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Age of Wisdom
embrace pain,
own
its memory
wisdom
creates such
beautiful
lines on your
face
own
its memory
wisdom
creates such
beautiful
lines on your
face
Published 20th Apr 2021
Author's Note
Written for Feral 13 word comp
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20th Apr 2021 4:59am
Dear V,
Wishing you the best of luck in this comp, To me, the poem is a great write in honoring the pain and suffering in gaining wisdom and to the aging process. Although it does seem a shame that gathering wisdom leaves its mark(s) around the eyes, creviced foreheads and jowls. Alas. Excellent write. h🌷
Wishing you the best of luck in this comp, To me, the poem is a great write in honoring the pain and suffering in gaining wisdom and to the aging process. Although it does seem a shame that gathering wisdom leaves its mark(s) around the eyes, creviced foreheads and jowls. Alas. Excellent write. h🌷
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Thank you for your comment
Too often we hide our pain then allow it to hit again 2x as hard
Thanks
Too often we hide our pain then allow it to hit again 2x as hard
Thanks
