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dear lord
in the eternal ether, the darkness grows
greedy in its intent, it presses in on me
it hurts, it reasons evolution of the fittest
time is infinite
pain is a key ingredient to soul growth
the testing of patience brings to fruition clarity
pain in e minor
delicate notes flow through me
hurt turns within
uncertainty fucks with me
I don't what the future holds
am I resilient enough to stand come what may?
my patience is lacking
my anger unchecked
repressed and masked
so volatile with the least shake
it rises and detonates
I'm not sure I've learned anything being here
except I've much to learn
wisdom obtainable only through great travail
I wish it were easier
I have a strong will it's beautiful
when sharpened to a deadly point
tempered with patience
my steel resolve will last
brittle sword of the spirit
crumbles when pitted against the enemy
an eternal warrior
a misfit of the dawn
dear lord, please don't give up on me
Published 26th Jan 2021
Author's Note
I know this unusual for me I don't ascribe to religion but i believe in something greater than us these are just thoughts that go through my mind...
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26th Jan 2021 2:56pm
They say No pain, no gain
But if a lesson is learned then pain is valuable needless pain, deliberately spread with malicious intent by others is evil
I too believe in a higher being I call her Mother Earth
Blessed be
Ron xx
But if a lesson is learned then pain is valuable needless pain, deliberately spread with malicious intent by others is evil
I too believe in a higher being I call her Mother Earth
Blessed be
Ron xx
26th Jan 2021 4:34pm
26th Jan 2021 5:24pm
I love the honesty of this account, of being sure there is so much more for us in this life, yet at the same time feeling bewildered and somewhat lost as to how to align ourselves with that flow and 'growth-experience'.
I reckon the truth of it is that most humans experience much of life just as you have written it. Authenticity was always a better goal than perfection -- and carries the greater depth of meaning.
I reckon the truth of it is that most humans experience much of life just as you have written it. Authenticity was always a better goal than perfection -- and carries the greater depth of meaning.
27th Jan 2021 2:00am
27th Jan 2021 3:53am
Beautiful. Your creator (or whatever you want to call it) loves you and will never give up. Hang in there.
27th Jan 2021 9:34am
Dear B,
“ I'm not sure I've learned anything being here
except I've much to learn
wisdom obtainable only through great travail
I wish it were easier ”
That’s it. Those are the sentiments heard and felt around the world. I’ve been on a gerbils spinning wheel for what seems like centuries trying to find my purpose in this world and hoping for some mental rest in the next. I think every poem you write shows your god you get the light of their meaning. This piece holds cxl a place of exceptional meaning for me today. I think the lord heard your plea. Beautiful write. H🌷
“ I'm not sure I've learned anything being here
except I've much to learn
wisdom obtainable only through great travail
I wish it were easier ”
That’s it. Those are the sentiments heard and felt around the world. I’ve been on a gerbils spinning wheel for what seems like centuries trying to find my purpose in this world and hoping for some mental rest in the next. I think every poem you write shows your god you get the light of their meaning. This piece holds cxl a place of exceptional meaning for me today. I think the lord heard your plea. Beautiful write. H🌷
27th Jan 2021 11:46am
Crimsin this write of fortitude and otherworldliness is once again emotionally conveyed in your masterful ink. Your writes always seem to have a pulse, a true gift as an artist.
8th Feb 2021 10:59pm
Faith in something higher than us, something stronger than us can gives us peace of mind. The universe is full of mysteries and wonder, regardless of faith or creed. It's written eloquently, showing that as humans we are flawed but strive to better ourselves.
Intriguing write Ms Crimsin.
Intriguing write Ms Crimsin.
