Cause the lips upon Awet ah taste only know it ah better.

Awet is meant to savored, is there a better more nourishing passionate nectar in the world?... ;)

There is none.

That's a mighty body of water you are ...  
Spectacular love story  
Who wouldn't want to wake up next to you ?  
 
BIG LIKE

You know me, you are going to drown in the current of passion but it's a lovely death. And even better when I give you mouth to mouth to keep the flow going. Who? probably someone who wants to get more sleep because that ain't happening. Mornings are time to get up. You know what I mean... I like cream before my coffee. :p

Everything is better with lots of love, right? ;) Lots of love right back at ya. I am so happy you thought it was absolutely beautiful. It seemed like I had gone too long without writing a love poem so this was the result of wanting to spread some love my way with lots of passionate intensity and deep intimacy that I hope showed through. ;)

You are setting me on fire.  Keep on writing.

Your little arsonist... Setting so many fires and as the lava drains into the sea the steam plume is spectacular. Such a strong reaction in a physical show of love that shakes the body like an earthquake. ;)

How about we both shake our bodies for each other.

You are making me want to write one about dancing. ;) I might do that...

Then belly dancing it is or pole dancing.  

I have always been intrigued by belly dancing. ;) But I suppose dirty dancing has always been my thing. I like poles too though. lol (no not a stripper so don't go there)

Can you be my belly dancer, LOL.

touching my neck with your lips....

Intimacy joins the personal with the vulnerable....

There remains something about the nape, the central core, the base of the mind with the blossoming of the torso....

I am very sensitive on the neck and around the ear, they certainly open into the very core with a surge of sexual energies moving through them into the most sensitive places. Oh what a beautiful torture it is guided by a deeply intimate tongue, opening every door to the base of the mind and below...

Poetic comments....

Earlobes to go.

Ear lobes, get tingles just thinking about being nibbled there. Thanks for the very distracting thought. :p

Very nice!  Styled like Beat Poetry...right up my street!  Like the way you've used devices (the bold print and division of thoughts) to sharpen your message. As with most of your work, this piece demands to be read more than once, to catch every nuance. Write on!  :-)

Of course I am right up your street Ted. ;) Beat poetry, love it. I am happy you like the formatting, it's very impatiently done lol but I like it better than without so if it works as  intended that's great. Oh yes! lots of nuance and stuff in there. I love that you read it more than once. I hope you got something new from each time; there is a lot in there. ;)

When I read you, I find the form- the style- the creativity- the story line- the passion.  I don't read for the sexual content, but for how that content is communicated. I really enjoy your work, because you express it so well!   "Keep it up"....(no pun intended).  :-)

Damn PQ, way to get me all excited. You know I have work to do here don't ya. Lip service and arched back is way too distracting for me. lol Go back and read 'Wet' :p I love that you felt it was divine ink, I am always filled with lust, desire, and passion - a never ending flow there.

You don't say...the only true way to awake...fire 🔥

A little arsonist... setting things on fire and there is nothing better to set fire too than a ... caressed by eager lips. There is no better motivation to wake up to is there? I need that essence to last me throughout the day and to leave behind so many thoughts too. Something to look forward too always...

The pic with this is so tender. Loved how it stared with a kiss then
turned into an epic metaphor with the ocean and the earth as two lovers.
Growing into storms and lightening.  Love this soft side of you.
Really beautiful to read:)  So thank you.

I was so happy when I found that picture because it matched what I was trying to say perfectly. It was super cute but with an intense erotic happiness to it. Unfortunately you cannot really see her smile once the picture was added to the poem because that makes it even much better. So many things start with a kiss don't they chica. ;) Lips just pull us into another world, one filled with nothing but love and passion. I love that you were able to follow the metaphors so well. I have a very soft interior. :p I love romance and that you like that side. It had been a little while since I wrote a love poem like this one so it was definitely time. Thank you so much for making me feel like I accomplished what I was trying to convey. :)

The boulders becoming smooth by your waves....

Wait, what?!  This write of yours is so tender from you!  I'm like "awe, wow".   All of your  infamous, almost demonic passionate writes, and you lay this one down on the bed like a calming sunset.  So yeah, a gentle wow from me.  Because it's a facet of you that you should explore more often.  It's intriguing!

I like the picture you chose, too. Except for that damn guy in the way!  

I adore the 'awe, wow' that is such a wonderful reaction to get. I love it. And yeah how did that guy get there... lol That's supposed to be you Styx. ;) The river Styx has a way of flowing into... * nevermind, innocent look * Haha, I love that description - 'demonic passionate writes'. There is an angel in here too. :p (maybe a fallen one I guess) 'lay this one down the bed like a calming sunset' Now that's a poem waiting to be written. You should get on that. ;) Another vote to explore that side more often, perhaps I will have to listen. ;) I may be a rough diamond but my facets can shine.

