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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 7:11am
..a Poetess with such Illuminating Grace with words extinguishes melancholy by admiration for her talent and beauty.....ever present!
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2020 8:49am
Me too
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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 9:08am
We've all done it girl, invisible never you shine to brightly to ever truly be invisible
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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So being someone who has messed up more hookups than any chic should 🙃 I can tell you,
there is no perfect mate, relationships take work effort commitment responsibility and consideration on every level by both people .
And unfortunately the supply of a perfect mate doesn’t meet the demand, and especially if we keep “looking” in the wrong places so to speak.
Sometimes you have to look outside the box and as corny as that is it’s true. Blue It’s been my experience if you could break something easily it’s cheap and not for you, plain and simple.
Time does heal all wounds, fact!
And heartbreak Is the best diet on the planet!
Aww babygirl you will get through this because it’s in your super fantastic nature to love and be loved intimately :)
Keep that beautiful chin up mama
Loves ya
Jackie ❤️
there is no perfect mate, relationships take work effort commitment responsibility and consideration on every level by both people .
And unfortunately the supply of a perfect mate doesn’t meet the demand, and especially if we keep “looking” in the wrong places so to speak.
Sometimes you have to look outside the box and as corny as that is it’s true. Blue It’s been my experience if you could break something easily it’s cheap and not for you, plain and simple.
Time does heal all wounds, fact!
And heartbreak Is the best diet on the planet!
Aww babygirl you will get through this because it’s in your super fantastic nature to love and be loved intimately :)
Keep that beautiful chin up mama
Loves ya
Jackie ❤️
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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 1:36pm
It happens and will continue to ..
A tattoo never goes away, it just gets covered
You're too hard on yourself
A tattoo never goes away, it just gets covered
You're too hard on yourself
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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 1:46pm
aw beautiful Blue hugs you tightly in the search for a companion
we all have these moments of what the hell did I do
I've been there many time it's so hard
we are careful in the search making sure the chemistry is there
sparks fly and we succumb sometimes the results are not what we wanted
it will be alright beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
we all have these moments of what the hell did I do
I've been there many time it's so hard
we are careful in the search making sure the chemistry is there
sparks fly and we succumb sometimes the results are not what we wanted
it will be alright beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 1:55pm
It's alright to be invisible sometimes it's necessary for your own peace of mind and solitude of the heart and soul for we all seek and search for that one relationship that could bound us closer together not trying to replace a love that is gone but to be able to be loved unconditionally in return stay strong and keep your head up dear poetess 🙏
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Re: Re. shame
28th Dec 2020 9:58am
Respect dear poetess It ain't over till the most highest spiritual soul says its over keep your head up 😇
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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 2:24pm
clearly not! oh these prisons of mind, how these weak threads wield such mighty perception...pop its bubble of expectation...for that is all they have. point your compass elsewhere.
great to have written it out!
great to have written it out!
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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 4:46pm
Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 7:49pm
NO! You are not what your words say. You are an amazing lady and poet who inspires all who read your work. You deserve the crown of a Queen--one of a kind, Hugs and peace, oral
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Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 10:38pm
In general, I feel like it is invasive and assumptive to critique the content of the poem. We are complex beings, whom even those that know us for many years will never truly understand, not entirely know, in any case and here, most of us are strangers, distant friends, sharing facets of ourselves. Emotions are temporary, like clouds floating across a blue sky, my Buddhist teacher said. You are not the clouds, you are the sky. Rather, I talk about the technique, evocative and intriguing qualities it has. This write has terrific impact in it's naked revelation and focused brevity. Grabbing and impacting. 💖🎶🙏
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28th Dec 2020 00:08am
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28th Dec 2020 1:00am
Re. shame
27th Dec 2020 11:02pm
I can definitely feel the powerful emotion in this one, and with such brevity it is an amazing accomplishment I think. But one thing is certain, you are not invisible and your talent is incredible. * hug *
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28th Dec 2020 1:08am
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28th Dec 2020 1:11am
easier said than done... yet I'm trying and I'm currently in process of 'doing'....
Thank you, bk
You are wise as all f*ck... hahaha
(you really are)
xo
)hugs back(
Thank you, bk
You are wise as all f*ck... hahaha
(you really are)
xo
)hugs back(
Re: Re. shame
28th Dec 2020 1:23am
Been through it a hundred or so times. Experience is the best teacher.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. shame
28th Dec 2020 4:14am
I also wish I was invisible, but we need to be there for our love ones. Keep on writing.
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Re. shame
28th Dec 2020 7:50am
Dear BV,
I agree with Daniel’s opening statement regarding the invasiveness of a critique in its purpose here. What you have written is an amazing zinger all of us have experienced with gut wrenching accuracy. The mourning period afterward sucks big time but somehow we muddle through. I will say just one thing simply put- you are NOT invisible. What is true are the voluminous amount of schmucks masquerading as good guys. 🙄
Xo
H🌷
I agree with Daniel’s opening statement regarding the invasiveness of a critique in its purpose here. What you have written is an amazing zinger all of us have experienced with gut wrenching accuracy. The mourning period afterward sucks big time but somehow we muddle through. I will say just one thing simply put- you are NOT invisible. What is true are the voluminous amount of schmucks masquerading as good guys. 🙄
Xo
H🌷
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Re. shame
My Dearest Honoria,
You are sunshine and hope wrapped up in all that makes me giggle when I am so desperately trying to woe is me!... Lmao. Thank you for helping me get my head outta my..... 🍑
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I needed that total eye opener
Much love, my friend
💜
xoxo
Susan
You are sunshine and hope wrapped up in all that makes me giggle when I am so desperately trying to woe is me!... Lmao. Thank you for helping me get my head outta my..... 🍑
[inserted cute af emoji replacement for the word ass]
I needed that total eye opener
Much love, my friend
💜
xoxo
Susan
Re. shame
28th Dec 2020 8:49pm
L'essentiel est invisible pour les yeux.
What's essential is invisible to the eye.
-Antoine de Saint-Exupery
What's essential is invisible to the eye.
-Antoine de Saint-Exupery
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Re. shame
29th Dec 2020 11:46pm
Not sure what to make of it, but sometimes you just have to spill the emotions on page.
So here...🌹
So here...🌹
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29th Dec 2020 11:49pm
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30th Dec 2020 8:02pm
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3rd Jan 2021 2:55pm
Re. shame
3rd May 2021 5:09am
I doubt you were invisible, unless you were wearing sunglasses at night. Your blue eyes would twinkle with any available light.
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Hahaha... You're too cute with this commentary, Leo!
My giggling is contagious, watch out!! *wink
In all seriousness, I was very low this night... it nailed my mood and how I felt.
I thank you for reading and your far too nice compliment.
💜
xoxo
B
My giggling is contagious, watch out!! *wink
In all seriousness, I was very low this night... it nailed my mood and how I felt.
I thank you for reading and your far too nice compliment.
💜
xoxo
B
Re: Re. shame
3rd May 2021 6:25am