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You
and I hope that every time
your mouth moves
to make the sound
of the first letter of her name
somewhere
deep down
in the back of your head
you hear my name instead
your mouth moves
to make the sound
of the first letter of her name
somewhere
deep down
in the back of your head
you hear my name instead
Published 27th May 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
27th May 2019 4:22am
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3rd Jun 2019 10:51pm
Ooh, I like the confidence that it's your name he truly has in his heart.
Nice write.
Nice write.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
12th Jun 2019 5:30am
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2019 6:11pm
very well expressed! I can tell that you value words!
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2020 2:45pm
22nd Nov 2019 3:11pm
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30th Dec 2019 4:40pm
I feel like crying
like a razor on my skin
wish I was loved once
but death waits for me instead
like a razor on my skin
wish I was loved once
but death waits for me instead
