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American Dreamer
This is a Moroccan beat which I personally love. Please listen while reading, I really would appreciate it, thank you 😊
Al Marconi :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIog_7ME_Lw
Cast upon him a burden
a wicked curse
born under the wrong agenda
what could be worse?
Life's value lost and hollow
burned out,
can anybody hear you?
There's no way out!
Trapped in a hell from which
there is no escape,
for being born on the wrong
side of the moon
life is cruel, look at his face
His beauty untouched
eyes having seen too much
out of tune, out of touch,
I can't even begin to imagine
the human suffering where you are
no laughter only sorrow,
no hugs or good night kisses
no hope for tomorrow
Does anybody know what happened
to the flowers where you are
or the will to live not just survive,
live, die, eat, sex and cry
He'll be leaving soon
wearing his pride on his chest
singing his favorite tune
dressed in his Sunday best!
Yes, he'll be humming his favorite song
long after he's gone,
knowing his dream is now reality,
left behind a life of psychosis banality...
Al Marconi :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIog_7ME_Lw
Cast upon him a burden
a wicked curse
born under the wrong agenda
what could be worse?
Life's value lost and hollow
burned out,
can anybody hear you?
There's no way out!
Trapped in a hell from which
there is no escape,
for being born on the wrong
side of the moon
life is cruel, look at his face
His beauty untouched
eyes having seen too much
out of tune, out of touch,
I can't even begin to imagine
the human suffering where you are
no laughter only sorrow,
no hugs or good night kisses
no hope for tomorrow
Does anybody know what happened
to the flowers where you are
or the will to live not just survive,
live, die, eat, sex and cry
He'll be leaving soon
wearing his pride on his chest
singing his favorite tune
dressed in his Sunday best!
Yes, he'll be humming his favorite song
long after he's gone,
knowing his dream is now reality,
left behind a life of psychosis banality...
Published 6th Jan 2021
| Edited 15th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Copyright © June 5, 2015
M. Doucette All rights Reserved
So I wrote this for a friend of mine overseas a few years ago. I posted this, then took it down, then posted it, then took it down lol So it’s up for the last time. I appreciate all of you❤️🤗
M. Doucette All rights Reserved
So I wrote this for a friend of mine overseas a few years ago. I posted this, then took it down, then posted it, then took it down lol So it’s up for the last time. I appreciate all of you❤️🤗
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2021 3:37am
Leave it up, please!
Your voice is important as are those ideals and morals you hold dear. This is powerful and deserves to be read, as you intended.
Ty for sharing and trusting us with your emotional and personal values. Your friend is lucky, as are we.....
Much love and respect,
Your sister,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
Your voice is important as are those ideals and morals you hold dear. This is powerful and deserves to be read, as you intended.
Ty for sharing and trusting us with your emotional and personal values. Your friend is lucky, as are we.....
Much love and respect,
Your sister,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
6th Jan 2021 3:44am
Did you like the music? did it grip at you like it does me ? Thanks for all your support in my writing it means a lot to me Blue 😘
Love you
your sister in ink ❤️
Jackie xo
Love you
your sister in ink ❤️
Jackie xo
Anonymous
6th Jan 2021 3:49am
Talk about adding ambience to a write!! That piece of music set the tone, along with your picture... Damn, heart wrenching!! Terrifically put together, my love!!
You're so welcome!!
💞🌹💞🌹💞🌹💞
xo
B
You're so welcome!!
💞🌹💞🌹💞🌹💞
xo
B
6th Jan 2021 4:10am
It’s a mother fucker that’s for sure!
Music has magical powers 🎶
Loves you BlueBoo ❤️
Hehe that’s my new Nic for you
Jackie xo🤗😘
Music has magical powers 🎶
Loves you BlueBoo ❤️
Hehe that’s my new Nic for you
Jackie xo🤗😘
6th Jan 2021 3:55am
Your words coupled with the music were heartwrenching. I felt the boy's suffering and tears came. This was emotionally powerful. I felt it down to my marrow.
John
John
That’s what I said to myself how wretched it must be to live over there 😔 thanks for the read and comments I appreciate you
John when I see how long you’ve been here and how little people comment that breaks my heart.
You are a sweet kind and caring person who deserves attention in your writing .
I will be visiting you have a wonderful evening :)
Your friiend and sister in ink
Jackie 🤗🤗
John when I see how long you’ve been here and how little people comment that breaks my heart.
You are a sweet kind and caring person who deserves attention in your writing .
I will be visiting you have a wonderful evening :)
Your friiend and sister in ink
Jackie 🤗🤗
6th Jan 2021 4:18am
Jackie, reading you has been the most scintillating literary experience I have had in a long while. Love your poetry and choice of musical accompaniment. Look forward to getting to know you through your writing.
John :) :)
John :) :)
I too look forward to getting to know you through The magic of poetry my friend 🤗
And WOW 🤩 What an amazingly beautiful thing to tell me Holy moly ! I so appreciate you you definitely made my night🥳
I constantly doubt my ability to be a good poet
I do wanna publish a book one day I’m just not so sure it will be read :) I think I’m getting there though
Thanks you
Jackie your new sister in ink 😊
And WOW 🤩 What an amazingly beautiful thing to tell me Holy moly ! I so appreciate you you definitely made my night🥳
I constantly doubt my ability to be a good poet
I do wanna publish a book one day I’m just not so sure it will be read :) I think I’m getting there though
Thanks you
Jackie your new sister in ink 😊
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
7th Jan 2021 2:46am
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Reggie ,
Wow I am happy to read I moved something inside you . I too, once I heard this song feel in love with the agony. I just had to write something to let myself feel at least somewhat, of an idea of this life .
It is tragic and sad. I also need you to know that what you have said here as a whole has touched me beyond . Thank you dear brother I love you
Jackie xoxo 🤗❤️😘
Wow I am happy to read I moved something inside you . I too, once I heard this song feel in love with the agony. I just had to write something to let myself feel at least somewhat, of an idea of this life .
It is tragic and sad. I also need you to know that what you have said here as a whole has touched me beyond . Thank you dear brother I love you
Jackie xoxo 🤗❤️😘
7th Jan 2021 7:25pm
9th Aug 2021 12:12pm
It says so much about you as a person and as a poetess that you have as scope of vision which identifies and conveys such profound truths. This is absolutely beautiful.
10th Aug 2021 2:27am