A beautiful telling, kristina, of the wish/dream of the heart. I love tellings like this. Thank you for sharing this one 🌼

You are so welcome and I am so happy you gave me your thoughts on this, knowing what an ultra-romantic you are. (if it's not a word, it is now damnit). I feel like I must have done something really write. (puns and all that). Wishes and dreams, if we don't have them it would be a pretty depressing world. Nothing better than living your wishes and dreams. I might just have to do some more tellings like this one then.  ;)

I'll look forward to more of this side of you 🌼

"G U L P !"
 Ahhh, Kristina Dearest 🎶
    Your gently arousing, crowning picture choice alone makes the heart sing and dance; for, it enthralls and invites the imagination to enter with wondrous expectations of your impending, brilliantly lusty creativity ~ so ardently awaiting our yearning pleasures.

"Touching my neck with your lips...
 I want to sleep with you" … ohhh-BOY!

    True to the master poetess you are, the impetus of your stimulatingly vivid imagery awakens our sexual senses with the spellbinding allure of metaphorical magic. How is it that only Your poetical prowess holds the unique power to quicken heartbeats and breaths, and nudge the steady increase of succulent erotic rhythm … ummm, your smooth, softly alluring storytelling voice pulls us into your moment ever-so skillfully – it's as though you're speaking only to Me, and what enamored, warm-blooded bard could resist such bulge-rising temptations? A question "I" surely cannot answer.
    So much more I'm inspired to offer, M'Lady, but I'll resist boring you further or wearing my welcome too thin.

Such brilliantly rendered, romantically embracing Free Verse I'll not soon reclaim composure from.
Sighhh, you're "The Woman" … and, I love it! 💛 ⁓ Richard🖌

I really adore that you stopped by and gave me such detailed thoughts. You are a master at writing love so getting your opinion is awesome. :) And I always love 'GULP' makes me smile every time. lol I absolutely loved the picture too, sometimes it can be hard to find the perfect picture but that one absolutely was in line with what I was thinking as I wrote this. That simple kiss on the neck sending so much love and passion tingling throughout the whole body. And the biggest smile imaginable, the kind that shows brightly through the eyes and lights up the entire room. Your words are always so intensely poetic, honestly makes giving a proper response difficult. I love quickening heartbeats and breathing hard, especially making others breath hard. :p Taking out my erotic needs on someone is one of the best things in the world. 'bulge-rising temptations' Oh yes! Always looking to ignite the passion in a way that gets things... rising. Thank you so much for this gorgeous comment and amazing compliment. :)

Lady Kristina 🍒
    With such succulent inspiration, how could I possibly offer you less.

You make sharing so wonderfully delectable … klink*

Your words brought the image to life.  I like the soft moment  you used, black and white is perfect.

LJ

So often the most passionate moments start with a soft one. A loving kiss on the neck, hands on the hips, gazing into someone eyes, and that smile that just engages the whole body. This beautiful moment of waking up to someone you love and however it unfolds is something truly beautiful. I love that you see the imagery and I so appreciate you stopping by to share the love with me.

I could not help but think of this in relation to what you said about the black and white,

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/407834-i-like-black-and-white-photography/

I think it captures some of what you are saying. ;)

nicely penned miss KX
some very cool nature references in there

Hey CI, nature is such a powerful force, like passion... I am really happy you like the use of nature in illustrating intense love and passion. So happy you enjoyed this one and stopped by to share the love with me. I thought you might go more for the Vampire one. ;) Drinking blood is passionate too. :p

yeah, I definitely prefer the drinking blood approach,
like with this one it would be:
"biting your neck with my teeth..."

Waking softly to the immense passion that your words evolve into.

A simple kiss or embrace can so quickly ignite the intense passion. I know a kiss on the neck, behind or in the ear, and I am immediately lost in passion tingling all over with only one way to satisfy that need. :) Thanks so much for stopping by and reading me Dee. I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me.

Oh! The nature themes.... straight to my ocean & sky loving heart. So erotic but gentle. This is exquisite.
❤️k

I am so happy you read and enjoyed this one BT. There was a lot of nature in my mind while writing it and I love if the imagery was effective at going straight to your heart. ;) Exquisite is such a beautiful thing to say, I love that and that you liked the softer touch but still could see the passion and eroticism too. <3

Intimate love is definitely one of the most beautiful you can experience so I am happy you could feel it in my writing, although I am sad you are missing this feeling. I hope it returns for you quickly. I love telling this tale although perhaps I don't do it enough in my writing at the moment. I love that it was a pleasure to read and I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me. Your words made me feel really good. :)

Loved the erotic natural undertones and the loving embraces this encompassed. It's so romantical and inspiring. Those moments between sleepiness and awakenings are the best.

Amazing work.

I really enjoyed writing this one because of those moments that lead to so much more. The little sweet things that just ignite so much passion. Those things you remember all day that just keep you going somehow. And I hope I was able to represent a little bit of that feeling. Romantical, is that a word? :p I like it... and I love inspiring. Ah the moments that brings dreams into reality. Ah yes they are the best. Thanks so much for your awesome comments Wally. It means so much to me.

I made it eventually. :p I never predict applause... Because I am not the best judge when it comes to my writing. lol It just comes how it does and I have to wait and see what happens from there. But applause is great, thank you so much. Well I am crazy so being crazy about my work fits in some way maybe. :p February 32nd nice... Not even the 31st... ;) I kind of like this one though. I think it shows my romantic side more than many because I am actually very romantic. It's not all about sex damnit! :p