Cool Swimming Pool

Hey SB2:)

Thanks buddy. I was listening to that song Magic Man
while reading on the site. It just came to me. And it has been
so hot here in Texas. Made me think of swimming pools. hahah

Thanks for your snaps on this piece of fantasy:)
And the RL!!
Woop Woop!!

Oh my flirty friend - there is only one Magic Man song!!
By the two goddess sisters named Heart!!
You and I have such great taste in music. LOL
Listening to it right now!!!

I'm also being inspired by their other song titled
Soul of the Sea. I'm getting a spark. Gotta start jotting stuff down  
in a few days. Right now I'm just going to enjoy being serenaded by
one of my favorite bands!!!

I'm also getting a feel for Crazy on You.  LOL

Nothng like some collective poet love from a fellow poetess.
Digging your flow Adelphina  

BIG LIKE

Hey PS

Thanks for the collective love comment. hahaha
Glad you enjoyed amigo:)

Thanks for stopping by and the RL!!
later gator

Dear A,

I love how you get your inspiration to write. I’m over here pulling out my hair, my teeth, my finger nails to string together a half dozen words that end up deleted in the end and you listen to a song and write a piece of art.
To be that moved. It’s a great write with a wonderful arch. Tension, excitement and mystery. Kind of like real life. Sharks everywhere.  Hat tip and wild applause. H🌷

Hi H!!

Thanks for this rocking comment!!  Tension and excitement.
You know when I listened to the opening of this song - the bass in the beginning reminded me of the theme of Jaws. That's how I
got the shark angle. It's also been really hot here and I thought about swimming in a pool. The shape of some pools reminded me of the size of paper. Even the legal size paper too. LOL Just went with it to see where I would end up.

You should try it H. Just put some of your favorite music on - lay down on your bed and close your eyes. Keep your paper right next to your lap with a pen in hand. Just jot down what ever you see with that third eye amiga. It might feel weird at first but you'll get use to it. Writing should be a pleasure - not pulling your hair or anything out my lovely friend. It comes when it comes:)

Thanks for the RL and hat tip!!!
Woop Woop!!!

Cool poem with some great lines in it. Well done!

Hi Faith:)

Glad you enjoyed this angle of writing.
And cooling off with me. hahah

Glad you enjoyed.
I love the band Heart!!!

Thanks for stopping by for a comment amiga:)

Cool poem with some great lines in it. Well done!

I can see the relationship between diving in to the pool, of words. But there's so many pools!  This is a good metaphorical approach!  Awesome job.

Yellow bikini huh...   You can't blame the sharks for being attracted!  

Hi Styx,

I was listening to the song Magic Man and I thought about
how writing is like that. It can take you places and hopefully your
reader. The power of the imagination is a mighty one:)

I'm also feeling something with the song by Heart - Soul of the Sea.
I'm going to see where that one takes me. Maybe next week or so.
The tone of it is knocking on me - like an invitation. So I'll open that
door when I'm ready. Hahah  

Also some pools are in the shape of my spirals. Just bigger. LOL
The intro of Magic Man - when the bass plays reminds me of
the theme song to Jaws in a way. LOL

Been swimming with sharks for a long time amigo. hahahah  
Love the color yellow so I added that in last minute.

Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Woop Woop!!!!

Later Mr. Shark - hehehehe

My first real snorkeling experience, as a kid, my brother and I were near a large pier, looking for crabs.  A huge hammerhead came right by us, because they like crabs too!  
We got the hell out of there.  And our dad, who was like Tarzan, scoffed and said no shark wants your scrawny asses.   Lol.
And he was kinda right, hammerheads very very rarely mess with humans.   And never a fatality.  They're bottom skimmers.  

Hammerhead sharks are so odd looking to me.
Like humm what happened?

I can't imagine swimming around and
bam - there is a shark. Never snorkeled before either.
But I have gone to an aquarium and petted a stingray.
That's almost the same right?  haha  
I know that's lame - no judging mister!!!

Well I hope you got your crabs:)
And I don't mean that how it reads - I mean like as in food. LOL

Your poem is probably witty metaphor but it reminded me of my pool times last  summer.
Is it about plenty of fish eh? A sublime muse here well written. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Hi Kaynab

Yes - it did bring back a few memories of my teenage
years hanging out by the city pool with my friends.
It's about poems that pull you under when reading.
Written by sharks. LOL

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment:)

When it comes to hunger there is no such thing as sex, the lioness does the hunting on the Serengeti. There is always inquisitive minds and wondering hearts of how tasty this one is or could this one be true. This is a tight one Della, we enjoyed  

Hey Meme:)

So glad you enjoyed my little dip. Hahah
Just heard the song Magic Man and I thought about
all the great writing you all create here. Yes - even the erotic.
Or should I say - especially the erotic. LOL

Thanks for swimming with me amigo:)

bites are close seconds to nibbles

Ha!!  Totally agree. hahah
I do love a good nibble or nibbles:)

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!

Hahahah:)  Dude!!!

I just commented on your poem at the same time you commented on this.  Too funny.  
You should check out Blue Jean Sea. I finished earlier this month - inspired by Soul of the Sea song:)

Love that you play guitar. How did I not know that!!!!

Good Poem Excellent Write Would Love Too Read More Sometime :)

Hi Casey:)

Thank you. So glad you enjoyed this.
Been thinking on it for a while then finally
decided to write it down.

Thanks for stopping by and commenting.