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Trust In Me
The soiled with pure; unearth to me, the sum of your crux and
marrow
When your body is on its last wing and prayer; I wish to be your halcyon, a beacon
Sentiments of ardor; coursing through your veins, I'll dip inside, my most tender love letters
Unfeigned be your confessions, the raw and exposed; bare to me your grief and sorrows
Governing your soul respite; seeds of solace would I sow to quell the riot of each demon
In our coupled hearts; my own vessels cadence -- pulsing to keep yours unfettered
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 18th Feb 2019
| Edited 30th Mar 2019
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Re. Let Me
18th Feb 2019 00:18am
Re: Re. Let Me
18th Feb 2019 1:18am
Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 00:35am
beautiful Pandora
awe-inspiring in form
and tender loving content...
love Brenda 💕
awe-inspiring in form
and tender loving content...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 2:27am
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18th Feb 2019 1:05am
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 2:29am
Thank you Barona!! I'm blessed to have such a wonderful compliment & glad you found it so
Re. Trust In Me
Bravisima, Pandora! I am touched by this profoundly romantic declaration of love. One of my favorite passages: "seeds of solace would I sew to quell the riot of each demon"
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
I'm honored you enjoyed it that much. The praise is humbling.💞
Oh, and glad you liked that phrase too. I loved it & oddly enough the term "seed" wasn't involved in a sexual piece. I feel as if I'm adulting or something.😂 Anyways, always glad to see you here!!
Oh, and glad you liked that phrase too. I loved it & oddly enough the term "seed" wasn't involved in a sexual piece. I feel as if I'm adulting or something.😂 Anyways, always glad to see you here!!
Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 1:46am
written with a tender heart
sadden for one reason or the other
beautiful lyrics flow deep within the soul
sadden for one reason or the other
beautiful lyrics flow deep within the soul
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 2:31am
Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 2:01am
Excellent wording and structure. A genuine pleasure to read, a work of elegance and heart.
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 2:33am
You made my night once again. Thank you for such praise & the add, crowfly!
Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 4:14am
Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 9:37am
Thank you so very much, dear HowlingWhelms. That means a lot coming from you..rest assured!!
Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 5:40am
Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 9:39am
You've put a smile on my face. I'm humbled by the wonderful compliment & add. It means a lot to me!!
Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 7:28am
Raw and bare kind of love. Wonderful poetry. Another very enjoyable piece.
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 9:41am
Oh do I appreciate your generous compliment. Thank you for the support as always!!
Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 8:33am
Excellent , my dear one !
Very well phrased and structured...
Marrow , Beacon , Letters , Sorrows , Demon , Unfettered...
Words set upon the page as poetic license for love's assault...
Very well phrased and structured...
Marrow , Beacon , Letters , Sorrows , Demon , Unfettered...
Words set upon the page as poetic license for love's assault...
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
18th Feb 2019 9:48am
Now, this comment coming from a poetic genius who rarely comes out for commentary, means a lot. Truly!
I'm working on my skills & trying to find that melodious flow without a forced rhyme.;) Then I'll be off to tackle something else, there's so much to learn yet!! I'm so gracious you noticed. Thank you, sweet friend!!
I'm working on my skills & trying to find that melodious flow without a forced rhyme.;) Then I'll be off to tackle something else, there's so much to learn yet!! I'm so gracious you noticed. Thank you, sweet friend!!
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21st Feb 2019 10:39pm
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
21st Feb 2019 10:48pm
I'm delighted & humbled for the lovely comment & add. Thank you so much!!
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23rd Feb 2019 00:47am
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
24th Feb 2019 5:26pm
Thank you for the kind compliment, I really appreciate it. I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you for reading girlie
Re. Trust In Me
8th Mar 2019 7:41am
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8th Mar 2019 9:39pm
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Re: Re. Trust In Me
16th Mar 2019 6:07am
Oh bless you, that's an incredible comment I'm unworthy of but it doesn't mean I won't treasure it so. Thank you once again, dear one!!