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Nice is a Crash and Burn
Don't like to be to nice
That's a recipe to be taken for granted
No you say, not true
Jaded Scorpio New Yorker
Tell me another
Alternatively
Don't want to be a total prick
Maybe a partial
You seem to respect rough and ready
I know you, don't I
Maybe
Possibly
You're snarky
Cagey
Never totally in
Maybe just beer and chips
We can agree on that
That's a recipe to be taken for granted
No you say, not true
Jaded Scorpio New Yorker
Tell me another
Alternatively
Don't want to be a total prick
Maybe a partial
You seem to respect rough and ready
I know you, don't I
Maybe
Possibly
You're snarky
Cagey
Never totally in
Maybe just beer and chips
We can agree on that
Author's Note
Run of the mill agitation
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Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
30th Jun 2022 7:20pm
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30th Jun 2022 8:26pm
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30th Jun 2022 8:37pm
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30th Jun 2022 8:40pm
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
Anonymous
30th Jun 2022 7:33pm
angst in verse form....liked this piece and the what/how it was expressed.
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
30th Jun 2022 8:27pm
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
30th Jun 2022 9:44pm
I like the current running through this
it brings me into your energy
I'm loving it 💕
it brings me into your energy
I'm loving it 💕
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 1:06am
I like to question many parts of relationships...
Not everything is black and white
Stay tuned Brenda, more psychology to follow
Thx
🙃👍🥰
Not everything is black and white
Stay tuned Brenda, more psychology to follow
Thx
🙃👍🥰
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
Anonymous
30th Jun 2022 11:33pm
Scorpio plus New Yorker...yes, best start with beer and chips.
I liked this a lot. Finding the balance is a delicate art.
I liked this a lot. Finding the balance is a delicate art.
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 1:10am
I'm always looking for the middle
Not easy to find sometimes
Beer and chips is a good equalizer
Maybe hope....
Thx PD
Appreciate the visit
💑
Not easy to find sometimes
Beer and chips is a good equalizer
Maybe hope....
Thx PD
Appreciate the visit
💑
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 00:27am
Beer and Chips - but no salsa? Already a bad start amigo. haha
Balance is definitely the key. Too nice feels fake.
Personally I don't mind someone who isn't a pushover - as long as I always get my way. LOL
I can't help it - I'm kinda a brat:)
Hope you are having a better evening my salty friend.
I enjoyed this agitation write.
Balance is definitely the key. Too nice feels fake.
Personally I don't mind someone who isn't a pushover - as long as I always get my way. LOL
I can't help it - I'm kinda a brat:)
Hope you are having a better evening my salty friend.
I enjoyed this agitation write.
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
Thought it was time to let it flow
Usually that means lot of chaos, tears and apologies
In an edgy rogue time
But funny as fuck if you like dry humor
When we go out, Salsa, Hot and Hotter
Thx A
Usually that means lot of chaos, tears and apologies
In an edgy rogue time
But funny as fuck if you like dry humor
When we go out, Salsa, Hot and Hotter
Thx A
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 5:10am
You do agitated well, sir.
I'm in for the chips, but beer bloats me. I don't look good bloated. Too skinny to hide it. Lol. Now whiskey...
Great write btw. It's good to read your stuff.
I'm in for the chips, but beer bloats me. I don't look good bloated. Too skinny to hide it. Lol. Now whiskey...
Great write btw. It's good to read your stuff.
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
I gave up drinking for 95 days this year then went back slowly.
I was a whiskey guy, mostly bourbon, sometimes vodka
Ironically I returned to mostly beer,some whiskey
I don't drink much,maybe a beer with dinner
Still love bourbon but more careful now.
Bourbon and Trouble was my anthem ...
It's fun to write agitation, a lot of truth that writes itself
Appreciate the read always Styx
Thx
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/384347-bourbon-and-trouble---part-2/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/354448-bourbon-and-mister-ed/
I was a whiskey guy, mostly bourbon, sometimes vodka
Ironically I returned to mostly beer,some whiskey
I don't drink much,maybe a beer with dinner
Still love bourbon but more careful now.
Bourbon and Trouble was my anthem ...
It's fun to write agitation, a lot of truth that writes itself
Appreciate the read always Styx
Thx
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/384347-bourbon-and-trouble---part-2/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/354448-bourbon-and-mister-ed/
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
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1st Jul 2022 1:52pm
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 2:00pm
I'm glad you like the psychological aspect ..
I like to examine that a lot in my writing
Appreciate the visit Sms !!
I like to examine that a lot in my writing
Appreciate the visit Sms !!
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 2:38pm
I’m with Adelphina:
Salsa. It’s a necessity.
This poem is a little angsty and I like it.
Salsa. It’s a necessity.
This poem is a little angsty and I like it.
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 2:43pm
Angst is in again for this Cowboy 🤠
My filter broke and I have no interest in fixing it.
Salsa fine if the good stuff
Guacamole too
Beer a must !!
Good to see you E
Thx
X
My filter broke and I have no interest in fixing it.
Salsa fine if the good stuff
Guacamole too
Beer a must !!
Good to see you E
Thx
X
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 6:43pm
OMG, did someone call you nice?! The nerve...
All hail the king of angst! Pass the chips. I'll get my own beer, dark & heady, no fruit.
❤️k
All hail the king of angst! Pass the chips. I'll get my own beer, dark & heady, no fruit.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 7:03pm
Well, she didn't step on my foot so I guess that was kind of nice.
Yeah, provide your own brew, chips on me.
Everybody wins !
X
Yeah, provide your own brew, chips on me.
Everybody wins !
X
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
1st Jul 2022 7:12pm
I definitely know you are not nice. So don't worry about that.
You brutalize me so often but I am strong.
Perhaps that's why you like it so much.
Trying to break me.
Feeding me alcohol and prick in a continuous stream.
So rough and ready.
But WTF do I know. I just break things.
Like you, I broke you.
Snarky as hell, no cage can hold that.
Beer and chips we agree on. So at least there is that...
Now show me what you're made of.
You brutalize me so often but I am strong.
Perhaps that's why you like it so much.
Trying to break me.
Feeding me alcohol and prick in a continuous stream.
So rough and ready.
But WTF do I know. I just break things.
Like you, I broke you.
Snarky as hell, no cage can hold that.
Beer and chips we agree on. So at least there is that...
Now show me what you're made of.
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
Breaking you was harder than i thought.
Good thing I was hard for the duration, it took hours.
Alright so I gave you a light beer when you came over recently. Not everyone can drink that high octane super carb special. Not to mention the 8.9 % alcohol. No drink and drive on that one.
We are two of a kind Kx. Outlaws and BIG MOUTHS
Yeah, good for some things right ??
Want some guacamole? Spread it and clean up NYC style.
Nothing left except blood, bones and semen
Xx
Good thing I was hard for the duration, it took hours.
Alright so I gave you a light beer when you came over recently. Not everyone can drink that high octane super carb special. Not to mention the 8.9 % alcohol. No drink and drive on that one.
We are two of a kind Kx. Outlaws and BIG MOUTHS
Yeah, good for some things right ??
Want some guacamole? Spread it and clean up NYC style.
Nothing left except blood, bones and semen
Xx
Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
31st Jul 2022 4:59am
Perhaps with a nice lager (or stouts and porters were my faves), things will go down smoothly.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. Nice is a Crash and Burn
31st Jul 2022 9:53am
Trader Joe's sells a beer called Golden Monkey.
9.5 % alcohol
Very popular for a reason. Tastes pretty good too
9.5 % alcohol
Very popular for a reason. Tastes pretty good too