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Treason
So what’s with all this hoopla
this unmitigated gall
fascist racists storm
Capitol Hill halls
The orange face man they call Trump
absconded behind bulletproof glass,
Vice President Pence pulls down his pants
so Trump can fuck him in his ungreased ass
Cops stood by aiding and abetting
while a lunatic runs free on the loose,
He should be tarred then shot at sunrise
then hung by a slingshot noose !
this unmitigated gall
fascist racists storm
Capitol Hill halls
The orange face man they call Trump
absconded behind bulletproof glass,
Vice President Pence pulls down his pants
so Trump can fuck him in his ungreased ass
Cops stood by aiding and abetting
while a lunatic runs free on the loose,
He should be tarred then shot at sunrise
then hung by a slingshot noose !
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 8th Jan 2021
| Edited 27th Aug 2023
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Re. Treason
Brava Zazzles❣❣ You describe so viscerly an apalling state of affaids. We got a vivid, horrific glimpse of America's bottom of the barrel. 😥
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8th Jan 2021 4:14pm
Hi GW, its beyond embarrassment . it worries me that our arch enemies can just come in an murder us all!
The cops allowed this to happen because most of them are in Trumps pocket..
thanks for the visit
love
Jackie xo
The cops allowed this to happen because most of them are in Trumps pocket..
thanks for the visit
love
Jackie xo
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8th Jan 2021 4:23pm
I am so frustrated, especially that republicans are resigning rather than invoking the 25th amendment to remove him from office. The silver lining? At least they're gone.
I feel ya here, sistah.
I feel ya here, sistah.
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8th Jan 2021 4:27pm
Hi Ava, Yes i agree, but what about Pence? would he not become president then? therefor pardons the president? idk, it's all corrupt
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8th Jan 2021 4:28pm
If Pence invokes the 25th, I don't think he can be pardoned, just removed. Don't quote me on that; I am not a constitutional scholar, and honestly have never studied or researched that part.
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8th Jan 2021 5:34pm
Good poem. Unlike the left, I support your free speech, as democrats continue to call for their opponents to be silenced.. Good thing we were able to put klansman, segregationist, child fondling Biden in office. Now all the little kids beat up on school busses for a Maga hat, the burning of cities, murder of black and white conservatives and others, the storming of state capitol buildings, police precincts, censoring of speech and commie deconstruction of civil liberties can all be JUSTIFIED by the Jim Crow slave party Democrats!!!! We tried to stop the Nazi leftist DNC take over of America, But just like in the 30's when the Nazis cheated and murdered their way into power, while the brown shirts/ modern antifa beat people in the streets, we now are under Nazi Democrat tyranny. All the while accusing Republicans of their crimes. America dies Jan 20th. "Accuse your opponent of that which you are guilty"- Joseph Goebells...
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This may all be true, however I don't really give a fuck.
ALL politicians are corrupt, period!
Thanks for the read & list my friend hope your well and staying safe Runaway :)
Jackie
ALL politicians are corrupt, period!
Thanks for the read & list my friend hope your well and staying safe Runaway :)
Jackie
Re. Treason
8th Jan 2021 7:05pm
I like the use of vulgarity to get the point across. I'd have liked a little more subtlety than just stated opinion, but this piece does work as political slam poetry (i.e. poetry read aloud to an audience to make a political point).
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8th Jan 2021 10:13pm
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9th Jan 2021 4:35pm
Holy shit!
Loved this...
Definitely have a permanent place on ma reading list..
Loved this...
Definitely have a permanent place on ma reading list..
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9th Jan 2021 4:51pm
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10th Jan 2021 3:57am
Jackie, this does to show that dynamite comes in small packages. Your short poem packed a might punch and I believe those your aimed it at were more than deserving. Loved the profanity and it was truly effective in getting your message across. Especially loved how your described the relationship between Trump and Pence. Visceral and go get them. Just what this subject needs my friend.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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it’s one of those things . When you’re honest and speak your mind things like this tend to surface 🙃
Thanks for looking John and thank you for the list🤗
Always
Jackie ☺️
Thanks for looking John and thank you for the list🤗
Always
Jackie ☺️
Re. Treason
10th Jan 2021 11:36pm
I cannot covey just how much I love this spill..
