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morph'd into a promise of light
it's this time
the cracking of dawn
one foot in darkness
the other,
soon, a step into light
being of two realms
bridging another cold night
morphing into a hopeful warmth
feeling tendrils of sunshine
wanting to upturn
the corners of my mouth
the night still clings,
barely-
but still there
gossamer like gooseflesh
spreads over skin of alabaster fair
coffee in hand
smelling the sun's want of command
breathing in my mantra
exhaling out all of my sin
corners glow, now in lit pronounce
the sky punches it's colors
darkness is forgotten
with one wish whisper'd,
alighting this day to begin
Author's Note
coffee and a Tampa sunrise....
©Blu2020
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Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 2:28pm
this is beautiful lovely Blue I really relate to being a soul of two realms
I love how you reconciled in this write ❤
I love how you reconciled in this write ❤
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 3:17pm
Dear B,
I love seeing you this morning and I deeply appreciate your thoughtful comments and your generous list add... my day brightened with your visit. ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
I love seeing you this morning and I deeply appreciate your thoughtful comments and your generous list add... my day brightened with your visit. ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 2:40pm
Coffee
Is your knight
Coming to your rescue
In your hour of need
Morning sunshine
Helps too
Is your knight
Coming to your rescue
In your hour of need
Morning sunshine
Helps too
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 2:49pm
You're soooo correct about the coffee... without a doubt.. lol... Ty for reading and your lovely comments, C.
I'm grateful for the RL add
💜
xoxo
I'm grateful for the RL add
💜
xoxo
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 2:51pm
Ah Dawn breaks on the morrow
Awesome write
Morning sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
Awesome write
Morning sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 2:59pm
Good morning, kind Sir ;)
Ty for reading, the list add and your comments...
I'm grateful and love your visits, so.
🌹
xo
B
Ty for reading, the list add and your comments...
I'm grateful and love your visits, so.
🌹
xo
B
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 4:50pm
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26th Jan 2021 7:50pm
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 7:29pm
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26th Jan 2021 7:52pm
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 9:45pm
breathing in my mantra
exhaling out all of my sin
These are great lines Blue
Respect
Like
exhaling out all of my sin
These are great lines Blue
Respect
Like
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 11:07pm
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 9:50pm
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26th Jan 2021 11:08pm
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
Anonymous
26th Jan 2021 10:04pm
A perfect morning.
Starting again - clean - "exhaling out all my sin." Christ I wish it was that easy. Beautifully worded. "Darknes is forgotten" - this smacks of rebirth, which is a beautiful way to start any day.
A hopeful mood - a fresh start - LOVE IT.
Starting again - clean - "exhaling out all my sin." Christ I wish it was that easy. Beautifully worded. "Darknes is forgotten" - this smacks of rebirth, which is a beautiful way to start any day.
A hopeful mood - a fresh start - LOVE IT.
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
I love your words upon my page, KH...
More than you know. Perfecting a fresh start and only having moments to do so... I'm becoming an expert in. I thoroughly enjoy your visits and cherish each and every one.
Ty for reading and your insights....
I will utterly bask in them....
Much love, hugs and kisses, ;)
🌹
xo
B
More than you know. Perfecting a fresh start and only having moments to do so... I'm becoming an expert in. I thoroughly enjoy your visits and cherish each and every one.
Ty for reading and your insights....
I will utterly bask in them....
Much love, hugs and kisses, ;)
🌹
xo
B
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 10:47pm
Dear Blue,
Indeed the dawning of a new day and what it portends is so well painted in this piece. I love the word "tendril" It has a sensual quality, don't you think. This passage is, to me, a refreshing, cleansing message,
"breathing in my mantra
exhaling out all of my sin"
Brava Lady Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Indeed the dawning of a new day and what it portends is so well painted in this piece. I love the word "tendril" It has a sensual quality, don't you think. This passage is, to me, a refreshing, cleansing message,
"breathing in my mantra
exhaling out all of my sin"
Brava Lady Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 10:55pm
Dearest B,
I'm so very happy to see you!! It means a lot to read your review and know that you've taken the time you have... I'm so appreciative.
