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So mote it be
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ᴏ'ᴍᴏꜱꜱʏ ᴇᴀʀᴛʜ
ᴡʜɪꜱᴘᴇʀ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴠᴇʀᴅᴀɴᴛ ᴍʏꜱᴛᴇʀʏ
ꜱᴘɪʟʟ ꜰᴏʀᴛʜ ᴀɴᴄɪᴇɴᴛ ꜱᴇᴄʀᴇᴛꜱ
ꜰʀᴇᴇ ʙɪɴᴅɪɴɢꜱ ᴏꜰ ꜱᴀᴄʀᴇᴅ ʜɪꜱᴛᴏʀʏ
ᴡᴀꜰᴛɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴏᴜɢʜᴛꜱ
ᴡᴏᴏᴅᴇɴ ᴅᴇʟɪᴄᴀᴛᴇ ᴅᴇᴄᴀʏ
ᴛᴇᴍᴘᴇʀᴀᴛᴇ ꜰᴏʀᴇꜱᴛʟᴀɴᴅ ʜᴇᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ᴄᴀʟʟ
ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ꜱʜʀᴏᴜᴅᴇᴅ ɢᴏꜱꜱᴀᴍᴇʀ ʙᴏᴜQᴜᴇᴛ
ꜱᴘᴇᴄᴛᴀᴄᴜʟᴀʀ ᴡɪꜱᴅᴏᴍ
ᴏꜰ ᴛʜᴇ ᴀɢᴇꜱ
ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴀ ʜᴀʀᴠᴇꜱᴛ ᴍᴏᴏɴ, ꜰᴀʟʟɪɴɢ
ʀᴏꜱᴇʏ ᴍᴏᴏɴ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡɪᴛɴᴇꜱꜱ,
ɴᴀᴋᴇᴅ ᴅᴀɴᴄɪɴɢ ᴜꜱʜᴇʀꜱ ɪɴ ᴛʜʏ ᴄᴀʟʟɪɴɢ
ᴇxQᴜɪꜱɪᴛᴇ ᴄʜᴀʀᴍ ᴏꜰ ᴇɴᴄʜᴀɴᴛᴍᴇɴᴛ ʜᴀʟʟᴏᴡ
ꜱᴀɪʟ ᴜᴘᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ɴɪɢʜᴛɪɴɢᴀʟᴇ'ꜱ ᴡɪɴɢꜱ ᴏꜰ ᴘʀᴇʏ
ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ᴄᴀʀʀʏ ᴛʜɪɴᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴛᴀʟ ꜱᴏʀʀᴏᴡ
ᴀʟʟᴏᴡ ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴀᴊᴇꜱᴛɪᴄ ꜰᴏʀᴇꜱᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴘᴀᴠᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀʏ
ᴀꜱ ɪ ɪɴʜᴀʟᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴇʀꜰᴜᴍᴇᴅ ᴛʜɪᴄᴋᴇᴛ
ꜱᴡᴇᴇᴛ ᴇᴀʀᴛʜ ꜰʀᴏᴍ ᴡʜɪᴄʜ ɪ ᴘʀᴏᴜᴅʟʏ ꜱᴏᴡ,
ɪ ʙᴇᴄᴋᴏɴ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛᴏ ᴍʏ ʙᴏꜱᴏᴍ
ʜᴇʟᴘ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜰᴇʟᴛ ꜱᴘᴇʟʟ ᴛᴀᴋᴇ ʀᴏᴏᴛ ᴛᴏ ɢʀᴏᴡ
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Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 2nd Jul 2022
| Edited 6th Jul 2022
Author's Note
For Zazzles Silver Bells & Spells comp
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12284/
© Blu2022
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12284/
© Blu2022
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Re. So mote it be
2nd Jul 2022 10:03pm
Blessed be Blue. Absolutely beautiful read
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
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Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 1:02am
and likewise, dearest Ron... thank you.
Just a little magic your way!
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆
🌹 - B
Just a little magic your way!
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆
🌹 - B
Re. So mote it be
2nd Jul 2022 10:06pm
Give us more of that brew...and good luck inthe competition. Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 00:48am
hahaha... You've seen how variety is the spice of life, already!! 😉
Glad you stopped by, my friend!
I appreciate it, muchly
🌹 - B
x
Glad you stopped by, my friend!
I appreciate it, muchly
🌹 - B
x
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
3rd Jul 2022 00:41am
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Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 00:44am
Thanks!
Zazzles makes a comp a fun time, indeed!
I appreciate the kind words.... glad you enjoyed
Nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
Zazzles makes a comp a fun time, indeed!
I appreciate the kind words.... glad you enjoyed
Nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 00:42am
You can come to me anytime. I'm your sexy charmer. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 5:00am
lol... You definitely have a long memory, Francisco!
Thanks for the visit and the kind words
I appreciate you!
🌹
Thanks for the visit and the kind words
I appreciate you!
🌹
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 00:53am
Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 5:01am
Thanks, LilD... I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts, the comp well wishes, and kind list add... glad you enjoyed.
