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Do Me Right
You’ll do me right my love or taste hot lead,
You thought you had the upper hand but think.
You’ve got no choice, I’m aiming at your head,
We don’t want scattered brain to clog the sink.
So tell me, what goes thru’ your head at night?
You’ll do me right my love or taste hot lead.
I guarantee it’s gonna be a sight,
It’s better if you use your tongue instead.
Undress, and sit on the edge of the bed.
Now don’t you wish you had a gun like this?
You’ll do me right my love or taste hot lead,
Don’t try to hesitate cause I won’t miss.
The fishnet stockings never had a chance,
You start to nuzzle wet lips as they spread.
I drop the gun, it does a little dance,
You’ll do me right my love or taste hot lead.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 24th Apr 2019
| Edited 1st Nov 2019
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24th Apr 2019 4:44am
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24th Apr 2019 7:20am
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24th Apr 2019 8:04am
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24th Apr 2019 8:37am
Thank you, Rjm! Yes indeed, that’s the style in which I wrote the poem— a Quatern, hooray!
Re. Do Me Right
24th Apr 2019 8:19am
Shades of the gun toting molls of noir movies. A fatal femme fatale, who needs disarming love making to make her drop her gun. (Can imagine that 'dance' of the falling weapon appearing filmed.)
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24th Apr 2019 8:41am
Thank you, Solomon, for your wonderful observational comment of those amazingly vintage noirs that I adore!
Re. Do Me Right
24th Apr 2019 11:40am
This brought to my mind Luciana Garbati's Medusa sculpture ... https://worthingtheatres.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2018/12/Luciano-Garbati-medusa.jpg
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Yes, definitely close enough - a remarkable statue. And my thanks for the recommend, AB.
Re. Do Me Right
24th Apr 2019 12:19pm
Damn..the title had me alone , but your words!!! Yum 😍
Did you & sky plan this cleverness?
Did you & sky plan this cleverness?
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Re: Re. Do Me Right
24th Apr 2019 3:41pm
Thank you, dear sister, I really appreciate! No, I caught her off guard, but then she caught up, lol!
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Re: Re. Do Me Right
24th Apr 2019 4:21pm
Oooo😽, thank you my sensual feline sister love! Embracing elements of the Noir the way it used to be, making it alluringly dangerous as can be!
😼grrrrowl😻
😼grrrrowl😻
Re. Do Me Right
24th Apr 2019 2:11pm
Oh dear!
Oh me!😲
Tigers gone wild. 🐅
I need to climb a tree. 🌳
What I love about Jade is she isn't afraid to address every emotion of the human condition.
What I don't like about Jade is she's so damn good, which makes me jealous.
Oh me!😲
Tigers gone wild. 🐅
I need to climb a tree. 🌳
What I love about Jade is she isn't afraid to address every emotion of the human condition.
What I don't like about Jade is she's so damn good, which makes me jealous.
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24th Apr 2019 4:09pm
Kimmy, Kimmy, all the time,
You know a tiger loves to rhyme.
Wears emotions on her sleeve,
But wearing clothes is her pet peeve!
😸rawr!🐾
You know a tiger loves to rhyme.
Wears emotions on her sleeve,
But wearing clothes is her pet peeve!
😸rawr!🐾