Fcuk Off!!!

Comments not required? Well you've got one anyway, I'd rather you said fcuk all, if you've fcuk all nice to say,
Your words they're bitterly twisted, and speak volumes and I quote, there is no softly, softly, you go straight for the fcuking throat,
So I hope you'll read this comment and then store it on the shelf, and if you've anything more to say.. Then just fcuk off yourself.Lol Hope this is received I the spirit it was written.

good morning dearest poet as someone who misses the cues but never misses the fact I don't fit in this world I can relate to this...


this is a poem I wrote a couple of days ago and didn't post...


painful inflections feeling rejected I look back
seeing the human cues I missed
I observe but don't fit
I try to connect, then I don't
it's too much work
people take for granted what comes naturally

I knuckle under to keep up
when I fail miserably I bleed
I cover up the hurt
then let you see
the more I desire of you
the less you will want of me

I shine too brightly
with an intensity that drains
I wonder the vampire nursery I was taken from
I'm not like everyone else
a misfit weary, keeping my fangs hidden

bidden I come forth
I'm going to drink
then feel guilty I did


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RsKqMNDoR4o

Nicely said, my brother....

Loves you ♥️🤗

Purging can be cathartic. I hope it is.
🌹 - B

Write on....

👍👏👏👏
Well said Colin.

Off and off and more off. Truth to power. Hugs and love,Oral

Sometimes one has to be BLUNT
for many to "get it"

Pretty blunt spill, here, Brother

ho ym!

Indeed, after a while it just become a moot point so why bother! I could feel the emotion in this one, AP.  It's composed in a way that's not overly dramatic - but straightforward.

Though this isn't a NaPo entry, I do want to remark how strongly you've come out of the gate in the challenge this year, Collin. I anticipate your solid finish this year, just as the previous years. Best of luck to you.

Thank i feel the challanhe has made a better writer thats why will continually enter

That's wonderful to hear, AP.  I keep checking your page to see if you've posted any of you NaPo's so that I can encourage you, but you haven't.  You're doing fabulous regardless!