🌹 - 🧙♀️
x
🌹 - 🧙♀️
x
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 00:55am
hello beautiful blue so enchanting
I am transported there love you lady
good luck in the comp. you are a true artist 💕
I am transported there love you lady
good luck in the comp. you are a true artist 💕
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Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 5:04am
Hey there beautiful siren!
Thanks so much for visiting and for such kind words.... I am all witchy smiles you were enchanted.
That's so sweet and lovely.
Much thanks and a little magic your way
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆.。 ₀:*
-B
Thanks so much for visiting and for such kind words.... I am all witchy smiles you were enchanted.
That's so sweet and lovely.
Much thanks and a little magic your way
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆.。 ₀:*
-B
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 1:35am
Ms. Vel Vel,
This sounds like u coming on to someone for a date making them laugh at the same time. Ms. Vet Vet u are the brilliant for this piece.
This sounds like u coming on to someone for a date making them laugh at the same time. Ms. Vet Vet u are the brilliant for this piece.
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Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 5:12am
Birchel!!
Hey there, my lovely friend
I'm so stoked you found this poem and enjoyed it like you have. You always have a unique spin and it's truly amazing to see where your inspiration takes you.
I appreciate it, very much!
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪
Hey there, my lovely friend
I'm so stoked you found this poem and enjoyed it like you have. You always have a unique spin and it's truly amazing to see where your inspiration takes you.
I appreciate it, very much!
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪
Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 7:16am
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 2:23am
Hi Blu,
Loved how this just kept growing towards a spectacular ending.
The capital Qs are also awesome.
Gives it extra pizzazz:)
Good luck on the comp!!
Loved how this just kept growing towards a spectacular ending.
The capital Qs are also awesome.
Gives it extra pizzazz:)
Good luck on the comp!!
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Re: Re. So mote it be
Hey there, spitfire! ;)
You're such a pleasant and kind voice tonight, dear lady. Thanks for digging the little touches and the comp piece as a whole. Your keen eye always sees it all!! 👍🏻 I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. It means a lot to and it's always a joy to have you here.
Big thanks and a bit of magic sent,
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆
🌹 - B
You're such a pleasant and kind voice tonight, dear lady. Thanks for digging the little touches and the comp piece as a whole. Your keen eye always sees it all!! 👍🏻 I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. It means a lot to and it's always a joy to have you here.
Big thanks and a bit of magic sent,
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆
🌹 - B
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 5:35am
Dear BV,
Hands down this charming incantation of a poem is witchy awesome. It’s got all the elements of a great story, mystery and magic. And let’s not forget a poetic nod to that font. Excellent write. All the best for the comp.
H🌷
Hands down this charming incantation of a poem is witchy awesome. It’s got all the elements of a great story, mystery and magic. And let’s not forget a poetic nod to that font. Excellent write. All the best for the comp.
H🌷
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Re: Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 5:44am
Blessed be, dear lady ✨
I love your thoughtful comments and I'm flying high 🧹 atop by broom that you enjoyed the spell enchantments and the formatting. I love trying new things and I'm glad this came across how you perceived it.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add and comp well wishes.
Lots of love and a lil magic your way,
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆.。 ₀:*
-B
I love your thoughtful comments and I'm flying high 🧹 atop by broom that you enjoyed the spell enchantments and the formatting. I love trying new things and I'm glad this came across how you perceived it.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add and comp well wishes.
Lots of love and a lil magic your way,
(✿╹◡╹)⊃━:。・:*:・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆.。 ₀:*
-B
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 6:07am
This is so badass B...
Totally cool...
From the image to the layout to the content...
Silver Bells and Spells...
Real cool...
Totally cool...
From the image to the layout to the content...
Silver Bells and Spells...
Real cool...
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Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 4:40pm
Ahuh-
you cast a spell in black & white
took a challenge and made it right
taking first place you bewitched us all
congratulations Bluevelvete to you I applaud ♥️
Always your sis
Jackie♥️ xoxox
you cast a spell in black & white
took a challenge and made it right
taking first place you bewitched us all
congratulations Bluevelvete to you I applaud ♥️
Always your sis
Jackie♥️ xoxox
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Re: Re. So mote it be
Thanks for the little poetic comments.... Too cute!
Again, I'm very thankful for the win and for your terrific comp idea. You may not see it as a much of a challenge but I totally do and always have, when it comes to rhyming poetry. So it was enjoyable to continue to try and hone that particular skill!
Loves you, lady!!
🌹💙🌹💙🌹💙🌹💙
B
Again, I'm very thankful for the win and for your terrific comp idea. You may not see it as a much of a challenge but I totally do and always have, when it comes to rhyming poetry. So it was enjoyable to continue to try and hone that particular skill!
Loves you, lady!!
🌹💙🌹💙🌹💙🌹💙
B
Anonymous
- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
3rd Jul 2022 7:23pm
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Re: Re. So mote it be
Omg Omg... lol... You're clearly the winner of the best comment of the month award!! 🏆
I'm totally dying laughing and loving every, single. kind. word. you've left me, R!!
Zazzles is kind in sharing of her flight resources and we just had to do a Norwegian flyby!!
How beautiful, wet couldn't resist!!