Tendril is 100%, one of my favorites that's for sure. I too, find it romantic and ethereal. I guess I hit on something with those lines you quoted... I'm so glad you enjoyed them as well. Your sentiments and breadth of knowledge are so welcomed and I count myself one lucky Blue every time I'm fortunate enough to receive your visit
Much love and returned bear hugs,
💋🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻 💋
🌹-xo
B
I'm so very happy to see you!! It means a lot to read your review and know that you've taken the time you have... I'm so appreciative.
Tendril is 100%, one of my favorites that's for sure. I too, find it romantic and ethereal. I guess I hit on something with those lines you quoted... I'm so glad you enjoyed them as well. Your sentiments and breadth of knowledge are so welcomed and I count myself one lucky Blue every time I'm fortunate enough to receive your visit
Much love and returned bear hugs,
💋🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻 💋
🌹-xo
B
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 11:14pm
Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 11:17pm
Your visit is a lovely addition to my evening DC.. thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments.. I'm appreciative 🙏
🌹
B
🌹
B
Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
26th Jan 2021 11:22pm
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26th Jan 2021 11:24pm
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 1:26am
Hi, Tim ;)
Ty for reading and your insights....It's one of my favorite times of day... dark, turning light..... I'm grateful for the list add too.
--glad you enjoyed it.
🌹
xo
Ty for reading and your insights....It's one of my favorite times of day... dark, turning light..... I'm grateful for the list add too.
--glad you enjoyed it.
🌹
xo
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 2:40am
I love how delicately you paint your images, leaving just enough free space for the reader to add their strokes.... ty
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 3:36am
SM,
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments. Your takeaway was very uplifting.
I hope you're enjoying the DU experience, so far.
Welcome!
🌹
B
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments. Your takeaway was very uplifting.
I hope you're enjoying the DU experience, so far.
Welcome!
🌹
B
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 3:51am
BV your charismatic writing style illuminates my darkest days/nights. This extraordinary write is a picturesque phenomena Blue...Brilliant!
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 3:55am
Dear Ron,
It's so nice to see you tonight!
Your lovely sentiments have the ability to make my doldrums disappear! Thank you ☺
You're awesomeness isn't overlooked. I'm appreciative of the list add and welcome your visits on my page, always!
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
It's so nice to see you tonight!
Your lovely sentiments have the ability to make my doldrums disappear! Thank you ☺
You're awesomeness isn't overlooked. I'm appreciative of the list add and welcome your visits on my page, always!
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 3:55am
Oh, I'm just envying your warm, colourful morning from my cold, gray one....
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 4:17am
Awww... I love gray!!
I'm a weirdo and just love the cold. ...I guess we always want what we can't have!!... I'll not mention the temperature, then....
(it's 67°now and tomorrow is a high of 78°)
Ohhh my!
(cheeky 😝)
Ty for reading and liking my warm climate, k.
It's completely appreciated!!!
I wish I could send some your way.... ;)
💜
🌴 ☀ 🏖
xoxo
I'm a weirdo and just love the cold. ...I guess we always want what we can't have!!... I'll not mention the temperature, then....
(it's 67°now and tomorrow is a high of 78°)
Ohhh my!
(cheeky 😝)
Ty for reading and liking my warm climate, k.
It's completely appreciated!!!
