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morning dew
the lusting rain fell on me
wetting my shirt so you could see
what you do to me
breasts perk up and awaken
by the pale dawn's light
you watched on as I dance in the mist
a pixie of the morn
delighting in her sexuality
swaying hips beckon you to me
you stare at me a Goddess before you
imperfectly beautiful
intoxicated by desire
you lay me down on the cool, lush grass
I smile while staring into your eyes
pink pleasure responds to your affections
first blush always turns you on
you massage sweet berried bliss
wet with need I ache
reaching for your hardness
I release you and giggle
I'm always surprised by my effect on you
you ease me atop your divining rod
pushing in deep, so deep as to touch the soul of me
I cry by first morning's dew
the beauty of you never fails to move me
when climax finds us
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Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 11:59am
I just got through saying on another post, you guys will certainly be the turning of me loving erotic poems now! So beautifully written, Crimsin <3 Kudos, my friend..
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16th Mar 2019 12:00pm
thank you graciously beautiful Liv for the love on this write... I'm happy you enjoyed...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 12:06pm
Pretty damn sexy. And so artistically expressed as well. Really enjoyed this, Crim.
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16th Mar 2019 12:09pm
Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 12:11pm
Yes beautifully crafted and certainly made me wish I was there in the morning dew
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16th Mar 2019 12:13pm
Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 12:33pm
This is seductively crafted. Blessings to such sensual mornings. The element of rain was a fantastic touch. Mmmm.
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16th Mar 2019 12:35pm
thank you graciously dearest Tender One for the love on this write I'm happy you found it pleasing...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 1:42pm
giggles thank you dearest Poet so happy you found this one pleasing...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2019 1:21pm
A sweet temptress rewarded by the passion she has ignited. Very cool.
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16th Mar 2019 2:08pm
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16th Mar 2019 1:23pm
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16th Mar 2019 2:09pm
Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 1:26pm
Absolutely stunning spill Brenda!
So enjoyed this sensually serene piece 👏
So enjoyed this sensually serene piece 👏
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Re: Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 2:10pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for the love on this write I'm so happy you enjoyed it...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 2:11pm
thank you graciously beautiful Kat for the love on this write I'm smiling here...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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16th Mar 2019 2:01pm
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16th Mar 2019 2:12pm
thank you graciously dearest FeNyX for the love on this write... I'm so happy you liked it...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 4:28pm
Dann it woman..."I smile while staring into your eyes
pink pleasure responds to your affections
first blush always turns you on
you massage sweet berried bliss
wet with need I ache"
.....holy hell, perfect description & that stanza..sigh.💕
pink pleasure responds to your affections
first blush always turns you on
you massage sweet berried bliss
wet with need I ache"
.....holy hell, perfect description & that stanza..sigh.💕
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Re. morning dew
16th Mar 2019 7:10pm
Love your eroticism, Brenda. Very sensual, and a delight. I could read this any number of times.
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2019 11:36pm
;) ... I like this ...
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Re. morning dew
17th Mar 2019 1:54am
Beautiful.
Crimson, you have a gift for creating the erotic without deteriorating into the pornographic.
Just like Elizabeth Barrett Browning.
Crimson, you have a gift for creating the erotic without deteriorating into the pornographic.
Just like Elizabeth Barrett Browning.
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Re. morning dew
17th Mar 2019 10:25am
Beautiful and spiritual harmonisation with nature. Nothing nicer than 'romance' outdoors Brenda :) I did a quick double-take when I first read it as this is my muse down to a T. Just perfect composition - loved it! David x
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morning dew
17th Mar 2019 5:36pm
You certainly know how to raid the dawn!
There are so many sensual awakenings and *DPTs (apologies to NPT: https://www.bing.com/images/search?q=nocturnal+penile+tumescence&qpvt=nocturnal+penile+tumescence&FORM=IGRE) here that I have lost count. They are of the morning, the sun, and the rain; the bosom, the coxa, and the phallus; the lust, the desire, and the expectations...
*D = diurnal
There are so many sensual awakenings and *DPTs (apologies to NPT: https://www.bing.com/images/search?q=nocturnal+penile+tumescence&qpvt=nocturnal+penile+tumescence&FORM=IGRE) here that I have lost count. They are of the morning, the sun, and the rain; the bosom, the coxa, and the phallus; the lust, the desire, and the expectations...
*D = diurnal
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Re. morning dew
17th Mar 2019 8:59pm
This is indeed one of my all time favorite pieces of erotic poetry...because it is pure in its content and not overly in your face...great write Brenda...and I love that line...imperfectly beautiful.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re. morning dew
8th Jul 2019 11:28am
Crimsin i am now speechless mind having an overload omg feeling every single word touch caress...
...You are truly divine you have me
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