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Tenebrous
When I let go
When I wake
will I be ready
to crossover
beneath the
cosmic
street lamps?
Will letting go
of labels, all
support me on
my journey?
Is my street
truly a mess
of lamp –
less –
ness?
From distant ashes
fully reflective
and no less
magnetized
my Lunar Goddess
strokes my pensive
spirit in hopes
that I see
(and)
with an open
heart
her
hope
in
me.
Published 30th May 2019
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30th May 2019 00:15am
30th May 2019 00:29am
It has been this way nearly my entire life
and still
i am straddled with this shit
appreciate the read and share
and still
i am straddled with this shit
appreciate the read and share
30th May 2019 00:28am
Damnit, Brother!!
I want to give You a hug right this minute!!
If You ever want to chat we can in Google Hangouts
and i'll invite You to a private room and You can vent or rant or lament.
Just PM me Your email address.
I am on the cusp of a Dark lonely journey
and this spill is a light lament ..........
I want to give You a hug right this minute!!
If You ever want to chat we can in Google Hangouts
and i'll invite You to a private room and You can vent or rant or lament.
Just PM me Your email address.
I am on the cusp of a Dark lonely journey
and this spill is a light lament ..........
30th May 2019 00:47am
Genuinely appreciate the offer bit of anti social animal at the moment just letting my poems come out instead
30th May 2019 00:35am
30th May 2019 00:37am
30th May 2019 00:44am
30th May 2019 00:47am
I love that You and me can
FEEL
and often feel one another via spills
I pray that You won't keep feeling my sad spills
as this is only my beginning..........
I appreciate Your love, Sister
FEEL
and often feel one another via spills
I pray that You won't keep feeling my sad spills
as this is only my beginning..........
I appreciate Your love, Sister
30th May 2019 00:52am
aw Tallen no worries I'm here for you dearest poet...I too am full of sadness...it's not always easy to express though ❤
30th May 2019 00:54am
times like this i always feel like i really FUCKED MYSELF
and i wish i could see the end
if i could then maybe i could expedite it and get there faster...............
my heart has always been exposed and so i will hurt a lot
and i wish i could see the end
if i could then maybe i could expedite it and get there faster...............
my heart has always been exposed and so i will hurt a lot
Anonymous
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30th May 2019 2:00am
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30th May 2019 2:17am
30th May 2019 2:23am
Despite the dark, shadowy submergence, that last shred of hope ("her / hope / in / me") is still there, Tallen. That's what matters most. When pain becomes verse, we stem the curse. What's more, the poet draws others out of their despair and heals them by facing his/her own nemesis.
You've started an essential dialogue...
cab
You've started an essential dialogue...
cab
30th May 2019 2:36am
appreciate the read and share
but i think all the shit, this shit is all in my court
but i think all the shit, this shit is all in my court
30th May 2019 6:04am
30th May 2019 10:04am
30th May 2019 6:46am
Feeling this 100%.
It's a start to be open enough to own our part in the destruction of what we create. Humility is a valuable virtue. Not many people that I am surrounded by would be this brave. And they really should be. I don't think your fucked Tallen. I think you're a human. Allow yourself to be. Much respect poet.
It's a start to be open enough to own our part in the destruction of what we create. Humility is a valuable virtue. Not many people that I am surrounded by would be this brave. And they really should be. I don't think your fucked Tallen. I think you're a human. Allow yourself to be. Much respect poet.
30th May 2019 10:06am
Trying to be (more?) human
it ain't easy when in pain, though
thank You for the kind thoughtful
share
Honored for the RL add
it ain't easy when in pain, though
thank You for the kind thoughtful
share
Honored for the RL add
Anonymous
30th May 2019 2:04pm
Why does it sometimes seem we put more value in the hopes & beliefs of others for us than we do in our own hopes & beliefs? There is so much beauty in this, so much vulnerable self-reflection
30th May 2019 2:07pm
lack of self worth? self esteem?
especially when we eff up and we know it's
all our fault, probably. . .
appreciate Your thoughts here
especially when we eff up and we know it's
all our fault, probably. . .
appreciate Your thoughts here
30th May 2019 2:12pm
One of the most 'humanly-honest' poems I've read in a while. Goes straight under the skin creating a tense moment in a desired outcome.
30th May 2019 2:56pm
while i am not understanding all the attention
this spill is getting
i am very appreciative of the kind and thoughtful
shares
thank You, Brother
this spill is getting
i am very appreciative of the kind and thoughtful
shares
thank You, Brother
30th May 2019 9:07pm
30th May 2019 9:39pm