I wish I could send some your way.... ;)
💜
🌴 ☀ 🏖
xoxo
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 10:15am
Dear BV,
All the above times a billion. Each new day is another chance to get it right and I like that message within this poem. I so enjoyed your reflection using nature to forgive and move on. It’s a balm isn’t it. Letting Mother Nature do her thing and being attentive to it eases our own burdens when we let it. Beautiful piece. H🌷
All the above times a billion. Each new day is another chance to get it right and I like that message within this poem. I so enjoyed your reflection using nature to forgive and move on. It’s a balm isn’t it. Letting Mother Nature do her thing and being attentive to it eases our own burdens when we let it. Beautiful piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 1:01pm
Dearest H,
You always hit it exactly right! You're like the strong man at the fair who takes the sledgehammer to the game hitting hard enough to ring the bell at the top! 🛎 It's that "ding" I hear every single time I read your comments, because you just get it so well and articulate it like no one else! You're our DU resident strongman! 💪🏻 ( I always knew you were the muscle!!! ☺).. Lmao.. Hee hee hee... I agree with you completely, it's why I drink my coffee outside on my porch most mornings, to watch the morning change and nature soothe me like only she can.... an absolute 'balm', indeed. Ty for reading and your only you, insightful comments. I'm so appreciative and your visits make my morning!
Much love and hugs,
🌹
xo
B
You always hit it exactly right! You're like the strong man at the fair who takes the sledgehammer to the game hitting hard enough to ring the bell at the top! 🛎 It's that "ding" I hear every single time I read your comments, because you just get it so well and articulate it like no one else! You're our DU resident strongman! 💪🏻 ( I always knew you were the muscle!!! ☺).. Lmao.. Hee hee hee... I agree with you completely, it's why I drink my coffee outside on my porch most mornings, to watch the morning change and nature soothe me like only she can.... an absolute 'balm', indeed. Ty for reading and your only you, insightful comments. I'm so appreciative and your visits make my morning!
Much love and hugs,
🌹
xo
B
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 5:16pm
Beautiful and calming poem. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace. xoxo oral
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 5:35pm
Oral,
My favorite comments, reviews, insightful and inspirational sentiments are always yours.
I'm so happy to see you on my page this afternoon. I wonder if you know that? I'm smiling at thoughts of you reading and having that realization. Ty, dearest O.
I'm grateful and lucky to call you my special friend.
🌹
xo
don't be a stranger...
-Susan
My favorite comments, reviews, insightful and inspirational sentiments are always yours.
I'm so happy to see you on my page this afternoon. I wonder if you know that? I'm smiling at thoughts of you reading and having that realization. Ty, dearest O.
I'm grateful and lucky to call you my special friend.
🌹
xo
don't be a stranger...
-Susan
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 9:52pm
Sunrise. Beautiful. I simply love them and your poem enhanced the vision. Talented writer. 🌹
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
27th Jan 2021 10:43pm
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
29th Jan 2021 9:34pm
The sky punches it's colors, I love the anthropomorphization of that. Beautifully and sensitively rendered. 💖🙏
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
29th Jan 2021 9:41pm
Re. morph'd into a promise of light
Anonymous
30th Jan 2021 3:55am
This is how I imagine loving mornings might feel like. Thank you, mornings are hard for me, whether I'm waking up or trying to go to sleep lol.
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Re: Re. morph'd into a promise of light
30th Jan 2021 4:29am
Rachel,
What a beautifully written compliment!
*hand to heart.... I'm appreciative of your sentiments and the list add. Mornings are only my thing, for ONE reason and that's COFFEE.. It's the elixir of the Gods and I don't think I could function properly without it. I write odes to it constantly... lol
I'm sorry mornings are difficult for you and I normally have that same problem but I learned up adapt, I guess... lol
I'm usually lucky to get 4 hours of sleep
I consider that well rested....
So I , 100% relate and sympathize.
My heart grows knowing that my words resonated for you in any way.... and your visits are always so welcomed 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
-Susan
What a beautifully written compliment!
*hand to heart.... I'm appreciative of your sentiments and the list add. Mornings are only my thing, for ONE reason and that's COFFEE.. It's the elixir of the Gods and I don't think I could function properly without it. I write odes to it constantly... lol
I'm sorry mornings are difficult for you and I normally have that same problem but I learned up adapt, I guess... lol
I'm usually lucky to get 4 hours of sleep
I consider that well rested....
So I , 100% relate and sympathize.
My heart grows knowing that my words resonated for you in any way.... and your visits are always so welcomed 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
-Susan