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Star Light
When my fight is awash with the dark holds of night
I raise my eyes to the isle of a lone star’s light
I find its grace listening in its watch of time glistening
Heeding my while, its persistence reconciles my smile
Your passage above the aisles of trees and bounds of seas
Leans into me with the breath of a warming breeze
I raise my eyes to the isle of a lone star’s light
I find its grace listening in its watch of time glistening
Heeding my while, its persistence reconciles my smile
Your passage above the aisles of trees and bounds of seas
Leans into me with the breath of a warming breeze
Published 12th Jan 2020
Author's Note
From a late night walk, shorter than thought. I may come back to it yet..
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12th Jan 2020 1:55pm
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12th Jan 2020 11:04pm
13th Jan 2020 6:53am
Dear F,
Your piece grabbed my attention as I was driving home tonight the moon was full and absolutely exquisite. The night sky is always a source of solace to me and you have captured those feelings in your work beautifully. Well penned.
Your piece grabbed my attention as I was driving home tonight the moon was full and absolutely exquisite. The night sky is always a source of solace to me and you have captured those feelings in your work beautifully. Well penned.
14th Jan 2020 8:36pm
14th Jan 2020 2:15am
Utterly beautiful. I think you should make an audio of this poem. The syllabic flow is so sultry, details captivating.
14th Jan 2020 8:36pm
26th Jan 2020 9:16pm
I love it. Audio adds beautiful depth and nuances. I'm so glad you went ahead with recording it.
15th Jan 2020 12:26pm
This a beautiful poem. As always I love the rhyme in your work and the time to take in the night with its solace and sky beauty. Such a breath of fresh air
26th Jan 2020 9:05pm
26th Jan 2020 9:19pm
