it's a sort of welcome home...

The the ache, want and yearning killed me.
This was lovely, sad and beautiful. Great write sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx

It's an ache, but I also felt a tingle of hope as well...  
"two fade away" is hopeful... they make it, in the end!!!... lol... Yes, cryptic but, eh?!? I was listening to some good music and this is where my mind took me... haha.. I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, I adore where you went, to. 'lovely, sad and beautiful'.. YES! I'll definitely take that, every day. ;) I appreciate your list add - it's generous and not taken lightly.  
Much love and good wishes from across the pond  
✨ 🌊 ✨  
🌹  
xo

To fade away. To become less than a ghost. Entwined within the great vastness of oblivion.
Sweet write.

hugs,
buddhakitty.

Hey here, bk
Yes that's a fine and awesome vision, indeed.
I love your thoughts and introspections.
It's always such a tremendous pleasure
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo

Enjoying your threaded streams-of-consciousness.

lol... it really is streaming, isn't it!  
I was listening to old U2 from their albums War and Unforgettable Fire... I used to love them when no one knew who they were and you only heard The October album spottedly via college radio...
Ahh those were the days.. ha!  

I'm so glad you liked reading, KP and I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.

Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
-Susan

I'm kinda, yeah... 😈 🔥 😇    
 
I'm a whole lotta grateful for your correction observations and the thoughtfulness of your kind words. I appreciate you reading, taking the time to leave comments, the list add, your deep delve and the supportiveness you've shown me.  
   
It's such a pleasure to have you visit and I'd miss them if you didn't drop by.  
   
Much love and respect,  
🌹  
xo  
-Susan

I'm glad you stopped by to read, James.  
I'm grateful for you taking the time. I value your thoughts and find it extremely helpful and motivational. –I appreciate it muchly.

Always a pleasure ✨
Much love and respect,
🌹
🐝

Dearest, Lady Blue,
What a magnificently beautiful this when souls find kindred souls and are unified in comfortable harmony. You capture that so well in this piece.
The opening stanza could be taight as a college course on navigating adversity to find true acceptance and unconditional love..."fields of burning bridges" is brilliant❣❣
This passage fills me up with thoughts of pure joy,
"their pain's tendrils extend  

to caress and cradle  
each other
in sheer sublimity "
Bravissima Goddess BB🌹🙏

Filling you up with pure joy is my pleasure, BB.!!  
Hee hee .... I'm so enriched by your visits! My deep gratitude, for the list add and your detailed thoughtfulness in all your cherished comments.  
I cannot really convey the words correctly....  

You inspire, motivate and understand me.  
I mean how incredible is THAT???!!!  

*hand on heart, thanks*
💜🌹💜🌹💜🌹💜  
xo  
-Susan

The heart wants what the heart and it aches for good loving.  Keep on writing.

You're absolutely right about that, Francisco!!
Ty for being so very astute..
I appreciate you reading
🌹

Magnificent! The reality of nature in all it splendor is contrasted in the end with the illusion of a long-distance relationship that seems so passionate and is but fades into the night where the kaleidoscope becomes monochrome. What wonders you have conjured in this poem. I feel the invigoration of chat rooms of wonder and phone calls that sound so real. You have created a poetic masterpiece here.

Xo
John

Ohh John, your thoughts and insights are so very lovely to read and treasure. To find that symbiosis with someone else is a dream within a longing... I don't even know that I'm writing about it anymore because it's become second nature - that want. I guess. I felt like that ending was hopeful. "two fade away... as one... which is left unsaid...  
I appreciate you reading, the list add and your loveliness all around.
Warmest regards,  
🌹
xo  
-B

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I love music. Me and my wife actually met because we were both fans of Eminem. We belonged to a site for fans. This was many years when dial up was a thing haha. For a few years we were long distance.  

Beautifully written.

I love that meet cute!! What an amazing and inspiring gift you've given me, DC. My feelings... It's hope springs eternal and all that romantic stuff that I just adore... hahaha.. but mostly it's hope that there is a way... some do make it!  
Wow!

I appreciate your candor and what a terrifically gorgeous story you and your wife have!  
Ty for reading, the list add and all your supremely awesome kindness. 🙏🏻  
🌹
Regards,
-B

Beautiful write:) awesome.

Ty, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
I appreciate you reading and I'm so humbled by your compliment.
🌹
xo

💯💯💯
it was indeed my muse....
Well done you




I was so very lucky to see them live in '85 (I thought it was 87 but that was Joshua Tree tour, I'm pretty sure) I was about 12 or 13 and my sister took me.... A sort of a homecoming and and “40“ have been part of my psyche ever since... Omg.... lol.
Some songs just burrow.

I am coming home....
I
am
coming home
(that end, always punches me in the gut)


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That first stanza painted quite a heck of picture.  Nice write Blu.

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughtful sentiments, Lj. I am glad you were taken by that first stanza, that's extremely inspiring to read.

It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo

Whatever you do, just don't ever run away  
 
the cramps - strychnine  
https://youtu.be/FuKGEfTnZnM

love the cramps!
Ty Em
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I liked this a lot. It shows the genuine longing and warmth, building with anticipation over time. It's a wonderful piece and I thank you for sharing. It's pretty inspiring.

I loved loved LOVED that I was could inspire you, Walter. Thank so much for sharing that, it truly made my day. I appreciate you reading and leaving me that very uplifting and kind information.
Take care and here's to being motivated by one another!! ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹-💙
B