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Kiss Me
kiss me-
no, not there
but on the
side of my neck
like you used
to do to turn
me on and tell
me you love me
even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there
kiss me-
and tell me
i am still sexy
even though
its been years
since we
last made love
i have kept
myself up for you
waiting for
this very moment
just to be
with you once more
no, not there
but on the
side of my neck
like you used
to do to turn
me on and tell
me you love me
even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there
kiss me-
and tell me
i am still sexy
even though
its been years
since we
last made love
i have kept
myself up for you
waiting for
this very moment
just to be
with you once more
Published 6th Feb 2021
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6th Feb 2021 9:32am
Dear FM,
Lovely mixed with a dash of melancholy. I love the reality of this write “ even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there” time may do it’s thing yet somehow love through the eyes of lovers doesn't see that.
Beautiful poem and I’m so glad to see you back. H🌷
Lovely mixed with a dash of melancholy. I love the reality of this write “ even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there” time may do it’s thing yet somehow love through the eyes of lovers doesn't see that.
Beautiful poem and I’m so glad to see you back. H🌷
Dear H,
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I really appreciate them. Thank you also for the honor of being on your R/L. It's friends like you that make me glad to be back. You always make me feel loved and appreciated. Have a blessed Saturday.
Love,
Faith
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I really appreciate them. Thank you also for the honor of being on your R/L. It's friends like you that make me glad to be back. You always make me feel loved and appreciated. Have a blessed Saturday.
Love,
Faith
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6th Feb 2021 11:17am
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6th Feb 2021 11:19am
Thank you for your kind words and the honor of being on your R/L. Both are deeply appreciated!
6th Feb 2021 11:26am
6th Feb 2021 10:10pm
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I appreciate your wonderful words very much.
15th Feb 2021 3:03am
I can't tell you what this poem meant to me. How deeply it made me feel. The one I loved has passed on but this brings back the emotions from not so long ago. Oh God, how you made me feel her once again and hear her talk to me. That takes a gifted poet to do this. You have the talent my friend and the heart.
Xo
John
Xo
John
16th Feb 2021 00:55am
I am both humbled and honored by your wonderful response to my poem. You have given me the greatest compliment that anyone could have and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I'm sincerely sorry you have lost your loved one. God bless!
Faith
Faith
