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Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 1:53am
This pain will pass
It takes time and tears
It will pass though
Hearts are remarkable
They can take water and change it to wine
It takes time and tears
It will pass though
Hearts are remarkable
They can take water and change it to wine
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Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 2:24am
Dear J,
Soulful and all-knowing piece. It’s probably mean, but I sometimes get, I won’t say great, but definitely some satisfaction when an offending party finds out life on the other side is waaaaayyyyy less than originally thought. 😁
Is that awful? It’s probably awful. Your poem is not however. Direct, confident and hopeful (reading your closing line). I sincerely hope your next experience will have an appreciation of your love and talent you wholly deserve. Great write. H🌷
Soulful and all-knowing piece. It’s probably mean, but I sometimes get, I won’t say great, but definitely some satisfaction when an offending party finds out life on the other side is waaaaayyyyy less than originally thought. 😁
Is that awful? It’s probably awful. Your poem is not however. Direct, confident and hopeful (reading your closing line). I sincerely hope your next experience will have an appreciation of your love and talent you wholly deserve. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 2:27am
It’s not awful! I’m right there with you! And I always enjoy your thorough comments and insights!!
Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 2:35am
They say the forest grows better after a good burn, that's a natural burn though rather than a made-made burn, however. I can't see what difference it makes as a burn is still a burn, right? I love this defiance. It's like you're goading him. I just hope you know what you're doing. I mean, I'd protect you 'n' all but not without full riot gear, tear gas canisters, a large stick (dear o dear), stun grenades etc..I ain't joking. I don't know what this guy is capable of & I'm not particularly well built either.
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Re: Re. Greener Pastures
Thank you! God bless you too, and thank you for reading and commenting it is greatly appreciated
Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 4:42am
Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 7:16am
Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 2:23pm
Nice how do you like me now poem ... bravo dear poetess ... well said ...
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Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 4:32pm
Hurt passes eventually. You never forget you just learn to carry on. Great piece, loved it
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Re. Greener Pastures
8th Jun 2020 11:12pm
"Do you wanna know why its greener on the other side?" she said.
"Why?" he asked.
"Cause you ain't over there pissin all over it!"
You have a wonderful way of saying 'FUCK YOU!' in the most beautifully indirect sort of way.
XXX
"Why?" he asked.
"Cause you ain't over there pissin all over it!"
You have a wonderful way of saying 'FUCK YOU!' in the most beautifully indirect sort of way.
XXX
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