*wink.... hahaha.... 🧹🧹🧹
I am a total goth at heart!! 🖤 that's so very wonderfully witchy that you get that..... ✨
Thanks again, my spiritual goddess guru!
I adore your thoughts and I'm so glad to have you here.... enchanting us... always.
Ps - Congratulations yourself, for putting in the time to better your rhyme!! I know it wasn't easy and your piece was awesomely penned as well!
🌹 - (*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
I'm totally dying laughing and loving every, single. kind. word. you've left me, R!!
Zazzles is kind in sharing of her flight resources and we just had to do a Norwegian flyby!!
How beautiful, wet couldn't resist!!
*wink.... hahaha.... 🧹🧹🧹
I am a total goth at heart!! 🖤 that's so very wonderfully witchy that you get that..... ✨
Thanks again, my spiritual goddess guru!
I adore your thoughts and I'm so glad to have you here.... enchanting us... always.
Ps - Congratulations yourself, for putting in the time to better your rhyme!! I know it wasn't easy and your piece was awesomely penned as well!
🌹 - (*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
Re. So mote it be
3rd Jul 2022 8:53pm
Wow a fabulous muse beckoning and invoking so poetically as if to the universe and heavens. Great imagery and word choice throughout. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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Re: Re. So mote it be
5th Jul 2022 2:31am
Thanks for the kind words and very pleasant visit.
It's much appreciated!
🌹 - B
It's much appreciated!
🌹 - B
Re. So mote it be
8th Jul 2022 3:08pm
Re: Re. So mote it be
8th Jul 2022 3:15pm
Hello, Shreyans :)
Thank you for the kind feedback.
This particular poem was written for competition here on DUP, so it's definitely not my usual, so I appreciate you finding something you enjoyed, while reading.
It's lovely to meet you; I thank you so much for stopping by to share your thoughts.
Welcome to DUP!
I hope you explore and embrace your time with us.
🌹B
Thank you for the kind feedback.
This particular poem was written for competition here on DUP, so it's definitely not my usual, so I appreciate you finding something you enjoyed, while reading.
It's lovely to meet you; I thank you so much for stopping by to share your thoughts.
Welcome to DUP!
I hope you explore and embrace your time with us.
🌹B
Re: Re. So mote it be
11th Jul 2022 12:11pm
Thank you. I loved your writing. Please have a look at my poem if you have time and provide feedback. Thank you for creating such amazing content.
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Re. So mote it be
11th Jul 2022 8:51pm
Being a writer and fan of fantasy this ignites more of my imagination of good, evil and all the grey areas in-between.
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Re: Re. So mote it be
Yesss!!
Now THAT'S a freaking powerhouse of a compliment, to me.... I struggle with rhyming, so I'm so stoked that you felt your imagination ignited...
So cool!
I'm so grateful for all your visits and killer, kind encouragements, CS.
You're beyond awesome; it means the world to me that you leave me your thoughts and perspectives...
🌹 - xo
Now THAT'S a freaking powerhouse of a compliment, to me.... I struggle with rhyming, so I'm so stoked that you felt your imagination ignited...
So cool!
I'm so grateful for all your visits and killer, kind encouragements, CS.
You're beyond awesome; it means the world to me that you leave me your thoughts and perspectives...
🌹 - xo
Re: Re. So mote it be
11th Jul 2022 10:04pm
Re. So mote it be
31st Jul 2022 5:41am
Phenomenal write, perfect and well deserved of a first place.
It feels like we're all under a spell.
It feels like we're all under a spell.
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Re: Re. So mote it be
31st Jul 2022 6:46am
hahaha.... You're so freaking awesome.... and truly spellbinding, leaving your own cool af comments , dear Wally!
Yesss!! 🪄✨ 💫 ✨ 🪄
I very much appreciate them and you!
Glad you could feel the magic take hold! *wink!
🌹🔮
x
Yesss!! 🪄✨ 💫 ✨ 🪄
I very much appreciate them and you!
Glad you could feel the magic take hold! *wink!
🌹🔮
x
Re. So mote it be
7th Oct 2022 5:14am
This is spellbinding. The magic and nature make for a heady mix that intoxicates me. When I grow up this is how I hope to write. You put me in a dream state of total Celtic joy. I could see the witches dancing naked in worship of the earth. And the flora was poetically woven into a vision of nature in all its spiritual beauty. Love love what you did here.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. So mote it be
8th Feb 2024 10:56pm
Oh my, dear Blue. Lost for words. Awesome write indeed. Good luck in the competition 🌹💕👏
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Re: Re. So mote it be
8th Feb 2024 11:19pm
This was a hard hard poem for me to write, so thank you for that generous support. I'm not a natural rhymer, not by far, so when I try to utilize that form in my poems I feel it always comes out very forced and unnatural, even practicing it for years now, I'm never truly confident in that skill.
This one is probably one of the very few that I think works (hopefully!)
Much obliged for the well wishes and likewise, dear lady.
🌹💙 - ✨
This one is probably one of the very few that I think works (hopefully!)
Much obliged for the well wishes and likewise, dear lady.
🌹💙 - ✨