Your voice is valuable and one of merit. Use it loud and proud! ✊🏻✊🏻✊🏻
Ty for sharing.. you.
A light that glows so very bright 🔆
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B-
Your voice is valuable and one of merit. Use it loud and proud! ✊🏻✊🏻✊🏻
Ty for sharing.. you.
A light that glows so very bright 🔆
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B-
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11th Jan 2021 00:05am
Hi BlueBoo🌹
Personally, I see it as all politicians are corrupt .
Thanks for the read and the list and your continued support in my writing I appreciate you very much
Love always
Your big sis
Javkie 🥰
Personally, I see it as all politicians are corrupt .
Thanks for the read and the list and your continued support in my writing I appreciate you very much
Love always
Your big sis
Javkie 🥰
Re. Treason
17th Jan 2021 11:24pm
"So what's with all this hoopla..."
I really like that verse. Sometimes *hoopla* is an interesting word.
... 👍
I really like that verse. Sometimes *hoopla* is an interesting word.
... 👍
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Re. Treason
6th Feb 2021 7:10am
Not a fan of the orange man (I like this name)
Not quite sure how this man has followers who think storming Capitol Hill expresses freedom of what the US constitution stands for?
Your poem surely gives vent to your rightful anger it is a shame that probably none of the fascists will ever get to read it.
Not quite sure how this man has followers who think storming Capitol Hill expresses freedom of what the US constitution stands for?
Your poem surely gives vent to your rightful anger it is a shame that probably none of the fascists will ever get to read it.
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27th Aug 2023 7:48pm
Hello, didn’t see this comment Richard, I am sorry dear. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here ☺️
I just think we need to amend the constitution changing the qualifications to run for president.
I mean what the fuck?!
Criminals can run for president— and because they are wealthy can actually win. It doesn’t matter anyway the earth is fighting back and has other plans for us all anyway. By 2100, if things don’t change it will be summer all the time. And before you know it, all animals and humans will be dead in a steady mass extinction, much sooner rather than later, and it won’t matter. Robots will have taken over by then anyway lol !!!
We have a gift and we squander it; planet earth is a remarkable planet, and humans have destroyed it. It will take the Earth over a million years to recover! With over population and the worlds copious amounts of co2 dumped into the atmosphere it will never end. I feel like meat should be outlawed and kids should be taught how to sustain a farm. If you look at other cultures around the world, that have never seen meat let alone eat it , they are the motherfuckers that live to be100 years + old. And this whole you know electric car boom bullshit! Like that’s gonna save the planet. Fuck out of here! Almost everything we manufacture it made with crude oil.
Have you ever seen a tire graveyard? It’s heartbreaking. well thanks for letting me ramble. I had a lot to say it’s nothing personal. In fact, it was fun. Nice to meet you.
Jackie ☺️
I just think we need to amend the constitution changing the qualifications to run for president.
I mean what the fuck?!
Criminals can run for president— and because they are wealthy can actually win. It doesn’t matter anyway the earth is fighting back and has other plans for us all anyway. By 2100, if things don’t change it will be summer all the time. And before you know it, all animals and humans will be dead in a steady mass extinction, much sooner rather than later, and it won’t matter. Robots will have taken over by then anyway lol !!!
We have a gift and we squander it; planet earth is a remarkable planet, and humans have destroyed it. It will take the Earth over a million years to recover! With over population and the worlds copious amounts of co2 dumped into the atmosphere it will never end. I feel like meat should be outlawed and kids should be taught how to sustain a farm. If you look at other cultures around the world, that have never seen meat let alone eat it , they are the motherfuckers that live to be100 years + old. And this whole you know electric car boom bullshit! Like that’s gonna save the planet. Fuck out of here! Almost everything we manufacture it made with crude oil.
Have you ever seen a tire graveyard? It’s heartbreaking. well thanks for letting me ramble. I had a lot to say it’s nothing personal. In fact, it was fun. Nice to meet you.
Jackie ☺️