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too often her pen shakes
mimicking her voice
if she could produce the words
that strangle on her tongue
those who choose to attack
the very substance of her happiness
those moments that seem to
come too far apart already
how shallow some are
with the recklessness of a faulty gun
shooting blindly with accusations
and they wonder why she hides
mimicking her voice
if she could produce the words
that strangle on her tongue
those who choose to attack
the very substance of her happiness
those moments that seem to
come too far apart already
how shallow some are
with the recklessness of a faulty gun
shooting blindly with accusations
and they wonder why she hides
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2nd Oct 2019 1:11am
Thank you so much Nikkiemoe for your thoughtful comments and add to your RL ... greatly appreciated x
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
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29th Sep 2019 3:01am
I cannot imagine anyone attacking you or your poetry, JeJe?!
You're one of the most gentle poets here in the Deep. Definitely one of the most compassionate. This hurt my heart to read!
You're one of the most gentle poets here in the Deep. Definitely one of the most compassionate. This hurt my heart to read!
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2nd Oct 2019 1:14am
Thank you so much Ahavati for your kind
sincere, thoughtful comments... greatly appreciated xx they mean more than i can say
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
sincere, thoughtful comments... greatly appreciated xx they mean more than i can say
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
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29th Sep 2019 7:11am
But too hide only emboldened the weaklings who pretend to be strong and draw courage from the silence that remains in your absence
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2nd Oct 2019 1:15am
Thank you so much FatBoy for your thoughtful response ... greatly appreciated
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
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29th Sep 2019 3:18pm
Remaining silent often is a mark of greater inner strength than those who blabber unaware of depth and beauty standing right in front of them.
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Thank you so much Josh for your kind, thoughtful comments ... greatly appreciated, they mean more than I can say
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
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29th Sep 2019 11:33pm
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2nd Oct 2019 1:18am
Thank you so much Daniel for your thoughtful comments ... greatly appreciated
They mean more than I can say ... *hugs*
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
They mean more than I can say ... *hugs*
My apologies for my late response
JeJe
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5th Oct 2019 00:35am
Those critics who attack are usually just jealous of your art J...fuck 'em my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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8th Oct 2019 3:12am
Thank you so much Harry for your kind and thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated as is the add to your RL .. humbled and honored
Cheers
JeJe
Cheers
JeJe
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7th Oct 2019 9:57pm
An eloquent write. We all have our critics in anything we choose to undertake. Have faith in your own ability - you clearly do have poetic ability.
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8th Oct 2019 3:12am
Thank you so much Silver_Birch for the read and thoughtful comments .. much appreciated
JeJe
JeJe