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Trust In Me
The soiled with pure; unearth to me, the sum of your crux and
marrow
When your body is on its last wing and prayer; I wish to be your halcyon, a beacon
Sentiments of ardor; coursing through your veins, I'll dip inside, my most tender love letters
Unfeigned be your confessions, the raw and exposed; bare to me your grief and sorrows
Governing your soul respite; seeds of solace would I sow to quell the riot of each demon
In our coupled hearts; my own vessels cadence -- pulsing to keep yours unfettered
Published 18th Feb 2019
| Edited 30th Mar 2019
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18th Feb 2019 00:18am
18th Feb 2019 1:18am
18th Feb 2019 00:35am
beautiful Pandora
awe-inspiring in form
and tender loving content...
love Brenda 💕
awe-inspiring in form
and tender loving content...
love Brenda 💕
18th Feb 2019 2:27am
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18th Feb 2019 1:05am
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18th Feb 2019 2:29am
Thank you Barona!! I'm blessed to have such a wonderful compliment & glad you found it so
Bravisima, Pandora! I am touched by this profoundly romantic declaration of love. One of my favorite passages: "seeds of solace would I sew to quell the riot of each demon"
I'm honored you enjoyed it that much. The praise is humbling.💞
Oh, and glad you liked that phrase too. I loved it & oddly enough the term "seed" wasn't involved in a sexual piece. I feel as if I'm adulting or something.😂 Anyways, always glad to see you here!!
Oh, and glad you liked that phrase too. I loved it & oddly enough the term "seed" wasn't involved in a sexual piece. I feel as if I'm adulting or something.😂 Anyways, always glad to see you here!!
18th Feb 2019 1:46am
written with a tender heart
sadden for one reason or the other
beautiful lyrics flow deep within the soul
sadden for one reason or the other
beautiful lyrics flow deep within the soul
18th Feb 2019 2:31am
18th Feb 2019 2:01am
Excellent wording and structure. A genuine pleasure to read, a work of elegance and heart.
18th Feb 2019 2:33am
You made my night once again. Thank you for such praise & the add, crowfly!
18th Feb 2019 4:14am
18th Feb 2019 9:37am
Thank you so very much, dear HowlingWhelms. That means a lot coming from you..rest assured!!
18th Feb 2019 5:40am
18th Feb 2019 9:39am
You've put a smile on my face. I'm humbled by the wonderful compliment & add. It means a lot to me!!
18th Feb 2019 7:28am
Raw and bare kind of love. Wonderful poetry. Another very enjoyable piece.
18th Feb 2019 9:41am
Oh do I appreciate your generous compliment. Thank you for the support as always!!
18th Feb 2019 8:33am
Excellent , my dear one !
Very well phrased and structured...
Marrow , Beacon , Letters , Sorrows , Demon , Unfettered...
Words set upon the page as poetic license for love's assault...
Very well phrased and structured...
Marrow , Beacon , Letters , Sorrows , Demon , Unfettered...
Words set upon the page as poetic license for love's assault...
18th Feb 2019 9:48am
Now, this comment coming from a poetic genius who rarely comes out for commentary, means a lot. Truly!
I'm working on my skills & trying to find that melodious flow without a forced rhyme.;) Then I'll be off to tackle something else, there's so much to learn yet!! I'm so gracious you noticed. Thank you, sweet friend!!
I'm working on my skills & trying to find that melodious flow without a forced rhyme.;) Then I'll be off to tackle something else, there's so much to learn yet!! I'm so gracious you noticed. Thank you, sweet friend!!
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21st Feb 2019 10:39pm
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21st Feb 2019 10:48pm
I'm delighted & humbled for the lovely comment & add. Thank you so much!!
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23rd Feb 2019 00:47am
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24th Feb 2019 5:26pm
Thank you for the kind compliment, I really appreciate it. I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you for reading girlie
Anonymous
8th Mar 2019 7:41am
a stream of unfettered compassion this is
very lovely indeed it is...
very lovely indeed it is...
8th Mar 2019 9:39pm
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16th Mar 2019 5:55am
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16th Mar 2019 6:07am
Oh bless you, that's an incredible comment I'm unworthy of but it doesn't mean I won't treasure it so. Thank you once again, dear one!!
